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Home»Fan Fiction»TwiNj – Brave Girl OS by Sophie
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TwiNj – Brave Girl OS by Sophie

MABy MAApril 10, 201754 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hi Guys…
This my first OS on TwiNj
Hope you like it…
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He looked over at her again. She was sure of it. He was so tall, so handsome, and so perfect, it was intimidating. I mean, my gosh, he looked like a male model from a magazine. There! He looked over at her again. It was made to look casual, but she knew he was studying her. Her other girlfriends continued to talk and laugh, blissfully unaware that just a few tables away in the restaurant, one of the most beautiful men on earth, was slyly watching.

She was sure he was looking at her. That is what was causing her so much consternation. Radhika was way prettier and Pari had the kind of curves you only see on the cover of Romance Novels. Either of them could attract male attention with just a wisp of a smile, the flutter of an eyelash, or the tempting slip of a bare shoulder peeking out from under a blouse or collar. Compared to them, well, she was like a Honda parked next to a Ferrari and a Corvette.

There! He looked at her again, and this time he let the look linger a bit. It wasn’t a challenging look, or a flirty look. It was more of an “I want to know a bit more about you look.” She liked that look, it was a beginning look. A chance to build something look. A look that said I am willing to try if you are.

She had had enough. She rose from her table and strode towards his in one abrupt motion. A motion so sudden and decisive, it left the other two girls stopped in mid conversation. Barely enough time for Radhika to bark out a quick: “Twinkle…what the hell?”

He watched her stride to his table. She was determined, that was apparent. Whatever battles she had fought in her mind, the victor was action. Without preamble, but with a face as red as the most powerful blush in human history, she spoke to him even as he rose to greet her.

“My name is Twinkle. If you are not too old. If you are single. If you are available tomorrow night, my High School is having its Senior Prom, I am a senior, and I want you to take me to the Prom. “

He reached out and took her hand. Her hand didn’t hesitate at all, it simply joined with his like a lock and a key. If locks were velvet and keys were felt covered steel. He guided her to sit at his table, and left his hand entwined with hers on the table top.

“My name is Kunj. I turned 18 two weeks ago. I have never been to High School, I was Home Schooled so no Prom, since my Mom was the only girl in my class. (She smiled at both the thought and the image it made in her mind)

I would love to take you to your Prom, and yes, I am available tomorrow night.”

His eyes took on a glow, an intensity that an Actor in a Romance Movie could only hope to equal, without any hope of surpassing its intensity.

“Tomorrow night, or any other night of your choosing.”

She didn’t even flinch. The intensity was absorbed by her without an ounce of refraction it filled her with certainty.

“Good. Now, why were you looking at me like that? “

She gestured a feeble wave at her former table, where both her friends were busy ogling her interaction with the big handsome boy.

“Those two usually get all the attention. “

She was barely conscious that both her hands were now holding his hand. Not clinging to him, but joined to him, exploring a safe and trusting grip. Her hands seem to be like a child on a swing set, completely free to swing and play. So her hands played with his hands with single minded joy.

He looked over momentarily at her two friends, and nodded a polite acknowledgment, then his head rotated back to focus on her. It was her he had looked at before she came to his table, it was her he wanted to look at now. The Ferrari and the Corvette dismissed out of hand as showy, expensive, and high maintenance.

“Because I have never seen anyone like you. You…sparkle.”

Her heart almost stopped. He meant it. She could tell this was no rehearsed speech, or glib reply. He truly thought she sparkled, so she did.

“And you are brave, decisive, and smart. Who wouldn’t look at a woman with all those qualities?”

“What? I am none of those things.”

His hand squeezed her two hands. It was a comforting display of gentle pressure with much strength held in reserve. It was a hint for her to take a second to listen. She got the hint. Her hands squeezed back in a signal to continue.

“Yes. Twinkle you have all of those. First, what did it take for you to come over to my table? Do you walk up to tall guys all the time and say: “Want to go to my Prom?”

She laughed while shaking her head.

“That, my dear Twinkle is bravery. You could have been rejected, or refused, or rebuffed, yet, you asked me out.”

Her hands nestled in his palm now, they liked what she was hearing, and they would cuddle silently listening some more.

“When you got up from that table, you were going to ask why I was looking at you, ask me to the Prom, and unless I answered that I had a girlfriend, or was too old for you- you weren’t going to take no for an answer. That, Twinkle, is called decisive. It means you can decide to act, and then act with no regrets.”

