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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 3)
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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 3)

JanviSinghBy JanviSinghJanuary 26, 201724 Comments5 Mins Read
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Happy Republic Day everyone…. I think I’m a bit late in wishing n a little extra late in updating….
Sorry for that guys…..
Let’s start wid d 3rd part…

Naira’s POV
“ROADCHAP LADKI ” as soon as these pathetic words registered in my mind, I felt like smashing that jerk’s face… How dare he??? blo*dy idiot… But I tried to handle this situation more maturely …..

Scene 1
Boy:- Kya hua ab bolti band ho gayi…. (What happened… Your mouth got sealed or what??) Pehle toh bht bol rahi thi….
Naira:-(thinking) bht ho gaya khud par control or mature banna… That’s it… Ye toh gaya… Ek punch to banta h…( Waise bhi Ek punch se zyada kuch thodi Na hoga…. I hope ho zyada kuch Na ho ….) After saying all tht nonsense ,he was still smiling…not to forget like a fool…
Naira:- Bas ab boht hua….(in mind)
Anika:- Bas ab bht hua……(in mind)

Shivay:- Enough……(wo English m hi bolega yr…. U know right… Typical Shivay)
1………2………………….3……………….(all 3 of them counted mentally)
(A/N- Or achanak se ek zoor ki awaz ayi…. Oops ek nh teen awaz ayi… Lekin ek sath ayi Na is liye thoda confusion ho gaya)
DISHOOOOOOOOOOOOOM……………
N the very next moment that idiot was lying on the floor in semi conscious state and a bruised face….(U guessed it right guys…. In teeno ne uske face ki geography hi bigad di…( 3 of them changed his face’s geography)………………………..
Are ruko yr itne jldi kaha ha re ho… Note abhi khtm nh hua…. Or ek Puri FILMY college fight bina hero k cliché dialogue k kai khtm kaise ho skti h???)
Anika:- Abe O Chipade…..Dobara apna muh khola Na toh….(O Cheapster…. If u ever open mouth again then…) She was cut off in middle by Shivaira…(Shivay+Naira)
Shivaira:-Kabhi kuch bolne k layak nh bachega….(u won’t be able to speak again in Ur life)
Or isi dialogue k sath hamri Super Hit movie ek Blockbuster punch line sath ke sath end hoti h… (I know yr zyada ho gaya)

Shivay’s POV
OOOOOOOOOOO Shit….. Itna raita phailane k bad(A/N- Shivay.. What’s with the language???), realisation hit me… N trust me it hit me hard… Aj toh Bade Papa college k Dean se Milne and wale the….. As Oberois were the trustee of the college….. N I am damn sure that Dean be hamra ye Salman Khan wala stunt dekha hoga or wo( CCTV footage u know) or wo Bade Papa ko zaroor batayega… We are sooooo gone today……
Nd an amazing idea hitted my head…. Ab sirf ek hi insan humein in sare problems se nikal skta tha….. Bade Papa ki cutie pie…. Naira….
I looked towards Naira n grinned idiotically??…. N she within no time understood what I was thinking…. Of course use pta tha ki Bade Papa and wale the…))

Scene 2
Naira:-(thinking)As soon as I looked towards Shivay… I saw him grinning widely like a lunatic……… Whoooaaaa not again….. Main kisi ko convince nh Karen wali….
Naira:-(annoyed)No Shivay not again…. Yaar I can’t handle it every time ….
Shivay:-(in mind) Chal Shivay puppy face wala trick use krte h.. wo pakka man jayegi… After all she loves puppies… N wo mujhe kabhi mana nh krti h… After all I’m her best friend yr….
Shivay:-(In a puppy face??) Please Na Laddu…(yup he calls her laddu cuz she loves eating laddu) Tumhe pta h Na tumhare alawa un dono koi convince nh kr skta…
Naira:-(in mind… Awwwwwww… He looked so cute in tht puppy face n he knew tht that puppy face trick worked on me every time…. Use pta tha m use mana nh kr skti…. He looked like a little kid at that time… I felt like pulling his cheeks…. Bt I got hold on myself… N brushed off those thoughts…) Okkk fine…. Bt ye last time h… Next time you’ll convince them….
Shivay:- okkk… It’s a deal….N u know what u r d best……
Naira:- I know… I know….
Shivay:- love u…???

