Tu dhadkan mere dil ki Wajah tum ho – Prologue & Chap 1


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Prologue

Author’s note : Dedicated to Ahk26barbie

Hello guys. This is my new story on avneil.So guys this is the story of our cute couple Avni Mehta and Neil Khanna who became AvNeil. Their pet names would be bubby for Avni and jelly bean for Neil. Other than them no one knows about these names of them.

Chap 1

Riya was trying to call ali  but his phone was switched off. Avni came and asked riya why she was worried.
Tiya – Dadi meri shaadi zabardasti Neil se karwa rahi hai. Par mai toh ali ke saath shaadi karna chaahti hoon.
Avni : Koi baat nahi riya. Ham kuch na kuch karke tumhari shaadi rukwa denge . (Here dayaben is not marrying riya for money. She thinks riya loves neil)

Aman was eating an apple. He came there.
He said – Di aur Avni di aap kya baatien kar rahe ho? (Here aman lives with avni and Neela and Ayesha  also lives there in the mehta house. Both neela nd ayesha live together and avni and aman consider both the ladies as their mothers . No grudges.  )
Riya – Aman mujhe shaadi Neil ke saath nahi karni. Mujhe Ali ke saath karni hai.
Avni (thinking about his love Neil ) – Aman..
Before she could speak , our handsome, cutiepie hero enters and speaks
Neil : Riya tum ali ke paas jaao. Uska ek project hai aur usai teri zarowath hai.(neil and dayaben sneakingly heard all the conversations. Dayaben secretely agreed to Neil that his marriage wouldn’t happen with riya but with avni but didn’t told it to anyone else)

Riya nodded and aman went with her to drop her. Avni went in the kitchen to make some coffee. She made a mug of cold coffe and started sipping. She called her Ayesha and Neela maa(they were out for some work)
Avni – Maa hame kuch bhi karke Neil ki shaadi rokni padegi. Mai neil sai pyaar karti hoon aur riya ali se
Neil from behind – Hi sweetheart meri shaadi rokne ki wajah?
Avni cuts the call and speaks – Tuhme sharm nahi aati ki shaadi riya ke saath aur flirting mere saath.
Neil – Kya karu pyaar tumse hua hai par kya kare daya dadi hi chaati thi meri shaadi riya se karwane ke liye.
Avni (blushing at the fact that Neil loves her ) Tum yeh coffee lo aur muh band rakho. Tum pyaar aur vo bhi mujhse?
Riya comes from behind and sees them
Riya : Arre yaha toh pyaar chale jaa raha hai
Neil – Mujhe sab kuch pata chal gaya hai ki riya ali se pyaar karti hai aur avni mujhse.
Avni and riya get shocked .
Avni – Hey chup chup kar dusro ki baate sunna acchi baat nahi hoti.

Precap : A surprise i wont reveal

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16 Comments
  1. Starting is really awesome. I think that Secret love & hidden chemistry between Avneil is going to take a interesting turn on your story. Love with each other from the beginning of your episode is really splendid. Waiting for your next chapter. I think that sister will also love your story very much.

    1. Sweetgirl7

      Thanks barun. I didn’t understand sister

      1. Ahk26barbie, the writer of hamesa sath sath hai is my sister. I consider her as my sister. She is very honest.

      2. Sweetgirl7

        Hey barun she is my sister too. I consider her my sister too

  2. is barbie ur sister..nicestart.. keep going..i am a very great fan of you sam

    1. Sweetgirl7

      Anaaya, she isn’t my sister but is like a sister.Thanks and also read my other story, Avneil Sweetest Love Story. And do join wattpad. It is great to have friends like u. I am SamilovesAvNeil there. I have written an os there. Do read and follow me there. Message me there that u are anaaya from telly updates. And someone being a fan of mine is biggest honour to me

      1. sure i will join wattpad..love you

  3. Awesome……..keep going……..and one thing plz try to write in English more……..I don’t know Hindi clearly…….that’s y………plz update soon…….waiting for it……

  4. Awesome……..keep going……..and one thing plz try to write in English more……..I don’t know Hindi clearly…….that’s y..

    1. Sweetgirl7

      Priya, i would try. Thanks for the valuable comment . And it is great to meet friends like u

  5. Shruti Mugdiya

    Nice one. Keep it up

    1. Sweetgirl7

      Thanks shruti. Are u the one from wattpad

  6. Plz Update regularly…Nice yaar…

    1. Sweetgirl7

      Neetu, it is great to see such friends who appreciate my ff. But because of my exams i wont be available for 4-5 weeks. My exams are of 100 marks. So u can understand my position. Weli have updated the next part of Avneil Sweetest Love Story. It is Episode 19

      1. Ok yaar….Exam is very important than this …..All the best dear

      2. Sweetgirl7

        Thanks neetu

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