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Home»Fan Fiction»Trust On 7 Vows (Chapter-24)
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Trust On 7 Vows (Chapter-24)

Krystal_KrysieeBy Krystal_KrysieeSeptember 19, 201646 Comments8 Mins Read
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CHAPTER 24

TOGETHER FOREVER

KUNJ’S POV

She left me shattered I was crying a if the most important deal of my life was failed…but how can twinkle do this to me? I mean how can she judge me like that? She called me a womaniser. Can’t she apply her common sense if I would have been a womaniser, right now she would be sleeping in my room with me….huh ‘pagal aurat’ (mad women). I also did a mistake being a friend I wasn’t able to know what she feels for me…maybe because i didn’t love anyone in my life but when I started to love someone she didn’t give any importance now here is twinkle’s fault y she made me fall for her? Leave all this Kunj now the fact remains that you both are separated. She left you but you will not. I have a plan and I know it will work for sure. Don’t react don’t respond to her for 3-4 days. Just chill because on the 5th day a bomb is going to get exploded.

***•••***

Days passed like this ‘no talking no responding’ but with a twist….
Twinkle didn’t leave the mansion instead she threw her own husband Kunj out of his own room. He was leaving in the guest room, twinkle never used to get out of her room. As a result they didn’t see each other for many days. Kunj was busy with his ‘Patni Patao’ (woo ur wife) plans and twinkle with her ‘crying concerts’

***••***

TWINKLE’S POV

I still love him but that idiot never came to talk to me. Huh!! Can’t he see how much I love him, care for him… Everyday at night, he shivers because the temperature of AC is set at 16 degrees and Kunj never wears his blanket. He has the habit of sleeping wearing his shoes and socks. He throws his bag on the couch, blazer on the cupboard, tie under the bed. Aaaahh!!! I’m tired of this. Tomorrow is the last day if he doesn’t come to convince me I’ll leave this house and I swear to god I’ll make his house hell for him.

***••***

Next day

Twinkle was waiting for Kunj near the dining area but he didn’t come. It was almost 2-3 hours since she was waiting for him. Finally twinkle decided to pack her bags and leave Sarna Mansion forever.
She went to her room in anger and started to pack her clothes when Yuhi entered the room.

M-twinkle tu kahin ja rhi hai?

T-Haa jahanum me….chalegi mere sath?

Y-tu toh gusse mein hai yaar

T-apne so called ‘bhai’ se pooch

M-usne hame Sab bata diya

T-Ohho mtlb usne tum dono ko bheja hai mere aansu pochne..

Y-ni actually hm tujhe woh diary aur photographs ke baare me batane aaye hai

T-Kya?

M-dekh twinkle mujhe pata hai ki Kunj me tujhe bhut hurt Kiya hai lekin uski baat toh sun le

T-saaf saaf bolo

Y-woh us diary me saari bakwaas Maine likhi thi

T-tu pagal hai?? Ya Phir tu mujhe pagal samjhta hai??? Apne bhai ko bachane ki koshish mat kr

Y-are ni main sach Bol rha hoon

T-q likha tha kya main Jaan skti hoon?

Y-woh Kunj Kisi se pyaar ni krta tha na so Maine socha ki thodi masti kr loon

T-kya??? Saale Shakti Kapoor ki aulad…. Masti krni hai?? Huh!!! Photographs ka kya??

M-woh photographs maa ne bheja thi unhone kaha tha ki use jo bhi ladki pasand aaye usse shaadi kr Lene ko ……use koi pasand ni aayi toh usne saare pics pr cross laga diya

T-omg mtlb he loves me ??? Woh mujhse pyaar krta hai??
Lekin Kunj hai kaha?? Subah se dikha ni

Y-tu news laga

T-kya?

Y-jo Bol rha Hun woh kar

T-thik hai

(Now guys the English version of the above convo is here–

M-twinkle are you going somewhere??

T-yes I am going to hell….will you come??

Y-seems that you are angry

T-ask your so called ‘bro’

M-he told us every thing

T- ok that means he sent you both for wiping my tears

Y- no we are here to tell you about the diary and photographs

T- what??

M- listen twinkle I know Kunj has hurt you a lot but still you should have listened to him

T- say clearly

Y-I wrote all that rubbish in Kunj’s diary

T-are you mad?? Or do you think I’m crazy?? Don’t you dare save your brother

Y- I’m telling the truth

T- may I have the honour of knowing why you wrote that?

Y- Kunj never loved anyone so I thought of having fun

T- hey you bl**dy son of Shakti Kapoor …..you want to have fun??
Leave what about photographs?