Naira’s POV
He kissed on my cheeks after saying I love u… In a friendly manner I just smiled at his antics…
After a moment , I looked towards Anika, she was looking very dull n sad after that jerk’s incident…. I signalled Shivay to look at her… N of course he understood my signal… He probably knew what to do…….

Scene 3
Naira:- chal Naira lag jao tu Apne kam par…. Mission Persuasion…. It was not going to be easy though…. Bt Mai bhi kuch kam nh thi…I was no less than an expert at this work… Shivay good at convincing me… But I was probably the best in convincing everyone with my puppy eyes… Especially elders….. It’s going to be fun..☺☺☺☺
Done with the update… I hope it didn’t turned out to be irritating…. Plzz do tell Ur feedbacks… N plzz tell me I should continue it or not…
Thanks for reading….
Love u all… Bye.. bye….☺☺☺???

Precap:- Dean or Tej dono utrenge botal mein??…. N the much awaited Shivika conversation…???

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    24 Comments

    1. Karishma on January 26, 2017 5:43 pm

      Your fanfiction was very interesting but I want to correct your one mistake it’s not bottle it’s batli

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 5:58 pm

        Thanks dear… N thanks for d correction…. I seriously didn’t noticed it…. so sorry for tht☺☺

    2. Manu24 on January 26, 2017 6:06 pm

      it’s beautiful janvi…

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 8:38 pm

        Thanks for reading Manu…☺☺☺

    3. Rithik on January 26, 2017 7:04 pm

      Your ff awesome you are give much importence to Naire character not Anika

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 8:39 pm

        Thanks for the complement dear… Do refer to the theme of the story… Ur query will get cleared…☺☺

    4. vincy on January 26, 2017 7:29 pm

      Wow

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thanks for reading Vincy… N specially for constantly supporting me….☺☺☺

    5. Lilly on January 26, 2017 7:30 pm

      Awesome

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thanks for ur constant support Lily… Keep reading n giving Ur feedbacks…☺☺☺

    6. Bhavana on January 26, 2017 8:49 pm

      Its great……?

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 11:52 pm

        Thanks for reading dear… Luv u…☺

    7. Hriday on January 26, 2017 9:46 pm

      Wow but what do you mean by the precap

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 11:53 pm

        Hey dear…. The precap is abt successfully convincing Tej n their Dean…. N thanks for reading sis…☺☺

    8. sso on January 26, 2017 10:20 pm

      Nice

      • JanviSingh on January 26, 2017 11:55 pm

        Woow even Shivay luvd my fiction….. Just kidding dear… I have a bad sense of humour…. n thanks for commenting dear… It really means a lot to me…???

    9. Harshada on January 26, 2017 11:23 pm

      Hey!!
      Nice one!! Waiting for the next. BTW.. just want u to no.. I wud keep reading all the shots but I prefer not to comment unless needed. (Sorry for that). Till then.. just no u r doing well.. ?

      • JanviSingh on January 27, 2017 12:28 am

        That’s completely fine dear… N thanks a lot for reading….???

    10. Samm on January 27, 2017 8:08 pm

      sorry for the late comment dear. also, this was so nice! my favourite part was the filmy fight scene, but simply because i’m a fan of action! 😀 and shivaay’s puppy face was so cute! 🙂

      • JanviSingh on January 27, 2017 9:01 pm

        Awwwwww dear…. Thank u so much…. Ur comment means a lot to me… Cuz u r an inspiration for me…. Even I luvd imagining him in puppy face…☺????

    11. Mrunal on January 29, 2017 6:38 am

      wow amazing..
      i loved this action packed episode a lot..
      ohh ho kabhi kabhi ye shivaay bhi na bahot hi jyada cute behave karata…
      main to sadake jawa hayeiinnn???

      • JanviSingh on January 29, 2017 11:33 am

        Awwwwwww… Thank u so much dear… Ur comment made me smile..??

      • Mrunal on January 29, 2017 12:28 pm

        Then I’m glad bcoz nothing is most precious than this when u become the reason for someone’s smile…?

    12. JanviSingh on January 29, 2017 2:07 pm

      Aww…. That’s so sweet of u Mrunal…..??

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