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Tum ho….mera sukoon aur dard (intro and episode 1)

AksharaaBy AksharaaNovember 23, 201620 Comments4 Mins Read
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TUM HO…
mera sukoon aur dard

Hii frnds!!! Im Aksharaa frm chennai. Im new to this page. I have written few stories and now only i got some confidence to upload this. Mesa story mein mera frnd bhi hai patner she is Baavana she is my bff she also helps me with this story. I want alk of ur true and lovely comments im carefree type so u can comment anything as it is ur basic right. If my dan fiction is not good tell me and i dont mind it as u all r my frnds im sorry lovable frnds. I pray to god that let u have the best day everyday. Please to read and comment .
-Baavana and Aksharaa with lots of love

INTRODUCTION

(Pairs r varun as aarav kapoor and helly as sruthi mehra)

It was a police station.The inspector is enquiring someone there and he keeps on asking him to wait for few mins as one imp person has to come. Suddenly a young pretty girl wearing mordern dress(business women usually wears)steps inside everybody there stood up and greeted her. She didnt react walked towards Inspecyor and asked him to leave that man. Inslector refuses saying that he beated one man to his death and he have filled FIR. The girl tells him,”do u think im asking u??my GOD !! Im odering u come on release him now!” He again refuses and she replied with an awesome attitude,”Im SRUTHI MEHRA odering u to release him now otherwise u will face the consequences haan not just consequences young wire,Sruthi’s consequences remember it!” Then the constable near him murmur into his ears asking him to release that man as this madam is greatly powerful and dangerous to compete with . The Inspectors agrees and releases him . The man thanks and praises her influence she proudly replies her,”this is Mumbai mera dynasity this is my kingdom and im the queen there is no one dare to disobey the queen. And this queen dont need a king for ever”she asked him to go and she walks away styly putting her coolers on.

An open field concert

Half of the north india was present there. Everybody was screaming like anything. Its not clear but it is clear that everybody is very eagerly waiting for some one.then one person came into mike and anounced,”now let me invite the handsome hunk whom u r waiting for ur cutie is now here before u clap well to welcome the one and only cutie now!!”then he goes and the noise was deaferring it was ten times more than yhe whole noise pollution of India.

Now a stylish young man wearing jackets anc jeans with a electric guitar in his hands came before the crowd its was an wow moment everybody left silent.he smiled a little pridly seeing yhe crowd and started in a blooming voice his voice just melted everyone’s heart,she started in a steady pitch “mein rooh ka parinda padpadaye….meri dua ho …….he looked up the crowd with a light smile in his lips and sung the very line mein ki kara mein ki kara …..he started highly raah chadh si yaar bulleya …..”bulleya was the song. Everybody just screamed and now its clear the were screaming AK AK AK …he finishes the song and req them to keep silent.then he told “hi boys and girls thank u fr lotx of love and support i love u all guys and a special thanks to all girl fans as they r theback bone for my success”he finishes and rushed fr another concert everybody there is not ready to stop yelling his name.he came out and steped up in his car there his frnd ask him “u have such alot of girl fans y dont u love somebody ” and he replied “i want a girl who is humble sweet funny and light hearted and i didnt meet her till now” his frnd jokes that he would find such girl only in amazon forest and aarav again jokes him that amazon means they might be his family so he asked his frnd to introduce her they laugh and goes.

Guys is my update is too big …..if it is so then tell me yaar

Do u loved intro comment ur thoughts eagerly waiting for ur suggestions …..
Lots of love frm akshu and baavu

PRECAP

While driving for Aarav’s car bumps into Sruthi’s car and Aarav yells at Sruthi and asks her to come out of the car.Sruthi ws taken away by his looks and came out of the car looking into his eyes.

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    20 Comments

    1. Simin on November 23, 2016 10:01 pm

      Awesome dear continue soon

    2. Soujanya on November 23, 2016 10:02 pm

      Nice

    3. maha016 on November 23, 2016 10:15 pm

      Akka….oops first nan ungala akkanu kopidalama….and first nan maha….and akka i m frm salem and coming to ur stry it was awesome do continue it…..and akka idhu longa ellam illa…apparam akka nenga namesa swara & sanskar ne vaikalam bcz inga yellarukum newva oru name trend panradhu kashtam so thats y…and dont take me wrong akka….and loved this intro….

      • Aksharaa on November 24, 2016 8:21 am

        My dear thangai u can wholly call me akka i loved it. Im frm chennai dear.i wont take it wrong but actually swara and saanskar do not fit to this story as both r kind of family names and i want a stylish and attracting names for this story u can see swara doesnt suit for some brave bussiness women and sanskar absolutely not for rockstar so dont take me wrong han …..can i keep the real names of them is it ok fr u????anyways do support me with ur comments dear

      • maha016 on November 24, 2016 5:58 pm

        oh dear…..ne 2000 na appo now u r 16 ritr…!!! then nan una akkanu kopidamaten…neyum 11std dhane…..me too…!!! and its ok unaku endha name apt-a irrukumnu thonudho u can keep it and i can understand that the name swara & sanskar is not apt for this….love u dear….tc

    4. Vidhi on November 23, 2016 10:21 pm

      Wow dear loved it… N I read ur status do u really share ur birthday with varun?????….plz continue dear?????????❤❤❤❤

      • Aksharaa on November 24, 2016 8:14 am

        Thank u dear the comment of urs is as awesome like u yeah sis.. i share my bday with him im his crazy fan even dieHrd fan my bday is 28 aug just with him felt lucky…..do resd my ff and support me lkke this tq dear

      • Aksharaa on November 26, 2016 8:27 pm

        Where r u dear i have posted my sec epi

    5. anu on November 23, 2016 10:35 pm

      nice

    6. Radhika on November 23, 2016 10:44 pm

      Wow…

    7. s on November 23, 2016 11:01 pm

      nice..

    8. SNY on November 24, 2016 6:56 am

      Awesome dr…
      Nxt one soon..

    9. Aksharaa on November 24, 2016 8:23 am

      Tq all dears fr ur supportive and heart throbbing comments and also fr ur sugestions i always welcome all ur suggess…..tq once again beauties….lots of love

    10. Sri on November 24, 2016 9:58 am

      vryyyy nice if u don’t have a problem can u plzzzzzz tell me in which year u born sorryyyyy if I ask u and take care

      • Aksharaa on November 24, 2016 5:16 pm

        No problem dear im in 2000dear

    11. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on November 24, 2016 4:04 pm

      Awsm concept dear.. Plz continue.. Waiting for nxt..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

    12. mica on November 25, 2016 8:32 am

      uhhuuu.. i love that Shruti statement “the queen don’t need a king”

      Oh, I don’t know what you’ve been told
      But this gal right here’s gonna rule the world
      Yeah, that’s where I’m gonna be
      because I wanna be
      No, I don’t wanna sit still, look pretty
      (daya-sit still, look pretty)

    13. Manasvi on November 25, 2016 10:17 pm

      Dii sorry for the late comment..
      Btw loved this episode..
      Story is really interesting..
      And i loved Shruti’s attitude..
      It is kinda wow..
      And for Aarav kapoor.. What can i say dii..
      Cutie..

    14. tani on December 1, 2016 7:15 am

      Mind blowing

      • Aksharaa on December 1, 2016 11:57 am

        Dear I have uploaded 2 more epi dear

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