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Tujhse Naraz Nahi Zindagi (Shivika, Rikara & Rumya) part 49 & 50

Hi friends… Sorry friends for this much late update… Actually I am busy with my new college works so sorry again… By he way Thanks for ur amazing response… Thanks to all my readers.. Sorry for not replying u all… OK now as u all now we r come to end of this ff.. Well What u all think about the current track of ishqbaaz ??? Tell me in comments… Ok So let’s start… Who missed the previous part look here…

Part 48

Part 49 & 50

ShivOmRu gets a message in their phones.. They read the message & looked at each other.. Kritika & AniSaRi ask the matter…

Shivika, Rikara, Rumya, Krihi & Vivek r in Prinku’s room… Prinku was sitting sadly & her eyes r teary red… ShivOmRuHi holds her… Prinku hugs Shivaye & cried badly… All 4 brothers console her… 4 brothers have also teary eyes.. Vivek says sorry to them…
Om: No Vivek… Its not ur fault.. We all forgot that after marriage sister have to leave her house & his brothers…
Ru: Yes we r so busy in ourselves that we forgot Prinku..
Mahi: My luck is too bad.. Look before knowing my sister I have to do her biddai…
Sh: No.. Nothing will happen.. I will talk to Mr. Malhotra.. Vivek will settled here only…
Annika goes & hold Shivaye.. Shivaye looks at her…
Sh: No Annika.. I can’t send Prinku to new work forever… I can’t…
Om: No Shivaye.. Its wrong.. We have to accept the truth..
Mahi: Yes Shivaye.. Om is right..
Ru: But bhaiya is also right…
Vivek: Should I talk to Mamu.. I will refuse to go back if u all say…
Annika: No Vivek.. It will be wrong.. U can’t refuse dad like this…
Saumya: Yes Vivek.. As u know we three will stay here after that u have to take care of Uncle.. Uncle is ur responsibility…
Gauri: I don’t know what to do.. But I think we r thinking about only ourselves.. Its Privek’s life…
Kritika: Yes I agree with Gauri.. It’s Privek’s life then let them decide.. Prinku & Vivek u two decide what do u want to do… OK??? Forgot everything & only think what is right & what is good for u two.. OK guys???
All nodes except Shivika..
Shivaye wants to Privek stay there but Annika wants them to go… Privek looks at each other…

At night…
All 4 couples r sitting near poolside… Boys r very sad… Girls r tensed.. Kritika looked at everyone & decide to break the silence…
Kr: So????
All looked at her…
Kr: So u all r very excited to make my marriage boring.. Am I right???
Mahi: Kritika????
Om: Sorry kittu…
Rudra: How rude kittu?? We r sad about Prinku & u r thinking about urself only… I hate u…
Kr: I hate u to… I didn’t say anything wrong yaar.. Every girl have to leave her house after marriage.. Its normal but u all brothers r making it abnormal.. I know guys its ur second marriage but common yaar it’s my first marriage…

Nobody thinks about me??… Dost v hue paraye( friends r also behaves like strangers)… ??
Om: I think she is right.. We r reacting very much about prinku’s marriage.. Of course its our best friend’s first marriage.. We should not spoil it.. Right Shivaye???
Shivaye smiles & side hugs Kritika..
Sh: Oho dramebazz.. So much drama for making us normal.. Right???
Kritika smiles.. Everyone understands that she is reacting like this for make everyone normal.. Rudra comes & hugs Kritika…
Rudy: Sorry… I love u…
Kritika: I love u to…
Rudra: u r my best friend…
Kr: I know baby….
Om also goes to her & smiles…
Om: Really u r always be our best friend.. U understand us so well…
Kr: I know my Omi..
Sh: Yes but I know her better than all of u…
Kr: Yes Billu ji…
Sh: Kittu????
Kritika & OmRu laughs..

AniSaRi looks at them & enjoyed their amazing bonding.. Kritika looks at them…
Or: Stop it guys.. Don’t forget that u all r going to marry.. Control urselves or this girls will feel jealous again… Again Annika will throw water on me.. Gauri will broke flower vase again & Saumya will never give me any paratha…
AniSaRi r shocked.. Boys giggled..
An: O bete ki… Kritika u known this… I am sorry.. So sorry..
G: Humri Sanka lag gai Lanka… Sorry sorry…
Sa: Sooooooooo sorry Kritika..
Kritika laughs..
Kr: its OK…
Shiv: Well don’t forgot now one more person will get jealous..
Kritika asks who???
Shivaye signs at Mahi…

Rudra goes to Mahi…
Ru: Yes bhaiya… U r right… We have control ourselves now bcz Annika Bhabi, Chulbul Bhabi & Sumo will say nothing to kittu but Mahi bhaiya will kick us like my punching bag…
All laughs…
Privek comes there…
All looked at them…
Prinku: Bhaiya.. Thank god u all r OK.. U know what bhaiya I love to see u all like this… A happy family..
Prinku hugs Mahi & Rudy…
Mahi: Prinku.. U & Vivek decided what u want to do????
Prinku nodes…
Vivek: Actually Prinku make a unique way to solve this problem…
Rudra: Of course she is smart… After all she is smart Rudy’s sister..
ShivOm & Mahi: Shut up Rudra…
Ru: Mahi bhaiya u to??
Om: Rudra plz… Prinku u tell…
P: Yes bhaiya.. Actually we talked to mama & decided that we will stay in Malhotra mansion..
AniSaRi recalls the blast…
Shivaye: Malhotra mansion???? But??
Vivek: Yes bhaiya.. Its totally repaired.. Its look like new… I saw it today…
P: Yes bhaiya…
Annika: And Dad???
Vivek: Don’t worry Di… Mamu will stay with us only..
Saumya: & New work’s business???
Prinku: Mama said that there r many employees to handle it… That’s why the will handle it like their another companies..
Vivek: & here new project will handle Annika Di & Gauri Di.. Shivaye bhaiya u can help them…
Gauri: Us??? Then what will u do.??
Vivek: Di u know na.. I was never interested in business… I will continue my music carrier.. OK???
Annika: Ok.. But???
Om: Plz Bhabi.. No plz… Let Vivek follow his dreams… Its very difficult to leave ur passion for business.. It hurts…
Everyone recalls transformation of Businessman Om from artist Om… Gauri holds him… Om nodes at her….

