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Home»Fan Fiction»Tujhse naraz nahi zindagi (Shivika, Omri, Rumya)part 20
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Tujhse naraz nahi zindagi (Shivika, Omri, Rumya)part 20

kiyaBy kiyaMay 17, 201743 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey friends… Again its Kiya… A big Thanks to my all lovely readers… Thanks a lot for encouraging me…. Friends I have all ready posted my Rikara ff’s first part… So if u didn’t check it… Go and read it and leave comments…. Sorry for some grammatically mistakes… Now start the ff… Here is the link of previous part…

Part 19

Part 20

Oberoi s r very happy to see the girl… That girl(Kritika) enters the mansion…. Kritika goes to Dadi and take her blessings…
Dadi: ” How r u puttar???”
Kritika: ” Fine… How r u all???”
All smiles…
Tej: ” What a surprise??? U came from???”
Kritika: ” Malaysia bade papa…”
Shakti: ” Malaysia?? Not bad…”
Kritika: ” Yes chote papa…”
Janvi: ” But last time when I talked with u, I think u r in Paris…”
Prinku: ” Yes badi Maa but u know na u I didn’t stay in one place for so much time…”
Janvi: ” Yes of course..”
Kritika: ” Oh My Mata… Pinky aunty… U r looking great… Ha???”
Pinky: ” Chup kar jhalli…. ( Shut up)”
All laughed…
Prinku goes to her and hugged her…
Kritika: ” Naughty girl… Marriage without me????”
Prinku: ” Really Sorry yaar…”
Kritika: ” Its ok…” Kritika saw Rudra and runs to him…
Kritika: ” Rudy… Buddy…”
Kritika hugged him…
Rudra: ” Kittu… How r u???”
Kritika: ” Just fit and fine…”
Saumya (in mind): ” This Rudra will never change… And who is this girl??? What the need of hug him???” Saumya fumes…
Kritika notice Saumya beside Rudra…
Kritika: ” Hey… Who is she???”
Rudra: ” Oh… She is Saumya… My…” Saumya looked at him… ” I mean my sister’s would be Husband’s sister… Just Like sister…”
Kritika: ” Oh… Hiii Saumya…”
Saumya: ” Hello…” And gives a fake smile…
Kritika: ” Wait… She is Prinku’s would be husband’s sister but where is Prinku’s would be husband????”
Rudra introduced Vivek… Prinku blushes… Tej introduced Arjun and Gauri to her…
Kritika: ” Ok… But where is Omi & Billu????”
Janvi: ” I think Om is in his room.. And Shivaye is not in home..”
Kritika: ” Of course Billu’s business & Omi’s sculptures…”
Gauri was little jealous by that name Omi…
Dadi: Now go and freshen up… Tomorrow is Prinku’s roka….”
Kritika: ” Ok Dadi….”
Kritika goes… All r happy except Gauri & Saumya…

After some time Gauri was passing from outside Om’s room.. She listen some laughing sounds so she stopped and tries to look in to the room…
In room Om & Kritika was there… In Om’s hand there has a packet…
Om: ” Thanks a lot Kittu… U brought my favorite colours… Really u know me very well…”
Kritika: ” I know Darling… I brought this specially for u…”
Gauri was shocked to see this and fumes in anger…
Gauri (in mind): ” Ek jhap me diwar pe sat jaibe… After many years I get same feelings… When that sultana tries to go close to my Om…” Gauri hits a flower vase… It falls and listening that sound Om & Kritika goes out and sees Gauri…
Kritika: ” Gauri???”
Gauri: ” Yaa… I am just passing from here… Suddenly this flower vase falls… I don’t know how???”
Om: ” Its ok…”
Gauri gives a fake smile to them and leaves from there…
Kritika: ” Oh yes… Omi I brought gifts for everyone… I have to give them… See u later…”
Om: ” Ok… Bye…”
Kritika goes…
Om thinks what happened to Gauri??? Why her behavior was weird???

Shivaye comes to factory and finds Annika safe… He goes and hugged her tight…
Annika consoles him….
Annika: ” Shivaye what happened??? R u ok????”
Shivaye: ” I thought I lost u again… U r ok na???”
Annika: ” Yes Shivaye… I am ok.. But what happened to u???”
Annika breaks the hug…
Shivaye: ” Vivek gets a call that ur life is in danger…”
Annika: ” Vivek??? But why???”
Shivaye: ” I don’t know… Just promise me one thing Annika…”
Annika looks at him confusedly…
Shivaye: ” U will never go out alone without informing me… I lost u one time but not this time… Plz.. Promise me Annika…”
Annika thinks, “this is not right time to fight with him… He really cares for me…” Annika nodes and Shivaye holds her hand…
Shivaye: ” Now we should go its too late…”
Annika nodes…

Janvi, pinky & Dadi was sitting in hall with Kritika… Kritika gives them gifts…
Shivaye and Annika enters…
They all see them…
Kritika: ” Billu….”
Shivaye: ” Kittu????”
Kritika goes and hugged Shivaye tight… Annika is shocked…
Shivaye break the hug…
Shivaye: ” Don’t call that name… Plz…”
Kritika: ” What name??? Billu???”
Shivaye: ” Kittu???”
Kritika: ” Sorry…”
Annika (in mind): Who is this girl… She reminds me Tia baby…” Annika looks at Kritika angrily…
Shivaye introduced Annika to Kritika… They smiled…

Precap: Roka of PreVek… SauAniRi r full jealous of Kritika….

