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Tum ho – shot 1

PrachiBy PrachiNovember 29, 20175 Comments7 Mins Read
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Kabir was sleeping when saachi came and pats her forehead and says kabir kapoor wake up it's 10 and he woke up with sudden jerk
K- saachi why didn't you wake me up now I am late
S- oho first see the watch this was a sweet morning alarm for you as you you Do not like irritatingly one

K- ohhh he gets up from bed and moved towards her she moves back and finally to the wall he continued Mrs saachi kabeer kapoor where is my morning kiss he kissed her forehead and said gm she was blushing like a red rose he said common saachi okk fine I am going she stopped him he smirk she kissed him and hugs her. They were really very romantic couple in hospital everyone was talking about them day pass pass by they came to know each other more.

Next morning

Saachi was in kitchen she was cooking breakfast and suddenly she vomited kabir came and handled her they soon got to know that she was pregnant both were overwhelmed  (I am rushing guys because I don't know how to describe so sorry ???) 9 months passed away and they were blessed by a son  they named him sabir .  They were really happy to see him they took a lot of care of him he was really close to them and only had one dream to make his parents proud. Kanchi asked him about his future plans he said he wanted to become doctor like them and hugged them.

20 years later
A girl is working in kitchens but she is not saachi ye to badi azeeb baat hain???who is she? She is wearing a yellow saree she is so beautiful she is wearing nuptial chain and has applied vermilion and what saachi is sleep tension free oh so this is the reason the girl is ruhani saachi's daughter in law and sabir's  wife she is instructing mitali (servant) to what prepare and not
R – mitali Papa aur maa ke liye poha bana Hain and their coffee dadi ke liye pharatha lekin less oil aur sugar free tea and sabir  ke liye sand which and green tea
Mitali- choti madam aur aap

R- ahh sand which only
Saachi came down and saw ruhani  working she was going to her meanwhile ruhani  came to her with a glass of hot water and medicine
R- maa aap ki medicine please eat it
She takes and eats it meanwhile kabir also came he was going to ask when she brought newspaper and juice for him
R- here is it Papa

He smiled and said thank you bete
R- Papa I have prepared the files u just check them
K- no beta u have prepared I am sure it wouldn't have any error
Ruhani  smiled and asked them to go to dining table she is bringing their breakfast they were going when saachi was going to fall but fell on kabir's arm they were having eyelock meanwhile a handsome munda came behind ruhani  and scared her by doing bhoww….. she screamed and kanchi came in senses
Kabir- ruhani  what happened

Sabir  was laughing and laughing
Sabir -I thought u are kanchi  if u were than it would be more funny
Sabir  standing in shock??? says kunj kapoor hasta bhi Hain great
S – why can't I laugh
Twinkle – yes

u can laugh now all are getting late so please
4 goes on dining table soon Kusum join them but 3 of them discussing about case
Sab – twinkle have you got the details
R – haa hands to him

Seeing it he was extremely angry he throw away the files and shouts RUHANI  HAVE YOU ANY SENSE YOU ARE STUPID OR WHAT YOU CAN'T MAKE A FILE PROPERLY THAN WHAT USE ARE OF YOU !????? she stand up and sees the file kunj I am so sorry I gave you wrong files he showed his hand and said you know what just shut up because u are not an experienced doc yet and for you only profit means not ur patients correct I am leaving and yaa one more thing don't dare to interfere in this case
Saachi – but sabir who will handle

 Sab – alisha she is better than her now please u both a company me not her
Kanchi knew if they would not accompanying than ruhani  will have to get the scolding she and kabir left with him. Ruhani  felt bad and went to room she took the photo of sabir  and said I am sorry sabir maine aapko hamesha hurt kiya na lekin aap tension mat lo very soon alisha will complete her Internship and u can get free from me but I will always love u because of ur nature I know u hate me and did this marriage for just our family sake. And maa is also no more. She than went to hospital

In SDCAH

Ruhani  was working in her cabin suddenly  some one came and said so sabir se divorce kab le rahi ho and she was alisha (riya's daughter)
R- bhaut jald phir tum dono sath main raho ge na
A- of course and u will resign from the hospital

R- hmmm I can do anything for his happiness
A- good
She went ruhani and started crying saying please sabir  do not leave me please??
Just than a nurse arrive and says dr aapko sabir  sir bul rahe Hain she wipes her tears and nods she went to his cabin knock knock
S- come in
She  came he stood up

S- close the door ruhani
R- hmm
She closed the door
He took out some papers and handed to her she was shocked and broken
R in tearly voice- sabir
S- ruhani  I have signed this papers now your turn I just want to get free from this marriage

She was scared and took the pen and with lot of courage she signed the papers tears were on her eyes and on papers as well she runned away with his cabin and went to a corner and started crying bitterly she did not had the courage to face  Kanchi and Kusum. She went to her car and went to her own house that was khurana mansion
She entered and switched on  lights and said ab shayad yahi mera ghar Hain she
went to a photo and caress it and said maa I am really sorry I can't save my marriage I am the worst daughter  wife and bahu she started crying and slept their only in night
While in Kapoor mansion
All were worried about ruhani
S- sabir  tumne ruhani  se kya kaha
Sab – maa maine use kuch nahi kaha

Ka- us par gussa karne ki zarrorat thi
Sa- aap sab hamesha uski side kyu lete Hain
Suddenly saachi got some papers from sabir's  bag and she was shocked she went and slap him and threw papers on his face
S- kya Hain yeh sabir  maine tumhe yeh sikhya Hain tum ruhani  ko divorce dene wale  ho
Sabir was shocked
Sab – maa

S- kya bolo
Sab – main use pyar nahi karta but aur kisi se karta hoon
S- kise
Ku- alisha
Now he got a slap from kabir
Ka- tumse yahi kaha tha na that to stay away from alisha
Kus- bas karo abhi Hume twinkle ke baare soch na Hain pata nahi kaha hai meri bachi……..

Precap- sabir came to know about alisha he relaised his mistake

Pehchanlo main hoon Kaun haaa haa just joking finally test are over and some relief guys I know this a bakwas one but didn't got any idea please read and bear dislike comments are allowed more over ???✂✂✂????? are also allowed nothing else as kitna maaro ge na
Bye
Have a nice day
Prachi the worst ???

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    5 Comments

    1. Anu88 on November 29, 2017 7:06 pm

      So so beautiful and amazing episode yaar……….sabir or ruhani ka story muje bhot bhot acha lagi dost………I am eagerly waiting for the next part yaar……. please yaar update soon ……….love u dear…….

    2. swethaa on November 29, 2017 7:39 pm

      awesome episode
      now post the next shot asap
      loved it dear
      prachi the best

    3. riyarocks on November 29, 2017 9:28 pm

      prachiiiiiiiii……….missed u a lot sweetieeeeeee……..kabhi hum nhi the & kabhi tum nehi, now finally we’re back……..haha………just kidding……..sweetu……this was really amazing, but felt really bad for ruhani……..I hope sabir realizes his mistake soon………..luv u sweetuuuuuuuu……….

    4. XYZ on November 29, 2017 10:33 pm

      Pls update the next episode asp sabir realize his mistakes waiting eagerly

    5. Amnaa on November 30, 2017 12:46 am

      It was not worst….. It was amzing…. Every time we tead storiea abt kaanchi daughter but this was abt their son…… It was different….. Loved it

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