Annika: I know Om.. I just asking Shivaye about it… Shivaye u have any problem if I manage dad’s business after marriage??
Sh: Of course no Annika.. I always support u.. Do whatever u likes to do and now u r a successful businesswoman so u can…
A: Thanks Shivaye..
Gauri looks at Om like she is asking the same… Om nodes yes… Rikara smiles…
Kritika see this & smiles…
K: Awwww….
Sh: Now what happened kittu???? Everything is shorted na???
K: Yes I know.. But I am thinking Omi & Gauri r so cute yaar…
Rudy: I know it but why u suddenly think that???
K: Bcz they didn’t need any type of language.. They can talk by eyes.. They can understands each other by looking at each other.. Isn’t cute???
All smiles…. Rikara feels shy… Gauri blushed heavily.. They have small chit chat… Everyone hugs each other…

Morning….

Dadi calls Shivika, Rikara, Rumya, Krihi & Privek for puja… They come… Boys r in white & yellow kurta & pajama and girls r in white & yellow sarees except Kritika… She wears a yellow & white salwar…
Dadi asks everyone to sit…
Dadi: Now my bahus will do puja…
Annika, Gauri, Saumya, Kritika does puja one by one… Then Mata rani’s arti… All couples does this aarti…
Dadi says, Now we can start the haldi…
Girls & boys sits for the haldi function..
All elders & guests do the rasam… All r happy… Shivaye, Om & Rudra rubs haldi on Kritika’s face… Everyone laughs… Kritika runs after ShivOmRu.. They plays holi with haldi… AniSaRi & Mahi also joins them… (Lafzo ka yeh rishta nahi plays…)

Evening…
Boys came down in dark & light green & blue serwani… They compliment each other… Then they saw girls coming…
Annika comes first… She wears a dark green leaf patterned Saree…. Shivaye sees her with wide eyes & opened mouth… OmRuHi laughs… Then Gauri & Saumya comes.. Gauri is in a light greenish Saree & Saumya is in a dark blueish green Saree..
OmRu see them same way… Now its Mahi & Vivek’s turn.. Kritika & Prinku comes… Prinku is in Light blue Saree & Kritika is in aqua colored Saree… Kritika comes while holding her saree like she never wear Saree before… Mahi & Vivek see them…
All girls comes together & giggles seeing boys condition…
K: But I can’t handle it… I never wear Saree before… Its difficult.. I told u all but u all force me to wear this…
Mahi comes to her…
M: Kritika..
Kritika turns to her..
M: U r looking very generous in this Saree… In Annika’s language u r looking kdikitod beautiful…
All girls giggles.. Mahi feels shy & goes.. Kritika blushed.. Tej & Janvi comes & hugs Prinku & blessed her… Arjun also hugs AniSaRi.. Kritika turned upset… Annika see her & ask her the reason.. Kritika says,
Actually I was missing my parents yaar.. Its very important day tomorrow but my parents r not with me… Why they leave me alone in this world?? She cries & hugs Annika.. Annika feels bad & console her… All feels bad about her.. Tej goes to her..
T: Kritika.. What u call me???
Kritika looks confused..
K: Bade papa… Why???
T: yes then how could u forgot us… Ur papa is alive.. OK??? I know I am not a good father but what to do??? I can’t change my past..
Kritika hugs him…
K: U r just awesome bade papa… I love u…
T: Love u too… So tomorrow I will do ur kannyadan along Prinku… OK???
All smiles.. Kritika nodes… Janvi also hugs Kritika…
Tej & Shakti announced to start sangeet….
First Tej & Janvi and Shaki & Pinky dance on eh meri zohara jabi…
Then it’s time to the wedding couples… Salaam e ishq plays….( Movie – Salaam e ishq)

All dance in that song…

Next day morning….

Everyone is busy with wedding preparation.. Boys comes in red golden combo serwani & turban & girls comes in red golden combo lagengas… All r happy.. They sits for marriage..
Pandit start his mantras… Tej & Arjun does the kannyadan of girls… They take rounds… Boys make girl wear the mangalsutra… They fills girls’ maangs… Boys & girls smiles at each other…
Marriage complete… They take elders blessings…
Dadi says, finally everything completed peacefully…
Rudra stops her…
R: No dadi…. Everything is incomplete without one thing in our house…
Everyone ask what???
Rudy says, Dil bole????
All smiles & says, Dil bole Oberoi….

The end…..

Thanks a lot my readers… Who supported me from the very first epi till now…. Thanks a lot Uf, Verna akka, sangeetha, Shraddha, My sisters Chandani & Aashi, Lauren, Dhar & many more… Sorry for not mentioning all… Sorry again but thanks a lot… Thanks silent readers to.. Love u all… I will try to come back with a fabulous ff or OS and now I will continue my Rikara ff… Sorry for my silly mistakes… Have a great day.. Thanks for reading…???

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