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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 13 & An apology note)

Hey guys…. I’m really very very sorry for the super duper extra late update….
I don’t want to waste more time.. so let’s start with the update… N do read the note at the end..
It’s a request guys…

Scene 1(O.M. )
Shivay:-Naira hurry up… Jldi jao or bade papa se note sign karwa lo… In the mean time main Sahil ko OmRu se milwa details hu…
Naira:-ok…
(A/N:- l won’t exaggerate this scene as it’s already late… so let’s move to the next part.. )
Shivay:-(to Naira) u got it signed??
Naira:-yup… N what abt Sahil..??is he comfortable here??
Shivay:-yup.. OmRu are with him… Even Prinku would join them after some…
Naira:-thats great…??
Shivay:-hmm….??…so let’s leave …
Naira:-ha… Let’s go…

Scene 2(in the car)
Naira:-Shivay Agar hum aise hi ruk-ruk ke chalte rahe to mil gayi humein train…??
Shivay:-tum mujhe ye sab kyu bol rahi ho…??
(Making a cry baby face???)
Meri kya galti h Ur… Maine thodi na ye traffic jam karwaya h…
Naira:-mr. Angry Bird … Tum itna Badal kyu rahe ho… ?? I was just saying that it’s already 12:10… Ab humara kya hoga???????
Shivay:-dont know yr….???
Naira:-(excitedly)wait a second…. I have an idea…
Shivay:-ha.. toh.. what are you waiting for…
Jldi bol…
Naira:-do one thing.. car side m park kr do…
N ask Ur driver to come n take the car back..
Shivay:-ha toh hum kya udd k jayenge…??
Naira:-tum Puri baat sunoge…?
Shivay:-ha.. continue…
Naira:-toh hum apna luggage car se lenge or paidal (by walking) station jayenge.. yaha se zyada dur nh… It will take hardly 10-15 mins..
Simple ..
Shivay:-tum iss idea ko simple kehti ho…
Have u lost it…. M itna Nahi chal skta…
Naira:-plzz Shivay… We are already very late…plzz man jao.. plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz…????
Shivay:-okk fine….
Naira:-Awwwwww… Luv u…???
(N she literally meant it…)

Scene 3(Railway station)
Anika is seen walking here n there with a tensed face…
Anika:-(talking to herself) kuch nh ho skta in dono ka… Pata nh kaha ye dono….
Sahil ko ghar chodane gaye h ya Uske sath film dekhne gaye…
Train k departure ka bhi time ho gaya h…
Ooo god…. Kaha rah gaye ye dono….
(While calling them)
Or ye phone…. Ye dono phone kyu nh uthta rahe h… Ab main kya karungi….
On the other side… Shivaira are seen rushing towards the station in a hurry ….

(Back to Station)
Or hamesha ki tarah train ki seeti baj gayi..??
Anika:-ab toh kuch nh ho skta….

N here Shivaira are seen running on the same platform as soon as the heard the whistle of the train…..

Anika:-ek bar dekh leti hu… Kya pata wo dono pahuch gaye ho…
N she goes towards the gate of the train compartment…N starts looking for them… N soon she spots Shivay running n struggling through the crowd…
She waves to him n shouts loudly…
Anika:-???? Shivay… Idhar dekhiye… Yaha par…. Ha.. ha… Idhar…
Shivay:-(arre ye Anika ki awaz kaha se aa rahi h…
N then he spots Anika n waves to her…???)
Ooo… Anika…. Wait I’m coming…
(As if Anika is the train driver?????)
By d time train starts to speed up… N even Shivay starts running in full speed…( Lyk skating rabbit… I hope u all remember??)
Anika leans outside the train n gives her hand to Shivay for holding it….
Oooo Jana plays in the background…
Shivay looks at her hand n then looks at her…
She gives him a reassuring look… N Shivay grabs her hand n with a lot of struggle Anika pulls him inside….
They share a short n cute romantic eye lock….
(So the first twist was Raj k jagah Simran ne Raj ki help ki… I mean Shivay k jagah Anika ne Raj wala role kiya…??)

(I know u all are wondering ki Naira kaha reh gayi… Then wait for it…??)
Simultaneously Naira is seen running but she dashes into someone n that’s the reason she is left behind…

After balancing herself she again starts running towards the train… N she spots a boy leaning outside the train’s door…
She forwards her hand to him… Bt the boy gives her a confused look as if she is an alien…
Naira:-arre o jhingoor… Abe apna hath de… Wrna meri train chut jayegi…
Boy:-ji madam…
N he gives his hand to Naira n she quickly holds his hand n gets into the train…
Boy:-aap thik Naira ji…
Naira:-hmm…(she qickly scans the boy from head to toe… He was a lean boy with spectacles not to forget a huge one… With super oily hair n braises… In short a typical champu scholar boy…??)
I’m fine.. by d way how do u know me…??
Boy:-i think apko yad nh h.. hum dono same class m h… M Karan…
Naira:-ooo ha… Sorry wo I don’t notice…
Karan :-no worries…
Naira:- by d way… Thank u.. for helping me..
Karan:-your welcome ji…
Naira:-Bye…
Karan:-Bye ji….???
(Lol… I know u want to kill me after reading such nonsense recreation scene…. Really sorry for that ….)

A/N:- So guys I’m done with today’s ultra late update… N I’m really sorry for that…
N the important thing is that I won’t be able to update the next part before 20th April as my board exams are nearing n I can’t give equal attention to both my studies n my story… N I can’t end it Midway as it’s my first ever ff n it’s very special to me…
I hope you all will understand….. To all the ff writers…. Guys you all are rocking like always…
Just follow your instinct n your writing will come out brilliantly … N a special request guys…
Plzz pm your links to me as I’ll visit the page often n read Ur ff’s… I might get late but I’ll surely read… U all are very important to me so I just want to say that plzz mera wait Krna… I won’t disappoint u all…
Luv u Guys…
Plzz pray for me….
See u soon…
Bye… Bye…..???????????☺☺???????

JanviSingh

Trying to put everything together.....

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