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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 7)
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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 7)

JanviSinghBy JanviSinghJanuary 31, 201725 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys…. Sorry for late update…..
So, without further ado….. Let’s start with the update…..
Scene 1(near notice board)
Shivika:-(together) Phail gaya raita…???
Voice:-“Kaha the tum dono???”
Shivay:-(while turning back hesitantly???

Naira…… Ek minute merit bat toh suno….
Naira:-Bat toh tum dono meri suno……. What’s wrong wid u both….ha..??? Pehle toh mai Jakar in dono ko convince karu….. Uske bad aap dono ko in logo se bachau…. N what do I get in return…..???? Nothing……
N ha…. Itne jaldi aap dono ne prakat hone ka kasht kyu kiya???Aram se ana tha Na……
Shivay:-(in a casual tone) itna hyper kyu ho rahi ho yr.. Take a chill pill yr…..???
Naira:-Apne chill pill ko lo…. Or Usse lekar dafa ho jao….
(Turning towards Anika… In a bit relaxed tone)
Ani…. Kuch bolna hai tumhe???
Anika:-(hugging her)I’m really sorry yr..
Shivay:-(smilingly) it’s okay sweety….???

Anika:-Acha ek bat samjhao…. Tumne un dono ko convince kaise kiya??
Naira:-(in a calm tone)Are yr karna kya tha….. Wohi purana dialogue… Abt college reputation n all.. or Uske bad mere idea ka topping bhi toh tha…. Convince toh Hona hi tha….☺☺
Anika:-Waise idea tha bhi khidkitod……
Ek dum dhinchak types…..???
Naira:- thanks yr…..?

Shivay:-(irritated)Ho gaya tum dono ka….
Ab ghar chale…..???
Naira:-Hey, Mr. Angry Bird…… Tumhe nh lagta tum kuch bhul rahe ho…..(in an angry tone….??)
Shivay:-Nope yr…. I don’t think so….. Let me check….. I have my phone…. My wallet….. My car keys…. My bag… -Arre yr…. Sab kuch toh hai hi… What are u talking about????

Naira:-Dont u think tumhe kisi ko thank you bolna chahiye for his/her help??
Shivay:-Nh yr….. Maine canteen wale uncle ko thank you bol diya tha…..
Are tumhare samne hi toh bola tha….
Naira:-(highly irritated????)U know what to???Just forget it…… Hatto samne se……(she walks away )
Shivay:-(giving a confused look) What was she talking about????
Anika:-Offfo….. Budhhhu Ram….. Tumhe Usse thanks bolna chahiye tha…. She saved us again…..

Shivay:-Ooooo Shit….. How can I forget that????
Ab toh wo mujhse bat tak nh karegi…… Ab kya karu????
Anika:-Soch kya rahe ho…… Bhagoooo or Jake sorry or thank you dono bolo…..
Shivay:-Yup….U r right for the first tym Panika…… Chalo catch u later…. Bye… Bye….????
Anika:-(giving him a u r impossible look) Ya… Bye bye….

Scene 2
Shivay came running…..
Shivay:-Naira wait yr…. I am really sorry…??
Naira:-Hmmmmmm…..
Shivay:-Please talk to me yr….. I’m really sorry…… N thank u yr….. Please Mann jao….
Naira:- Shivay we are getting late ….

Get inside the car…..
Shivay:-(sadly)OK….
After a while…
Naira:-Main bhi aj Oberoi mansion aa rahi hu tumhare sath…
Shivay:-(shocked)Wait… What…. Bt why????
Naira:-Kuch important hai….
Shivay:-(in a scared way…. Facing her…)
Naira please yr…. Mom se complain mat Krna yr….. Tumhe pata h Na…… Mom tumhe lekar kitni possessive hai……. She won’t leave me yr….
Mujhe lecture de de kar pagal kar dengi….
Naira:-Mujhe iss bare mein koi bat nh karna h…
Shivay:-Nairuu…. My sweetu…. My cuteeeeey…..
Plzz aisa mat karo….. Plzz Na…
Naira:- Shivay…. Age dekh kar drive karo…
Mujhe itne jaldi nh marna….

Shivay:-Naira plzz …… I’m really sorry… I won’t repeat it again…. Plzzz mom se complain Matt karna….. Plzz…plzzz.plzzzz…plzzz…plzzz….
Naira:-(she couldn’t control it anymore…… N starts laughing loudly….)Ooommmmgggg….
Look at your face Shivay……..
(Shivay starts checking his face in mirror)
Awwwwwww…. U r looking so cute…..?????

Shivay:-(being embarrassed) Hey, I’m not looking cute….OK…
Naira:-Apna chehra dekha tha tumne…….. Tumhare chehre ki hawaiyan udd gayi thi….
Bt don’t worry…. M Tumhari complain krne ghar nh ja ri hu….. Badi ma ne bulaya hai…. Is liye ja rahi hu….
Shivay:- Phewwwww…… Thank God….
Tumne toh mujhe Dara hi diya tha…..
Hey guys, I’m really sorry for short update ….

