Hey guys, so Iam postingbmy story which I had posted on Wattpad but thought of updating it here also. Thanks to @jasminerahul also.
Characters
Vansh Raisinghania
Son of Anupriya. Foster younger brother of Kabir. Twin brother of Ishani, elder brother of sia. Best friend of Neil and angre. Loves Kabir a lot, considers him as his god. Is in a guilt of something which will be revealed. Doesn’t believe in love, flirts with girls.
Kabir Raisinghania
Adopted son of Anupriya. Brother of vansh, Ishani and sia. Ahaana’s husband. Best friend of Aryan and vyom. Has some secrets. Hates Ishani but loves vansh and sia alot.
Ishani Raisinghania
Wife of angre. Hates Kabir and Aryan. Best friend of avni.
Sia Raisinghania
Fiancee of vyom. Best friend of Ridhima.
Anupriya Raisinghania
Sister of Prakash. Misses her elder son – Vihaan a lot.
Neil Raisinghania
Son of prakash and Swetha. A honest police officer. Has a crush on Avni.
Prakash Raisinghania
Swetha Raisinghania
Angre
Ishanis husband. Hates Kabir but doesn’t shows it.
Vyom
Aryan
Ahana
Kabir’s wife.
Dadi
Riddhima Sharma
Daughter of neela. Medical student.
Avni Sharma
Cousin of Riddhima. Criminal lawyer.
Neela Sharma
Mother of Riddhima. Depressed due to her elder daughters medical condition.
Ridhima’s father had died. Both Sharma sisters are strong, beautiful ladies.
Sharma’s share a good relationship with Raisinghania. Sia is studying with Ridhima. Neil loves Avni even though they argue with each other.
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A hospital is shown, Ishani is seen sitting beside a patient. The patient is paralysed. Ishani’s eyes are teary, at the same time was filled with anger. She hold the patient’s hand .
Ishani:- bani, do you know today we are going to start our revenge. (Patient moves her hands)
Ishani:- Don’t worry Anu. Nothing will happen. Everything will be ok. We will give you the justice you need. (Anus face is not shown now). I know what you are going to say, but beleive me Anu, nothing will happen to us. It’s our revenge, our 7 years hardwork. Will punish everyone who made you like this. Even if I have to lose my loved ones.
Ishani wipes her tears and goes from there.
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Raisinghania house
Everyone is seen bc in decorations. They all are very happy for vansh’s arrival. Dadi was seen praying near the Ganesh idol.
Dadi:- Anupriya…. Anupriya..
Anupriya:- ji mummyji…what happened?
Dadi:- did you call Sia? Is she coming?
Anu:- bhaiyya ki favourite hain. Will come shortly.
A girl comes and hugs Anupriya.
Sia:- aaungi nahi, I come Mumma.
Everyone hugs Sia.
Anupriya:- how did you come? Alone? Traveling from Shimla alone?
Sia:- no Mumma. Ridhima was with me.
Anupriya:- then, ok.
Dadi:- Anupriya, did you invite Sharma’s?
Anu:- Haan mummyji. I had already informed them. (Sees Ishani coming) Ishani beta come here. What happened? Why are your eyes swollen up? Did angre said anything to you? I will scold him. Angre..
Angre:- I didn’t do anything.
Ishani:- he didn’t do anything. I was just upset.
Anu:- beta, why are you like this? Today is a good day, vansh will come.
Ishani:- so. Why should I care. Anyways vansh didn’t consider me his sister. He has only sia and his Danny Kabir bhai.
Dadi:- Ishani mind your words.
Ishani:- then don’t talk to me. ( She goes from there).
Anu gets sad. Sia and dadi consoles her.
Angre:- maa, please don’t take her words to the heart. She is like that, but loves you all very much.
Sia:- haan, Mumma. Now get happy. (Anu Smiles). This is Mumma. By the way, where is Swetha aunty?
Swetha:- Iam here beta. ( Sia hugs Swetha and prakash).
