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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

Together– Forever( edkw) epi 5

LovelyLadyBy LovelyLadyJune 25, 201638 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guuys once again I m late to post.. frst of all I wld like to thank Angel for wrtng so seet abt me as well all other wrtrs…… soo sweet of u yaar to get tym to wrt soo mch for us…
Also I m thank ful to all other frns to cmmnt on my ffs…………..
Plz guys keep readng n cmmntng…………

Till now,,, suman is wearing a ed coloured saree n looking stunning………. Sanju her daughter had met Mr Malhotara in the party by the malhotras on the finallisation of the deal….
Now…
Sanju- bt there is one problem my frnd……………
M- that’s true …… I shd mst tell u my name bt after that u wll have toenjoy the party wd me,………..
There Suman was searching fr Sanju…… thn she saw Sanju talking wd a guy …. She cntsee the face of the man.. as he was sitting keeping his back in side of Suman …….
Sanju saw her mother frm thre ony……….
“Mummaaaa I loveee u….. thnx fr bringing me here….. I have got new fen here”
Sanju said delightly n run towards Suman……. At the mean tym Malhotra got a call n gt bz on th call………..
Suman- sanju u kn hw mch u hve frightened me?????????????
Sanju- sry mumma …….. I m gng to eat ice cream….. my frnd hv told me that I m the chifgst fr today soo I can do whatever I want……….
Suman- bttttt wait fr me ……..
Sanju- Mumma I hv to go……… plz tell my bye to my frnd…… other wse he mst be sad na…………..
Plz plz plz mumma say my bye to him……….
“Ok my princess I wll” sayng this she kissed her daughter n say her bye……..
I will also thnk him fr taking care of my Sanju…..
She heads towrd that guy who is bz talking on the phn………..
She goes near fountain………
Suman – wait kar leti hu……….. tb tk ye mr bhi freee ho hi jayenge…..
“ aww so beautiful fountain….

FB……
“Hey Suman ………. Chal na tu fry aha pr kkhri ho gyi…….. college ka ye fountainbhi tujhse bore ho jayega………….” Ria says………one of her frn……
Suman – u r budhuuuu ,,, fountains never get bore wd any one n als no one can get bore wd it….
Ria- all the bst to u…..stay wd this fountain fr the whole lyf.. andr sab frshrs party mna rhe h aaur yaha madam ko fountain ki pri h………..
“Main jar hi hu party me.. jb mn bhr jaye . aa jana………” Ria says this n goes inside ……..
Suman is staring d fountain leaving the frshrs party……..
“Are tum yaha – Shravan asks Suman…… what r u dng here …….. sare frshrrs to andr enjy kr rhe h aur tum kya kr rhi jo…………
Suman- I too hv the same ques.. all seniors r also enjoying the party………. Thn wht r u dng here…..
Shr- I asked frst……..
Suman- bt ladies r always frst……
Shr – phle tum batao……..
Suman- no phle tum……
Shr – I hv an idea…………. Both of us speaks together……
Suman –ok thn say it……..
“I lv fountains “……….. both of thm speaks together……….
“wht”. Again they say this together………………
They brst out of laughter,,,
Suman- we both love ………
Shravan- wht r u saying ….. I m shoked…….
Suman –ohhooo u cut my line n twisted it…….. I was saying that we both love fountains( I too love fountains)
Shravan- ohho I was jst joking……… sry yaar…………
Suman – all r dancing inside n why r u missing all that…….
Shravan- (to see the most beautiful creation of god) says in mnd…… ahhh wht I m saying…..
Suman- wht r u murmering………
Shravan – nothing dear……… ( says nervously)……… bt we cn dance here also…………
Suman – whht?????? We????? N dance?????????
Shravan- ya …….. yaha pr kis chij ki kmi h….. hamara fav fountain h gana h mausam h mood h aur tum ho…………..
Suman- ha bt ……. Tum andr kisi k sath dance kr lo na…..
Shravan- no I wll nott.. u hv to ….warna, mai tum pr college ki property ( fountain ki taraf ishara krte hue) ko ghrne ka complain lr dunga…….
Both brst out laughter…….
Shravan plays the song……boond boond krke tujme girna mera………. Aur thora mujhme jyada milna tera…………they strt dancing normally bt afer sm times suman get unbalanced n Shravan gives her spprt……. They share an eye lock… n aftr that they dance very closely,,,,
“ooouuchhhhhh” a cry cm frm the the guy……. Suman came out of imagination ………..the guy was screemng in pain……. She headed toward he guy….. whn she cm in frnt of her…..
“Shhhhh light gone…. Ye lght kaise chli gyi the man said in pain……….
Suman- oo apko chot lg gyi,,,,,,,,
M- ya ( making wierd face) …. I gt hrt by stones……… .it is paing vry mch…..
Suman in mnd- why this voice seems sso close……….
Same is thought by Mr M
“ cm here I hv an idea fr u…….” suman says…… getting cncrned abt that man.
M- bt how mujhse to chla bhi ni jar ha h…..
S- tk my hnd n walk tking it as spprt…….
Malhotra holds the hnd of Suman………
Both shokingly see each other…( they get sm weird feeling by te sixth sense)
They cnt see each others face due to dark ness…….
Sumo makes hm seat on the boundary of fountain…….
While She opens the shoes n thn shocks,,,,,,,
Malhotra was lost in the feelings…. He was in pain. Bt…….
malhotra( in mnd) – ye kya ho raha h.. iske choote hi drd kah jar raha h
M – tum nurse ho???????????
S -ni kyu????????
M – aise hi………
Suman opend her shoes finally n washes his toes wd the water of fountain…….
Wo pir ko ache se sahla kr do rhi th…
M – kya kr rhi h aap?????
S- nothing …… isse aram ho jata h……. thnde paani se acha lg rha hoga…
M- acha to lg rha h…… pr kya . ye treatment ya tumhara sath( in mnd)
Sddenly lights cm…………….
Sumo was bz washng his leg……… he didn’t noticed anything……
Malhotra saw her n was stunneddddddd n shoked………
“ TUM?????????”
Shravan said………
Sumo saw her n was dbl shoked…………
Screen freezes on their face….

