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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise by #Rpk & #Taiana (Part-10)
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Tum Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise by #Rpk & #Taiana (Part-10)

RpkBy RpkJuly 13, 201728 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys We#RpK&#Taiana are here with our 10th part of Tum Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise

Thank u so much for ur supports in our previous part and keep supporting us like this.

Nw let’s start…
Laksh saw RagNav hugging… his anger touched the peak and he broke the glass he was holding. Blood started oozing frm his wounds and tears were coming non stop from his angry blood shed eyes. He was feeling lik he failed as he cant convince his Ragini and his every attempt to bringher back in his life failed…
Ragini’s increasing closeness with Arnav make him feel jealous and angered. His fear of Loosing his Ragini increased every sec.. It’s not lik he had no trust on Ragini but it’s he can’t tolerate someone’s closeness with HIS Ragini.

Otherside her ignorance and rude behevior towards him hurted him lik hell… the most painful ignorance in the world is the ignorance of the one you love. Nw Laksh is bearing dis pain… Today Ragini’s and Arnav very close performance and hug fully broken him from inside.Laksh keeps staring at Ragini Arnav standing together and Smiling.. His hand is bleeding but he didn’t bothered abt his pain.Laksh stood frm thr and slowly walked towards the table near the stage. As he Is in Drunken state..he was walking by stembling…

he took the mike placed in the table…

Laksh :- Hii Everyone !! Im Laksh Mashewari Everyone looks towards Laksh.
Ragini frown her eyebrows in confusion and realized he is drunk.. she looked at him worried
Laksh continue: I Prepared a Special performance for someone special and I want to performe.. should I ??
By saying dis he stumbles and about to fall but he straighten himself.
Ragini noticed his bleeding hand. Her eyes widened in Shock and closed her mouth with her hands.She made a step to go near him near him but stopped herself. Tears started coming from her eye seeing Laksh hurt ..she closed her fist to control her emotions..

Laksh Stares at her nd Starts Singing :-

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil

Ragini Got Shocked By Seeing Him Singing.. Laksh keeps staring at Ragini with moist eyes and walked slowly around Her.. Their blissful moment were flashed in front of Laksh’s eyes..He continued to sing walking near..

Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
Tu mera Khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Ragini was falling week seeing Laksh’s pain but she doesn’t want Laksh know this and at the sametime she is not able to ignore him more.. she can’t take it and start walking from there…Laksh Sits on his knees while singing..

Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Ragini stops… she turns and looks at him…He Gets up From His Knees and comes near her. He holds her hand with his bleeding hand and Sings looking at her teary eyes..

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera..

He left her hand and moved away…Ragini looked at her hands which had laksh’s blood.. she closed her eyes pain feeling his pain. She cried holding her hand near her heart. Arnav is seeing all this bt not able to Understand anything clearly..Laksh went near a waiter and Take a Drink From Waiter nd Starts Drinking again.. Seeing this Ragini got more tensed..he sings ..

Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera
Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

He left the glass while drinking and it broked into pieces..he sings looking at Ragini

Maana ki teri maujoodgi se
Ye zindagani mehroom hai
Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka
Na mere dil ko maaloom hai

He Takes Another glass of Drink.. he sings pointing his index finger towards Ragini…

Tujhko main kitni
Shiddat se chaahun
Chaahe toh rehna tu be-khabar…
moka ea Manjil ka toh nhi hai..
ek Trfa mera safr

He Broke the glass that his was holding in his already bleeding hand and his hands started bleed very badly.. Ragini covers her mouth in shock.. he slowly bent on his knees and sit on the floor closing his eyes as he legs getting weak due to drinks effects… Ragini Runs Towards him..

Ragini :- Laa…kshh
She sits near him. She placed her one hand on his shoulder and hold his cheek with another.
Ragini teary eye :- Yeh kya kiya apne…Ragini move her hand to his bleeding hand and held it in her hand.
Ragini with choking voice: bhut khun nikl rha hai.. La… ksh
Laksh slowly opened his eyes and looked at Ragini.
Laksh :- Ra…gi…ni
He again closed his eyes due to drinks effects..
Ragini holing his chin :- La..ksh..

Sorry for the very short update. Hope u liked it.. Don’t forget to share your views.#Rpk #Taiana

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    28 Comments

    1. Arjuna on July 13, 2017 5:49 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    2. Vini on July 13, 2017 6:44 pm

      Loved it, keep going

    3. Puni on July 13, 2017 6:51 pm

      I think it is after abimanyu track am I right sorry I can’t understand Hindi but I will read English it’s superb and really awesome but I can’t understand my fate,.

      • Rpk on July 13, 2017 7:59 pm

        yes dear…ur guess is right 🙂 Thanku

      • Puni on July 13, 2017 10:10 pm

        Can you please write in English I like this very much…….so
        please due to language problem

      • Rpk on July 14, 2017 9:48 pm

        We Are really Sorry dear… we Already Wrote Many Parts of This FF Now its not possible to Translate all nw becoz we both r busy.. 🙁 🙁

    4. Sherin on July 13, 2017 7:00 pm

      Awesome dear

    5. Monisha on July 13, 2017 7:12 pm

      Superb part

    6. Anju on July 13, 2017 7:41 pm

      Awesome update

    7. asra on July 13, 2017 7:51 pm

      Please write in English dear

    8. Laashya on July 13, 2017 9:04 pm

      Awesome episode and poor Laksh

    9. Rehna on July 13, 2017 9:42 pm

      Awesome update dear

    10. Malu on July 13, 2017 9:53 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    11. Aamy on July 13, 2017 9:58 pm

      Awesome

    12. Bela on July 13, 2017 11:20 pm

      Aww…..poor Lakshya. That song is one of my favourites. Loved it??

    13. Sreevijayan on July 14, 2017 12:01 am

      Awesome update dear….

    14. shashi on July 14, 2017 5:05 am

      intersting’ wating for next epi.

    15. Monu on July 14, 2017 7:10 am

      Interesting

    16. Vennila on July 14, 2017 7:10 am

      Awesome episode

    17. Elizabethlovely on July 14, 2017 8:23 am

      Awesome

    18. Soumya on July 14, 2017 11:19 am

      Superb di…poor lucky

    19. Ammu on July 14, 2017 11:29 am

      As usual outstanding episode dear and feeling bad for Laksh. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP

    20. Jiyani on July 14, 2017 11:45 am

      Awesome episode

    21. Raglak_fan on July 14, 2017 12:42 pm

      Awesome

    22. Ashly on July 14, 2017 12:59 pm

      Superb awesome

    23. Thahseem on July 14, 2017 1:28 pm

      Nice

    24. Pearly on July 14, 2017 1:45 pm

      Awesome part

    25. hemalattha on July 26, 2017 3:23 am

      Nice

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