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Turning bliss to horror….. (part 4 )

arnasharma26By arnasharma26March 21, 201725 Comments4 Mins Read
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LAG JAA GALE KI PHIR…

Humko mili hai aaj yeh ghadiyan naseeb se,
Jee bhar ke dekh lijiye humko kareeb se,
Phir Aapke naseeb mein yeh baat ho na ho,
Shaayad phir is janam mein mulaaqat ho na ho,
Lag jaa gale………

She realised something was wrong with her husband today.She took Lakshman to their chambers and made him sit next to her . Cupping her hand on his cheeks,

U:- Soumitra,its not that I don’t know this place or I’ve never been outside without you.Then why aren’t you letting me go?You know right,I don’t like it when someone curtails me..

L:- Mila,I know that.But its just that I am not really having a good feeling about today. Its one of those dark days,I feel.

U:- Why,Soumitra??

L:- I don’t know ,Urmi.I just feel as if something wrong is going to happen.

Urmila put up a pity smile..

U:- Swami,stop being so childish . Why should any of us have any trouble?We all are together.

Lakshman put his head in her lap and she caressed his hair .His voice dropped n tears ran down his eyes.

L:- Mila,I’ve already lost my mother like bhabhi.You,Bhaiya n family are my life now.You are the only ones I look upto and look after.I don’t want anything to happen to any of you…

Urmila made him look up.

U:- Swami,none of us wants the other to be harmed.But trust me,if you behave like this,we all will feel hurt.You are the strongest one in the family and here you…

L:- Urmi,for all these years,I haven’t been able to give you anything that you expected n were entitled to …and I myself have troubled you so many times.For once Urmi,let me keep you safe and well.

Urmila’s eyes watered up.

U:- Soumitra,you have kept me well for so long…not even for one say have I felt anything less than what I m entitled to.Then why are these things coming up again???

Urmila stood up and looked away to hide her tears.Lakshman too stood and hugged Urmila from behind…

Paas aayiye ke hum nahin aayenge baar baar,
Baahen gale mein daal ke hum ro le zaar zaar,
Aankhon se phir yeh pyaar ki barsaat ho na ho,
Shayad phir is janam mein mulaaqat ho na ho,
Lag jaa gale……….
L:- Urmi,you are the only piece of life that holds me together.If you were not there,nor would I have been able to keep bhaiya n bhabhi well,nor would I have been able to stay alive myself.I would have died….

Urmila turned and placed a finger on his lips,still in his embrace…

U:- Never,soumitra…never ever say anything like that .It hurts me..

Lakshman hugged her tightly.

L:- Urmi,same happens to me when I lose sight of you for a moment .Its scary for me.I don’t want to lose you again.

Time stood still.The two of them were just lost in each other and they didn’t know,but maybe fate was to make it their last embrace .

U(smiling):- Swami,Leave me.

L:-No

U:-Soumitra!!!!

L:- Mila!!!

Urmila pushed him and broke away ,laughing.

U:- Okay…Now I have to go.Take care of Bhaiya,Ang and Chandra.

L:- Wait ,so you are still going…

U:- Of course,when did I say no.

L:- But I thought……Please don’t go !!!

U:- You need to get rid of this childish behaviour of yours Swami..I’ll be back.

Within moment,she disappeared into the white mist.Lakshman stood there ,quiet and helpless.
It was for the first time in many years that he felt so……

It felt like whole nature sung that time

Phir aapke naseeb mein yeh baat ho na ho,
Shayad phir is janam mein mulaaqat ho na ho…………

Please review ……jai sia ram….their love is eternal…anyone can cry listening to their story

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    25 Comments

    1. Aman on March 21, 2017 2:39 pm

      Nice ff plz continue, song selection superb

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:01 am

        Thank u so much bhaiya….will continue soon with more songs

    2. Jayani on March 21, 2017 4:56 pm

      I literally felt lyk crying wen I read d song nd d story?… Btw which song is it??? Pls send d link if it is dere???… Btw… Dis is ff is asum… Can’t wait for d next epi… Pls post d next 1 soon…

      Jai Siya Ram

      • pragyashree on March 21, 2017 5:29 pm

        It is the song Lag ja gale ki phir ye haseen raat ho na ho , shayad phir is janam me mulakat ho na ho

      • Jayani on March 21, 2017 9:37 pm

        Thnx di ?

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:05 am

        Me too…..whenever I listen this song..I remember lakshmila…thank u so much……..will update really soon!!!!
        https://www.google.co.in/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwiC_6fusenSAhUEqo8KHabtAsMQFggZMAA&url=https%3A%2F%2Fmp3mad.com%2Fdownload-389689%2FLag-Ja-Gale-Ke-Phir-Lata-Mangeshkar.html&usg=AFQjCNG1MNCKldyodxEAHct3lbM1xn4drw
        Here is the link dear !!!! Answer u already got….

      • Jayani on March 22, 2017 2:12 pm

        Thank u di

    3. pragyashree on March 21, 2017 5:26 pm

      You are right Arna their love story is eternal. it was the first love story in the epics whose love were not sung like the lead one and the way you narrate it with a song is awesome. Please update soon

      • Jayani on March 21, 2017 9:36 pm

        Dat’s completely true di

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:06 am

        Thank u so much di…..i will update very soon…..n yes it is absolute truth

    4. Aman on March 21, 2017 9:00 pm

      What a good luck
      Madurakshi Mundle – Jat ki Jugani
      Yukti Kapoor – Agniphera
      Prithvi Hatte – Chup Chup Ke

      • Jayani on March 21, 2017 9:35 pm

        Is agniphera nyc bhaiya

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:08 am

        Really!!!!But Agnifera n Jatt ki jugni are coming at the same time…

      • Jayani on March 22, 2017 2:10 pm

        I read both d epis of agnifera… I feltit wasn’t dat bad

    5. Aman on March 21, 2017 11:06 pm

      Ya jayani, I watched and loved it but I don’t watch daily soaps much but sometimes

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:12 am

        Yes Bhaiya……Agnifera is superb…n yukku di’s acting is hats off…..the way she says baklol is hilarious!!!!

      • Jayani on March 22, 2017 2:11 pm

        Oh k… Btw thnx bhaiya

    6. Aman on March 22, 2017 12:27 am

      https://www.quora.com/Are-there-any-interesting-stories-related-to-Shrutakirti-in-Ramayana please read something interesting about Sita sisters

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:17 am

        The revolutionary thing my Ram set out to do, that I should not forget living in luxury! By looking at the bark clothes again and again, and by worshiping, I would be learning the lesson for the rest of my life! What Ram taught to this society by taking this revolutionary step, that lesson should be available to us! Can you give me those bark clothes, Raghav?’
        This is superb bhai!!!Lovely….thanks for sharing

      • Jayani on March 22, 2017 2:29 pm

        Thnx for d link bhaiya

    7. Aman on March 22, 2017 12:28 am

      I think shatrughn and shrutakirti are least focused

      • arnasharma26 on March 22, 2017 11:19 am

        Yup agree bhaiya….they were least focused just ‘coz shatrughan was the king for 14 years….but none understood their internal turmoil

      • Jayani on March 22, 2017 2:14 pm

        Hmm… Dat’s true

    8. Padmaja on March 24, 2017 10:00 pm

      Such a sweet and loving couple they are.. and this Epi was emotional..feeling bad for Lakshman as well as urmila… Amazing Epi dear… and your song selection was just fantastic….

      • arnasharma26 on March 27, 2017 11:36 am

        Thank you didi ….this means a lot to me!!!????

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