That’s for today friends… Keep reading and enjoying… Don’t forgot to leave comments… Thanks for reading… Have a good day….

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    43 Comments

    1. Anaya on May 17, 2017 4:53 pm

      awesome

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thanks Anaya….

    2. Verna on May 17, 2017 5:03 pm

      Wow jealousy girls.. I really love this.. waiting for next

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 5:58 pm

        Thanks Verna….

    3. san on May 17, 2017 5:04 pm

      First of all sorry for not commenting in your previous update…..And coming to this it was just awesome kiya….you makes our 3 womaniya jealous….OMG….its wonderful…..Waiting for your next part…???

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 5:59 pm

        Its ok San… Thanks for commenting dr….

    4. dwet on May 17, 2017 5:04 pm

      Amazing.

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 6:00 pm

        Its ok San… Thanks for commenting dr….

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:46 pm

        Thanks dwet… Sorry for first reply…

    5. Sairan on May 17, 2017 5:07 pm

      Super duper episode

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thanks dr…

    6. Sagithya on May 17, 2017 5:16 pm

      Superb yaar…. Anigausau r becoming jealous… Wow dear… Waiting for the next one… Post it soon

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thanks sagithya…

    7. anagha on May 17, 2017 5:26 pm

      Haha.. jealous sisters.good one !!..

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:52 pm

        Thanks Anagha…

    8. somya on May 17, 2017 5:35 pm

      All three are jealousy of one girl nice
      Waiting for next epi

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:52 pm

        Thanks dr…

    9. Aashi on May 17, 2017 5:59 pm

      jeolousy is now a lousy concept though I lyked the update
      I guess return jeolusy would b better
      ShivIka scene was nice
      update soon

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:54 pm

        Yes Aashi but jealousy is best expression of hidden love….

    10. madhu.r on May 17, 2017 6:18 pm

      nice to see jealou girls make the boys jealous plzzzzz

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:55 pm

        Thanks Madhu…

    11. Haridhra on May 17, 2017 6:24 pm

      Hmmm tis is really Awsm..??

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:56 pm

        Thanks dr…

    12. gayathri.visu on May 17, 2017 7:02 pm

      3 sisters are jealous!! Interesting…. Waiting for next part dear…

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:56 pm

        Thank u dr….

    13. Aahlada on May 17, 2017 7:11 pm

      Awesome loved this episode full of jealous eagerly waiting for next part plz post it ASAP

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thanks dr….

    14. Madhuani on May 17, 2017 7:35 pm

      Awesome dear n eagerly waiting for the next one.sorry for not commenting earlier n will try to comment here regularly.Can we b friends??

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thanks Madhuani…. Its ok dr and of course we r friends….

    15. Niriha on May 17, 2017 7:48 pm

      Awesome….sisters are jealous interesting dear waiting for next update soon

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:22 pm

        Thanks Niriha…

    16. UF on May 17, 2017 7:55 pm

      AWESOME AMAZING SUPERB FUNNY?VERY INTERESTING?????

      Thank you for this jealous track it’s EXCELENT.girls ko jealous hothe hua dekhne main bahuth zyada maza aatha hai.aur cute bhi hai.?it’s SUPERB???????

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:23 pm

        Thank u so much dr….

    17. Tahura on May 17, 2017 7:57 pm

      Awesome waiting for the next…

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 8:26 pm

        Thanks dr…

    18. Rasika on May 17, 2017 8:30 pm

      Lovely.. Kiya another fab update, loving the jealous anigausau… And shivaay caring for anika… ??

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 9:43 pm

        Thanks Rasika…. Keep reading…

    19. alekhika20 on May 17, 2017 8:31 pm

      Asum updt

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 9:49 pm

        Thanks dr…

    20. Chandani99 on May 17, 2017 8:35 pm

      Oh god di……I am speechless……How do you even do that!!!?????❤️??

      • kiya on May 17, 2017 9:51 pm

        Thanks CHANDNI…

      • Chandani99 on May 18, 2017 3:49 pm

        ??

    21. Banita on May 17, 2017 11:47 pm

      Awesome epi kiya…. Jealous sis. Can’t wait more update soon….

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