Guys I m getting less cmmnts now a days… plz guys cmmnt kiya kro………….

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    38 Comments

    1. sanjyoti on June 25, 2016 7:01 am

      Awsm awsm awsm ,I cantbwait fr next part ,plz post itv asap

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:28 am

        thnk u sooo mch sanjyoti n sry fr d late rply

    2. Ashi on June 25, 2016 7:29 am

      Superb…amazing…no words left for ur skills of writing….lovely episode..but why u updated late….u know how eagerly I ws waiting for the update..next time plzzzz update fast…okkk….

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:30 am

        thnk u ashi

    3. sona on June 25, 2016 7:45 am

      Hey..lovely..its superb…yaar…day by day ur writing skills..much better and better…pls..keep it up..???
      Aur..kaun hi Jo tumhari ff par comment..kar nadhi kar raha hai..
      ??
      Tum chaho tho..my hi dho..theen..aur comments laga lu..???☺???

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:31 am

        thnk u sooo mch… ni aisa krne ki jrurt ni h., bt less cmmnt dsspoints…..,isliye ab mai sirf weekly likhungi…

    4. sumo on June 25, 2016 11:14 am

      it was amazing lovely …. the way dey both were bonding.. well portrayed… m soo happy after reading dis.. may u live long … ?????

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:32 am

        thnk u sooo mch….sumo di….

    5. WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 11:41 am

      It was a ‘lovely’ episode….loved it…u write so well..waiting for next epi….:-)

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:38 am

        thnk u WS hope u wll like other epis…. too

    6. angel_pari on June 25, 2016 12:33 pm

      lovy jii it was a amazing

      maza aagaya,…….

      I,m eagerly waiting for next part……..

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:41 am

        thnks angel maammmm
        hope u wll like my other epis too

    7. Shiny on June 25, 2016 1:07 pm

      Very nicee….cute baby girl n shravan bomding….shraman bonding??????…well written

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:23 am

        thnx a lot shiny….

    8. shraman on June 25, 2016 1:47 pm

      Woahhhh!!! This was great.. My prediction got true…. Post soon..

      • maria on June 25, 2016 3:39 pm

        It was amazingggggg lovly Di no no no “my perfectionist lovely writer” 😀 😀 seriously sabar ka phal meeetha hota hai 😉 pr Di plzZ post nxt 1 ASAP!! ASAP !! 😀

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:28 am

        ooo notgng like that maria… bt btw thnx fr liking my story n sry fr rplying sokk latte…

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:26 am

        cngrats niku;)
        thnx fr liking it

    9. Shalini Naicker on June 25, 2016 3:49 pm

      Loved it. Keep writing.

