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Tu dhadkan mere dil ki Wajah tum ho – change in track

Sweetgirl7By 21 Comments2 Mins Read

Hello readers. I was thinking to extend track of the story. For that i would be rewriting chap . Don’t worry. All these chap would be copy pasted afterwards. I am showing story of how avneil met and fall in love.

Avni and Riya, Aman were busy talking.

Avni : Riya kya career choose karogi?
Riya : Di mai toh actress hoon na. Har baar makeup aur selfie queen .
Aman : Are di kabhi toh uske alava kuch baat kiya karo. Avni di aap kya karoge
Avni : Mai toh Dytoo ki tarah dance karti hoon. Aur chemistry pasand hai. Toh scientist ya dancer banna hai.

Ayesha and Neela maa : Avni Aman Riya niche aao jaldi. Dekho tumhare dost aaye hai riya. Unhe in dono sai milao.

The trio went downstairs. Riya hugged ali. She hugged and handshaked Mitali. She handshaked Neil. Aman met all the trio and hanshaked. Avni went to ali and mitali and handshaked them. She extended her hand but before she could Neil hugged her. She loved the gesture but was surprised. So she asked : Why did you hug me? Neil : See i meet everyone with a hug. Each friend of mine .
Avni smiled at the reply. They all went together. They sat in pairs. Riya and ali sat together. Aman and mitali at one corner. Avneil sat together with no space between them since they were between the other two groups. They started chatting. Aman told everyone that she had passed the exam of masters in chemistry and was master in dancers. So they decided that Avni would do both of the works. She would start an institute of chemistry of her own and a dance academy. Avni loved the idea that she could carry her both careers. She thanked everyone happily. They all departed and Avni gave a side hug to Neil.

Avni had exchanged her number with Neil. So she messaged him that she will meet him tomorrow. She had to discuss something about her career. After that , she blushed. Why? Because at her first meeting first time , she felt that she was connected. But she didn’t focus much on that and focused on her career. And after few minutes of thinking she slept.

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21 Comments

  1. Barun on

    It’s short but really good. It’s too good to interesting. In their 1st meeting, the way Neil hug with avni is really surprising. In these way you wanna indicate the feelings of avneil to each other. I just loving it. Carry on with your self confidence sister.

  2. guna cotton on

    Sorry I didn’t know.ur name…it’s good…u already updated on what pad right??? Still I’m reading ur FF nd os..keep writing …..nd all the best it studies also..

    • Sweetgirl7 on

      Ya guna cotton. I wanted to know ur name to become friends. Best ones. And thx . Ky studies are going great. And ya i update there first as it is easier to type. And what is ur username there

    • guna cotton on

      Oooo hà sweety..hà I’m soundarya..I’m from Hyderabad..I’m reading through my hubby’s FB I’d on what pad..by the way how to read indiaforums stories…are we download times India app???

    • Sweetgirl7 on

      Hi soundarya. We don’t have any app of india forums or if. Just search naamkaran serial india forums. U qill find amazing storie sand writers. Also u will find stories on watypad. Do read mine too. I am Avlovesneil there. My reading list has all stories on avneil. So u won’t have to search each and every story

  3. Barun on

    Please tell me how can I get your all updates in watt pad? What should I do as a follower of avloveneil? Please let me know. Best of luck of your exam. Can I call you by your name or sister?

    • Sweetgirl7 on

      please call me by my name sami.my name is Samiksha.u should folow everyone whom i follow.comment on their ff.check my reading list and take stories from it.thx .and make friendship with them by pm.after that try to write an ff or anything on avneil.that makes most of ur friends

  5. niyati on

    Amazing…..loved it.Avneil scenes are so sweet & cute. You have amazing writing skill my sister. Keep writing…Waiting for next one . Lots of love to u.

  6. Negisanyukta on

    Awesome dear. But i m not able to understand the story. I don’t like Neil. If i get a chance i will choose Ali as Avni’s partner.

    • Sweetgirl7 on

      but dear the jodi is avneil.ali and avni jodi i can’t write coz already i have written the plot.if u don’t like neil,please tell me to improve his character…and thanks for telling that i neede to improve his character..criticism is needed.for now i have not decided ali’s partner….and i will keep writing

  8. ahk26barbie on

    Sami dear,I loved it.You are the best as like always.Keep writing.I’am with you as yours BARBIE.