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Home»Fan Fiction»A TRIP THAT CHANGED THEIR LIVES – ISHQBAAZ SS -EPISODE 1
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A TRIP THAT CHANGED THEIR LIVES – ISHQBAAZ SS -EPISODE 1

VHMBy VHMAugust 1, 201766 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hello this is VHM back with an SS on IB ….please ignore the spelling and grammatical mistakes…
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Before we start…I just want to let all the readers know that this is once again an off track Romantic SS completely based on Shivika…I will try to make this as decent as possible keeping in view the age group of readers visiting this site…….Also this SS will be slow not fast paced …no much of planning and plotting or mysteries…….Shivaay and Anika’s character will be different from what we are seeing in real IB…but still I will make sure you connect with their characters ……as I am trying my hand in a complete romantic genre for the first time ever…I hope you will all support me as you did earlier …Last but not the least this SS will not run for a longer time with lot of episodes …it’s really few shots one I mean less than or equal to 10 episodes and this week because of upcoming Pooja I may not be regularly posting the SS episodes……please do bear with me!!!
So let’s start ………..
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‘’Om’’ he shouted
‘’Rudra’’ she shouted
OmRu came to them and asked ‘’What happened? why are you shouting?’’
Shivaay ‘’you are asking this?’’
Anika ‘’why did you lie to me?’’
Shivaay ‘’Exactly why did you say lie that Anika invited me for the dinner, when she did not?’’
Om ‘’Shivaay …relax…so what if we said a lie …you both weren’t ready to sort things out , so we both planned this’’
Rudra ‘’exactly Bhabhi..we thought you both would spend some time and speak out everything’’
Anika ‘’What to speak when your brother is a big Tadibaaz……will he let me speak anything…he will only taunt me…I am this…I am that…I don’t know this …I don’t know that….’’
Shivika ‘’look who is saying..Anika …will she ever let me speak anything? If she starts speaking either we have to go away or we have to close our ears but she will not take a break’’
Anika ‘’you too are no less Bhagad Billa kahike’’
Shivaay ‘’Stop it Panika’’
Anika ‘’don’t spoil my name’’
Shivaay ‘’you too don’t call me as that’’
OmRu closed their ears and they both left murmuring ‘’nothing can be done of these’’
Shivaay and Anika continued to argue and finally left in opposite directions
———–pool side
Om ‘’What do you think Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’I am sure O …even if they both argue they still see that they don’t hurt each other…we just need to push them more’’
Om ‘’correct…they fight so cute’’
Rudra ‘’I hope they both unite soon’’
Om ‘’yes’’
Rudra ‘’by the way I sent their dinner date Pictures to Ragini ..’’
Om ‘’To Ragini …are you serious Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’yeah..i am sure now she will be hissing in jealousy’’
Om ‘’Hissing?’’
Rudra ‘’yeah…Anika Bhabhi calls her Nagini na…that’s why I sadi she will HISSING…ha ha ha’’
Om ‘’you are really stupid Rudra…..what was the need to send her pictures?’’
Rudra ‘’I did correct…other wise she always spoils the moments between Shivaay bhayya and Anika Bhabhi…I thought seeing those pics she will understand that they Shivaay bhayya and Anika Bhabhi are made for each other’’
Om ‘’you have gone mad Rudra…do you think seeing those pics she will sit quiet…she will definitely do something to come near to Shivaay…and make Shivaay and Bhabhi apart….ppcchhhh……you are seriously a duffer Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’You are right…but I am still happy she will atleast feel jealous na’’
Om ‘’shut up Rudra …now let me think something to keep her away from both these for some days’’
Rudra ‘’I will also help you in planning’’
Om looked on and Rudra innocently looked towards him…….

