TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE(Episode 3)
First of all a very big thank u to everyone who commented on my previous post…Thank u….Thank u….Thank u so so much………All the comments just left me speechless…..Hope my upcoming episodes meet ur expectations……
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(Episode 2 here)
Recap: Kanchi love story…..how they met, love confession, sanchi’s bidaai……..
Another change from original SDCH plot….Sanket is Kabir’s cousin(to be precise, Kusum is Sanket’s Bua, his parents died in a road accident so Kusum took the responsibility of him when he was just 9yrs old & she loves Kabir & Sanket equally) &&& Priya is infact Dr.Priya Sanket Kapoor,who is a gynecologist…& is herself 6 months pregnant…… I know, u guys will get surely irritated with my everyday twists…but I felt Sanchi should have someone with whom she can easily open up regarding any issues, like she did while she was staying with IshPraRiya…someone really close, & this thought crept in my mind, who else other that Priya, her diii…. Hope u like this new change….
So, after bidaai, everyone, I mean, Kusum,Sanket,Priya,Veer ,Parth & of course Kanchi……haha…..with some other friends & relatives, reached Kapoor Mansion……..It was a big mansion(or somewhat like that of a palace) beautifully decorated with lights & flowers,especially Orchids & white Lilies…..aisa lag raha tha ki ye haveli kisi dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya ho….
Everyone went inside but Kanchi were instructed to stay at the main entrance….
Kusum(giving Aarti thaali to Priya):Priya beta, do the tilak of Sanchi & Kabir….(Priya does as she was said)
Kusum:Now Sanchi beta, tilt this kalash with u right foot & then step into the aalte ki thaal…& now enter the home….
Kanchi were now taken to a place & made to sit………Priya bought a big bowl like object…that contained milk,water & rose petals in it……….now Kusum showed a ring to Kabir & Sanchi….
Kusum:Now I’m putting this ring in this bowl, now kabir & sanchi u have to find this…& it is often said..whoever finds the ring first will win & he/she’ll rule over his/her partner for the rest of the life…..Everyone present there start cheering for Kabir & Sanchi…even though Kabir got the ring, he passed the ring to Sanchi’s hand…….Sanchi took out the ring & showed it to everyone….
Veer:What Kabir, u cut our nose in front of all….
Parth:Yes Veer, u r right……not done Kabir….(Everyone start laughing)
Kusum:Ok Ok..its very late already….they must be tired..Priya & Sanket….in donon ko Kabir ke kamre mein lejao….Ok bua(replied Sanket & Priya)
When they reached Kabir’s room, they were blocked in the way by Veer & Parth…
Parth:Itni bhi kya jaldi hai bhai!!!!!!!
Veer:U r absolutely right….itni aasaani se hum tum dono ko ander nahi jaane dene waale….pehle kuch nek do uske baad hum tum donon ko chhodenge(Priya & Sanket were smiling at the back)
Kabir:take 10,000/-….now can we go???
Veer:Kitna kanjoos hai yaar tu….give 50,000/- or else stay here with us for the whole night
Kabir:U r joking right!!!!!!
Parth:Not at all…We’re damn serious…..
Sanket:here’s ur rest 45,000/-….u happy now?? take this & let them go….
Veer:What……..yey yes…u can go now
Kabir:(looking at Veer & Parth)Thanks a lot ur highness……Thank u Bhaiyya,Bhaabhi(looking at Sanket & Priya)………(Veer & Parth also leave for their homes…)
As they(Kanchi) enter….they see…Kabir’s room was beautifully decorated with flowers & scented candles everywhere with the bed right at the centre….
Kabir:omg, whats this????
Sanchi:u r right Kabir…..yahaan sone ke liye to kya baithne ke liye bhi koi jagah baaki nahi hai…..(no place to sit or sleep)
Kabir:Tomorrow I’ve an important surgery, but look at all this…..If I sleep late how can I wake up early??
Sanchi:U go & change…..till that time I’m cleaning all this stuffs……..
After some time, the room is cleaned, Kanchi have changed their wedding outfits & changed to their regular ones….they go to sleep….
Kabir:Goodnight wifey…
Sanchi:Goodnight hubby…..(& they both smile at each other & fall to sleep)
Next morning(abt 5:30 am),Sanchi is doing Bhagwaan’s Aarti(bg song Jai Ganesh Jai Ganesh Jai Ganesh Deva Maata Jaaki Parvati Pitaa Mahadeva……..)everyone came to the Pooja-griha on hearing her aarti song……Sanchi takes blessing from Kusum & Sanket & hugs Priya…..She gives Aarti & Prasad to all including Kabir(who passes a smile at her)
Kusum:Wow Sanchi beta……din ki isse achi shuruaat kya hogi…Ganpati bappa ke aashirwaad se aaj sabka din acche se guzrega………
Some time passes….at abt 8:30am……..
