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Tum Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise by #Rpk & #Taiana (Part-4)

Hello guys we #RpK & #Taiana are again here with the 4rd part of Tum BinJiya Jaye Kaise

Here we go

MM House
After Knowing all From Swasan Everyone becm sad
Sujata :- Na mai toh khu hun jiji .. Shori ne bhut Shaa Hai .. Uski Narazgi Jayaj hai.. pr Mai chahu hu ki Laksh Ragini ko mna Le or dono hsi khushi vapis aa jaye
Ap :- Haan sujata Mai sehmat hun Tumhari baat se
Laksh is Driving car nd talking to himself,Suddenly his car stuck in Traffic :- uff … yeh kya..!! Mera Bachaa .. Mai abhi aa rha hun .. tumhe laijane… Mai janta hun jb tum Hmara Room dekhogi toh bhut khush ho jao gi…Finally he cms out from Traffic
His Car Stopped coz of Red Light and one child cm outside of his car with rose flowers and knocked on mirror of his car
Child :- Sahib yeh rose lo na fresh hai ekdum

Laksh thinks about Ragini nd Bought all Roses from him :- Haan Sbhi dai do .. nd he gave him money nd goes from there coz nw its green light

In Badi
its about 8pm Ragini is laying on her bed and Thinking about laksh thn Shekhar came :- Ragini beta abh kaisi tbiyat hai tumari…
Ragini :- Hum thek hai Baba nd smiles .. Maa kha hai ??
Shekhar :- Vo khana bna rhi hai Rsoi mai
Ragini :- Ok
Shekhar :- asha tum aram kro … swara ki call ayi thi ki doc ne kush nayi med likhi hai.. jo vo laikr ana bhul gyi.. toh mai vo laikr ata hun.
Ragini nodded in ok nd shekhar leave badi for buying medicine fr Ragini
after That Ragini Gets up from Bed , Goes Near Window and stares at the Moon with moist Eyes and her hairs r blowing in wind , all Raglak moments cms in front of her Eyes :- Kya kush nhi kiya apke liye… apni pyari behan .. apni maa tk ko nuksan phuncha diya … afsos hai mujhe ki maine uss insan ke liye apni jaan daini ki koshish ki jisko meri prvah nhi .. jo meri jhuthi ksm tk khany ko tyar hai … sach toh yeah hai ki hum apke bina jee bhi nhi skte .. humari sansee chl rhi hai .. laikin fir bhi hum zinda nhi

Song Played on her Bg
Tum Bin Jiya jaye Kaisee
Kaisee Jiya jaye Tum bin
Sadio se Lambi hai Raaten
Sadio se Lambe Hue Din

On The other side laksh enters in badi nd meet Shomi :- Laksh beta tum yha ??
Laksh :- Haan maa.. mai ragini ko laijany aya hun ..Sharmishta thinks fr while nd about to say smthing bt laksh stops her :- haan ma .. mai janta hun vo andr hai or mera intzaar kr rhi hai .. mai abhi ata hun usse milkr nd goes inside Ragini’s Room
Sharmishta :- Laksh meri baat toh suno.. laksh left the place without listening to her.

In Room Ragini was Standing near window nd busy in staring at moon with teary eyes.. Laksh Slowly comes near Her and Hugs her From Back locking his hands on her belly… Ragini was shocked to react. He slowly placed a kiss on Her neck. Ragini closed Her Eyes. Laksh Goes Near Her ear and whispered :- I lv u ragini .. I Really Really Lv u and kissed on her Cheek.. Ragini Opens her eyes nd cmes back to her senses. She realized her position and try to free her but couldn’t as his holdon her was tight.
Ragini :- Lak.. Laksh
Laksh :- haan Ragini
Ragini :- hume shodiye
Laksh :- Nhi shoduga
He Hugs her even more Tighter and Start Kissing on Her Neck. His face was so close to hers she could feel his hot breath on ears. Again..Ragini controlling her feelings :- Laksh Shodiye hume
Laksh :- Nhi Shoduga.. Aise Kaise Shod du Tumhe .. Kitna Intzaar kiya Hai Tumse Milne ka..Ragini with full force broke the hug and Turn her.
Ragini:- Laksh Humne kha..Laksh putting his index finger on her lips:- shhhhhh… Tum Nhi aaj bus Mai Boluga .. He comes close to her. He hold her by her waist and pushed her to him. She bumped to him. Her handswere on his chest.He was staring her with so much love and passion. Ragini was lost in his eyes.