Her hands twisted in his giant palm, they hadn’t realized how strong she was until that moment. She was decisive, she just never had to use that skill before. He made her aware of her own power. His hands now clasped both of hers in both of his, an honest pack formed between them.

“You are smart. You thought of all the reasons I might not be able to go out with you. You presented them as questions for me to answer. You also asked me to your Prom, which is tomorrow. That means you were smart enough not to go with someone to the Prom, just so you could go to the Prom. You would rather go by yourself, than to go with some guy just because.”

Her hands stopped their gentle snuggle between his giant fingers… almost as if they were shocked into stillness.

“Can you read minds?”

“No. Just yours. I told you, you sparkle, you are smart, you are decisive, and you are brave.”

Every particle of her body was on fire. She didn’t know if she sparkled, but even passer-by’s knew she was glowing. She leaned in across the table her nose almost touching his, the rest of the world drifted off into the distance- leaning into his hands for support.

“What else does my mind say to you?”

He let the soft puff of her words brush up against his face. A butterfly kiss of intent to bring intimacy with a whisper.

“It says what mine is saying too. “

“What is it saying?”

Her lips were full now, glistening, his lips had grown shiny and moist, but still capable of forming words, if they were soft enough, honest enough, deep enough.

Both their heads gently leaned in opposite directions as the inevitable became apparent to their bodies, as the soul took over for the brain, and their hearts swelled in anticipation.
“I love you.”

There was no longer any distance at all for those words to travel. The echo was etched on their lips. Lips that met for the first time, and lingered. Their hands were finding their own way to say I love you, unaware of the two sets of lips joining a heart into one above them.

Her Prom was their first date, their wedding was the second. Their marriage was the third and longest of their dates. For it lasted them for all time.
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This one was dedicated to Adeeba_zain since she wanted this so much, love you dear
Hope you guys enjoyed it
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54 Comments

  1. SidMin23 on April 10, 2017 9:16 am

    Cute keep writing more

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 9:27 am

      Thank you

  2. adeeba_zain on April 10, 2017 9:29 am

    Hey Sophie dii u know I m so happy now that finally u posted this os.. I luv to infinity.. U r beyond words the os was so marvelous words were described perfectly.. No mistakes..
    Twinj talks were wow..anyways try to write more stories in any couple but plzz pm me the links.

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:26 pm

      Thank you Adeeba this one was just for you
      I am happy that you liked it
      Will surely send you the links
      Love you

  3. fenil on April 10, 2017 10:21 am

    Marvellous OS

    Twinj is also fav pair , i didn’t watched TEI but i love this pair.

    Again and Again Fall in love wid u and your work.

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:27 pm

      Thank you Fenil bro
      Glad that you enjoyed it

  4. Soumya85 on April 10, 2017 10:31 am

    Amazing OS di u r awesome…Love u di and sorry for late comment

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:27 pm

      Thank you Somu
      Love you too and comment whenever possible

  5. Fatimaa. on April 10, 2017 10:31 am

    It awesome sophie…
    Jus spellbound…
    Loved it

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:27 pm

      Thank you Fatimaa

  6. Presha on April 10, 2017 11:26 am

    Awesome…
    Just loved it…
    Lovely os…

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:28 pm

      Thank you Presha

  7. Purnima.agrawal30 on April 10, 2017 11:51 am

    Awesome amazing fantastic

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:28 pm

      Thank you Purnima

  8. maha on April 10, 2017 12:05 pm

    just awsm

    • Sophie24 on April 10, 2017 1:28 pm

      Thank you Maha

  9. Shaani on April 10, 2017 2:25 pm

    Nice os… Loved it yaar… Keep writing.. U r an awesome writer…. Love ur work…?

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:26 am

      Thank you Shaani

  10. Cp on April 10, 2017 2:53 pm

    It was just pure bliss??????amazing…. Keep writing here???

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:27 am

      Thank you Cp

  11. twinjfan.tamanna on April 10, 2017 3:07 pm

    Hey sophie,
    It was amazingly awesome! The feelings were portrayed very well! Beautifully written! It was such a bliss to read! Keep writing! ?

    With love,
    Tamanna

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:27 am

      Thank you Tamanna

  12. anushka on April 10, 2017 3:11 pm

    Loved yaar…next soon post karo…..

