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Tu meri Mohabbath (Part 2)

pummyBy pummyFebruary 22, 20176 Comments5 Mins Read
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[2/7, 3:01 PM] neha: ❤?Tu Meri Mohabbath?❤
Episode 1
Outside: Many white marble pillars leading to the entrance, and a large wooden double door, pointed at the top. Silver knockers on the door. A long pool arond the walkway leading to the entrance. Lots of cherry blossom trees in the yard.

Inside: Again, mostly white marble, and granite. Third floor balcony that overlooks the front of the palace. It is a half-circle shape and has spiral carved bushes near the door. The door is entirely glass except for the frame.

a lavish room is shown. In tat a boy is sleeping covered with a blanket in a large bed cuddling with his pillow having a cute smile in his fabe. A lady came to wake him.
Lady-(caresng hair)beta get up its morning.(boy got up gave a kis to her cheek).
Boy- gud mrng mom(lady smile nd left)
Boy(to himself)-gud mrng for me 2. Wlcm to new day. Nw get up i m so hungry. Bt 1st i must woke up tat my sleepy head bro (smile naughtily).
In another room a boy is sleeping boy 1 cme to him tried to wake him up.
Boy 1-get up bro.(pulled his blanket)
Boy2-bhai go let me sleep(coverd himself)
Boy 1-if u didn’t woke up na then it wil b not gud for u
Boy2-do whatever u want
Boy 1-ok nw wait nd watch(went to bathroom nd bought bucket fild wit water and poured that on boy 2)
Boy2(got up wit jerk)-aaahhh sanky i wil kil u.
Sanky-(ran frm there nd scream) for tat u hav to catch me lucky( boy 1 is sanskar maheshwari nd boy 2 is laksh maheshwari)
Laksh-tuje to me badme dek lunga.

Character scetch
Sanskar maheshwari/sanky/SM- business tycoon, hav his own co. Karma industíes. most eligible bechulor, girls drol over him, little bit flirty bt in gud manner, waiting for his lady love. Fun loving, lov to irritate his brother laksh. Handsome

Laksh maheshwari/lucky- he is doctor cardiologist best doc. Same as sanky lov him a lot. Handsome, fun loving.

Ap-mother of sanlak. Lovly lady understand them.

Dp-father of sanlak. Open minded, funny, business man. Owner of maheshwari industries, proud of sanlak.

Back to story???

In dinning table
San-hai pops whatsup
Dp-kuch nai upar chat hai bas
L-(laughs)wow dad wt a answer (gives hifi).
San-tat was nt funny???
Ap-dp ji y u always back to my bacha? Sanku cme hav bf i mad ur fav dis
San-(had a bite)wow mom u r best(wink at laksh)
Lak-mom kavi mere fav dish v bana lia karo oly pops lov me(hugd him)
Ap- papa ki bache lo i made ur fav 2.
Lak-lov u mom

In sanky room
Lak(beating wit pillow)-bhai nw i wil not leave u. U put water on me na
San(defending himself)-are bhai stop it. Atleast think abt my face wha if smething hapnd? (making wierd face)
Lak-stop ur nautanki. When wil b u serious?
San-are i m serious my lucky bro. U knw i believe in living life in fullest. I lov my life ful of fun, lov, nd sme pagalpanti(winks)
Lak-oh ya ur fun ur pranks wil make me mad 1 day??
San-???are sory yar. Bt wt to do i lov to irritate my lucky bro(gave a punch to lak)dis life is wonderful na? Just nw i need my love dnt knw where is she? (dream land)
Lak-k sanky which type girl u want?
(guys i wil show like sanky here describing abt his dream girl and in breket i show her dnt b confuse)
San-???she must b simple( a girl ïs shown wearing pink suit)her eye must b big and her hazel like peacoke(her eye r shown big eye)she should help others(here it show girl help a old man to cross d road)i dnt care abt outer beauty bt she should b beautiful frm inside, she should lov me nt my status unlike other girls.
Lak-oh ho yaha to lambi list h in nxt birth u r get her for sure
San-shut up nt in nxt birth bt in dis birth oly i wil find her wil make my queen
[2/7, 3:25 PM] neha: Girl after helping old man went to her house,
Lady-beta u came i was waiting for u oly
Girl-s aunty kya bat hai?
Lady-wo beta we r gng for function wil u b in my house to take care my mom?
Girl-sure aunty dnt worry u go i wil take care of dadi
Lady-stay bless beta(she left)
Voice-Wts da need to say yes to that gossip aunty?
Girl-ragini she is elder to u
Rag-haha whatever.(exited) Shonu(girl is swara oly) u knw i m feeling like smething gud gona happen may b we wil meet wit our prince???
Swa-??ragini u knw i dnt believe in love nd all and i hate men, infact i hate dis cruel world nd hate ur god so plz dnt talk abt dis with me
R-are dnt b angry women. K cholly(hold her ears)
S-(smild)hmm k maf kia i should leave nw bye (she left)

Charector scetch
Swara boss/shona-self made rich girl hard working owns a butique, bt hate love nd men nd world nd mostly her life infact hate everything accept her bestie ragini. Serious, arrogen bt have a golden heart have a bitter past

Ragini gadodia/ragz-modern,fun loving, lov her bestie shona alot, partner of swara in her butique. Rich girl.
Shekar nd sharmishta gadodia-parents of ragini, business man nd sharmishta social worker lov ragini. Think swara as own daugher.

So guys it is a story of sanskar a funny boy who lov evrything nd swara a serious girl who hate evrything. 2 opposite charector hw wil both fal in lov with eo? What wil hapen when both cme face to face????? wil sankar able to heal swara’s wound or he wil get hurt? Its his lov story hw wil he make it perfect???

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    6 Comments

    1. a on February 22, 2017 12:38 am

      nice..

    2. anu on February 22, 2017 11:27 am

      nyc

    3. pravee on February 22, 2017 2:01 pm

      update soon

    4. niya on February 23, 2017 1:02 am

      nice..

    5. pinky on February 24, 2017 6:54 pm

      Nice….swasan- lead pair???

    6. Febi on February 26, 2017 8:16 pm

      Awesome dear

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