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:29 am

        thnk u soooo mch SN

    10. Khushi on June 25, 2016 5:21 pm

      It was mind blowing lovely di….u r amazing…. Aap ne toh mera dil jeet liya….I loved the way shravu said ki tumse shadi Karne aaya hun….???naughty Shravan??
      Love it to the core di…plz post next part asap❤❤❤

      • Khushi on June 25, 2016 5:22 pm

        Oops m really sorry di.. Got the dialogues confused… Voh kya karun abhi saari ffs padhne ka tym Mila toh confuse ho gyi…m so so sorry….anyways it was dhinchastic..

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:30 am

        its ok dear….. hota h kv kv ..
        btw thnx fr liking my story….

    11. ufaq on June 25, 2016 9:07 pm

      Hiiii so sorrryyyyy di actually I was reading but not able to comment and I m really sorry for that di I must say u r an amazing writer episode was super duper hit I loved it again sorryyar take care love u stay blessed tc

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 8:31 am

        i dont hw mch i was missinv u…..
        you n your cmmnts ko mai really bahut miss kr rhi thi….
        plz be reg ulr…
        n thnx fr likinh this …
        love u a lot .. god bless u toooooo

    12. LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:29 am

      sry i m bz in sm wrk so i posted late n also cmmnted late….. hope u dont mnd……
      thnk u sooo mch…

    13. preekarfan on June 26, 2016 7:43 am

      nic episode…i enjoyed it…nic lovy…..

      • LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 11:09 am

        thnk u sooo mch pihu di
        … glad to see your cmmmt here… it means a lot…

    14. Jonathon on June 27, 2016 1:22 pm

      Appreciating the hard work you put into your blog and in depth information you present. It’s nice to come across a blog every once in a while that isn’t the same out of date rehashed material. Excellent read! I’ve bookmarked your site and I’m adding your RSS feeds to my Google account.

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      • LovelyLady on June 27, 2016 3:56 pm

        hi jonathan…. thnx fr liking my story.., sry dear i did not understand where are u adding my account????
        that link is also not opening…..

    15. ufaq on June 27, 2016 3:35 pm

      Diii????

      • LovelyLady on June 27, 2016 3:57 pm

        ha ufaq…… bolo????

      • ufaq on June 27, 2016 5:57 pm

        Ap gum kahan ho??? Kese ho ap??? Entrance ka kia ho??? Busy ho???? Disturb to nae kia if yes then sorry…… Actually I was missing u but it seems that u r busy its OK di u take care sissy

      • LovelyLady on June 27, 2016 7:47 pm

        ruko ruko itne sare questions…
        ni yaar gum ni hu…. bs pareshan hu admssn ko le kr k…..
        thik hi hu bs… kuch spcl ni….
        admssn k liye counselling k liye jana h kuch dino me
        n yar h nvr distrb me.. pta h in dino ff ni lkh pa rhi thi na to cmmnts bahut miss kr rhi thi….. tumhara cmmnt dekha to lga ki mujhe abhi koi yad rkha h…. missing u all especially apni sister ko…( ye mt puchna ki kaun)
        kl puri koshish karungi post krne ka….

      • LovelyLady on June 27, 2016 7:54 pm

        aree ye jonathan jo post ki h uska kya mtlb h???

      • ufaq on June 27, 2016 10:31 pm

        WO kisi ko smjh nae aya new language discovered hahaha
        Do first of all u take care of or health and admission u don’tworry iI have prayed for u r m ap ko kese bhol skti hn yyear u r my sisi r raha swal ff ka u don’t worry about when u get time post it otherwise take rest love u

    16. Affaa on June 28, 2016 3:37 pm

      I am sorry sisi…I was bzy so I was not able read epi I’m sorry….do know when I registered first messaged bcoz of I’m registered…so I was very excited lovy did I hurted you I’m sorry…you’re my sis nha so I hope you’ll understand me…epi was fantastic no not fantastic….super duper fantastic Masha Allah…sorry for late comments..what about your admission…love you like hell mmmhhhh…take care…sorry once again…haa I forgot please please post link of your another ff please…

      • LovelyLady on June 28, 2016 9:18 pm

        no di u dont need to be srryyyt….i wanna tell u sm thng…. i wll snd u pvt msg afer sm tyms…… wd my dads phn

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