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:28 am

      Thank you Anushka
      Will surely try to write more

  13. Manya on April 10, 2017 3:15 pm

    It was super super awesome❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Love u❤️❤️

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:28 am

      Thank you Manya
      Love you too

  14. padu on April 10, 2017 5:04 pm

    hey sophie
    it was so flimy but ok life is always not about practical skills

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:28 am

      Thank you Padu

  15. Payal on April 10, 2017 9:02 pm

    Hey Sophie di.I ‘m payal.I just loved it.Marvellous os.First time I’m commending on one os.love u di.??????

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:29 am

      Thank you Payal
      Glad that you liked it
      Love you too dear

  16. Love_forever on April 10, 2017 9:41 pm

    Di it’s truly amazing!! Idk how you manage to write so beautifully!
    Please do consider my request!! Love u!❤

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:29 am

      Thank you dear
      Will surely try to write one on SwaSan
      Love you too

  17. Orchid on April 10, 2017 10:32 pm

    Wowwwwww it is so beautiful. Really you’re a awesome writer. And I ahve became your fan. Love u

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:30 am

      Thank you dear
      Glad that you enjoyed it
      Love you too

  18. Sohi on April 11, 2017 1:30 am

    It was out of the world
    I don’t have any word to describe it
    It was just beautiful
    Plz keep writing such amazing stories
    Do continue

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:30 am

      Thank you Sohi
      Will surely try to write more

  19. SidMin on April 11, 2017 1:57 am

    Awesome … yaar it was amazing …
    I would like more of your writings in Twinj ….
    It was amazing ..
    keep writing ❤

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 5:31 am

      Thank you dear
      Will surely try to write more on TwiNj

  20. IME on April 11, 2017 11:07 am

    Awesome dii
    amazing!!
    do write more
    sorry for late comment!!
    love you

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 12:16 pm

      Thank you Ishu
      Glad that you liked it
      Comment whenever possible
      Love you too

  21. darshana on April 11, 2017 12:43 pm

    Really sorry for the late comment
    it was so cute..and awesome??????????????
    keep posting
    love u loads

    • Sophie24 on April 11, 2017 2:11 pm

      Thank you Darshana
      Comment whenever possible
      Love you too

  22. Ramya on April 11, 2017 6:06 pm

    Hey Sophie
    It’s awesome amazing Superb lovely

    • Sophie24 on April 12, 2017 4:53 am

      Thank you Ramya

  23. Neha-17 on April 12, 2017 12:11 am

    Perfect and marvellous! I have fallen short of words to describe its beauty…this is the best..out of three, for me…keep writing more! Yes, I loved this..scene made me laugh ? -she was like a Honda parked next to a Ferrari and a Corvette! Love ya!

    • Sophie24 on April 12, 2017 4:51 am

      Thank you very much Neha
      Glad that you found the part funny
      Love you too

  24. baby on April 18, 2017 12:43 am

    ohhhh good sophiiee….☺
    hiii.guess wat u hv lots n lots of fans n now m also added in dat list……..ummm…well frnds…?

    srsly yrr….I luvd it sooo vry mch..sch a beautiful piece of writing it was jst an epitome of love……..♥
    loved it to moon n back…marvelleous speechless….too cute….☺

    lods of love……♥
    keep writing ☺
    keep smiling….☺
    n do post more for us…..☺
    cant wait to read more of urs beautiful writings…….♥

    • Sophie24 on April 18, 2017 3:22 pm

      Thank you Baby
      Your comment means a lot to me
      Will surely try to write more
      Friends?

    • baby on April 18, 2017 6:06 pm

      yeah…wuld u like to be my frnd…….☺

  25. Rahul96 on April 18, 2017 9:06 pm

    Nice diii , I am sorry for being late !!

    • Sophie24 on April 19, 2017 5:45 am

      Thank you Rahul

  26. ARJS on April 19, 2017 9:44 am

    Amazing os I am super doper late I was not here when u shared links.its awesome os even though I am a twiraj fan this one is superbbbb.keep writing

    • Sophie24 on April 19, 2017 2:37 pm

      Thankyou ARJS

  27. IME on April 23, 2017 3:30 pm

    Dii where are you?? Sophie diiiiiiiiiiii comeeeeeeeeeeeeeee where are you????????????????

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