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Home»Fan Fiction»Tu meri Mohabbath (part 29)
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Tu meri Mohabbath (part 29)

pummyBy pummyAugust 2, 20174 Comments7 Mins Read
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?TU MERI MOHABBATH?
Episode 28
S-mera pyar mazak ta Sanskar Maheshwari. I NEVER LOVED YOU. DID U HEAR ME I NEVER LOVED YOU INFACT YOU WERE JUST WAS A TOY FOR ME TO PLAY, TO BREAK.
San-(shouting)what the hell swara (hold her shoulders) i kńow you are lying. If there is some problem then tel us we wil solve it or hamse koi galti hui hai kya then i apologize but dont do this jaan plz i beg you.
S-(jerk his hand)just shut up sanskar(angry pushed him)ek bar kaha to samaj nai ata hai kya?
Sanskar stumbled back due to the force of swara’s push laksh hold him while sanskar was luking at swara with shock, hurt, broken and asked with choked voice-w….w…h…y. whyu……d….i….d …..this? Why(shouts)
S-becoz u loved me (raglak confuse sanskar face was blank now)
L-what do you mean swara

S-luc(laksh glared swara chukled)u know laksh what i hate most? MAN yes i hate men. (now her eyes were red)and man with the feeling of love what a bulshit realy that doesnt suits u know. (soft voice)for every girl their father is their hero but for me my hero turned into villian,he beat me, bashed me and at end he sold me. Then that orphanage owner tried to molest me (nw laughed)and that SAHIL whom i loved more than my life who promised me to protect me what he did he used my love my innocense (shouting)all man are same all used me all so now i used you Mr GREAT SM. Now i wil sleep peacefully today i m cho happy(laughing)
L-(angry)whatever happend with u was wrong bt isme bhai ki kya galti ti y u broke his trust y u insulted his love when he loved you truely swara y? Dont u kńow how much he loves you he cant live without you and u (interupted)
S-(sat in sofa putting her leg above her another leg holding a wine glass)dont worry dude he wil not die ok, if me the innocent si bechari swara can survive after 2 yr of love betrayal even when her own lov tried to sale her tried to r***e her mene to tere bhai k sath kuch v nai kia(sadly)even my love drama in just 5 days (to sanskar)ok sanskar i m sorry just forget it and chill dude u r behaving like i stabed u with knife(rolling her eyes)
Sanskar who was controling his tearz nw betrayed him and started to flow in his cheeks after hearing her and with broken voice-that was much better than dis what u did with me now swara
S(nw irritated) whatever i dont care even i dont care if u live or di……..(couldnt complet when whole room echoed with a loud slap sound)

S(holding her cheek with shock)-ragz
R(angryly shouts)-its RAGINI GADODIA MS SWARA BOSE AND dont U dare to cal me ragz u lost that right u r not my shona who was my frnd she didnt know to hurt anyboday even by mistake and u just broke someones heart and luk at you even u r not regrating. From now i m breaking my friendship with you my shona is dead for me did you hear u r dead for me(now crying)i hate you swara i hate you(and ran from there)
L-i wil never forgive u what u did with my love and my bhai(left from there following rago sanskar was already left frm there alone)
…………………………………………….

Car is going in ful speed more than max range. It was night around 11 pm road was clear. But driver was not seeing anything he was just increasing car speed with every gair he was driving rashly like he want to die his eyes were red seeing him anybody can tell that he cried alot. His hands were getting tight in stearing wheel…….we can easily see cliff at the other side which is going to end car is going towards the end in ful speed…..few cms before drive held breaks and car stoped at rolling possition at dangerous point at above line of cliff.
Driver came out and sat in floor with thud he was sobbing and now he started shouting and crying loudly-(shouts at top of his voice)aaahhh. ……………why swara why(that man was sanskar who was broken??) why you did this? Its paining swara its paining here(showing is heart)ku thoda mere dil ko qu(shouts)mere pyar me kya kami ti? What was my fault but i cant hate you swara u r u were and u wil always be my love my jaan but i wil never forgive you (shouts)never. (and started to drink alcohal and memories of his confession, their date, their orphanage masti were sliding infront of his eyes aagain he started to drink til he drank til he passed out and slept their oly)
Next day
(back ground music)
Main Toh.. Jiya.. Na Mara..
Hai Ve Das Main Ki Kara
Dil Jude Bina Hi Tut Gaye
Hath Mile Bina Hi Chhut Gaye
Ki Likhe Ne Lekh Kismet Ne..
Baar Baar Rod Akhiyan
Tainu Jo Na Vekh Sakiyan
Khole Aaye Aaj
Kudrat Ne..
Kataan Main Ki Ve Din
Teri Soun Tere Bin
Main Toh Jiya Na Mara

Chan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Hai Toh..
Sun rays peed in the car disturbing sanskar’s sleep who was slept after drinking. He slowly tried to open his eyes and close immediately after feeling pain in his head.

Yeh Kyun Hota Hai..
Jab Yeh.. Dil Rota Hai
Roye Sisak Sisak Ki Hawayein
Jag Suna Lage
Chan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage Re…
Suna.. Lage.. Re..
Sanskar was lying closing his eyes, everything started to flash infront of his eyes nd tears started to flow from his eye. Sanskar smiled in tears after watching HIS JBN’S PIC in his phoñe.

Roothi Roothi.. Sari Raatein
Fikhe Fikhe.. Sare Din..
Virani Si Virani Hai
Tanhai Si Tanhai Hai
Aur Ek Hum Hai..
Pyaar Ke Bin
Har Palchhin
Chan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage Re..
He caressed her pic and planted a kiss in her pic.

Patharo Ki.. Is Nagari Mein
Pathar Chehre.. Pathar Dil..
Phirta Hai Mara Mara Kyun Rahon Mein Tu Awara
Yahan Na Hoga..
Kuch Hasil..
Mere Dil Chan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Hai Toh..
Sanskar came outside and started to walk in road(nw dont ask me frm where road came)lifelessly. Road was clean no vehical, wheater was 2 cold becoz of sterday’s rain but it was not infecting sanskar.

Yeh Kyun Hota Hai.. (Kyun Hota Hai)
Jab Yeh.. Dil Rota Hai (Dil Rota Hai)
Roye Sisak Sisak Ki Hawayein
Jag Suna Lage
Chhan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage
Jag Suna Suna Lage Re…
Suna.. Lage.. Re…
Truck was coming towards him driver was horning bt in sanskar’s ear only swara’s word kept ringing to truck sound kaise sunta???.
Truck was about to hit him one hand pulled him and saved him from hitting.
Person-bhai are you alright
Sanskar saw towards her and started to cry loudly-baby she killed my soul ???(haha that person was sara sanskar ki behena)

Precap-dnt knw

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    4 Comments

    1. independent on August 2, 2017 10:45 am

      Soo sad

    2. saki on August 2, 2017 10:52 am

      pls don’t make swara at the fault dear pls pls it’s a humble request dear.and pls don’t separate swasan.don’t make swara at the fault .make like sahil asked swara to do like that dear pls make it like that dear

    3. Kumu on August 2, 2017 3:53 pm

      Feeling sad for sanskar..post the nxt part soon..tc..

    4. anu on August 2, 2017 6:48 pm

      nice

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