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Home»Star Plus»Dil Bole Oberoi»Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 1
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Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 1

kiyaBy kiyaMay 16, 201720 Comments4 Mins Read
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iii friends… Its Kiya here… Thanks for ur such & lovely response on my Rikara ff intro… Now start the 1st part… Here is the link intro/ Character sketch….

Intro & character sketch

Part 1

A big mansion is shown… Of course its Oberoi mansion….
In house temple….
There is 5 ladies in front of Mata rani’s idol… All r praying… There face is shown… Yes its Dadi, Janvi, Pinky, Annika & Saumya….
After finishing arti…
Dadi: ” Today is very big day in this house… It’s raksha bandhan…”
Janvi: ” Yes mummy ji… Its a very big function… All there brothers r waiting for their little sister…”
Dadi: ” But r they really waiting???? Saumya… Did Rudra woke up???”
Saumya: ” No Dadi… I don’t think so bcz before coming for arti I went to him and he sleeping like a baby…”

All laugh… Dadi: ” Then go and wake up him…”
Saumya: ” Yes Dadi…”
Pinky: ” Annika u also go…”
Annika: ” Where Maa???”
Pinky: ” Oho go and remind my diamond son that today is raksha bandhan so no meetings for today… Ok???”
Annika: ” Ok Maa…”
SauAni leaves…

Dadi: ” Saumya is perfect for Rudra and this house…”
Janvi: ” Yes mummy ji…”
Pinky: ” But before Rudra its our Devdas… What about him??? I think he will marry his statues…”
Janvi: ” Pinky???”
Pinky: ” Sorry Jethaniji…”
They smiled…

A person is shown making a statue… His long hairs r flows in the air…

Saumya comes to Rudra’s room…
He is still sleeping like a baby hugging a pillow…
Saumya: ” This Rudra na… Rudra… Rudra… Wake up its 9 AM… Rudra..”
……No response……
Saumya called him again… Shook him… No response at all….
Finally Saumya picks a jug full of water and throws it on Rudra… Rudra wakes up with a jerk…
Rudra: ” What happened???”

Saumya: ” Its 9 AM Rudra…”
Rudra: ” So what????”
Saumya: ” It’s raksha bandhan Rudra…”
Rudra: ” So what????”

Saumya looked at him…
Rudra: ” Wait… Raksha bandhan… That means Prinku is coming… Oh no… I am sleeping this late… Oh no…”
Saumya: ” Oh yes… Learn something from bade bal wale bhaiya…”
Rudra: ” What??? Rudra sing Oberoi will learn from that lambe bal wala prani….”
Saumya: ” Shut up… He is better than u…”
Rudra: ” Oh really??? Then why he is alone till now???”
Saumya: ” Rudra???”
Rudra: ” Sorry…”

The person is shown again and his hand is full of mud… His eyes have a spaces…

Shivika’s room…
Annika: ” Shivaye…”
Shivaye: ” I know its raksha bandhan.. And no meetings for today… U told this more than 10 times Annika, I remember…
Annika: ” I know but Maa told me to remind u again bcz last time u left bcz of some work… Remember???”
Shivaye: ” Yaa… Sorry for that.. Not this time.. But I am glad that every time Om handled every situation…”
Annika: ” Yes of course our Om is a real gem…”
Shivaye: ” Right.. Where is he????”
Annika: ” In his room… Preparing the gift for Prinku…”
They smiled…

The person is shown again making statue… Full of mud in his hands… His eyes have a spaces…
Shivaye call him….
Shivaye: ” Om…”
The person turns and his face is shown… Yes its Hero Omkara sing Oberoi…. Shivika & Rumya was at his room’s door and he smiled at them….

Precap: A girl says to a another girl, ” Don’t very at all when Gauri Sharma is with u…” They smiles….

So this is the first part… Pls leave comments dr readers and tell me that u liked it or not… Thank u…. Have a good day….

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    20 Comments

    1. DS on May 16, 2017 5:56 pm

      Awesome

      • kiya on May 16, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thanks dr…

    2. Rasika on May 16, 2017 6:11 pm

      Nice

      • kiya on May 16, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thanks Rasika…

    3. fffan1234 on May 16, 2017 6:57 pm

      Amazing

      • kiya on May 16, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thank u dr…

    4. Verna on May 16, 2017 9:52 pm

      Loved the way u gave dramatic intro for MY Omi loved today’s part dr

      • kiya on May 16, 2017 10:26 pm

        Thanks Verna… Keep reading…

    5. UF on May 16, 2017 10:03 pm

      AWESOME COOL NICE SUPERB INTERESTING????

      • kiya on May 16, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thanks dr….

    6. Ayesha on May 16, 2017 11:04 pm

      hy kiya nice plz post next one asap
      I know its gonna be sooo interesting

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 10:11 am

        Thanks Ayesha…

    7. Shreyanvi on May 17, 2017 8:57 am

      Nice one…post nxt part soon…

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 10:12 am

        Thanks dr..

    8. Niriha on May 17, 2017 2:27 pm

      Awesome

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thanks dr….

    9. ayshakhan on May 17, 2017 2:39 pm

      hi kiya how r u…sweet updat dear nic start….nxt post soon dear

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:12 pm

        Thanks dr… I am fine… How r u????

    10. Chandani99 on May 17, 2017 8:27 pm

      So Di…..finally you posted it!!!I was waiting eagerly for this part and to my expectation it is JUST AMAZING……I AM SPEECHLESS…..LOVE YOU DI??❤️❤️

    11. kiya on May 17, 2017 9:53 pm

      Thanks a lot dr… Love u too….

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