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Home»Fan Fiction»Tumhe dekha kar- RagLak TS Part 1
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Tumhe dekha kar- RagLak TS Part 1

DarshiniBy DarshiniJanuary 16, 201746 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi frndzz…this time am back with RagLak ts…tumhe dekha kar and the title is suggested by harshu…plz do read it and tell me how is it…
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A hall which is decorated with full of white and lavender colour flowers is shown…
There a boy and a girl is shown with their family members surrounding them…
A voice”laksh…”and gives him the ring and yes it’s an engagement ceremony…
He lost in his thoughts…a beautiful girl who is wearing pink colour lehenga is shown forwarding her hand towards the boy with a cute smile in her lips and she is so shy to look at him…
“Laksh…”a hand shooks him from behind to bring him out from his thoughts…he come to his senses…
He sees the girl and he closes his eyes and realised something…suddenly he dropped the ring on the floor and ran away from the hall towards his car…everyone is shocked…
The girl sees towards the direction where he vanishes and she cries…she ran towards her room…

Few months before…
A man who is getting ready for somewhere and his face is shown as laksh…yes it’s Laksh Maheshwari…leading young business magnet of Kolkata…
He gets ready for the party which is organised as a celebration for his victory of young achiever of the year award…
Laksh is a honest,rude and hardworking person who focus only on his business developments…His aim is to develop his brand globally…but he is rude with his employees especially girls except his best friend manya…
Manya and laksh were childhood friends and she is one of the partner of his concern…she shares everything with him but he is reserved…slowly manya fell in love with laksh but she doesn’t knows how it happens…
Manya thinks that because laksh respects her values and shares everything with her…but no she was wrong…laksh is hiding a thing from her…yes it’s ragini…Ragini Tripathi who is simple,lovable girl from the traditional family of Banaras…
Laksh haven’t met her but they are friends in social media for more than a year…Ragini hid her identity and the place where she lives from him…but shares everything with him…

A year ago ••••
Ragini (who is a PG in TM )comes to Kolkata to continue her career..because she want to stand on her own…in Banaras her family especially her daadi won’t allow her to go for a job…so she came over here by struggling more inorder to seek permission from her family…
She attended many walk in’s but finally got placed in Maheshwari group of institutions in R&D team because of her bold behaviour which helps laksh in attaining a new project…
During her interview…laksh organized his company’s own organization problem as a level to enter his company…noone can gave him the probable answers…but to his surprise she did it…and he thought that she is fit for that designation…he appointed her…
But she doesn’t know that her boss is her social media’s best friend…more than a friend infact they can’t name their relationship…

Flashback¥¥¥¥¥¥••••••••¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥
They became friends by accident…one fine day Ragini is busy chatting with her friends…one of her friend Said about a girl who will help them in their career development…she searched about that girl…list of related search displays…
Suddenly her phone rings…while she was talking to her friend her laptop gets off…so her younger brother clicked the pointer but twice…it gets clicked on”Add friend”…
Laksh opens his mobile and texts his friends that he is not coming for camping this time…he sees a request from ragini’s id whom he ever knows….while scanning her account manya comes and snatched it and touched the accept link…
Now they were friends…he snatched it from her…
“oh no…shit..mannu what you did”laksh shouts…
“what’s wrong lucky…”manya makes a pout…
He pulled her cheeks “nothing leave it…”

“ok…evening I will be coming to pick you up for camp…”said manya and she goes…
“mannu…am not coming…”laksh shouts…
“ok… I will take you in my arms then…”said manya and faint a smile…
“pagal ladki”laksh whispers with a cute smile in his lips…
Ragini sees her laptop and she received an acceptance message…”I didn’t gave any request…raghul…”ragini screams…
Raghul(her younger brother)comes…
“I told you na…how dare you touched my laptop…”said ragini and twisted his ear…
“ouch…oii billi leave me…infact you should thank me…your laptop is about to off so I just clicked the pointer…”raghul frees him from her and he ran away…
She ran behind him”hey duggu…statue…stop there itself…orelse I will eat your ice creams”ragini shouts…
“how dare to eat my ice creams”raghul come back…she got him and it was her lie to caught him…this is their routine work and they enjoy each other’s company…

In the evening laksh and manya goes camping…his phone rings…he answered..
“What the hell…”laksh shouts…
“kya Hua laksh…is everything ok na..”Mannu asked him in a low tone…
“nahi…Mr.Rajesh is in critical condition and he is admitted in hospital…”laksh makes confused face…
“ok..we will go tomorrow…don’t worry..”mannu replied…
“idiot…that’s not the matter..tomorrow we are signing an consignment…he is handling it but what to do now…”laksh bursts out in anger…
“chill…are you backed up it…”manya questions him…
“s yaar…but haven’t know about the coding”laksh pouts..
Manya frowns and she shouts”got an idea”
Laksh raised his eyebrows in excitement…

