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Home»Fan Fiction»Tujhse naraz nahi zindagi (Shivika, Omri, Rumya) part 23
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Tujhse naraz nahi zindagi (Shivika, Omri, Rumya) part 23

kiyaBy kiyaMay 22, 2017Updated:May 22, 201745 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey friends.. Kiya here… Frnds I am really feeling bad year bcz my Rikara ff is not going well.. U readers supports my this ff so much but not my Rikara ff.. I am very disappointed… Sorry if I say something wrong… I am just sharing my feelings..
Let’s start…

Part 23

Rudra was lying in bed and Saumya was leaving..
Rudra: ” Saumya stay here for sometime with me.. Plz..”
Saumya silently goes and sit near Rudra..
Rudra sees her wet eyes..
Rudra: ” Saumya u r crying bcz of me???”
Saumya: ” No I am laughing…”
Rudra: ” Sorry..”
Saumya: ” Can’t u walk properly??? Why r u jumping on stairs???”
Rudra: ” I am not jumping.. I am just helping Sahil…”
Saumya: ” And u fall.. Right??? Idiot…”
Rudra: ” Sorry…”
Saumya: ” God gaves everyone brain.. Sometime use it dumbo…”
Rudra: ” Sorry..”
Saumya: ” Just stop ur sorry or I will…”
Saumya goes to hit him.. Rudra holds her hand and pulls her closer..
Rudra: ” Or u will????”
Saumya: ” Rudra leave me..”
Rudra: ” I love u sumo…”
They have a cute eyelock.. They totally lost each other… Suddenly door knocks.. Rumya sees PreVek on the doordoor.. Rudra frees Saumya.. Saumya gets up..
Prinku: ” Sorry I think wrong timing..”
Vivek: ” Yaa.. We came in wrong time..”
They laugh.. Saumya goes from there…
Rudra looks on….

Shivaye is on call.. He sees Annika… Annika is going somewhere.. He follows her..
Shivaye: ” Where r u going Annika???”
Annika: ” None of ur business.. By the way that call which comes to Vivek it was a prank call.. Don’t worry…”
Annika goes..
Shivaye: ” This girl.. Now I have to be SSO..”
He goes…

Gauri was working on her laptop.. Suddenly she feels that someone is looking at her.. She checks but she can’t see anyone.. She again start working.. That was Om who is looking at her via window.. Kritika saw him & call him.. Gauri hears it & came outside..
Kritika: ” Omi What r u doing here???”
Om sign her to be quite.. Gauri comes & sees him.. Om sees Gauri..
Kritika: ” What??”
Om: ” Nothing…”
Kritika turns and see gauri behind her..
Kritika: ” Hey Gauri.. Is this ur room???”
Gauri: ” Yes..”
Kritika: ” Oooooo” she looks at Om and smiles..
Om: ” I have a work.. See u later girls…”
Om goes..
Gauri: ” At first he didn’t want to see my face but now he is watching me like this..”
Kritika: ” What???”
Gauri looks on…

Annika was calling someone outside the mansion.. Shivaye came in a car and about to hit Annika.. Annika was shocked…
Shivaye came out…
Annika: ” Shivaye what is this???”
Shivaye: ” Just listen to me…”
Annika: ” I don’t want to listen anything from u.. Plz…”
Shivaye: ” Annika.. Plz…”
Annika: ” Shivaye u r forces to be rude and angry with u..”
Shivaye: ” OK… Let the anger out just break my glasses, windows everything but plz listen to me….”
Annika: ” OK.. As u wish..”
She goes and brings a bid log of wood and breaks Shivaye’s Car’s windows and front glass… Shivaye was little shocked..
Shivaye: ” Now its my turn Annika…”
Annika looks at him.. Shivaye comes and holds her and lift him & goes into mansion…

Kritika and Gauri sitting in her room..
Kritika: ” U love him a lot.. Then what’s the problem???”
Gauri: ” I love him that’s the problem kritika.. He did so much with me that if my dad got know then…”
Kritika: ” Then???”
Gauri: ” Then he will destroyes Oberoi s and not only that he will never leave Om & Bhaiya..”
Kritika: ” If u say that u & Annika still love them.. then???”
Gauri: ” No kritika.. I will not tell that dad.. Bcz I love him but I didn’t trust him anymore.. Who knows that his mind will change again and he will misunderstands me again & He will hurt me again….”
A drop of water falls from Gauri’s eyes…

Vivek sees all this from outside her room..

Precap: Shivaye tells Annika about Swetlana & Kamini…. Other side… Om cries and breaks down….

That’s all my friends.. Friends plz support my both ffs.. Plz…. Frnds plz tell me how many of u watch BAHUBALI 2 & loved it???? I really love this movie.. Prabhas & Anushka…. Love them… Plz reply… Thanks for reading.. Have a good day…

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    45 Comments

    1. Chandani99 on May 22, 2017 4:42 pm

      Di don’t be sad…….you just continue your Rikara ff……..once you regularly write it your fans will increase and then they will surely encourage you to write more ff’s…….cuz I can’t see my FAVOURITE DI SAD?☹️?

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:27 pm

        Thanks Chandani.. I promise Dr after this Sunday I will regularly continue my two ffs…

    2. dwet on May 22, 2017 4:48 pm

      Amazing update di. And don’t stop your Rikara ff….. There are many silent readers also. So don’t worry. Continue with it. ?