Priya:Sab aajaiye, breakfast ready hai…..(everyone arrive)…Aaj sab Sanchi ke haathon se banahua khana khaenge……..(Sanchi is nervous…..Priya signals her to relax & says everyone’ll surely like ur dish)…Sanchi & Priya serve food to everyone….Everyone take a bite & start to make faces….on seeing their expressions, Sanchi gets sad…..the very next moment….everyone start laughing….Sanchi was confused…
Kusum:Beta food’s really tasty…
Sanket:I just luv the halwa….
Kusum:Ye lo beta…tumhare pehle rasoi ka nek(Sanchi thnx Kusum & opens it to find a beautiful waist band in it)Ye hamaari khaandaani kamarbandh hai…do u like it???
Sanchi:Yes maa…I love it…thnk u maa….
Sanket:aur ye lo …mere aur priya ke taraf se(Sanchi thnx them, opens it to find a beautiful diamond necklace set)
Priya:How’s it????
Sanchi:diiiii…..I just love this…….thnx diii…thnx jiju……..
Kusum:Kabir, tu kya laya hai????
Kabir gives a small box to Sanchi…on opening it Sanchi saw a neckpiece with heart shaped diamond pendant….Kabir signaled Sanchi to open it….on opening the locket….Sanchi was really elated..it contained Jaya & Sunil’s pic in it………this is my life’s best gift…thnx Kabir….thank u a lot…said Sanchi(emotionally)
Timeskip …..Kabir, Sanchi & Priya reached SDCH………..everyone was shocked seeing Kanchi, coz the previous day was their marriage & no one expected to join their duties so soon……..
Anand:Welcome…..welcome to our newly wedded couple Kabir & Sanchi….(everyone start clapping….)Kabir, u joined so soon, I thought u’ll take a leave today…
Kabir:No Sir….work shouldn’t stop at any cost & also today I’ve an important surgery…so can u plz excuse me, I’m already late….I’ve to work upon the case….of course u may go….said Anand…
Anand leaves….IshPra,Veer & Parth come towards Sanchi……
Pragya:Abeo maharani, humein batao, kya tum dono ke beech sab theek hai naa??? Agar theek hai to tum dono aaj hospital kyun aaye & agar theek nahi hai toh batao kya musibat ho gayi?????(is everything fine,if not what happened & if yes, why u came to hospital today)
Sanchi: Relax guys(loudly)….relax….Pragya, chillax sweetie….Guys… nothing as such…we can’t avoid our work & stay at home unnecessarily keeping our works pending….& Pragya, come quickly,we’re already late…
Isha: u go…we’ll just come
Veer:Guys, do u feel the same as I’m feeling now?????
Pragya:Abey haan yaar…..jab tak ye dono yahaan rahenge, sirf kaam kaam kaam karte rahenge….(2 workaholics…uff)
Parth:I’ve an idea…..why not we send them on a Honeymoon…..
Isha:Haan, aur isi bahane wo dono ek doosre ke saath thoda time bhi bitaa sakenge….what say guys????
Veer:Isha baby(looking lovingly towards Isha) …u r absolutely correct….
Pragya:Abeo, baby ke babu…..romance ho gaya ho toh thoda kaam bhi karlen…..Honeymoon ke liye bhejde, par bhejenge kahaan???????
Veer:Shillong….no…..Khandala…..no…..Mysore….don’t know yaar……
Parth:how abt Udaipur or Kodaikanal……..no yaar..(said Isha)
Isha:how abt Nainital or Manali????
Pragya:chup karo tum sab….dimaag ka dahi banadia….its best ki main Ria se pooch loon….she calls Ria(phone on speaker)…Ria, tumhari help chahiye….in nalaayakon ke bharose rahe toh ho gaya Kanchi ka honeymoon…tu hi koi jagah suggest kar de….(all were glaring at pragya)
Ria: What!!!!!!honeymoon ka plan kab kahaan kaise kuch batao toh(Pragya says all the incidents)…this is a real big issue….let me think…..(after some time)arey kahin aur kyun jaana….Alibag mein toh hamara farm house hai….kyun na hum unhe wahaan bhej de….what say?????
Veer:Arey haan yaar…how could I forget Alibag!!!!!!!.. Guys remember, last time we all went on a trip to our farm house at Alibag in our vacation….Remember???
Parth:Of course yaar, how can we forget….we really had a very good time there…
Isha:Thnx a lot Ria….
