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Home»Fan Fiction»THE TRAIN TO MY MARRIGE – TS (PART 2)
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THE TRAIN TO MY MARRIGE – TS (PART 2)

nymisha281By nymisha281December 16, 201711 Comments5 Mins Read
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HELLO GUYS!
am back with the last part of the story

here is the link for the previous part
Part 1

HAPPY READING

Later in the evening, we all make a plan to go to a famous restaurant in the city. As we get ready for the outing, I consciously try to ignore what happened with Mr. Perfect that afternoon. But still I ensure to put on my best dress- and I realize how very pleased I am to have taken the pains of bringing so many dresses with me on this trip.
Am I trying to impress him? No way! Everybody is trying to look their best, so why shouldn’t I?
But I find that I’m more nervous than usual.
So, everyone is ready and it’s time to leave.

You two, go in the other car,’ says Ammi.
What?’ I am surprised. Ammi is asking me to go alone with a boy! I insist,’No, I will also go with you.’
Yes, Ammi there is no need of another car,’ says Mr. Perfect.
Thank God! I cannot bear landing in one more scandalous moment after that afternoon.
No,’ says my ammi. You will go in separate car. That’s it. No more discussions.’
I know what mom is trying to do. Seriously, Indian mothers can be such a headache sometimes!
We take another car- this one’s an Audi!

The streetlamps look beautiful this foggy evening, between the mist and dark night.
Mr. Perfect doesn’t say a word. So to end this awkwardness I start a conversation.
how about your higher studies? You don’t want to study further?’
swara, I have already done my MBA and I have also been a research scientist at the Indian Institute of Agricultural Sciences. So now I am working on increasing crop yield methods while simultaneously learning the ropes of my father’s business and also doing some actual farming. What else you want me to do?’

My jaw almost falls to the ground.
Oh!’ I said. so you would want a wife who can stay with you? I mean, a housewife.’
Yes, I would definitely want a wife who can stay with me, swara.’
I knew it! A narrow-minded control freak. Huh!
But’, he continues,’ if my wife wants to work, she can work with me in our business.’
He never ceases to surprise me. I am feeling good about it. But still I am confused about why he wants me to marry him? He can get any girl he wants.

Suddenly, the car stops and I notice that we are near a hill.
Where are we? Don’t tell me that the car has stopped working.’
No, swara. Please stop watching those romantic movies in which the hero-heroine get stuck in a car and then their romance starts,’ he says, grinning.
Whatever! Just a thought; it has nothing to do with romantic movies.’ I say, annoyed.
Let’s go.’
Where?’

Up there. To the top of the hill.’
Are you kidding me? I’m not going there.’
Huh! Stubborn girl.’
He takes my hand and we move towards the hill. As we reach the top, I can see the river on the other side. This scene is breathtaking. Although it is far below us, the sheer height does not seem to scare me. Instead, I feel great- so amused and thrilled.
A cold breeze blows my hair over my face.
It is so beautiful, nothing can be more beautiful,’ I say.
I knew you will like it.’

Suddenly, Mr. Perfect gets down on one knee, pulls out a ring and says the world’s most magical words: I LOVE YOU, SWARA. WILL YOU MARRY ME?
I am dumbstruck at that moment. Here is Mr. Perfect- and that too on his knees, asking me to marry him!

This cannot actually be happening. All this only happens in the movies. I wish I could hold on to this moment forever.
SWARA, please reply, my knees are hurting and it’s very cold out here.’
I smile, my eyes wet with tears, and say,’ YES!’
Thrilled, he gets up and slips the ring on to my finger. He then hugs me tightly. I can hear his breath in my ears as he says,’ I liked you when Ammi showed me you picture…And I liked you even more when you fell from the train.’
Then I should fall every time,’ I laughed.

I wanted you right there while watching that movie,’ he whispered in my ears. I love you! Be mine. Be my wife.’
I look up at him. His lips come close to mine and then he softly kisses me on my lips.
I love you too,’ I responded gleefully.
And, like every other love story with a happy ending,’ We lived happily ever after.

sooo….how was the story ?
hope u guys liked it
plz do comment and share ur views.

if possible …see u all again in my next story.
BYEEEEE 🙂

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    11 Comments

    1. Fariha on December 16, 2017 10:33 pm

      mind blowing

    2. Fariha on December 16, 2017 10:34 pm

      awesome

    3. Fariha on December 16, 2017 10:35 pm

      superb

    4. fenil on December 16, 2017 10:44 pm

      Lovely update.
      Just loved it.
      Do inform me if you write new one.

    5. Parul on December 17, 2017 12:07 am

      Awsm n mindblowing dr

    6. anu on December 17, 2017 9:53 am

      nyc

    7. ShonaLaado on December 17, 2017 12:20 pm

      Lovely superb and yes Swasan heavenly couple

    8. AbrahamEzra on December 17, 2017 12:57 pm

      Superb dear I loved it and was waiting for your update. Plss do write more stories

    9. harneet on December 17, 2017 5:31 pm

      so sweet ……. plz write more stories …. it was so impressive .

    10. Kumu on December 18, 2017 12:47 pm

      Awesome dear..beautifully written..tc..

    11. Tani on December 19, 2017 3:19 pm

      Marvellous

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