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Tum mera ho… (intro)

AsmithaaBy AsmithaaAugust 12, 201631 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hai friends… this is Cutiepie Achu with a new storyline…. Really I am obessed with this kkb story line.. so now I am going to give a new story… All the characters are same….But this Tanu and Alia will not enter now in the story.. really I hate that two members and purab is Abhi’s Brother..
Ok lets get into the story…

In Delhi
A big house is shown.. a boy comes to a room..
Boy: Abhi bhai wake up.. it is time for Airport..
Abhi: Purab.. Why are u waking me up so early…. Flight is at 10’o clock only na…
Purab: Bhai it is already 8:30.. we have to reach the airport at 9:00
Abhi: What???? 8:30??
Abhi gets up from the bed… gets ready… takes his mobile… sees that mobile and kisses it.. and keeps it in his pocket..
Purab: Bhai.. I am seeing it from a year… u have 2,3,4 with this 5 mobiles… that too.. the other three are iphones.. but u have this Samsung mobile always with you… Why??
Abhi: The things which are gifted by special one have more value than anything Purab… You don’t know speciality of this… This was…. He had tears in his eyes..
Purab: I am sorry bhai if I hurt u…
Abhi: no problem… and wipes his tears…
{ Purab did not know why behaved like that becoz he went to new York for his studies.. and returned last year..}

The other side.. Another side a house is shown.. it is also big as the first one…
A girl comes toward a bed with water in a jug… she porus the water on the other girl… that girl shouts BULBUL!!!! You made me wet..
Bulbul: (laughs) Pragya Di if u are sleeping like a kumbkaran.. I can do this only… U have to go to ur fashion designing competition to Paris.. but u are sleeping here..
Pragya: ohh!! Yes.. and I have to exhibit my paintings too.. ok I will get ready as I am running out of time…
Pragya gets ready as she wears her red colour saree with black border with black jacket and comes… Bulbul had already set the luggages in car and they head off to airport…
At the same time.. Abhi and Purab gets blessings from dadi.. Dadi wishes best of luck for his rock concert…
Abhi : thanks dadi… and I am super excited as I am going to my dream destination Paris…
Both Abhi and Purab drove off the airport…

Let us see whether destiny makes Abhigya and Purbul together… And pls drop down u r comments.. the only I can kow whether it is good or not and I can change it according to your suggestions… thanks for reading….

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    31 Comments

    1. durga on August 12, 2016 11:35 pm

      Nice start yaar continue it

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:16 am

        Thank you very much Durga…

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 7:05 am

        Thank u so much Durga…

    2. Lakshmi on August 12, 2016 11:55 pm

      Super Story line.. keep going Achu…

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:42 am

        Thank u so much… For ur lovely comment Lakshmi…

    3. Mukund Raj on August 13, 2016 12:55 am

      nice story lyne but if u want to continue then please be regular

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:42 am

        Thank u Mukund… Yes I will be regular….

    4. Monesha on August 13, 2016 2:25 am

      It was awesome I loved it plz continue

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 7:10 am

        Thank u Monesha…. Keep reading continuously….

    5. priyanka on August 13, 2016 4:52 am

      nice start…keep going

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 7:12 am

        Thank u so much…. Priyanka… Keep supporting me…

    6. Nirmal on August 13, 2016 5:27 am

      Nice episode….

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 7:12 am

        Thank u soooooooo much Nirmal…

    7. b.k.maha on August 13, 2016 5:39 am

      Super…..please continue..

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 7:13 am

        Thank u so much…. I will continue it surely my dear maha..

    8. Sriti54 on August 13, 2016 7:23 am

      Awesome

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 5:41 pm

        Thank u sriti…

    9. Aishwarya on August 13, 2016 8:09 am

      Superb….i loved it… Eagerly waiting for your next episode

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 5:41 pm

        Thank u dear…. I will post it tomorrow…

    10. HARITHA on August 13, 2016 9:04 am

      Achu why are you thinking about continue it or not… go ahead my dear… and keep rocking

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:28 pm

        Di…. I am very happy that u commented….. Thank u so muchhhh diiii….

    11. Sugan on August 13, 2016 9:50 am

      Super friend…

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:29 pm

        Thank my friend Sugan…

    12. Angita on August 13, 2016 9:59 am

      Nice start

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:29 pm

        Thank u so much dear…

    13. Saranya24 on August 13, 2016 10:21 am

      Wonderful u must continue but waiting to knw who abhi told special suprb????

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:30 pm

        Thank u dear…. It will be revealed in coming episodes deary… Keep reading…

    14. Reshma Pradeep on August 13, 2016 11:14 am

      Interesting!!!

      • Asmithaa on August 13, 2016 6:31 pm

        Thank u so much baby….

    15. trisha on August 14, 2016 12:21 pm

      Superb intro dear…love it???

      • Asmithaa on August 14, 2016 2:09 pm

        thank u di..

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