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True love Kriyam (Two shots)

NainikaBy NainikaMarch 24, 201728 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi everyone.My name is Nainika.I had been a silent reader all the time but this time I decided to write a story on my own creation adapting the serial.Since this is my first time, if u found any mistakes pls dnt mind it and I hope u enjoy my story and it just going to have two shots and it is about Kriyam .Ok this shot starts from where the both of them Saiyam and Krishna were having their nok-jok in their bedroom and Saiyam calmed her using their proximity(krishna calling saiyam baba). so lets get start.
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Night time:
Krishna gets back to sleep as instructed by Saiyam.She clutch the blanket and started thinking what happened a couple of minutes before.

Krishna POV:
I had never seen this side of Saiyam but I had to say that I enjoyed our proximity a lot.The feeling when butterfly flies in my stomach, I could just feel my heartbeat skip a beat.Oh god can’t u just make Saiyam realise his love and concern for me.I proposed him already but he didn’t reply ,I wonder why???
Krishna gets thinking of that and went back to sleep.On the other side, Saiyam was thinking about the incident.He couldn’t sleep because he was so happy to see that kind of reaction with Krishna.

Saiyam POV:
I know Krishna you like me n of course you love me nut whenever I think it, I feel guilty n get thinking that do I deserve you.The answer for this question only time will answer it.
Thinking this he also went back to sleep.

The next Morning:
Saiyam woke up early before Krishna.The next second itself his eyes began searching for Krishna.When he find her still sleeping he decided to go near her.He go beside her and sit beside her.He was admiring her sleeping like a 5 year old little girl sleeping.He just wished she should not get u now so that he can continue looking at her but his fate Krishna started to wake up.Before Saiyam could go from there Krisha caught him and asked him what he were doing.
Saiyam:I just so a cockroach going underneath your couch that’s why I came here.
Krishna:What!!!!! Cockroach!!!! Can’t u tell this a bit more earlier u idiot.

She just quickly jumped on Saiyam and because of the sudden reaction Saiyam stumbled and fell on the bed.Krishna accidently kissed on Saiyam’s lips.It was suppose to be a quick peck but I did not end.Krishna started to kiss unknowingly and reciprocate the kiss.Soon it turned out to be a passionate kiss.It was just like they were pouring out all their feelings in that kiss.After sometime they break the kiss due to lack of oxygen.Krishna was on Saiyam chest and they both were breathing heavy.There was no gap between them.Krishna was still trying to hide her face in saiyam.Saiyam was just being still and enjoy this moment.Just because of his one lie now Krishna is on him.After a couple of minute they realised what happened between them but both did not wanted to get up from the position. Suddenly they heard a door knock and both of them get up from their position.Krishna went and opened the door ,saiyam followed her behind.It was Suhani.

Precap:Krishna crying and going to the room.Saiyam ran behind her.So guys guess what would have happen!!!!!!

Pls do comment if it is nice or to encourage me.Thank u for reading.

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    28 Comments

    1. asia on March 24, 2017 5:17 pm

      If this kind of scene haopend in ssel .i’ll be very happy. But u made it so thanku so much i loved it from the bottom of my heart keep it up.

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 6:18 pm

        Thank U asia for your support

    2. Isha on March 24, 2017 5:22 pm

      Nainika really nyc shot…I wish the serial showed kriyyam moments…update ASAP 🙂

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 6:18 pm

        Thank u Isha.I will try to update soon.

    3. shivani on March 24, 2017 5:22 pm

      It was fantastic. I was enthralled reading it and loved it immensely. It was super awesome and hugely romantic.
      Please try to update soon.

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 6:19 pm

        Thank u Shivani.I m very happy and I will try to update the last one soon.

    4. Kriyam_lover on March 24, 2017 5:32 pm

      Great shot! Found the cockroach part funny??..keep posting❤

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 6:20 pm

        Yes Kriyam_lover it is my favourite part too!!

    5. sanjana on March 24, 2017 5:40 pm

      superb one…. fantastic….soo romantic
      please next short soon

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 6:21 pm

        Thank u.I will update it soon……..

    6. Shaani on March 24, 2017 6:10 pm

      Woow… It’s soo nice…. Why is Krishna crying… I know..I know that I have to wait until next episode… Plz update soon.. Ur story is soo nice.. Keep going.. Loved it..

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank u Shaani I am in the mid of the story.. will update soon

    7. Ridita on March 24, 2017 6:24 pm

      Really nice….should have shown in ssel…..pls write more….update the next shot soon….

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank u so much Ridita.. Your words encourage me.I will write more and update soon

    8. Aarti32 on March 24, 2017 6:25 pm

      Awesome..D cockroach part was funny..But soon turned romantic..??

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:46 pm

        Yup that was my favourite part too

    9. aaravjaikar on March 24, 2017 6:59 pm

      Cool one ..love itt .loo

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:46 pm

        Thank u

    10. dwidha on March 24, 2017 7:09 pm

      Awesome dear
      Loved it
      Plz next shot asap

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank u dwidha… I will update it soon

    11. pinkyyy on March 24, 2017 7:26 pm

      Awesome update dear
      Kriyaam scene was awesome

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank u Pinkyyy

    12. lavanya on March 24, 2017 7:33 pm

      Nice one dear

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 8:47 pm

        Thank u lavanya

    13. Zani Saleem on March 24, 2017 8:20 pm

      It was the best ff on kriyyam??amazing story line ?

      • Nainika on March 24, 2017 9:31 pm

        Thank u so much.. ??

    14. fenil on March 24, 2017 9:33 pm

      Mind-blowing chppy dear
      can’t wait for next
      awesome nd lovely kiss….love u dear

      • Nainika on March 25, 2017 10:11 am

        Thank u

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