•••To be continued •••
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So how was the chappy guyz??do you like it??
Do comment and tell your views…
~Darshu

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    46 Comments

    1. Raglakholic on January 16, 2017 4:43 pm

      Wow akka
      It’s totally interesting one
      So raglak r social networking friends
      Nd ragini hided her identity
      Nd now she works with Laksh
      So manya loved laksh
      But with whom Laksh cancelled his engagement???
      Is it with manya
      Please do continue soon
      I can’t wait more to read akka

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:21 pm

        Tq harshu…will reveal soon da…tke cre dear

    2. sanchami on January 16, 2017 4:59 pm

      Awesome plz update next episode asap

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:22 pm

        Tq sanchami ? am glad u liked it…

    3. Darshini on January 16, 2017 5:04 pm

      Thnks a lot ra….will reveal the girl in nxt part…

    4. Arjuna on January 16, 2017 5:09 pm

      SUPERB

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:22 pm

        Tq Arjuna ?

    5. lovely on January 16, 2017 5:11 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 5:32 pm

        Tq so much dear?

    6. jazzy on January 16, 2017 5:12 pm

      amazing and is that girl manya or ragini???

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 5:33 pm

        Tq jazzy ? and will reveal soon dr?…

    7. Sindhura on January 16, 2017 5:34 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:18 pm

        Tq Sindhu dear ?

    8. Sherin on January 16, 2017 5:35 pm

      Interesting

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:18 pm

        Thanks sherin?

    9. saranya on January 16, 2017 5:38 pm

      Awesome
      with whom laksh engagement cancelled

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 6:19 pm

        Tq Saranya ? will let u know soon dear…

    10. Mintu on January 16, 2017 5:47 pm

      Nice sis.. ? interesting!!!!

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thnks dear…am glad u liked it…

    11. nikky on January 16, 2017 5:56 pm

      yaa bit confused but awesome one really waiting for next part to clear misunderstanding

    12. nikky on January 16, 2017 5:57 pm

      its awesome amazing brilliant outstanding mind blowing no world to describe it plzz see Na swasan ff are so much plzz raglak ff writer try to write more for raglak plzz for raglak write more raglak ff plzz this is a request hope u full fill plzz CVS has done so much partiality to raglak we have to prove that even if that raglak are the best and have equal fandom plzzz give more ff and yaa thanks also that u give so much precious time to raglak but plzz many raglak ff is started and left in the middle but a swasan complete their ff and none ff raglak reach 100 so plzz

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thnks Nikki….will clear soon…

    13. Astra on January 16, 2017 6:22 pm

      awesome

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 9:16 pm

        Tq astra?

    14. sangeetha on January 16, 2017 6:57 pm

      Great Wishes for ur next story..gook luck..good start…A very gd nd interesting intro for the lead…keep writing da

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thanks da…

    15. Malu on January 16, 2017 8:18 pm

      Superb part

      • Darshini on January 16, 2017 9:17 pm

        Tq malu…am glad you liked it…

    16. IQRA222 on January 16, 2017 10:03 pm

      awesome

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 11:30 am

        Tq IQRA ? am hpy that u liked it…

    17. Ammu on January 16, 2017 10:18 pm

      Interesting episode dear and eagerly waiting for next episode

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 11:31 am

        Thnks dear…will post soon…

    18. asra on January 16, 2017 10:50 pm

      awesome dear…who’s that girl dear….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 9:49 am

        Tq asra dear? am glad u liked it…will let u know soon….tke cre da

    19. A.xx on January 16, 2017 11:06 pm

      nice and i think he ran away from manya xx

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 9:50 am

        Thnks dear ? may be…will reveal soon…

    20. MI_MAHI on January 16, 2017 11:23 pm

      Superb…

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 9:50 am

        Tq mahi?

    21. hemalattha on January 17, 2017 3:17 am

      Nice.

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 9:51 am

        Tq latha dr?

    22. tani on January 17, 2017 7:29 am

      Super amazing

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 9:51 am

        Tq tanu…glad u liked it…

    23. Ragz_teju on January 17, 2017 10:01 am

      awesome loved it

      • Darshini on January 17, 2017 11:29 am

        Tq teju? am glad u lovd it…

    24. Aswathy on January 19, 2017 4:17 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on January 19, 2017 7:17 pm

        Tq Aswathy…am glad u liked it…

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