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twinj….ek kahani (few shorts) shot 1

MABy MADecember 28, 201626 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hey guys thnx a lot for your comments
so lets start the epi

The sun rays falls on a girl she wakes up her eyes became red due to continue crying …….suddenly their was a knock on the door “TWINKLE ” ( yes the girl is twinkle )
tw- mahi u here in early morning.
ma- i m here to give u a good no best news of my life ( guys twihi are childhood besties)
tw- what ?????
ma- my marriage is fixed with karan.
tw- wow such a best news and they both hug eo
ma- but i think u r not good is everything ok
between u and jiju.
tw- yeh……
ma- don’t lie to me
tw- yehh…and suddenly she starts crying
ma- what happened twinkle and consoles her

“FLASBACK”
twinkle came out frm the bathroom in a pink towel wrap on her body suddenly she bumped into kunj and they both fall on bed they were lost in eo and both came close to eo and their lips met that was a passionate kiss full of love…………and kunj with a sudden jurk got up frm the bed….
ku- what have i done how i will face maya tw r u mad u know na i love maya how can we come close to eo……i can’t love u tw never …..saying this he gone out leaving tw shock…
tw sat and crids bitterly and she sleeps
FLASBACK ENDS

ma- its k tw one or oher day jiju will realize his love for u
tw- he will never realize his love better will be we get divorce
mahi gets shock……

precap- yes i don’t love him

so guys how it was please comment i need ur comments to continue this plzzz my frnds
bye guys
adeeba

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26 Comments

  1. RUTU..... on December 28, 2016 3:59 pm

    Really an amazing episode dear loved it awesome story

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 4:53 pm

      thnx a lot rutu

  2. Aamna_2690 on December 28, 2016 4:09 pm

    Hey adeeba!!
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    The episode was awsum…. loved it…. but don’t u think it was too short….. but it’s ok…… plz post the next episode soon……
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    Kya yaar soch rahi hona yeh kab se bakbak kiye jaa rahi hai…. introduce toh kiya nai khud ko…..
    .
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    So let me introduce my self…..
    .
    My self Aamna….. i am 16 n a total chatter box…. a small part of this twinj family n a ff writer….. will u be like to my friend????
    .
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    N welcome to our crazy family of twinj world…..
    .
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    Plz post the next episode soon…..
    Waitinggggg!!!!!
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    Loads of love n support ❤❤❤
    Keep smiling??☺☺
    From;
    Aamna

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 4:56 pm

      thnx a lot aamna kya karu yrrr bht buzy hun isliye short epi lekin nxt wala try karungi long dene ka

  3. Presha on December 28, 2016 5:13 pm

    Hey its super

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 6:10 pm

      thnx presha

  4. Anayaali on December 28, 2016 5:19 pm

    Awesome….
    Superb….
    Excited too…
    Post nxt asap…

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 6:11 pm

      thnx anayaali

  5. SidMin on December 28, 2016 5:56 pm

    Loved it 🙂 Awesome 🙂 Feeling sad for Twinkle I think Kunj also loves her but why did he blame Twinkle for the Kiss ?
    Twinkle want DIVORCE
    post soon can’t wait 🙂
    love you 🙂

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 6:12 pm

      thnx a lot sidmin your doubt will be clear in nxt epi

  6. Sushmitha on December 28, 2016 6:35 pm

    Short and sweet I loved it try posting longer episodes dear

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 9:50 pm

      thnx a lot sushmita

  7. Priya23 on December 28, 2016 6:40 pm

    Hey adeeba…sorry 4 not cmnting ur intro.. This plot is very good…love it.. Plzz plzz post ur next epi soon dear…and try to bit longer..m waiting..

    Ok now my intro if u want… m from Bangladesh….17 years old..And yes we r also friend’s but can i called u as sister..if u don’t mind..?? OK..now m going..
    Stay happy and keep smiling..
    Love you..

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 9:51 pm

      first of all thnx a lot priya dii and yaa u can call me ur mad sister love u di

  8. shreya098 on December 28, 2016 7:17 pm

    Nice one…
    Waiting for next…

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 9:52 pm

      thnx a lot shreya

  9. Adya on December 28, 2016 8:43 pm

    Well yeah… amazing one yrr..I love it already.
    I’m too toooo excited for the next… divorce.. kiss.. waoh.. awesome ….
    Try posting soon…
    love you!

    • adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 9:54 pm

      thnx a lot adya meri sister kya tmse el question puchu…..tm kab apna ff post karogi u know hw much i love u sister

    • Adya on December 28, 2016 10:17 pm

      Arre.. I’m so sry sabko wait karna pada … Maine submit kr Diya h.. Dekho kab post hota h..
      Well love you too cutie sis..

    • Priya23 on December 28, 2016 10:38 pm

      Yehhh Yehhh.. Yepppyyyy.. Sabmit kardia..oh god m waiting 4 it desperately yaar…thanks.. Wese may v tumse badi hu adya… Just joking.. He he he. OK ..love u sistar

  10. Chiku on December 28, 2016 9:43 pm

    Soo sweet❤️❤️❤️Lovely
    Post soon

  11. adeebarizwan on December 28, 2016 10:20 pm

    chiku dii thnx a lot

  12. Riddhi on December 28, 2016 11:36 pm

    It’s superb

  13. Ramya on December 29, 2016 5:12 am

    Awesome episode adeeba

    Lovely
    Loads of love keep smiling

  14. Aanya_pandey on December 30, 2016 1:33 pm

    Awesome episode yrr.. maza hi aa gya!!!

  15. Purnima.agrawal30 on January 1, 2017 2:15 am

    awesome

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