————————-NEXT MORNING
Shivaay was on a call when Ragini made an entry..Shivaay smiled at Ragini and gestured her to sit…….
Anika too came to Shivaay’s room just then with his coat…..She looked at Ragini and stared at her in irritation
Ragini ‘’I am sure you bought this for Shivaay…so just give it to me…I will make him wear…you can go now’’
Shivaay stopped speaking on the call and looked at Anika after Ragini said those words …while Anika looked at Shivaay being hurt…
Shivaay on the call ‘’I will call you back’’ and disconnected the call and went near Anika……he took the coat from her hand …Anika looked at Ragini ………Ragini came to Shivaay and made him wear the coat…..
Anika was hurt again and she left from there with a layer of tears…Shivaay looked at Anika’s direction sadly…..
Shivaay turned towards Ragini and spoke ‘’Ragini you are here? Anything important?’’
Ragini ‘’No …I …I ..just came to meet you ‘’
Shivaay ‘’You have a house Ragini and I think it doesn’t seem good if you come here regularly for no reason..i mean not to offend you but it’s just doesn’t seem right’’
Ragini was irritated but she smiled and said ‘’Actually Shivaay …I was just passing by and thought to meet you once as you know after whatever happened with me earlier I have only one good friend that is you so I always end up coming here’’
Shivaay ‘’that’s okay ..i must leave now’’
Ragini ‘’will you drop me ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Where is your car? I mean how did you come here?’’
Ragini ‘’actually bhai was with me ..he dropped and left ‘’
Shivaay ‘’but you said you were passing by and then you are saying your bhai dropped you’’
Ragini ‘’I mean I was going somewhere else with my bhai and when I saw we took this route I thought to meet you and go’’
Rudra entered just then and said ‘’Shivaay bhayya …someone came to meet you’’
Shivaay ‘’who?’’
Rudra ‘’I don’t know but he insisted to meet you..’’
Shivaay turned towards Ragini and said ‘’Ragini I am so sorry but I cannot drop you now…but don’t worry my driver will drop you’’
Ragini smirked….
Ragini ‘’no problem Shivaay …I will go’’
All three walked towards Living room where SamarJeet Malhotra was waiting…….very soon every OF member gathered
Shivaay looked at him while Ragini showed Thumbs Up to him
Samar ‘’Hello Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…..i am Samar Jeet Malhotra’’
Shivaay was angered ‘’Why are you here ? and why do you want to meet me?’’
Samar ‘’relax Mr.Shivaay…….i know you are annoyed with me to take that land from you …but I have come up here for a deal with you’’ he looked at Ragini
Rudra ‘’Mr.Samar ..am I right ?’’
Samar ‘’yes’’
Rudra ‘’do you know Ragini?’’
Samar looked at him surprised
Rudra ‘’I mean with every sentence you are looking at her …so I am asking you’’
Ragini ‘’he knows me very well Rudra as I am his only sister’’
Shivaay was shocked…’’RAGINI MALHOTRA…SISTER OF SAMAR JEET MALHOTRA’’
OmRu were equally shocked
Shivaay ‘’so what deal were you talking about Mr.Samar Jeet Malhotra?’’
Samar ‘’Actually I want to enter a deal with you to develop my Chip manufacturing business in Sweden ..i have heard a lot about your expertise in the communications …so I thought to enter a deal with you’’
Shivaay ‘’and why do you think I will enter a deal with you?’’
Samar ‘’I don’t know whether you will enter this deal or not …but I have many reasons for which I want you to enter this deal……one I will give you whatever you ask for, for this deal…I will agree to all your conditions …..last and most important for Ragini….’’
Shivaay ‘’For Ragini’’
Samar ‘’Yes for Ragini …Ragini said that you are her best friend and she wants to be in partnership with you…I love my sister a lot…and I cannot deny her any wish…she said you wanted that land which I took…and I am ready to give you that land but for that I want you and Ragini to work together in this’’
Anika came there and listened to their conversation…….she looked at Shivaay tensed
Shivaay looked at her
Shivaay ‘’Fine I will definitely think about it…and will soon inform you’’
Pinky ‘’what more to think Shivaay…you have already announced engagement with Ragini and if now she is going to be partner in your business then it will be double best for both of you’’
Samar ‘’Engagement with Ragini? Is it? But I didn’t know anything about this? ‘’ he looked at Ragini and said
Samar ‘’Ragini …is it true?’’
Shivaay was tensed as if his secret about fake engagement would come out
Ragini ‘’bhai …woh actually this is all’’
Shivaay ‘’truth…this is all truth….’’ He looked at Anika
Samar ‘’great…if my sister is happy I am okay…so Mr.Shivaay I will wait for your response then’’
Shivaay ‘’wait Mr.Malhotra…usually I don’t speak business deals in home…but since this is connected with Ragini … I am taking decision here and now…I am ready to enter this deal with you…my lawyer will bring the agreement papers to you’’
Samar shook hands with Shivaay and then asked Ragini to follow
Ragini hugged Shivaay and said ‘’thank you Shivaay finally I will be with you’’
Pinky smiled at Ragini and Shivaay and smirked looking at Anika , Om , Gauri, Rudra and Jhanvi
Anika was teary eyed but composed herself not to be cry before everyone
Shivaay broke the hug and said ‘’I need to talk to you, so come to my room’’
Ragini turned towards Samar and asked him to leave….Samar left looking at Anika …..
OmRu and Gauri held Anika , while Anika looked towards Shivaay leaving with Ragini…….Anika after a while turned to leave OM….

