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Home»Fan Fiction»Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 5
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Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 5

kiyaBy kiyaMay 24, 201725 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey friends… Kiya here… Although I am not getting so much comments I am writing this bcz may be it bcz of I can’t post it regular but I am trying to continue my two ffs regularly.. So plz support me.. Pkz.. Ur comments gives me engry to write something new.. So plz…
Let’s start the ff…

Part 5

Gauri & Jiya is behind a tree… Goons r continually threatens the little girl and all peoples… Gauri thinks something & explains Jiya… Jiya goes & break somethings in a shop.. Two goons goes to see… Jiya returnes hiding.. Another goon who is caught the little girl frees her & checked everything… Gauri goes and holds the girl.. They silently moves from there suddenly goon comes & sees her taking the girl.. They shouts & pointed gun towards them.. Gauri hold the girl & covers her her… A gunshot sound.. All r shocked…
Gauri opens her eyes & saw that nothing happend to her nor that girl… She saw the goons hand is bleeding.. All saw that it was ACP Randhawa who shots the goon… All get relax… A another goon hurts Ranveer from back… Ranveer fights with them… Police comes & catches all gonns..
Ranveer comes to Gauri…
Ranveer: ” R u OK???”
Gauri nodes..
Ranveer: ” Really u r a very brave girl.. I must say… Bcz of u this little girl’s life is saved… She is a big business man’s daughter.. These goons cames for revenge.. Thanks a lot..”
Jiya comes..
Gauri: ” Its alright.. As a citizen its our duty to help u…”
Ranveer: ” Well.. Really nice to meet Miss???”
Gauri: ” Gauri.. Gauri Sharma…”
Ranveer: ” O.. I am ACP Ranveer sing Randhawa…”
Jiya: ” Nice to meet u sir…”
Jiya & Gauri shake hands.. Gauri noticed that Ranveer’s hand was bleeding..
Gauri: ” Oh my god.. Ur hand is bleeding.. Wait..” She takes a handkerchief from her bag and tied his hand for stop bleeding… Ranveer smiles…
Gauri: ” What happened??”
Ranveer: ” Today is Raksha bandhan and my wrist was empty.. I am feeling really very bad and look u tied something in my wrist..”
Gauri: ” Of course bcz u also save my life as a brother..”
They smiled.. They three have a small chi chat…
Ranveer: ” So from today u r my sister & I am ur brother.. Any problem just call me OK???”
Jiya: ” Now the problem is she needs a job…”
Gauri: ” Jiya??? Nothing bhaiya.. She is just..”
Ranveer: ” U r calling me bhaiya right?? Then??? Jiya tell me..”
Jiya: ” Actually bhaiya she lost her job today.. She needs a job to support her family.. Can u help her??? ”
Ranveer: ” Well.. Don’t worry.. Send me ur details Gauri.. I will search a job for u OK???”
Gauri & Jiya smiles.. They bid good bye to each other and goes..

Gauri comes her home.. Gives medicine to her Chacha & goes to her room…
She goes to freshen up..

Om in his room.. Sitting in front of window & drinking his coffee..
Om in his mind, ” Oh god.. What a day.. Its a Raksha Bandhan but before that.. That girl.. She is really a stupid.. Well I am a stupid as well… Without knowing her I started accusing her.. That’s wrong.. She didn’t tell sorry to me directly.. Battamez ladki..”

Gauri’s room… She is talking to a Krishna idol…
Gauri: ” Why he also didn’t say sorry to me directly.. Ghamandi(Arrogant)… But why I am only thinking about her… So much happend in a one day.. Really and I am thinking about that stupid… Kanha ji.. At first he looks so clam but when he opens his mouth feels like lava balls r coming towards me… Like his name Omkara as tandav Shiv… Huh..”
She goes and sleeps…
Gauri says Angrily, ” Omkara sing Oberoi…”

Om(Angrily): ” Gauri Sharma…”
He sleeps…

Ranveer comes Oberoi mansion… Prinku comes to him..
Ranveer: ” U r still awake for me???”
Prinku: ” No not for u.. For Dudhwale bhaiya.. He comes so early morning na???”
Ranveer: ” Prinku???”
Prinku: ” So u r asking silly question.. Or whom I can wait???”
Ranveer: ” Sorry..”
They laugh..
Prinku sees his hand..
Prinku: ” What happened???”
Ranveer: ” Just a small cut.. Don’t worry Gauri tied it..”
Prinku: ” Gauri???”
Ranveer: ” Oh.. A long story.. Come I will tell u…”
They goes…

Shivika’s room…
Shivaye hugs Annika…
Shivaye: ” Don’t worry.. I will find a good secretary for u… OK????”

