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Tujhse mohabbat ho gayi allah maaf kare – Ragsan n Swalak (Episode 1) Old title who r u my..??)

Hii guyzz I changed the title who r u my with Tujhse mohabbat ho gyi allah maaf kare becoz i find old one inappropriate..Ok now let’s start with our very first chapter..

Link to the prologue..

prologue

Chap – 1

@ Bluehouse,Lucknow

A very serious meeting is going on at bluehouse.All the departments head are sitting n talking about a very serious matter..

Leiutnant – We got information that some pakistani officer’s(No offends to any religion its just the demand of my story) had imprisoned our two officer at the border..

General – What i will say to the president..??There at the border our two officer’s life in danger n we r just sitting keep quite here..

Commander shekhar – Don’t worry general I already sent there special forces of alpha team..

General – hmm..

@Border, At 10:00pm

5 soldiers showing guns are walking slowly towards the tent of the pakistani soldiers where two indian officers are imprisoned.There face are not shown clearly becoz its night time n their face are covered with black coal powder(like tango charlies)..

Soldier 1 slowly – (pointing towards the other soldier) U two go surround from left..N u go from right..

He himself goes from front..All soldiers surrounded the tent from each corner.They r near the tent.A soldier is taking a step inside then only soldier 1 stops them..He informs all of them through walkie talkie..

Soldier 1 – Stop..!!! The mines are spread over here..Go back..!!!

Everyone goes back as per the orders of their superior..

Soldier 1 – Wolf can u hear me..??

Wolf – yess bigboss..

Soldier 1- Dtect the mines n tell me..

Wolf – yess bigboss..

The second soldier wolf detects the mines..

Wolf – Sir it is M-21 mines..

Bigboss worriedly – M-21..!!! Listen everyone earlier also we faced this mine.So now do one thing only walk carefully..

They enters inside..

Bigboss – hands up..!!!!

The pakistani officer’s up their hands..

Bigboss – I don’t want any fight between us..Just release them..

Pak soldier – Ab itni door se ayen hai toh insha allah kisi ko mare bager toh nhi jayenge..

Bigboss – Ok if u want this only then what can i do..??

A huge fight take place between them..Bigboss is fighting with leader of pak team..The leader soldier picks up knife n hits bigboss near his kidney..Bigboss winces in pain..Bigboss picks up the gun from ground n points to the head of the leader..He is going to push the trigger but stops..

Pakistani officer smirks – What happen..?? Shoot me..Shoot me..Nooo..!!!! He laughs loudlyu can’t shoot me..Becoz before shooting me u will get shooted..

A red light of gun is pointing directly towards the heart of bigboss..He see towards the light then at pak officer

Bigboss angrily – I didn’t afraid of dieing…I am afraid for that if i’ll shoot u then there will be a huge war take place between the two countries n many people will die..So i don’t want that becoz of my one action the peace of both the countries should get broken..

He releases him n starts to go..

Pakistani officer – Nice to meet u again captain sanskar..

Sanskar turns – But i don’t want to meet u always like this captain Aahan..

Captain Aahan goes from there with his team..Sanskar changes the channel of his walkie talkie..

San – Hello..This is control room..Bigboss speaking situation is under control..

The teammates of sanskar gives a smile to him.He also smiles back..

After 2 days..

Sanskar nd laksh are roaming through out the city delhi..They enter inside a mall..

Sanskar amusedly – WOW..!!!! Hey..Hey..Laksh..!! See na kitni khoobsurat ladkiyan hain yahan parr..

Laksh – haan..Duniyan mein do hi toh jagah hain jahan khoobsurat ladkiyan dekhne ko milti hain..Ek mall or dusra jannat..

San – hmm..Ab jannat mein toh hum ja nhi sakte toh mall mein hi chlte hain..

They are enjoying a lot..

San – See..See..Red dresswali is beautiful na..

Lak makes weird face – ummm..no..blue dress wali is more beautiful..

San- Tumhe toh meri pasand kabhi achi hi nhi lagti..I’ll not talk to u..I’ll go from here..

Lak – ok..

San – haww..kaise dost ho tum..Ur frnd is going from here angrily n u r just acting like a cool dude..

Laksh – I knew u very well..U only blabber can’t do anything..

San – U r doubting on me..

Lak – Ok if u want to prove urself then Let’s go see there shooting game is going on..Dekhte hain who will win more prizes..

San – Ok Done..

Both proceed towards the shooting stall..Shopkeeper handling them a toy rifle says..

Shopkeeper – Hey listen just drive it carefully..U don’t know it is a real gun i bought it from the special forces academy..

San – Really..But i don’t think so..

Shopkeeper stammers becoz he is lieing it is a toy rifle only the shape is given like that it seems to be real..

Shopkeeper stutters – Wh..wha..what do..do..u mean..??(strict tone) Did u saw rifle in real..??

Sanlak saw each other n laugh loudly..

Shopkeeper slowly- I think both r mad…

Lak – Let’s begin the game..

San – sure..

They r playing then only outside a civilian is shouting Theif..!!!! Theif..!!!! Theif..!!!! Help me..!!!

Both sanlak gone outside n saw a theif stoling a scooter..Sanlak stand at the mid of the road pointing their toy rifle towards the theif.The theif is coming through his scooter in full speed shouting Move..!!! Move..!!!

Lak – 10 metre…6metre..4metre…3metre…Shooooot…!!!!!!

Both sanlak shoot at the same time on his face the tiny ball coming out from rifles hit the theif’s face n he falls down on the ground..

The owner of the scooter is an old man he comes there pick up the scooter..

San – uncle..ur theif is lying down call the police..

Old man – No..No..I don’t want any interference of the police..

San – What..?? Now what we do of this theif..??

Old man – U shooted..So u can only know what to do with him..??

The oldman zoomed away from there..Sanskar is just seeing him amazedly..

San – Kitna ehsaan pharamosh tha..huuufff..

Lak – I am calling to the hospital..

San – hmm…

The theif winces in pain..Sanskar sits near the theif..

San – U also in the whole market u had to stole this man’s scooter only..

Theif – Ahhh…It’s paining..

San – hmm…U fall from scooter then surely u have a crack in ur leg n pain near ur neck..

He saw here n there then his eyesight gone on the toy shop..He tells the owner to bring some teddy from his shop but the owner denies..

San warningly – See if u’ll not give me some teddy then i promise i’ll take all the teddy from ur shop n absolutely for free..N yaa bring some thin rope also..

The hurriedly goes from there n gives some teddy to sanskar..Sanskar n laksh with the help of toTeddy gives a first aid to the theif..

Theif painfully – What u have done..?? Why u bind the teddy’s near my head..??

San – Shutup..?? Don’t speak n don’t move otherwise ur crack will turn into fracture..

Lak – I had called for ambulance it will come in sometime..

San – Laksh u have a marker with u na..

Lak – yess but what u will do..??

San – Give me..

Lalsh gives the marker n sanskar writes something in the hand of the theif..Then after sometime the ambulance came n take the theif with them..

Precap : Ragini’s entry..

I hope i didn’t bored u all with my this chapter..Nd thank u so much for ur support n forgiving me..Next update will be updated soon..Till then keep smiling n stay tuned..

Eku

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