———A TEA STALL NEAR OBEROI MANSION
Samar was sitting on a bench and having his tea in the tea stall……
Anika was walking in her own thoughts ……Samar looked at her however Anika didn’t notice him…….
Samar walked towards Anika and pulled her from the middle of the road……..Anika came out of thoughts
Anika ‘’you..what are you doing here?’’
Samar ‘’Ms.Anika you were walking in the middle of road so I pulled you aside…what are you thinking about’’
Anika ‘’Why should I say you??’’
Samar ‘’may be if you share I can help you out’’
Anika POV ‘’when you are reason of my trouble what will you help me’’
Samar ‘’Again in thoughts?’’
Anika ‘’no..nothing…thanks for pulling me aside..i must leave now’’
Samar ‘’Ms.Anika my offer is still open for you…if you want to join back then you are most welcome’’
Anika smiled and said ‘’If I want to come back I will first call you’’
Samar ‘’Anytime you say ‘’
Anika thanked him and continued to walk towards Chanda’s house

————–SHIVAAY’S ROOM OBEROI MANSION
Shivaay ‘’Ragini…why didn’t you say your brother about our fake engagement news drama?’’
Ragini ‘’it was fake Shivaay…so what was the need to tell?’’
Shivaay ‘’but still..you even all these days didn’t let me know you are the sister of Samar Jeet Malhotra too?’’
Ragini ‘’how does it matter Shivaay…who am I …all that matters now is we are friends and now we will be business partners…so don’t worry…I will handle my brother and I am sure he will and can never deny anything I say or ask for’’
Shivaay ‘’yeah…but please be careful….i value our friendship …so please ensure nothing goes wrong’’
Ragini ‘’shivaay don’t worry …now there is nothing that can go wrong’’
Shivaay ‘’ok fine…I have some clauses regarding this deal so I will send you those through my lawyer…we will meet in office tomorrow…now I must leave…I have some urgent work’’
Ragini ‘’fine ..we will meet soon’’
Ragini left for her home while Shivaay left for office

——-AFTER TWO DAYS …THIRD DAY NIGHT
Shivaay came from Office but OmRu were tensed and were calling Anika…Shivaay looked at them and sensed something was not correct…..
Shivaay ‘’OmRu why are you tensed? Is everything okay?’’
Om ‘’Anika Bhabhi is not yet home…she left in the morning and she is not reachable till now’’
Shivaay ‘’what? Did you search her everywhere?’’
Rudra ‘’yes bhayya…we did search her in entire OM …she is nowhere to be seen’’

So this was the first episode …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments positive or negative are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…………

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    66 Comments

    1. Archisha on August 1, 2017 10:09 pm

      Nice one

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:01 pm

        Thank you Archisha…thanks a lot

    2. Shreya on August 1, 2017 10:17 pm

      Heart touching di in love with this do post next soon hate nagini units shivika soon hope for best

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:02 pm

        Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear..will post the next shot today…..yeah will definitely unite Shivika

    3. nikita_jai29 on August 1, 2017 10:20 pm

      Whoo… Dii is back… With romantic shivika… Lovely update and loveeee you dii… And dii you asked.. My classes will be regular after rakhshabandhan…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:02 pm

        Hey Nikki….thanks a lot dear…thank you so much…yeah was getting bored so started this…not much of expectation but still proceeding…and all the best for the course ….loads of love…keep smiling and take care

    4. fenil on August 1, 2017 10:24 pm

      Wow.
      Such fabulously written Harika Dii.
      The way the enter shouting for OmRu i thought they will eat thrm raw.:)):))
      Ragini,Kya bolu iske liye:):)
      Samar,Always cool man,perfectly performed his role.
      Can’t wait for next.
      Loved it.