Ranveer knocks.. Shivaye goes & opens the door…
Shivaye: ” Yes Ranveer everything is alright???”
Ranveer: ” Sorry for disturbing u Shivaye.. But I think I can help u..”
Shivaye: ” What do mean???”
Ranveer: ” Actually I met a girl today.. Very good & honest… Her name is Gauri Sharma.. I think she can do that job.. I will mail u details if u want??”
Shivaye: ” OK Ranveer if u suggest then send me the details.. Annika & I will check it…”
Ranveer: ” Great then Good night…”
Shivaye: ” Good night…”
Ranveer goes..

Precap: ” Gauri in Oberoi mansion…”

That’s all friends.. Plz support my this ff too.. Plz.. All I need ur comments.. Plz…for reading…

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    25 Comments

    1. san on May 24, 2017 7:53 pm

      Wow ? kiya nice update…Like priveer in your story a lot…..waiting for next part….take your time ?

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:48 pm

        Thanks San.. I like PreVeer to.. So little PreVeer touch…

    2. fffan1234 on May 24, 2017 8:13 pm

      Super awesome update

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:49 pm

        Thanks Dr.. Keep reading.

    3. Shreyanvi on May 24, 2017 8:23 pm

      Nice….post nxt part soon…

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:50 pm

        Thanks Shreyanvi.. Keep reading Dr…

    4. Niriha on May 24, 2017 8:27 pm

      Awesome

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:50 pm

        Thanks Niriha..

    5. Aishwarya on May 24, 2017 9:13 pm

      Amazing part…. eagerly waiting for next part as it will be Gauri’s entry in Oberoi Mansion….
      n please don’t be upset u know what u r one of my favourite peoples because I really like ur stories…. so please don’t get upset n there r people who really wait for next part of ur ff….
      (n please keep smiling although I have never met u but I would not like seeing u like this)

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:52 pm

        Thanks Dr… Thanks for ur so much Support.. And yes now I am not upset…

    6. Sagithya on May 24, 2017 9:24 pm

      Awesome yaar…. Waiting for the next one…. Post it soon…

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:53 pm

        Thanks Sagithya.. Keep reading..

    7. Yashu on May 24, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awesome loved it……i really liked private in ur story…..eagerly waiting for nxt episode….

      • kiya on May 24, 2017 11:54 pm

        Thanks Yashu… Keep reading Dr…

    8. Yashu on May 24, 2017 9:27 pm

      Priveer*

    9. Rasika on May 24, 2017 11:36 pm

      Nice… ??

    10. kiya on May 25, 2017 12:19 am

      Thanks Rasika…

    11. Verna on May 25, 2017 4:31 pm

      Wow.. really good.. I loved today’s part.. Gauri became Ranveer’s sister now 🙂 🙂

      • kiya on May 25, 2017 8:18 pm

        Thanks Verna.. Keep reading.. And give ur suggestions..

    12. UF on May 26, 2017 3:57 am

      NICE AWESOME???

      • kiya on May 26, 2017 9:19 am

        Thanks Dr..

    13. Chandani99 on May 27, 2017 1:25 pm

      Wow awesome

      • kiya on May 30, 2017 4:18 pm

        Thanks Chadani Dr…

    14. Aashi26 on May 30, 2017 2:37 pm

      sorry for not commenting before kiya di….now I will regularly comment…well I loved ranveer-gauri bro-sis bond….

      • kiya on May 30, 2017 4:20 pm

        Thanks Aashi.. Its OK Dr.. Keep supporting..

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