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Home»Fan Fiction»Trust is a promise (Swasan TS by snow white) – Shot 1
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Trust is a promise (Swasan TS by snow white) – Shot 1

snow-whiteBy snow-whiteJune 10, 201754 Comments14 Mins Read
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Salam guys im not new here but before this I only posted one os this is my first try as a three shot story I hope u all will like it and will encourage me. Will surely wait for your response.

Shot 1:-

What is trust??

A trust is a promise which one mother gives to her child that she will protect her

Trust is a promise which a father gives to his child that he will not let him fall

Trust is a promise which a brother gives to his sister that he will protect her from every bad eye

Trust is a promise which a husband gives to his wife that he will be there for her, he will support her, he will protect her from cruel society.

Trust is a promise which one person do to himself that he can do this.

But what if u got someone in your life who wants to build a relation of trust with u?? who wants to gives a feeling of security to u?? who wants too see your self-respect high?? But the question is why anybody will doo this??

The answer is because he was having a trust on himself that he will gain the love of his lady love after providing her confidence back, after providing her self-respect back, after providing her smile back.

Trust is not only about relations, love etc. trust is about you too. K how much u trust yourself k u can doo this or that.

This story is of a girl who got a step mother at a very tender age, just because society pressurizes her father that she needs a support of a mother. But her father didn’t know that his one decision while spoil his daughter’s life. Who just at the age of 4 starts wiping dirty floors why?? Becoz her step mother was jealous of her beauty.

Her father cried after seeing his daughter’s state but what can he doo?? When his 2nd wife tried to take her life by burning herself alive when he tried to stop her for beating his little daughter?

What a daughter will doo when she saw her father begging her step mother about not doing torture on his daughter?? And in return getting heart attack after seeing his wife trying to do suicide?

That day that little girl came to her father she was just 6.

Girl: papa u don’t do this. I don’t want to see u hurt

Father: im sorry beta I spoiled your life my marrying her

Girl: papa u send me far away like the new mom were saying

Father: no beta don’t say like this I cant live without u

Girl with teary eyes: I will die baba (maturity don’t needs age limit it comes sometimes at a very tender age and sometimes it took decades)

Father (bursting into tears): no beta I will never let her harm u again I will send u far away from here

Father: suresh Mehta

Girl: swara Mehta

Step mom: kalyani mehta

Suresh decided to send swara to boarding school, his heart was aching after sending his little doll far away from him but he also knows that kalyani will make her life hell if she remains there. But he didn’t knew that the damage already happens

Before going kalyani to swara while gripping her hand tightly

Kalyani: u ugly girl did u ever saw your face?? Nobody will ever loves u, nobody will ever care for u, u r just a piece of shit and remember the place where u r going there also ppl will hate u if u will try to talk to them na they will spit on your face understood and she pushed her hardly on the floor

Swara’s heart put the stamp on each words of kalyani. She starts thinking that nobody loves her. When she reached boarding school she got scared from everyone being a natural beauty which can easily mesmerized anyone she remained in her shell with big fat glasses, tight braid, lose clothes, head down, not talking with anyone.

(Childhood memories, bad incidents will always remain’s in persons mind).

After seeing her attitude nobody ever talked to her. They all thought she is just an egoistic girl without any beauty but little did they know all is hidden under her get up which was a result of kalyani’s talks which get stored in a 6 yrs old child’s brain.

Will she ever be able to trust herself?? Will she ever be able to reply them back who hurts her self-respect? Who hurts her soul?

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14 yrs later:-

A big mansion was shown a lady was ordering servants to put flowers on the specific vase, when one man came and saw the lady standing in irritation

Man: what happened patni ji?? Why this irritation?

Lady: arrey u know naa your dear son only loves while clr flowers and that also in his favorite vase but thiss Ramesh (gave glare to one servant who hides behind the wall after getting glare) put that flowers in wrong vase and that also of yellow clr

Man: arrey chill rey your son will not say anything as now a days he is in a good mood because he got the project which he wants to win from many months

Lady: really then tou I will make his favorite food items

Man with pout: u always make his favorite food but u never made for me ever

Because moms loves me more than u oldie a voice came from behind, both turn around and found a dashing boy around 27 in age with well-built body standing and giving them a charming smile

Lady: sanskar my son how r u?? how was your trip?