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:04 pm

        Hey Fenil…thank you so much bro…..thanks a lot…ha ha ha ha ha…kaccha chabajeynge..true even i wanted to portray the same…will post the next episode today…

        HAPPY RAKSHABANDHAN in advance …will wait for my gift too !!!

      • fenil on August 2, 2017 3:08 pm

        Do send me links Dii.
        Thank you so much for wishes ,Yaa Will give you gift soon.But what should i give ?

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 4:41 pm

        Hey Fenil… will definitely send you the links and Gift i will let you know…don’t worry i will not ask something impossible

    5. Dhar on August 1, 2017 10:25 pm

      Diii u rocked it… Loved it to the coreeeee… I hope you post ASAP…. Superb….. U r definitely back with a bang???????

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:05 pm

        Hey Dharani …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….i will post the next episode today itself……awee so sweet of you dear….thanks again…loads of love …keep smiling and take care

    6. Katz on August 1, 2017 10:30 pm

      Hi vhm…. (or harika. is this your name. If I am wrong, I’m sorry). How are you. I’m happy that You are back with a romantic story. So far it’s a good start amidst all the misunderstanding going in IB. This is a big relief for me. Waiting for the next part….bye.

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:07 pm

        Hey Katz…you are right my name is HARIKA…and no need to say Sorry if you misseplt or don’t know my name …that’s okay…i am doing good…thank you ….how about you?

        Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…true i am alos fed up with MU in real IB…was getting bored so started with this SS….will have to write pretty well so that it makes and gives sense…but i don’t want it to be the same cliche way …so trying to do it different…hope you would like it…..

        next episode i will post it today……keep smiling and take care

      • Katz on August 2, 2017 4:21 pm

        Ha… ha… I think you misspelled now. (Misseplt). BY the way I am doing well.

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 4:40 pm

        ya sorry…i am really bad at typing…good to know that you are doing good …..keep smiling and take care…hope i haven’t made an typo errors

    7. Nandhini on August 1, 2017 10:38 pm

      Superb

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:08 pm

        Thank you so much Nandhini…thanks a lot

    8. archana on August 1, 2017 10:51 pm

      Nice one. Next one earlier pls

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:08 pm

        Thank you so much Archana…thanks a lot..next episode i will post it today

    9. UF on August 1, 2017 11:01 pm

      AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERSTING SUPERB??????

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:09 pm

        Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot…by theway if you don’t mind can i know your actual name?

    10. Maryam_ishq on August 1, 2017 11:10 pm

      Am so glad tht ur back di ?. It was an amazing episode.
      The strtin was so comical with shivika’s cute fight and omru’s plannin… nagini will be hissing in jealousy na ??.
      I must say shivay is the biggest duffer of the world… he was friends with ragini for so long and still didn’t knw tht she was samar jeet malhotra’s sister. And to top it up he does the most stupidest things to make anika feel jealous… first he let tht nagini make him wear the coat… second he said tht the engagement news is true and third he even accepted the business deal. ???. Enough of me bashing shivay.
      Shivay worried for anika… let’s see if he’s able to find her ?.
      Great epi di… it’s ok if ur not able to post regularly. Take care and love u ??❤❤

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:11 pm

        Hey Maryam….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…

        You will love Shivaay in this SS …i promise you that…this story is going to be really different…i am trying to bring in different shade of Shivaay but you will definitely connect to that shade…i hope you will like it…….

        Thanks again dear…next episode i will post it today…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

    11. Sairish on August 1, 2017 11:12 pm

      ufff..finally you are back with a khidkitod concept ….on shivika??…
      I’m so happy ❤❤ to have you back…like really..happy…love you ??…
      sry for the short comment ….busy with some of the school work and exams …??…
      pls post the next one soon ..
      TAKE CARE di
      lots of love
      Sairish
      ❤❤????