Ria:Oye, dosti ka usool bhool gayi(IshPraRiya at a time), dosti mein no sorry no thank u(all laugh)…ok guys, I’m a bit busy right now….will talk to u in the evening…ok bye….(everyone…bye)
Pragya:So guys decided….After the Pagphera rasam…..(all at the same time)..ALIBAG…..
Precap:Alibag…..Honeymoon….hehe…
Omg I didn’t realize when this became so long……So guys, I end up this episode here itself….I know, this would be a bit too boring & so so sorry for that in advance…..& sorry for any sort of mistakes…eagerly waiting for ur comments…
With lots of LOVE….
Priyanka(or Riya)…..
29 Comments
What Ri you say its Boring………How could you thinks that……..Arrey Ri Di I Completely was lost in it ………….Can’t wait for ur next part……please post soon………..and yes it was Outstanding……..samjh nahi aaraha hai ke aur kiya kahu…………….Kaise aap ki taarif karun…………..Suggest me Some words…Please….luv to dear for such an amazing Updates.
Anee dear, thank u sooooooooo much for this compliment, appreciation, that too from one of ur fav writers really means a lot….I had exactly the same feeling after reading ur comments……….thnx a lot dear for liking it……..luv u sweetie……..
Dear it wasn’t boring at all.
It was too good.
Pls update soon.
Thanks a lot Priyanshi dear….currently I’m working on the nxt part……hope that u’ll like that too…….thnx for commenting & luv u sweetie…….
Hey prinku yaar amaz epi nd i like the most dialogue of pragya baby k babu ohhhh god i lovvvv it awsome yaar kahan se chun chun k idea or dialogue lekar aati ho …post nxt asap sweetie
haha…actually I had to cut down a lot of lines pragya & the group as my episode couldn’t be published earlier due to a lot of lines in hindi…..so even though reluctant to do so,I had to reduce the dialogues….btw, thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetie……..
Awesome episode ??
thnx a lot dear & luv u sweetie……
Awesome Riya amazing
thnx a lot Divya dear….I’m really glad, u liked it…………luv u sweetie…….
Amazing Riya ??? and the gang’s parts were just awesome ???
hehe….thnx for liking it Ruwani dear……..actually I had to cut down a lot of dialogues of the gang as they were in hindi & since my article couldn’t be published for this….so I had to delete a lot of dialogues of the gang…..thnx dear & luv u a lot sweetie……..
Aww, di it was awesome mindblowing superb. Can’t have words to describe it. Boring ye kis chidiya ka naam hai just kidding boring word is not suited on ur ff. Update soon.
With lots of love
Niyu.
thnx Niyati dear…I’m sooooooooo glad that u liked this episode……& yaar romance ke maamle mein, I’m a biiiiiiig zero……I just hope I could meet ur expectations in my nxt episode…….thnx dear for commenting & luv u a lot sweetie………
Ru di, why are you saying it’s boring..infact I loved it…i didn’t know you are such a talented author…i am just speechless…loved it a lot dear…keep posting your amazing part…love you a lot dear
Tania dear, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments……….its a great honor for me to get appreciation from a great writer like u……..really, this means a lot……..thnx for liking it & luv u a lot sweetie………
awww,it was superb amazing mind blowing episode update next one soooon love the way u write fan fiction
Thnx a lor DD..hehe I mean Dhruti dear………ur comments just made my day luv u a lot sweetie…
Beautiful one.. Riya it was not at all long.. meri to Mahabharat hoti hai.. LONG LONG..
Love u yaar..
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Same here dear.. i too love your comments bcoz is always Entertaining as well as giving me Awww moment ?
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Ashnita dear, I felt as if main hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon after reading sooooooo lovely comments………ur comments just leave me speechless….luv u sweetie & yaar, dosti ka usool bhool gayi kya???…no sorry no thnk u …
Really amazing yr….. So cute… Sober… Simple story it is and scenes are so modest like watching a sweet so love story…… I loved it dher Sara… And Luv uh too…….. Keep rocking my riyarocks!!
Finally, u commented……I really wait for ur comments……..u r like my Prerna…..coz u r the one who inspired me to write & I’ll alwz remember ur encouragement………luv u a lot sweetie…….
Awesome episode loved it very much
Thnx a lot Amnaa dear….I’m really glad u liked it….& luv u a lot sweetie………
Priyanka it not at all boring sweetie… Burr Iggy was so interesting and fabulous one…. I really can’t wait for next update… Pls pls pls update asap
Thank u so much dear for being so supportive……….I’m really glad u liked this………luv u loads sweetie…