Sanskar: mom it was superb he said while hugging her

Man: son don’t u want to meet your dad??

Sanskar: dadd how r u?? he hugged his dad tightly

Man: imm fit and fine and in a whisper even got a proposal for marriage on which he got a punch

Lady: ram u will never change

Ram with pout: louu sujata ji if im handsome then what is my fault in that

Sanskar while laughing: u both continue I will be back

Sujata: oki

Ram Prasad maheshwari: a businessman fun loving father and loving husband, sprinkles life on his son and wife

Sujata maheshwari: housewife same in nature like her husband

Sanskar maheshwari: businessman like father rude in professional world but fun loving and kind hearted person in personal life loves his mom dad a lot.

Sanskar came down and was eating dinner with his parents.

Ram to sujata: do u remember my frnd suresh??

Sujata: umm yeah whose wife died when his daughter was around 4 naa??

Ram: yeahh yesterday he called me he was very tensed

Sujata: why??

Then ram told her everything about swara and his 2nd wife and her behavior with swara. Sujata and sanky felt bad for the girl

Sujata: how can she be soo much cruel

Ram: he sent his daughter away k may be she will change but no positive result, even tou she becomes worse, he told mee that she hides her face behind a big fat glasses because in her mind she thinks that she is ugly and even don’t talk to anybody except her father.

Sujata: poor girl I wish we can do something for her

Ram while gazing sanskar: we can sujata

Sanskar and sujata looked towards him in confusion.

Sanskar: what dad??

Ram: if we will fix her alliance with our sanskar???

Sanskar being shocked: whattt?? While sujata in excitement: whattt??

Ram to sanskar: why do u love someone else??

Sanskar: its nothing like that dad even I can marry anyone of your choice it was just u said suddenly naa

Sujata being excited: yupppiii my daughter in law finally I can get daughter because I become bore with u too gents huhh who don’t know anything except business talks (in actual sujata always wants a daughter but when she got pregnant with their 2nd child her daughter died just after 2 hrs of birth and later due to complications she cant be able to conceive)

Ram laughs on seeing her excitement while sanskar passed a little smile.

It was true that ram and sanskar loves sujata a lot but it was also true that they cant be able to give her proper time due to work. She never complained but she always felt lonely.

Ram: I will talk to him and then we will go to his home. On which sujata and sanskar nodes.

Ram talked with suresh who becomes happy on listening this. But suresh didn’t tell kalyani that ramta and sanskar coming for swara’s alliance as he don’t want her to spoil anything.

After 2 days:

Maheshwari family goes to Mehta house, that time kalyani comes to know that they came for swara’s alliance.

Suresh: kalyani go and bring swara

Kalyani goes upstairs while gritting her teeth on which sujata in a whisper to sanskar: huhhh churail kahe ki kaali bhootni. On listening this sanskar surpasses his laughter but in this process juice fell down on his clothes

Sanskar: suresh uncle where is washroom?? On which suresh told him and he goes upstairs he was going when he heard a light sobbing sound, he walked towards that direction and found a room whose window was little open he peeped inside

Kalyani while gripping swara’s face tightly: huhhh for ugly duckling alliance of multi billionaire camee arrey they tou will surely run away after seeing your cursed face huhh and she pushed her hard and told her to come downstairs.

This was all seen by sanskar who was standing by clenching his fist after seeing kalyani’s rude behavior that time swara was facing her back, she got up from the floor and turn around.

Sanskar’s breath got hitched in his throat after seeing her pinkish white chubby face who was now red due to crying, her nose was looking like a red cherry tomato, her blue eyes were totally red as she was not wearing glasses that time soo sanskar will be able to see her face properly, she was looking damn cute and at a same time pretty in that messy look also.