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:28 pm

        Thanks dwet.. I will continue it…

    3. Sairan on May 22, 2017 5:04 pm

      Loved it sooo much ❤
      Gauris feelings ???

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thanks Sairan.. Keep reading Dr..

    4. Niriha on May 22, 2017 5:25 pm

      Fabulous epi dear and ur Rikara ff was awesome dear don’t stop that many members are here to support you dear. they will encourage ur work I’m also there in that list for you. continue ur ff I loved ur ff and I love you ????

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:30 pm

        Thanks Niriha… Just bcz of u readers support I feel very happy…

    5. Rasika on May 22, 2017 5:33 pm

      It’s awsm ya, I watched baahubali 2,it is just awesome, even im a fan of prabhas and anushka they make an awsm pair… ??

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thanks Rasika… Keep reading…

    6. Charitha on May 22, 2017 6:02 pm

      Loved it

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thanks Dr…

    7. Setu on May 22, 2017 6:19 pm

      awesome

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:33 pm

        Thank u..

    8. Shikha on May 22, 2017 6:19 pm

      fantastic

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:33 pm

        Thanks Shikha..

    9. Haridhra on May 22, 2017 6:23 pm

      Awsm di .. Don’t worry..

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:34 pm

        Thanks Dr…

    10. gayathri.visu on May 22, 2017 6:27 pm

      Amazing…. Aww! Cute Rumya. Tadibaaz Shivika! Feeling bad for Gauri. Waiting for next part dear.

      Sorry dear, mostly I read Shivika ff only. I love Shivika. Some times Ishkara n Rumya ffs. I m really very sorry dear.

      And Baahubali…yes its good. But I love Baahubali 1 more than Baahubali 2. Already I like Prabaas n Anushka pair in Mirchi!

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:37 pm

        Thanks Dr… And if ur mood changes than sometime read another ffs too.. Yaa if course I love both parts of Bahubali…

    11. saidha on May 22, 2017 6:32 pm

      im im in love with ur ff

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:37 pm

        Thanks Saidha.. And I am in love with u such lovely readers…

    12. fffan1234 on May 22, 2017 6:35 pm

      Love it.

      Plz continue your RiKara story

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:38 pm

        Thanks Dr.. Sure I will continue it…

    13. madhu on May 22, 2017 6:42 pm

      Sis you rocked it

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:39 pm

        Thanks Dr..

    14. Sagithya on May 22, 2017 8:09 pm

      Both ff r awesome dear… U don’t worry…. Keep gng…. I waiting for both ff

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:40 pm

        Thanks Sagithya… Keep reading and supporting like this Dr…

    15. alekhika20 on May 22, 2017 8:16 pm

      amazing update

      • kiya on May 22, 2017 10:41 pm

        Thanks Dr…

    16. Banita on May 23, 2017 1:13 am

      Awesome update kiya….. Nd just 2day i saw bahubali 2.. yaa they really did a gr8 job…. Waiting 4 nxt…

      • kiya on May 23, 2017 9:20 am

        Thanks Banita.. Keep reading & supporting Dr..

    17. Madhuani on May 23, 2017 8:54 am

      Amazing…
      Rumya were emotional and shivika as always tablatodh.
      Finally gauri opened up about her feelings.
      I also watched the movie it’s fantastic really prabhas n anushka r a bliss to watch.

      • kiya on May 23, 2017 9:21 am

        Thanks Dr.. Keep reading..

    18. Verna on May 23, 2017 1:00 pm

      Wow.. MY Omi’s silent admiration part was superb.. and precap is just exciting

      • kiya on May 23, 2017 2:48 pm

        Thanks Verna.. Keep reading Dr..

    19. Aishwarya on May 23, 2017 1:51 pm

      amazing episode….. eagerly waiting for next part….
      I wanted ask you are going to kali thakhur’s character in your ff????

      • kiya on May 23, 2017 2:53 pm

        Thanks Dr.. But I don’t like Kali thakur track.. So I am not going on that track..

      • Aishwarya on May 24, 2017 3:28 am

        okay….. I also don’t like his track but without him Rikara’s love story is incomplete….
        I saw bahubali 2 a long time ago…. actually I m a big south indian movie fan so…. n about I was very eager to see that movie so I was not able resist myself… it is one of the best movie…

    20. Aashi26 on May 23, 2017 9:20 pm

      Awesome…so solly for commenting so late…don’t be sad kiya di and I liked Chandani’s suggestion. Waiting for next episode eagerly….

      • kiya on May 23, 2017 10:33 pm

        Thanks Ashi… Keep reading Dr…

    21. UF on May 26, 2017 2:35 am

      MIND BLOWING AWESOME SUPERB????

      • kiya on May 26, 2017 9:08 am

        Thanks Dr..

    22. Aahlada on May 28, 2017 11:09 pm

      Kiya di hi I’m commenting after a long time I loved the episode so much
      And coming to our Baahubali the conclusion it’s fabulous and our PRANUSHKA I love them from Billa itself as I’m telugu one.Till now they did 3 films with BAAHUBALI all are block busters and our baahubali it went to peaks
      Sorry if I talked more but this part is fabulous
      And sorry for commenting late I’m busy in enjoying holidays
      And I read your another rikara ff but didn’t commented it’s awesome I told u na that I’m enjoying holidays that’s why I didn’t commented bye di
      With lots of love
      Aahlada

      • kiya on May 29, 2017 8:53 pm

        Thanks a lot Dr… Keep enjoying..

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