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Tum Meri Zindagi Ho — Avneil OS

AK001By AK001November 30, 20176 Comments3 Mins Read
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Neil and Avni, both are sitting at the corner silently’. The Valentine Party is going on.
Avneil came with their college friend’s DD, Ali, Aman and Riya.
It has been 1 and half years since they all pass out from their college. Just now Neil has joined his police force which eats his lot of time and because of this he hardly gives time to Avni. And Avni being an understanding partner support and help Neil to balance his Personal life and Professional life.

Avni was quietly sitting beside Neil, who was busy in his phone sending or replying to his mails.
She looked at the couples at the dance floor ‘who was dancing with their respective partner on romantic song and then she looked at his fiancé
Avni:- Neil!!!
Neil (still busy in his phone):- Hmmm
Avni:- c’mon Lets dance
Neil:- Not now sweetheart, wait for few minutes let me send this mail ‘Its very important.
Avni gave an irritated look to Neil
Avni (irritated):- Do I ever cross your mind?
Neil:- Nahi
Avni got angry
Avni :- Do you like me?
Neil (simply replied):- Nah
Heer became sad
Avni:- Do you want me?
Neil:- Nahi
Heer is now shocked like anything
Avni:- Would you cry if I left?
Neil:- No
Avni:- Would you live for me?
Neil:- No
Avni:- Would you do anything for me?
Neil:- No
Avni (now in tears):- Choose’. Me or tumhari zindagi!!!
Neil:- My life!!!
Now after hearing this Anvi couldn’t control herself and she crying ran away from there. Neil looked at Anvi who was heading towards the exit door. He immediately stood up and walked to towards the DJ.
”””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””’

Avni who was about to leave the place, is stopped
“The reason you never crossed my mind is because you’re always on my mind”
She turned around to see Neil who was at the stage holding mic
Neil:- ” The reason I don’t like you because I Love You”
Avni looked at Neil’s eyes
Neil:-“The reason I don’t want you because I need you”
Neil was taking small small steps towards Avni while speaking on the mic
Neil:- “The reason I wouldn’t cry if you left because I would die if you left”
Avni now smiled with teary eyes
Neil:- “The reason I wouldn’t live for you because I would die for you
Everyone who was present there were quietly standing and smiling at the cute confession of Neil of his Love
Neil:- “The reason why I’m not willing to do anything for you because I would do everything for you”
Neil now is in front of Avni
Neil:- “The reason I chose my life is because Tum meri zindagi ho”
“I Love You Avni’ I love you a lot” he whispered
Avni (smiled):- I Love you too you stupid
And saying this she hugged him tightly
Everyone burst into clapping and Neil smiling hugged her back.

Hey guys I’m new on TU. It’s my first OS on Avneil. Hope u guys enjoyed it. I got this idea while reading a similar post on FB.
You guys are beautiful the way you’re.. be confident, be yourself!! You guys can do anything…

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AK001

    God loves the innocence of your heart... Let it never be corrupted for no one and no reason ❤️❤

    6 Comments

    1. Khyathi on November 30, 2017 9:49 am

      Hey Hii. It’s nice..u have gd writing skills…keep on updating

      • AK001 on November 30, 2017 10:14 am

        Thand dear

    2. Avni angie on November 30, 2017 9:57 am

      Nice episode….
      Pliz update more….

    3. nikitansx on November 30, 2017 10:51 am

      Such a good os but you should’ve wrote about their dance

    4. lillianalieben on November 30, 2017 1:11 pm

      i loved it. even though it was short but i loved it. update soon and all the best.

    5. swapna on November 30, 2017 2:11 pm

      Such an awesome lines dear please continue

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