M-actually maa sent him ye photographs stating that whom he likes he can marry her Kunj didn’t like any of them so he made a cross on their faces

T-what?? That means he loves me?? Kunj loves me??? Bt where is he??

Y-switch on the news

T-what??

Y-follow my instructions

T-Ok )

Twinkle switches on the news channel and was shocked to see Kunj with a rum bottle in his hand and a guitar around his neck he was in his formals fully drunk

T-Kunj drinks?? I am not going to leave him ….

She turns to go but stops after listening to what Kunj said

“I love you so much twinkle that you can’t imagine I know I did wrong but please forgive me don’t leave me yaar Hiccup I will do whatever you want promise but please don’t leave me I will die. Today I am here to tell my feelings to the whole world. Hiccup I hope Yuvraj and Mahi told you the truth. I am going to dedicate a song to you today
I love you partner hiccup ” Kunj said and kissed the rum bottle that was in his hand.

After listening to what Kunj said twinkle was very angry the anger was clearly seen boiling in her eyes. She went to the car and drove as fast as she could to the venue
Here Kunj was singing Dil Ibadat
—–

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

(Kunj remembered how they met in the train and their rubbish talks together twinkle laughing)

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

(Kunj remembers how they stayed together in Mumbai the ghost incident twinkle dancing in the towel an all those Mumbai moments were flashing in his eyes)

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

(He remembers twinkle in a saree in mahi’s engagement and their marriage their moments after marriage)

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

(He remembers how they hugged before twinkle left for her house ten how they kissed each other in anger and how twinkle left him)

Now Kunj was about to continue the song when twinkle reached there and turned Kunj in order to make him face her…..
Everyone stopped the music stopped the whole crowd was expecting a slap bt twinkle smacked her lips with Kunj very hardly…..
After the kiss
T-pagal stupid idiot moron r uh mad??? I love uh
K-really?? (Drunken)
T-should I kiss you again??
K-yes

Saying this Kunj makes a pout and moves towards twinkle

T-besharam (shameless)
K-hehe
T-we are together forever
K-hmm…

Everyone started to hoot for them
They felt really embarrassed and smiled

**•••**

Hyy lovely people
Did I did sumthing different??
Yes today for the first time I called you all lovely people right??
Haha how was the chapter??
Did you enjoy??
Well this is the longest chapter I ever wrote
Guys as you know tei has ended and Sum of you might leave This page I want to say that before you all leave the page plzzz follow me on Instagram my id is krystal_krysiee and on Facebook I am Krystal Krysiee plzzz sent me the request with a message request guys plzzz
I can’t live without you all so plzzz follow me
Love uh all
Stay blessed
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    46 Comments

    1. Maggi on September 19, 2016 7:47 pm

      Very sweet epi…..luvd it❤❤❤❤❤
      It was awsmm….I luv DAT song?
      Cont soon dear?

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:29 pm

        Thnxx a lot dear for supporting me throughout

    2. Supriya18d on September 19, 2016 7:56 pm

      Hii Krystal,awsm epi dear I luv it and dialouge Shakti Kapöor ki aulad ….heehee srsly amzng

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:30 pm

        Thanks my Supriya writer hehehe love uh and hope uh read my last chappy

    3. rashiverma2199 on September 19, 2016 8:06 pm

      Wow….Krystal….lovely….awesome

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:31 pm

        Hey Rashi love uh dear thanxx for always supporting me

    4. baby on September 19, 2016 8:15 pm

      hey amazingh episode luvd it 2 d core u no
      dont no y bt i was expecting a kiss only : D hehhee……
      luvd it soooo mch post nxt asap cnt w8……

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:31 pm

        Baby mera Bacha live uh re hope uh will read and comment on my last chapter stay blessed

      • baby on September 24, 2016 4:16 pm

        nooo dont tell me u r ending it

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 26, 2016 10:20 am

        I ended dear will come back with a new ff

    5. Thestarkfromhogwarts on September 19, 2016 8:25 pm

      the confession tho!
      btw, i followed u on insta

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:32 pm

        Hey m so sorry but I can’t pronounce ur name any ways thnxx dear

    6. lashia on September 19, 2016 8:38 pm

      Hey!! Krystal. … Me nijhum. .. Dear.. . Ur ff n Os r really amazing as always. ..luv u loads ?????????? take care. ….

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:33 pm

        Hey Nijhum love back ya really thnxx for commenting hope uh read my last chappy

    7. Khushi on September 19, 2016 8:50 pm

      U r jst amazing krystal !! And how do you write such an awesome episode!! Jst loved it please post soon ….. And ya i sent u the request on Instagram !!