Bg Song Played
Mainee Shode Hai Baki Sb Raste..Bus Aya Hun Ek Tere pass re ..Meri Ankho mai tera Naam Hai..Pehchan lai..

laksh kissed on her forehead. Ragini closed her eyes. Laksh saw her and kissed her both eyes. She held his shirt on his chest tightly. Tears skipped from her eyes. Laksh noticed that and slowly wiped thm by rubbing his cheeks to hers. His touch made her shiver. Thn he kissed her bothcheeks. Ragini was lost in his touch that she forgot everything…His eyes felt on her rosy lips. He closed his eyes too and started to come closer to her lips. Their lips were so close. Both could feel their hot breaths on their face. He is about to Kiss her. Suddenly Flashes of lakshya’s Refusal nd Ragini’s suicide starts cming in front of Ragini’s Eyes She opened her eyes and pushed Laksh forcefully.

Ragini shouts in Anger :- dur rahiye hum se
Laksh with shock :- Kya hua Ragini ??then he thinks about her accident.
Laksh :- Ohh Sry Maine Tumhe Tang kiya .. tumhari Tbiyat thek nhi hai na ..He cms Near her hold her from shoulders. Ragini try to get frm his hold. But laksh didn’t let her and make her Sit on bed :- Dekho Bacha Tumhe Rest Krni Chahiye .. tum bed Se uth kr window pr kya krne gyi thi … yeah dekho mai tumare liye Roses laikr aya hun .. bt you r Much More beautiful thn these flowers

Ragini got irritated nd Throw Roses on floor. Ragini shouts :- Band kijiye apna natak laksh … bnd kijiye yeh hmare liye Jhuthi Prvah krna … bndkijiye hum pr Pyar ke naam ka Ehsaan krna… bnd kijiyeee plzz..Laksh is shocked seeing her behavior. He cupping her face:- Wt happen to u bacha she jerk his hands away and from bed.
Ragini:- Kya bacha bacha lgaa rakha apne… bnd kijiye hume is naam se bulana
Laksh shocked and hurt :- kya hogya Ragini… mai tumse sach mai bhut pyar krta hun.. mera pyar .. meri tumhare liye prvah koi natak ya koi ehsaan nhi hai … nd he Hugs Her Tighter :- Plz aisa dubara maat kehna .. tears roll down from both his eyes .Ragini pushed Him Again :- Shodiye Humeee.. Laksh Is Staring Her With Sad nd shocked face
Ragini :- Kis Pyaar ki Baat kr Rhy Hai aap.. Agr Itna he pyar tha humse . agr itni he prvah thi humari toh Toh Jb Hum apke liye Apni jaan daine valy thy tb kyu nhi aye ap..vo toh hmari kismat thi jo hum jinda hai …vrna apne toh hume mrne ke liye shod diya tha..

Laksh with tearying eyes:- Mai janta hun mujse glti hui hai.. pr mai mjbur tha..Ragini: Kaisi mjburi.. haan jante hai hum apne sb uss bachi ke liye kiya… insb mai agr hum mr bhi jate toh kya tha… haina ???
Laksh :- aisa maat kho ragini
Ragini showing her hand :- bus … hum ab or kushnhi sunna… ab hume sb smj agya hai .. ki hm glt thy … apne humse pyar na kbi kiya tha.. na krte hai or na kbi krege..
Laksh :- Nhi Ragini.. Mai tumse pyar krta hun.. yaad kro vo pyar bhre lmhe
Ragini :- nhi laksh vo apka pyar nhi tha… vo toh apka Ehsaan tha jo apne Hum pr Humare Pyar ke bdle kiya… agr pyar krte toh.. toh hume yun Mrne ke liye na shodte…Saying dis she burst out in tears. Laksh try to holdher shoulders but she jerk his hand. She wipes her tears.