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:13 pm

        Hey Saaiiiiirrrrrrriiiiiiiiisssssssssshhhhhhhhh….i missed you dear…thank you so much…thanks a lot…i donno if this ss will be khidkitodh or not …but i will definitely put in my complete efforts to make it readable and worth your time…

        No worries dear…take your time and if you don’t have time to post the opinion …i am even okay with it….so don’t worry about it…..

        next episode i will upload today…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    12. Anu16 on August 1, 2017 11:19 pm

      Hello di…So good to see u back…n u have been back with a bang… it was awesome…. hope shivaay doubts ragini soon……ur title indicates that there will be a trip in the ss n I’m eagerly waiting for it as i love travelling…. waiting for next…..

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:14 pm

        Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah they will go to Sweden and what happens there forms the crux of this ss…next episode i will post today…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    13. ruksy on August 1, 2017 11:31 pm

      Ive read it on wattpad and im loving it

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:16 pm

        Hey Ruksy..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah i have seen notification about you in Wattpad…but there will me difference of few sentences in this portal as i can’t provide such mature content here, keeping in view the age group of readers visiting this site….

        Thank you for reading it again here and posting your opinion…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    14. Arpita on August 1, 2017 11:52 pm

      VHM dear,awesome. ……ok i will wait for next part
      ……

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:17 pm

        Hey Arpita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i will post the next episode today…

    15. Nithu on August 2, 2017 12:45 am

      akka super undi……vara lakshmi vratam kada akka..manam baga chesukune panduga…….i love it…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:18 pm

        Hey Mohitha….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…avunu varalaskhmi vratam ee friday so aa preparations eeroju nunchi modalu pedathanu…anduke regular ga post cheyalenu ani munde rasaanu…yeah manaki chala important festival …

        next episode i will post today…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    16. fffan1234 on August 2, 2017 1:26 am

      Harika dear this is awesome start. I am loving it…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:19 pm

        Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you to say that you are loving this…keep smiling and take care…next episode i will upload it today

    17. Banita on August 2, 2017 2:40 am

      Hey!!! Di u come back with ur new ff….. It’s MINDBLOWING di…..
      Nagini ki toh apne insult karne ki adat ho gaya hain isliya jb dekho aajati hain….
      No problem di Waiting 4 ur nxt chappy…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:21 pm

        Hey Banita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…haan bahut bore ho gayi thi ..isliye start kiya ye ss…Nagaini ki aur insult hogi woh bhi poore flow mein…uska frustration is ss mein nikal rahi hoon….ha ha ha …thanks again dear…next episode i will post today…keep smiling and take care…love you loads

    18. Niriha on August 2, 2017 5:20 am

      Awesome di…I’m so happy u r back.asusual u rocked it di.loved it to the core eagerly waiting for next part update soon di Love you ???Take care

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:21 pm

        Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…could stay away for a long time so came back with this SS……awee so sweet of you dear…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode i will post today

    19. Yvonne Codner on August 2, 2017 9:43 am

      Well done..it is awesome!!

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:22 pm

        Hey Yvonne Codner…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot

    20. alekhika20 on August 2, 2017 11:52 am

      Amazing update;cont soon

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:24 pm

        Hey Alekhika…i can’t believe you wrote few more words for the first episode of this SS…i am jumping with joy…thank you so so so so so much…thanks a lot…next episode i will post today

    21. ishuyamjha on August 2, 2017 12:08 pm

      it was good one loved it post next part soon when u have time

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 3:25 pm

        Hey Ishu…i hope you are okay if i call you ISHU instead of ISHUYAMJHA ….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next part i will post today…thanks again dear…keep smiling and take care

    22. Ankita27 on August 2, 2017 3:03 pm

      Amazing update di… loved it… Eagerly waiting for the next part…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 4:42 pm

        Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will post it today…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    23. Shivika on August 2, 2017 5:13 pm

      Welcome back!!!?
      U r back that too with a romantic genre…?
      I hate Ragini & Pinky….
      Amazing concept…..
      I’m sure Omru will do something….
      Waiting fr d nxt…❤

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 6:08 pm

        Hey Shivika…yeah i am back with an SS this time..ha ha ha don’t have so much of expectation because i am very poor in writing romance…trying a different and difficult genre this time…hope i pass in this….next episode i posted it …….

        love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    24. Anj on August 2, 2017 5:28 pm

      Finally u r back …. i was waiting fr your nxt story only…..and this time also the theme n story line is fantastic …plz update soon….??