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:35 pm

        Khushi Khushi Khushi I love uh thnxx a Lott for breaking ur silence and commenting on my ff yeah tere comment KI dekh Kr Mujhe Khushi mili hehe

    8. Anam_sidhant on September 19, 2016 8:50 pm

      Hy krystal! Amazing episode I loved it❤ and ya m already following uh? do continue soon!

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:36 pm

        @Anam_Sidhant
        Wow uh registered finally!!!
        Hey thnquu buddy for commenting will be back soon with a new ff

    9. Ramya on September 19, 2016 8:59 pm

      Cute nice awesome

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:53 pm

        Thnx ramya

    10. Ramya on September 19, 2016 9:09 pm

      Hey it’s amazing
      N ha I have sent u request on fb bt I dnt know y I can’t do msg if u get any frnd request on name of ramya shree or ramya dolly den accept it n sry it’s difficult to send msg

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:37 pm

        Thnxx ramya and sorry I didn’t reply you was actually talking to my friend about the xams hope uh don’t mind love uh dear

    11. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 19, 2016 9:37 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi…loved it…..

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:37 pm

        Purnima thnxx for commenting on each and every episode of my f love uh dear

    12. modeste on September 19, 2016 9:47 pm

      awesome

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:38 pm

        Thnxx

    13. SidMin on September 19, 2016 10:22 pm

      Loved it Post the next part soon can’t wait for it 🙂

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:41 pm

        Thank you for the comment love uh Shruti

    14. SidVee on September 19, 2016 11:39 pm

      Amazing epi.. really loved it.. and that dialogue “shakti kapoor ki aulad”??.. was soo funny.. do cont soon ?

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:43 pm

        Hey sidvee
        How r uh dear
        Well thnxx for reading and supporting me throughout really love uh

    15. Sidhanshi on September 19, 2016 11:55 pm

      Fabulous epi… Loved it…

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:43 pm

        Thnxx dear

    16. Mahi on September 20, 2016 12:19 am

      Hey amezing one
      Is it an end
      Pls don’t end it
      I have sent u requests oñ instagram & fb plss axept it
      My real name is mahima Dave
      & outher who read this pls send mè a request my pet name on fb is mimu u can fjnd easily with it plssss i want all of u my twinj /sidmin fans as y bff

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:46 pm

        Mahi
        Thanks for commenting dear
        Yes it is an end but next episode will be the last one hope uh read it
        Love uh

    17. Simiyy on September 20, 2016 12:26 am

      Hey, I would love it if you could continue… And it was amazing

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:47 pm

        Simmy well this is the frst tym uh r commenting and thnxx a Lott for being a support always love uh

    18. Angita on September 20, 2016 8:42 am

      Amazing!

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:50 pm

        Hey angita how r uh dear
        Reading ur comment after a long tym hope uh fine yhnxx for commenting and stay blessed love uh

    19. sujina on September 20, 2016 12:10 pm

      krystiee…
      my guess was correct…i knew it tht kunj cant do tht…
      loved it really…devdas waala kunj n song wooo lived it…n dear i don hv insta acc…
      love u

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:52 pm

        Yeah uh guessed it ri8 ur Kunj cannot do this and I won’t let my Sidhant do this ri8?? Chalo chalo now my thnaxx giving thnxx dear for commenting love uh and stay blessed

    20. dreamer..arundhati on September 20, 2016 1:50 pm

      Krysie di superb epi

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:49 pm

        Dreamer??
        Arundhati??
        Are are how can I forget uh the Arundhati dreamer hehe
        Thnxxx dear for commenting and didn’t uh register on tu??
        If yes ok if no then register and post ur amazing stories
        Cz uh an amazing writer dear
        Achha thanks again
        Love uh loads

    21. Sana(sanu) on September 20, 2016 2:46 pm

      Wow….
      Superb=D>=D>=D>=D>=D>

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:50 pm

        Hey Sana thnxx for commenting dear love uh

    22. baby on September 20, 2016 9:02 pm

      ohhh god krystiee it was amazing
      beautiful n d truth oh god wow
      luvd it 2 d core
      post nxt asap i cant w8
      amazing n nxt is ur silver jublie yeah finally
      post nxt soon…..luv u…..

      • Krystal_Krysiee on September 24, 2016 12:45 pm

        Baby 2-2 comments really??
        Hehe love uh re srsly
        R uh on Instagram??
        If yes do follow me
        Achha next is my last epi so do read and comment bye bacha

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