Sanskar thought for some time and then clicked her pic and snd that pic to ramta. Because after few secs swara wore her big fat spectacles and go downstairs

While on other side when ramta saw swara’s pic they literary praised her beauty and blessed her while sujata to starts dreaming about swara being with her doing gossips, making food, shopping, eating road side pani puri, bhutta, watching dramas etc. she was even going to doo some dance steps in excitement when ram cleared his throat and bring her back from her dreamland

On which sujata gave him a sheepish smile. Swara came down and ramta passed a sad smile on seeing her fearful and teary expressions. Sujji wants to eat that kalyani raw who made that little girl like this.

Sujata while gazing kalyani twisting her sari pallu as if she was twisting her neck when she felt a hand on her hand she look upward and found ram giving her a look to calm down. Sujata nodes and signs.

Swara with shivering body came and sat beside them she was wearing suit which was of her triple size in which her petite figure was completely hidden.

Sujata with a smile put hand on her hand which was cold as ice.

Swara first becomes startled and then with scared expressions she look upward and found sujata staring her with love she look towards kalyani who gave her a death glare, she immediately hung her head down.

On seeing this sujata huffed in anger and grit her teeth

Sujata while gazing kalyani with hate to swara: what is your name beta

Swara in a feeble voice: swaraa

Sujata: pretty name just like u

On listening this swara look towards her in a shock but she didn’t found any taunt or hatred in her voice and eyes first time in her life except her dad someone talked to her with love, her eyes become teary.

Ram to suresh: yar we like your daughter a lot I think we should fix their marriage

Kalyani becomes shocked: arrey bhai saab but first let sanskar see this girl (she said in a hatred voice which was noticed by trio parents)

Im ready for the marriage aunty sanskar said while coming down stairs. Swara look towards him and found him staring her with love

Swara sat down quietly there. Suresh didn’t asked her as he knw that she will doo anything which he will say and he know that more than ram’s family nobody will ever care for her. He was happy for his daughter that now she will get her happiness.

Kalyani with fake smile came forward and blessed swara and hug her but her hug was really very tight k she hissed in pain which was listened by sujata.

Sujata while pushing kalyani in dramatic way: arrey kalyani jii let me hug my daughter in law naaa and she gave hug to swara

Swara felt motherly love in that hug.

Swasan marriage was decided after 2 weeks. Sanskar wants a simple marriage and reception will going to be held after 1 month of marriage as he was having some other plans in his mind.

But kalyani put that thing in a negative way in swara’s mind that sanskar is just doing this marriage in sympathy that’s why he is running from reception, after 1 month also he will not do the reception.

Marriage happened in a private ceremony with few guests swara’s face was covered with veil. Kalyani tried to make her wear ugly wedding dress but here comes our suji darling she made swara wear a beautiful designer lehnga in fact she was the one who took all the responsibilities of her everything.

Kalyani only fumed in anger but sujji didn’t even gave her a chance to come near to swara during wedding day as she know it very well that she will definitely doo something evil. In these days sanskar was all busy in office he only came for wedding functions but he didn’t talked with swara.

That’s why swara thought that kalyani was right. Finally swasan got married.

Suresh while hugging swara: beta now u will get your happiness which u missed in your life on which swara passed a bitter smile to her father which was noticed by sanskar and that time he really wants to strangle kalyani’s neck.

Swara came towards kalyani to get her blessings she bend to take her blessing but kalyani put foot on her hand swara surpass her scream and got up with teary eyes and saw towards kalyani who was giving her evil smirk.

Sujata who was standing beside saw all this and thought for a while.

Kalyani was going when without anyone notice sujata put her foot on her sari pallu due to which kalyani fall down on her face and her nose starts bleeding as her nose hit the floor very hard.

Sujata controlled her laughter when suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder she turned and found ram standing giving her what look.

Sujata grins widely on which ram gives her thumbs up and both left from there while laughing loudly.

To be continued….

Guysss in next shot sanskar’s struggle to make swara strong, confident girl will start but will he get successful? Will his trust win on his love?