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 6:09 pm

        Hey Anj …thank you so much..thanks a lot…you were waiting for me to come back…so sweet of you for writing this line…thanks again…next episode i posted it already…keep smiling and take care

    25. Raksha104 on August 2, 2017 5:43 pm

      wow di!!! u r back with ur nxt ff…wonderful and i really loved it….keep writing….happy to see u….luv u akka!!

      • Raksha104 on August 2, 2017 5:44 pm

        and sorry for late comments…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 6:11 pm

        Hey Raksha….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yes i am back for a short time with a short story…hope i pass in this difficult genre called romance as i am very bad at writing this……am also very happy to see all my cutie little sisters back…love you loads dear….keep smiling and take care…and don’t say sorry dear…that’s okay…sooner or later doesn’t matter …what matters is you posted your opinion….

    26. suhana shree mahi maalvika zidna daljeet on August 2, 2017 6:01 pm

      How many years old r u by the way its okay

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 8:16 pm

        Hey Suhana Shree Mahi Maalvika Zidna Daljeet……thank you posting your question and opinionon this page…i am 32 years old…and i didn’t get you…what was okay ? is the SS okay…if so thank you …..if not make me understand !!!

    27. Zaveesha on August 2, 2017 6:23 pm

      Woww Harika di is back with a amazing Shivika SS…..
      Superb Harika di…
      Very nice…
      Love nd Best wishes for ur story…

      Di my college is started so I’m late in commenting…but I’ll surely read the other parts when I’ll be free…

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 8:19 pm

        Hey Tanzeela…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…no worries dear…studies are important ..so take your time for reading and if it’s not possible to post your opinion even then it’s okay…..

        Thanks again dear….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

    28. Komal on August 2, 2017 9:38 pm

      Whoo my super writter is back again with a bang….looking forward….all the best

      • VHM on August 2, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thank you so much Komal…next episode is already up in the portal …hope you will like it…thanks a lot once again dear…love you loads …keep smiling and take care

    29. Nita D on August 2, 2017 10:30 pm

      Wow….while scrolling I saw your name in first line of episode 2 so I came to know that u have come up with somethings new….
      I knew that u won’t be able to sit idle….I knew that as soon as u finish MMKAD, u r kidkitod mind will start thinking some another complicated plots…….
      Purely romance genre….a different venture by u….N u n without plotting n planning…..doesn’t match….but I know this ff is also going to be awesome…..

      This Nagini is too much…..samar doesn’t know about ragini’s plan?? That’s difficult to take in…..samar-anika….? Plan to make Shivaay jealous????

      Check for Anika once again near poolside….or she will be somewhere near water only….just a guess….

      • VHM on August 3, 2017 7:22 pm

        Hey Nita…finally saw you here in this SS section…yeah was getting bored so thought of penning this idea down…yeah dear purely romantic genre no twists no plots no mysteries …just concentrating on SHIVIKA’s relationship…ha ha ha this time it will match ….awee so sweet of you for those high expectations on me…i hope i live upto your expectations…

        Yeah Nagini is too much …Samar is just a puppet of Nagini so i made him look the same…whether he said that deliberately or he really has no idea was not important at that scenario so i just left it the same way….

        no plans to make Shivaay jealous ..not at all…….she will be near water only and i know by now you know where she is…..

        Telepathy worked haan……..love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care

    30. gayathri.visu on August 4, 2017 2:36 pm

      Hiiiiiiii di. Just now only I opened TU page, n read this ss.

      Romantic SS……hmmm not bad di! Amazing start! I liked the start of point. This nagini……urghhhhhh, plz some kidnap her! Irritating stupid!

      By the way I m fine di. I thought to PM u about answers for ur questions. Some some problems n stress bcz of studies, I can’t able to do that. Sooooooooooo sorry di for veryyyyyyyy late n short comment. My studies……hmmm going well, at same time its boring…..hehehe!!

    31. Sagithya on August 4, 2017 7:49 pm

      Hai Di … Welcome back …. I am so happy that u came back soon….
      It was a awesome one…. Lovely part too… Sorry for late comment…

    32. Jerry_36 on August 4, 2017 9:32 pm

      Hello Harika Di !
      Sorry for commenting late. The update is super duper awesome. I am so happy that you came back again with a beautiful piece of writing. Loved it.
      Khidkitod one ♥♥

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