Ragini :- Nhi Royege Hum Apke Liye.. Jayea yha se .. humne apko Apne pyar se Ajad kiya…She Turn her face from him and Starts Crying Silently and Lakshya knws about it .. He cm Closer to Her And Hug Her Tighter From Back. Ragini Tried break the hug bt She couldn’t as he hugged her Tighter
Laksh with so much pain:- Nhi Ragini … Mai is Trh Tumhe khud se Dur Nhi jane Dunga… janta hun mai ki Mujse Bhut Bdi glti hui hai .. Hr Br Maine Tumhe Dukh Diya or Tumhara Gussa Jayaz bhi hai .. pr Is Trh Mujse Dur hokr Mujhe Sja maat do .. Mai tumhare bina mr JaungaRagini Closed Her eyes in pain. Laksh was crying burying his face in Ragini’s neck. She can feel weton her neck …On the other side Shekhar enter’s in Badi and call Sharmishta :- Shomiii..Sharmishta cms from kitchen with Tensed Face :- Aa.. aap aaagye ..
Shekhar :- Haan .. yeh lo ragini ki med … kaisi haimeri bachi kya kr rhi hai..
Sharmishta :- Ji vo.. ji voIn Ragini’s Room
Ragini Broke The hug force fully and without turning :- Chly Jayea yha se… mujhe akela chod dijiye… tears rolled down her eyes.
Laksh: nai ragini meri baat toh suno.
Ragini shooking her head no: hume koi baat nai sunni ary hume Apki kisiii bhi baat pr ykin nhi hai… humne apko apne pyar se ajad kr diya .. hum apse ab Pyar nhi krte
Laksh :- Nhi Ragini aisa maat kho .. Tum mujse pyar krti ho Ragini shouts: hum nai karte pyaar apse
Laksh: jhooth.. laksh make her turn. He hold her shoulders.
Laksh: agar tum mujhse pyaar nai karti mera itna intzaar nai karty .. na he jab mansi ne mujpr goli chlayi to tum bich mai aati..Ragini closed her eyes making her chin down. Tears still rolling down her eyes. Laksh make her look at him holding her chin. Hold her shoulder tightly nd bringing her more close to him shouts: bolo Ragini.. chup kyu hao? jwab nai hena tumare paas.

Ragini jerk his hands away and shouts: – Haan haan humne apki jaan bchai … pr isliye nhi ki hum apse pyar krte hai …blki isliye kyuki humne maa papa ko vada kiya tha ki hum apko shi slamat ghr vapis layege … humne apna vada pura kiya… bus. Laksh was stunned with her reply. Tears dropping frm his eyes non stop.
Ragini: ap ko apke swal ka jwab mil gya na.. ab jayea yha se . She shows him the door.

IN Hall
Shekhar:- Kya hua .. ragini thek toh hai ?
Sharmishta :- Ji haan vo thek hai
Shekhar :- Toh tum itni preshan kyu ho.. kya hua
Sharmishta :- ji voo.. voo.. laksh aya hai.. ragini ko laijany
Shekhar with Anger :- Kyaaa !! Or tum mujhe ab bta rhi ho..
Sharmishta :- ji vo..mai btane vali thi..
Shekhar:- Kha hai laksh ??
Sharmishta :- Ragini ke Room me

Shekhar is about to enter in Ragini’s Room bt sharmishta held her hand :- Dekhiye Doc ne Ragini ko Stress na daine ko kha hai… plz aap laksh pr jyda gussa mat krna .. meri bachi preshan ho jayegi..Shekhar shook her hand goes inside theRagini’s Room
Laksh :- nai yeh sb jhuth hai … Aisa maat kaho ragini.. I Lv U.. i really really love you and i mean it. I know u too love me..

Ragini folding her hands :- Bus kijiye.. nd Jayea yha se jyea hai…Shekhar entered the room and heard ragini’s word.

Laksh: Ragini…
he shouts cutting laksh words :- Tumhe Sunai nhi Ragini ne kya kha … niklo yha se
Laksh looks at him with teary eyes: baba… shekhar stop him showing his hand.
Shekhar :- Maat kho mujhe baba .. or chly jao yhase.. tumne meri beti ko pehle he bhut dukh diye hai abh or nhi..
Laksh :- Baba mujhe ek Moka dijiye
Shekhar :- Akhri Moka toh mai tumhe pehly bhi dechukha hun.. pr kya hua.. tumhari vjh se meri bachi ki yeh halat hai.. Jao yha se ..Suddenly Ragini faints nd sharmishta shout :- Raginiii
Laksh nd shekhar quickly go near her.. laksh holds ragini nd make her Laying on bed :- Raginii Raginii
Sharmishta :- shekhar doc ko call kijiye
Shekar called doc nd after half hour doc entered in badi and check Ragini
Doc :- Dekhiye Maine ap sb ko pehly bhi kha tha kiInke liye Stress laina ashi baat nhi hai .. inka feveror bd gya hai ..
Laksh with Tensed face and Teary Eyes thinks in mind :- Meri glti hai sb.. maine itna dukh diya ragini ko .. he Tried to sit near Ragini bt Shekhar stops him :- Laksh .. tum jao yha se..tumhari vjh se meri bachi ki yeh halat hai ..Suddenly Ragini gain sm conscious. She looks at laksh and turn her face othr side..