Prakash:- how was your studies, my doctor?
Sia:- good. Where is Neil?
Swetha:- woh….angre..
Angre:- Neil is at court. Today there is an important case.
Sia:- who is the opposing lawyer?
Ahaana:- who else it will be, Avni Sharma.
Swetha:- oh my god.
Sia:- then today also Neil will lose.
Angre:- any doubt. No one can win Avni.
They all laughs.
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A court is seen, inside which a case is going on. The lawyer is Avni Sharma, famous criminal lawyer. Everyone fears her, even the police. Her cases are also unique, she will take only most crimefull cases. Now she is questioning our poor police man – Neil Raisinghania.
Avni:- Mr Neil, on which basis did you arrest my guy?
Neil:- he did the murder of poor family and he even revealed it to me?
Avni:- if I says that you beat him hard that he lies, what proof do you have to make him guilty.
Neil stand speechless. The judge frees the criminal. Neil comes to Avni and blocks her way.
Neil:- congrats.
Avni:- for what?
Neil:- for winning.
Avni:- winning is in mu blood. And also congrats for your lose. Don’t know when will you win against me. (She turns to go)
Neil:- it is very surprising that those whom you had saved from my clutches , are now not in this world.
Avni:- what do you mean?
Neil:- I mean, Iam praying for today’s criminal. Don’t know tomorrow he will be alive or not? (Avni smirks at Neil and goes from there).
Neil:-(in his mind) I know Avni, you are behind all this. You saves them, you kills them. In the eyes of police man, it is a crime but you are also right. You have them the best punishment. For this world you may be a arrogant criminal lawyer, but for me you are a criminal hunter. And this pulls me towards you. (He smiles and looks at the watch) oh no….. It’s 3. Vansh is coming. I have to go. But he didn’t even call me, he must be reached. Where is he? Must be flirting with some girl. Should call him.
He dial vansh’s number.
A man in his mid twenties is driving, near to him a girl is there. It is our hero Vansh, he is with his new gf Shanaya. He gets Neil’s call.
Vansh:- hello buddy….
Neil:- you rascal, where are you? Why didn’t you call me?
Vansh:- I got a guide for me. So why will I call you.
Neil:- I know what you mean. Anyways come fast, aunty(Anupriya) had arranged party tonight. So come fast, everyone is waiting.
Vansh:- ok, byy.
Neil:- one min. Buy a good gift for everyone specially Ishani. Angre called me. She is not in a good mood.
Vansh:- ohh…. anyways I will see. Bye.
Neil:- bye.. (he cuts the call)
Shanaya:- who was it baby?
Vansh:- my cousin baby. Chill.
Vansh was about to kiss her, but his car gets out of the control and hits a scooter.
Vansh:- OMG.
A girl comes to him and looks at him angrily, it was our Ridhima.
Ridhima:- cants you see me? Are you blind? Get down.
Vansh:- (in his mind) yeh ladki bina. Where did I get trapped? (To her) kya hua baby? Are you ok?
Ridhima:- kaun baby? Kiske baby? Iam not your baby. (She sees Shanaya) ohh, now I get, you were to romancing with this girl, in this car. That too publicly. Then how can you see me.
Vansh:- oh helli, typical ladki, this is my car. And I will do anything I want. Who are you to comment on me.
Ridhima:- I will comment on you. Because of you my scooter got punctured, now what will I do?
Vansh:- ohh. So you want money, I will give you my credit card, get enough money and go to hell.
Ridhima:- I don’t need your money. Today Iam very bc , otherwise you will be in jail now. Do you know, yaha ka IPS Neil Raisinghania meri family friend hain.
Vansh:- Neil Raisinghania?
Ridhima:- haan. So, agli baar meri saamne mat aana. Bye.
She takes her scooter and goes.
Vansh:- interesting. Very interesting. Family friend of Neil. I will catch you Ms…. anonymous…
Immj intense tune plays in the background….
So how was it. Please comment