Actually I’m not well…. Bt I thought to give a short update because it’s my birthday tomorrow…. N u all are my family… Toh treat toh banta hai …. Real treat nh toh… At least update wali treat toh banti hai Na …..

I hope u guys liked it…..
See u soon in d comment section….???

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    25 Comments

    1. nikitajai on January 31, 2017 7:04 am

      Happy b’day dear.. This is good one

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 10:08 am

        Thank u so much Nikita???
        I’m glad tht u liked it??

    2. JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 8:42 am

      Hey guys… It’s part 6…. I don’t know what’s wrong with tu….??

    3. vincy on January 31, 2017 10:21 am

      Nice

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 11:31 am

        Thanks a lot dear?

    4. Shubhadra on January 31, 2017 12:29 pm

      This is so nice,Janvi…Happy Happy HappyBirthday to you dear..Wishing you lots of happiness,joy and masti today and in the years to come!!!!

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 3:45 pm

        Thank u so much yr…..?????
        I’m so glad that u liked it….☺☺☺?

    5. Aana on January 31, 2017 1:27 pm

      Its really amazing janvi….nd the Hawaiiiya UDD gayi….seriously man ….very funny lol….enjoyed it…

      Nd wishing u a very very happy happy birthday dear… Hope u HV a awsm day….

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 3:46 pm

        Thank u so much for the wishes sweety…???
        N I’m so happy tht u enjoyed it…???☺☺☺

    6. Dheemahee on January 31, 2017 3:00 pm

      Awesome one or ya SSO dekhne me bahut maja a raha he post next one soon and sorry for not commenting on your before episodes. Happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday dear jhanvi happy birthday to you . May God bless u dear and all your wishes come true.✌????

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 3:48 pm

        Awwwwwww…. That such a sweet birthday wish….. It’s the sweetest wish I got today..
        N it’s completely fine dear…
        N glad tht u enjoyed reading it…???

    7. Bhavana on January 31, 2017 5:00 pm

      Wishing u a very HAPPY B’DAY……nd loved it….. 🙂

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 5:57 pm

        Thanks dear….
        I’m so glad that u liked it…???

    8. Kehkasha on January 31, 2017 5:33 pm

      Hey dear……how r you…..and a very happy birthday in advance……and thanks for ur advance treat…..

      This treat was really amazing……and delicious……as there was lots of humour in this……and keep going……keep rocking……keep smiling……what else can I wish…….
      Luv u dear…..

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 5:59 pm

        Awwwwwww… Thank u so much sis…
        Actually it got updated on my birthday only……. N I’m fine now……
        N that’s such a sweet birthday wish…..
        Luv u 2…3…..4………1000….n a lot more sissy????

      • Kehkasha on January 31, 2017 6:09 pm

        Oops….sorry my mistake…..no advance…..but actually…..its 31st……oh….i have gone crazy studing stats……for continuous three hrs…….soooooo sorry dear……

        HAPPY WALA BIRTHDAY…….dear…..and no advance……sorry…….just coz I read tomorrow………i wished u in advance……..without checking ur status……how fool of me….

        HAPPY BIRTHDAY ????????????????????????? ? ? ? ??? ? ??

    9. JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 7:20 pm

      Hey that’s completely fine sweety……
      N thanks once again……?????
      I can understand dear….. I have faced same situation in d last week….???

    10. Samm on January 31, 2017 8:18 pm

      happy birthday dear 🙂 wishing you all the happiness in the world 🙂
      also, nice episode. loved shivaay’s cute ‘please’s 😀 😀 😀

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 8:57 pm

        Thank u so much sissy????
        Actually I always wished to see Sso pleading tht way????

    11. Sriya on January 31, 2017 9:14 pm

      Happy birthday may you get all the happiness?

      • JanviSingh on January 31, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thanks dear….. Thank u so much….???

    12. Ankita on February 1, 2017 10:33 am

      Belated happy birthday… Amazing episode…

      • JanviSingh on February 1, 2017 11:16 am

        Thank u so much dear….. N thanks for d compliment????

    13. Mrunal on February 2, 2017 7:01 am

      OMG such a big late latif I’m..
      soooooo sorry dear…
      belated happy birthday to u…

      Birthdays are a new start, a fresh beginning, and a time to pursue new endeavors with new goals. Move forward with confidence and courage. You’re a very special person. May all of your days be amazing…!!!

      once again I’m sorry dear…
      mai na ek no ki buddhu hu..
      maine padha tha tumhale profile pe par yaad hi nahi raha…
      aur ab epi padh ke yaad aa gaya…

    14. JanviSingh on February 2, 2017 10:53 am

      Hey Mrunal……
      It’s completely fine dear…..
      N thank u so much…….
      U really made my day……
      Luv u?????

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