Laksh: Rag
Ragini: Laksh Jayea yha se
Laksh dnt want to give her more stress so he goes out her room nd stands near door
Doc:- Mrs Lakshya maheshwari… abh ap ko kaisa feel ho rha hai..
Ragini :- Miss Gadodia doc… m fine
Laksh Broke down by hearing this nd Tears starts rolling from his eyes and he left badi.. sharmita feels bad for him but couldn’t do anything as Ragini is not well.shekhar nd sharmishta both sits near her nd take care her

In MM House
Lakshya reached in MM house with Tears and Goes To His Room directly nd Locked His Room , Swasan saw all these nd goes behind him nd knocks the door
Sanskar:- Luckyy..kya hua lucky… drvaja khol lucky …Laksh Sits on Floor near the Name RagLak Written by him with candles nd Flowers and cries
Sanskar:- Drvaja khol lucky.. mujhe tujse baat krni hai.. hum jante hai ki ragini tujse gussa hai vo mann jayegi .. tu apna dil shota maat kr.
Laksh:- Bhai .. mujhe kisi se baat nhi krni.. plz mujhe akela shod do.. mai isi ke layak hun
Sanskar :- Nhi lucky aisa nhi haii.. drvaja khol
Laksh :- plzzz bhaiii… leave me alone..
Swara held sanskar’s hand :- chlo sanskar.. usy kush waqt do..
Sanskar :- pr swaraswara :- chlo .. laksh ko apni yeh glti khud sudarni hogi bina hmari help ke.. kyuki is br ragini shi haii..both swasan left the place nd goes to their room frsleep..

In Lakshya’s Room
Laksh caressing RagLak ‘s pic nd hug the pic with Tears

Tum bin Male version played in bg
Tum Bin Jiya jaye Kaise
Kaise jiya jaye Tum bin
Sadio se Lambi hai Raaty
Sadio se lmbe huye din

all the Flashes of Past moments cms infront of hiseyes nd he cried hard by seeing all the decorations nd Raglak name written by him on floor by Hugging Ragini’s pic.. he kissed Ragini’s pic ..

aa jaoo Lout kr Tum
Yeh Dil keh Rha haii
Tum bin jiya jaye kaise
kaise jiya jaye tum bin

In Badi

Shekhar and Sharmishta leave ragini’s room witha thought that she slept peacefully..after their leaving ..Ragini opens her eyes and sit and thought about lakshya..she opened the drawer near her bed and picks up the Raglak pic from it and kissed lakshya’s pic and Huged the pic :- Haan laksh Hum apse bhut pyar krte hai.. or krte rhyge pr hum jante hai apke liye hmari koi value nhi and she starts crying again

Tum Bin Female version Played
Tum Bin Jiya jaye Kaise
Kaise Jiya jaye Tum bin
Sadio se lmbi hai raate
sadio se lmbe hue din

In MM house
Lakshya caressing Ragini’s pic :- Mai janta hun Ragini mujse glti hui hai..mai yeh bhi janta hun kitumne mujse jhuth bola ki tum mujse pyar nhi krti.. Tum Mujse bhut Pyar krti ho .. shyad utna pyar mujse kisi ne nhi kiya hoga or is baat ka ykin toh mai tumhe krva ke shoduga ki mai tumse usse bhijyda pyar krta hun jitna tum mujhe krti ho… mai tumhe khud se dur nhi jany dunga … yeh vada,hai mera .. tumari sari narazgi dur krduga..He Hugs nd Kissed the pic.

Screen splits on showing both RagLak crying hugging each other pics.

Precap: Ragini’s new beginning…

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