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Turning bliss to horror….. (prologue)

arnasharma26By 22 Comments2 Mins Read

PROLOGUE..
All Sanskrit retelling don’t mention about divinity of sisters of sita,death of sita’s sister is not mentioned,in Anand Ramayana it is written that urmila was the incarnation of milk ocean which provided stability to Sheshnag.So,she would have died earlier,I thought of writing a fanfiction on the same.However,its a TOTAL FICTION and not made to hurt someone’s sentiments…This is the confusion which make this epic more great and exciting.This fanfiction will revolve around lakshman n ram and of course..lakshmila.Please do review and enjoy!!!
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Part 1

‘Urmi Stop,Please stop running!!’Lakshman was continuously saying as he was running behind Urmila.The whole room was filled with Urmila’s giggles and sound of her payal.’Catch me if you can,Soumitra’ said Urmila and again started giggling. ‘Mila,Stop I am telling you,seriously’ This time Lakshman added a bit anger in his tone but Urmila was in full masti mood.She said,cupping Lakshman’s face,’You look so cute when you are angry.Just like a small kid.Adorable!!’ and pinched his nose and again started running.

She ran towards the balcony in which there was a swing.She started swinging when Lakshman came there breathing heavily.She was looking mesmerizing,her eyes were shining with happiness and skin with the moon’s light.The way she was laughing was making her ruby and diamond earings move frantically.Her sound of giggles were like a music for lakshman’s ears as he always wanted her to be happy…

Urmila was swinging highly.Immediately,Lakshman went into his protection mode. ‘Urmi….slowly….mila….u will fall….’ Lakshman said sternly running towards the swing. ‘Soumitra..I can never fall down until u are with me’ Mila called out and started swinging even higher.Lakshman nodded in affection and smiled looking at her.But the smile turned in pure horror when he saw her falling backwards from the swing.
‘MILA!!!!!!!!!!’Lakshman screamed at top of his voice.

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22 Comments

  1. arnasharma26 on

    Hello friends , Im new here n this is my first fanfic.Please do review….Aman bhaiya,Vanshika,Padmaja di and everyone..

  2. Shanaya on

    I m gonna kill u …u stopped it at this point ….Jokes apart…This is amazing.???….waiting for more dear…cliffhanger!!!

    • arnasharma26 on

      Thank u bhaiya!!!I read ur article on sita’s incarnation which gave me the idea…

  5. Padmaja on

    Wow really a awesome idea… I loved it sooo much dear… u stopped at a cliffhanger… pls do update asap… and do pls continue this… ???

    • arnasharma26 on

      It is very overwhelming that u all liked it…..Thanks a ton di …..I will update asap….

    • Jayani on

      Arna she meant lyk ur age, wen is ur birth date (just 2 wish u on ur b’day?)where r u frm in india nd where do u liv… U can also update ur profile IF U WANT

  6. pragyashree on

    Hi Arnasharma. This is amazing. I am personally very excited about this topic so I am going to follow it so plz plz update soon.

    • arnasharma26 on

      Hello di!!Thanks a lot…..yes i m gonna update very soon…n sorry for not mentioning ur name,actually i m very new here n don’t know all the names…so everyone else also please don’t feel offended n review…@Jayani,Tharu,Astra ,Anushya n everyone
      love,
      arna.

    • pragyashree on

      why are you saying this? When you call me di then accept it. There is no need to mention name

  7. Jayani on

    Hi arna, m so so soooo sry for not commenting earlier coz I didn’t open skr page for 4 days nd dere r so many ff within dese days… Dis epi was asum… Dis is d first tym m reading such a ff abt lakshmila… Will comment in ur other epis too…

    Jai Siya Ram

    • arnasharma26 on

      OH!!!HELLO AYUSH ……THANK U BHAI…..I M GLAD U LIKED IT N OTHER PARTS R UPDATED …..