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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 8)
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Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 8)

ZainabBy ZainabJune 25, 201712 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello people! I am really very very Sorry for posting after a centuary. I know I have really bad habit of being late and I also know that I have lost my viewers and readers. I am really Sorry for being so late. I heartly apologize. If you are new to my fan fiction, then you may read then from the link below. Lets begin with the chapter. Hope you’ll like it.

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Scene 1
Oberoi Mansion

Shivaay wakes up from his sweet slumber about how he rescues Annika from that naagin Mallika and his naag brother Harsh and beat them to death. He, lying on his bed, took his phone, went to gallery and looked at Annika’s candid photographs. He kissed on one of those and went to the washroom, smilingly.

Omkara was in his room, lost in Gauri’s thought. he unknowingly drew Gauri’s lovely dove shaped eyes on paper. coming back to his world, he looked at his master piece, smiled and smacked his head. he kept that paper safely in his cupboard and went to the dining hall, blushing.

Rudra, who was applying face pack and cursing Saumya who prayed to God that something to happen to Rudra before his 14th birthday.

Rudra’s POV
Saumya! tumne aisa kyu kiya?? kya zarurat thi Bhagvaan ji se pray karne ki ki mujhe PIMPLES ho jaye, who bhi mere birthday se ek din pehle! 🙁 kyu Saumya KYU!! sirf isliye kyunki maine tumhe PARATHA KHAANE KI MACHINE bola, isiliye??maan lete hain humne tiffins exchange kiya tha kyunki tum apples aur main paarthe laya tha, toh kya hua?
Bhai, chaar (4) parathe kon khaata hai? ab tumhi yeh pimple sahi karne ka tareeka bataogi? I am gonna call you! Sumo Wrestler kahin ki!!

End of Rudra’s POV
he takes a picture of his pimple and sends it to Saumya. he, then calls her.
Saumya who is helping her mother in household chores, picks the call and says;
Saumya: hey Rudra! whats up? are you excited for your birthday?
Rudra: Excitement, MY FOOT! tumne jo uss din pray kiya tha na Bhagvaan ji se ki mujhe mere birthdat se ek din pehle kuchh ho jaye, lo ho gaya mujhe itna BADA sa pimple!! ab tum hi batao main ise thik kaise karu.. please meri madad karo, Please Sumo?
Saumya: What SUMO? I am not gonna help you now!, Cutty!!
Rudra: okay, okay. iam sorry. no Sumo, only saumya, now will you help me? please ask some remedy from aunty and tell me, else my OH MY MAATA will happen in the party!
Saumya: okay. i’ll ask something. (Aside) maa!! rudra is asking something, will you please talk to him.
Rudy: are you mad!? you ask na!
Saumya: okay, okay! i’ll put the phone on speaker and you talk to her and listen to her, okay? (Rudra nods)
Saumya’s mother tells rudra about some remedy on pimples and her obeys it. he thanks them and finally invites his sumo for the party. Saumya thanks him.

Scene2
Annika’s room

Annika wakes up sits on her bed remembering her dream on Shivaay which was usual now. she looks at the alarm clock which just stricked 9:30. she stood up, horrified;
Annika: O bete ki! I got late! They must arriving the chowk in 30 minutes! Annika, you are gone! she rushes to bathroom.
As soon as she reached the chowk, Omkara, Gauri and Saumya were there. they had a gala time and completely enjoyed themselves. it was 2:30 when Annika and Saumya went to their homes but as Omkara took permission from Gauri’s mother, he took her to oberoi mansion.

Gauri, who was hea over heels for Omkara, was excited and hell nervous. Butterflies were flying here and there since ages in her stomach. Omkara, who was al set to show to big and wonderful portfolio he started making for Gauri, from the day he saw her. Omkara too, was having butterflies in his stomach.

Precap: Rudy’s birthday party!! Saumya getting hurt and Rudra helping her. Omkara shows the portfolio to Gauri and she kisses on his cheeks!

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    12 Comments

    1. fffan1234 on June 25, 2017 9:40 am

      Lovely

      • Zainab on June 26, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thanks alot??

    2. alekhika20 on June 25, 2017 4:18 pm

      Lovely update

      • Zainab on June 26, 2017 4:43 pm

        Thank you?

    3. nikita_jai29 on June 25, 2017 6:39 pm

      Nice one

      • Zainab on June 26, 2017 4:43 pm

        Thank you?

    4. Madhuani on June 25, 2017 11:33 pm

      Nice

      • Zainab on June 26, 2017 4:44 pm

        Thanks alot❤

    5. Marshmellow on June 26, 2017 4:24 pm

      Khidkitod update❤. You write wonderful. I ask your HUGEEEEE fan???

    6. Xyz on June 26, 2017 4:26 pm

      So cute OmRi?

    7. Jerry_36 on June 26, 2017 4:44 pm

      Hey Zainab.
      The update is wonderful dear ! So cute, lobed everything in it. Shivika dreaming about each other, not bad??
      And Omkara making portfolio for Gauri ji…well excited about the precap.
      Rudra, pimple…gosh ! Saumya’s prayer came true !! Awesome sista !!
      Post soonish. Love ya❤

    8. kanfi on July 3, 2017 6:14 pm

      AmmZzIngggg..
      Reallly srry for late update….
      Rumya part was hilarious

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