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    54 Comments

    1. Swasan on June 10, 2017 12:27 am

      Amazing……..???????????????????????????????????????

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:23 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    2. Aashi on June 10, 2017 1:27 am

      awesome wonderful & promising 1st shot
      luved it totally
      update soon

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:23 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    3. ricky on June 10, 2017 1:34 am

      Mind blowing story please continue soon please

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:24 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    4. Adishu on June 10, 2017 4:10 am

      this is so lovely

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:29 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    5. veduuuu on June 10, 2017 6:44 am

      Amazing awesomw

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:28 pm

        thankss alot 🙂

    6. veena on June 10, 2017 6:57 am

      amazing dear…too good

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:28 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    7. Seebu_s on June 10, 2017 8:07 am

      Amazing…really felt so bad for swara..true that some incidents will always remain in heart..and i loved sujju darling..hate that kalyani..i want to rip her.. hope sanskar n ramta will give all love swara deserves..waiting eagerly for next chapter

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:27 pm

        thankss dear andd kalyani will pay for her deeds 🙂

    8. Nagamanasa on June 10, 2017 8:55 am

      Amazing dear….continue soon..

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:25 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    9. Ishani on June 10, 2017 9:30 am

      Wow post next part soon

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:22 pm

        thanks alot dear 🙂

    10. anu on June 10, 2017 10:02 am

      nice update next part soon

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:21 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    11. Sus on June 10, 2017 10:41 am

      really good one dear

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:16 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    12. Sus on June 10, 2017 10:42 am

      lovly dear

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:15 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    13. Shreeyu on June 10, 2017 11:01 am

      Amazing dear….Loved it..!!?
      Continue soon

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:14 pm

        thankx alot 🙂

    14. Kumu on June 10, 2017 12:00 pm

      Awesome dear..loved it..continue soon..tc..

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:12 pm

        thankx alot 🙂

    15. mumpi on June 10, 2017 12:11 pm

      amazing!!! continue it nd post soon.

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:12 pm

        thankx alot 🙂

    16. DA18 on June 10, 2017 12:44 pm

      amazing……continue soon…!!!!

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:11 pm

        thanks alot 🙂

    17. sneha on June 10, 2017 1:16 pm

      Awesome. Loved it a lot

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:11 pm

        thankss alot 🙂

    18. Simin on June 10, 2017 5:00 pm

      Wonderful thought dear

      • snow-white on June 10, 2017 5:10 pm

        thankss dear 🙂

    19. ritu on June 10, 2017 5:38 pm

      loved it

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:24 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    20. Ricky on June 10, 2017 9:15 pm

      Mind blowing update soon please

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    21. savanshi27 on June 11, 2017 3:06 am

      Hey dear this ia amazing.. I toh loved it dheerrr saarraa…
      now plz update jldi jldi coz I can’t wait to read more…
      so final question when Is the next update????

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thanks alot dear ? and will update surely soon ?

    22. gayathri.visu on June 11, 2017 8:24 am

      Fantastic… I loved sujata’s character.

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    23. Simi on June 11, 2017 2:10 pm

      Awesome dear…
      I love Sujju darling ????

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    24. Arshaanya on June 11, 2017 5:24 pm

      Its an amazing concept…
      I loved it..
      Post nxt part ASAP

      • snow-white on June 11, 2017 5:45 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    25. Alku on June 12, 2017 9:40 am

      Awesome episode loved sujatha feeling bad for swara waiting for next parts to read update soon ???

      • snow-white on June 12, 2017 12:31 pm

        Thanks alot ?

    26. Manasvi on June 12, 2017 12:34 pm

      Awesome concept Rimsha dii??
      Loved it..!!

      • snow-white on June 12, 2017 6:17 pm

        Thankuu soo much manasvi ?????

    27. Mars on June 14, 2017 7:08 am

      Amazing just loved it dear.

    28. vyshu10 on June 14, 2017 11:41 am

      Awesome..loved it. Sujju rocks kalyani shocks…haha

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