Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur support.A warm welcome to TSMSPJ FF dear ones…
Thanks for ur comments friends,
Ashwinee,Avanti,Maan,Mavis,Neha,Bhaana and Shreya…
Keep supporting me.I will give my best…
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The story starts :
It’s night :
Shiv showing whole house to Kanak…
Kanak : Wow ur house looks traditional.
By the way,what’s ur name?
Shiv : Traditional means?
Kanak : See another Chotta Buddha now.
Shiv : What?
Kanak : Nothing.Traditional means in hindi?I got it “SANKARI”…
Shiv : What?It’s not “SANKARI”.It’s “SANSKARI”…
Kanak : Oops Sorry…By the way now say ur name?
Shiv : I am Shiv…
Kanak pulled his cheeks.And says Nice…
Both laughs…
Kanak went for bath.She came out…
Just then,Uma came and saw her.He mesmerized by her beauty…
Kanak rubbing her wet hair with towel.
That small drops falls on Uma.He smiles.
And he again got chandan smell.
Suddenly lights went off.
Uma came inside,She hugs him tightly.
Tu Sooraj Main Saanjh Piyaji…Plays as background music…
Both gets current shock…
Kanak : Don’t leave me Uma?I am fear of dark.Please don’t leave me.
Uma stays calm.And says i won’t leave u.
U no need to fear.I am there for u…
Uma in her mind : She called me Uma.She is the first girl who touched me.But i won’t do anything on my own.If she born for me
my “BOLAENATH JI” will definitely unite us…
Suddenly light appears,
Uma smiles and says,
Kanak see lights came…
She apart from him and says,
Kanak : I am sorry Uma.Actually,i fear of dark.It’s the only weakness i got after my parents death…
Uma : It’s ok…U won’t fear again i will keep Lantern here.So that u won’t get fear.
Kanak : Thank u so much Uma.
Uma about to go,
Kanak stops him and says,
Kanak : Uma i forgot to say u,Tommorrow i am going to Kerala.Thank u so much for everything…
Uma : Ok.We too going Kerala kanak.If u don’t have any problem,U can come with us…
Kanak : That’s great news.Ok we will go together…Gud n8…
Uma : What?
Kanak : I mean “SUBAH RATRI”…
Uma smiles and says It’s not “SUBAH RATRI”… It’s “SHUBH RATRI”…
Kanak : Oops.That only i am going to say,
Ok “SHUBH RATRI”…
Uma smiles and says,
“SHUBH RATRI”…
Precap : Uma,Kanak,Shiv went to kerala together.There Kanak meets Bhabo.Uma meets his family.Bhabo hugs Kanak…
Soon i will bring their marriage twist……
I hope u all liked it…
Please give ur valuable comments…
Bye for now,
Take care☺☺☺
…Sakash…
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16 Comments
Hey Sakash ? mine was the first like? hopefully I’am the first reader of your story,??
Coming to the story..again thank you for updating the 3rd part so soon.. glad in your story there’s no hatred between bhabo and Kanak?
Looks like our Uma has totally fallen for our beautiful Kanak?
Shiv – chota Buddha?
Hi Neha.I am so glad dear.Thanks for the like.
And u r the 1st one who commented dear?Good.Thank u so much.No need to say thanks dear.I am happy that u enjoyed while reading
FF.Yes dear in this FF Bhabo loves Kanak.Yes Uma fall for beautiful kanak.
Yes Shiv – Chotta Buddha???
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Hello….
Uma kanak’s hug …sweet..
Kanak’s hindi meaning of english word…haha…traditional means saNkari and i am laughing at her SUBAH RATRI
what a contrast matching of words and also our pair UMak….enjoyable chappy…
Precape- bhabo’s entry………
By…
Hi Maan.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u liked it.Yes she confused of hindi words??
Woh yaa SUBAH RATRI … ??I am happy that u enjoyed the part.Yes Umak r the beautiful & unique pair.Yes Bhabo’s entry.U will enjoy bcoz here she plays positive role…
Bye dear…See u???
Lol sankari n subah ratri ? short but sweet like our kanak she is also short n sweet ?
Shubh ratri sakash
Hi Shreya.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u liked it.Yes SANKARI & SUBAH RATRI???
Absolutely dear whatever u said is right.?
Shubh ratri…???…Shreya…???
Enjoyed reading your update in the morning itself ???
Fabulous update…loved it !!!
Hi Ashu.I am so glad that u liked it dear.Thank u so much.I am glad that u enjoyed it.Thank u dear.It means a lot to me???
Wonderful scenes???, loved it fully☺ nice funny dialogues and good writeup, waiting for Kerala turn. thanks for fast update??
Hi Avanti.I am glad that u liked all scenes and u enjoyed it dear.Thank u so much.Ok u will get to see good story in kerala.U welcome Avanti…???
Hi sakash! Thanks for the fast update..love this part..current cut n hug?…every dialogues are well written?… Short n sweet.
Update soon?
Hi Bhaana.U welcome dear.I am glad that u liked it dear.Thank u so much.Yes current n hug,I am glad u liked dialogues.Thank u.I will update soon dear.???
It was nice to read a FF on Uma and Kanak. Goodluck.
Hi CoffeeGreen.Thank u so much for u support.I am glad u liked it.Once again thanks…☺☺☺
Very nice I think u have written beautifully this ff I recommend my friends in twitter too gr8 sakash
Hi Neena.Thank u so much dear.It means a lot to me.Thank u so much.Hope u and ur friends will definately like this FF.A warm welcome to my FF dear…??☺☺??