Me: Hey guys…its me lovely lady back wd a new ff……
I cnt gv u intro… bcoz this ff wll have sm mystries… whch if revealed wd tym wll make my story interestng…..
Now,
A cute litl girl of abt 4 is seen making sand home on beach……
“See na my house… hw is it.??”
The ltl grl asked….
……… a beautyful lady is seen… caring her hair by moving her head… carrying bunch of beutyful balloons in one hand and in another a cone of ice cream….
She steps towards the ltl grl.. n is looking like princess… she is wearing a light pink clrd long suit …..( typ of suit rani wears in the promo of ek tha raja ek thi rani)
Aww they r looking very good…..
She is the heroine of our story..Suman …
” bt tell can i leave wd u in this house” Suman ask the ltl grl……..
” what a silly question u r asking..
Can a grl live wdout her mumma. I cnt live wdout u…
Me: So here Suman have a cute lovely daughter…….
“Mumma both of us wll lice together” litl grl said…
Suman – Sanju see wht i hv brought fr u beta…..
Sanju- aawwww so beautyful balloons……. n my fav icecream…….
They both enjoy the waves of ocean n the icecream….
On the stall beside them a song plays……….
Ek pyar ka nagma h ….
Maujo ki rawani h ..
Jindgi aur kuch bhi ni ….
Teri meri kahani h……
Both Suman n sanju r very happy…
Lets go home mumma…….
Suman — no dear not now ….. we wll have dinner outside … afterall today is my princess birthday….
Sanju- love u mumma……….
They go in pizza hut n hv tasty pizza… n then cold drinks…….
I kn today’ s epi is a short one…
I hope u wll like this frsh story….
Plz cmmnt guys… n my old frns i expect a lot of support frm u guys………. @angel @ufaq @abhi @bhoomi @karthik bhai @afa……
I hope i get dm mew frns on this new ff………
Many mystries r to be revealed……………
I hope u wll support my new ff like u supported me on my last ff abhi na jao chor k…
Love u guys a lot
35 Comments
Nice start lovely di.. It was amazing…. Waiting for the hero’s entry.. Plss make next one long
frst of all sry shraman i missed your name in my frns list…. i wll take cr of it frm next tym…thnx fr liking my story……
ya i wll make my epi longer.. frm the nxt one….
I’m ur friend right? Then why are you apologizing? Chillax, its absolutely fine.. 🙂
thnx nikita….. 🙂
Nice n fresh story…
thnx lily…..
hope u wll be on my next epis also…..
mind blowing 🙂 episode love it 🙂 🙂 🙂
u are amazing lovely lady..!!!!
thnx a lot maria…….
keep readng dear…….
i will alwayss dear …..! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Superb … I loved daughter and mothers bonding….. i love mystries ??…. Happy that u r back …. Love u ?
thnx fr appreciatn my cncpt…..
i wll try my bst to make my story up to your expctatn………..
Awesome lovely lady…..u r amazing I just loved the mom and daughter bonding…. It’s a very unique concept…… Eagerly waiting for the next episode…. Post soon dear
thnx khushi…….
plz keep readng dear…….
thnx fr appreciatn my cncpt…..
i wll try my bst to make my story up to your expctatn………..
i hope guys u r loving my risk of making Suman a mom……
Really nice start….looking forward to read more of this story
thnk u kaesi……
keep readng dear…
I seriously can’t believe it that my romantic di is gonna write a mysterious ff epi was awesomeee I loved it and ya best of luck di and ya surely we vil support and di whats about ur entrance u got it na????
thnx a lot sweetuu….
i was expctng spprt frm u……
it wll be romantic story… jst sm mystries wll be revealed…..
ya i hv compered an entrance… n cn get admssn.. bt still waiting fr two results.. thn i wll take admission …..
Congrats di sweets to bnti haina????
okay Mhafff kiya don’t repeat it again….I thought not to comment…but what to do when I read this episode…I can’t stop myself by commenting….amazing start I didn’t expect that suman…awesome….All support from my said….go for it….All the very best babes god bless you…take care…love you….mmhhhhhh…I am very excited for next cappy
thnk u di…..
n love a lot….. i will never repeat that mistake again…..
thank u sooooo much fr supporting me…..
hope this spprt wll be permant.
btw in whch class u r???
r u in college????
do u wrt any ff
lovy really once I told you about my ff and class…do you forget it….hahahaha..I am doing fashion designing babes…I hope after few day you will not forget me…and my ff 7 chumzzzz forever…don’t ask again…sure dea…
i m really really vry sry… i remembr that i hd asked u…. n i hd gone to that page to read it bt i fnd so mny epis r posted so i thoght it wld be difficlt fr me to understand…….
love to kn that u r doing fashion desng….
cn u gv me sm dressing tips fr my college life…. as ot is going to be strtd in few weeks……..
n i dont have any elder sis to suggest dresses fr my college…:)
its babes I can understand okay leave it….In your college any dress is allowed…If yes first day you should be very perfect wear simple dress which colour suits you….don’t wear very tight dress….
always do like make up…I mean if you like to do make up….to college give dark shed to eye in kajal….don’t wear heels to college…look simple, attractive, fresh, special….
thnx a lot di……..
i wll take care of all that….n ya whn ever i wll need amythng i wll ask u n i m sure u wll hlp me
ya di i wll surely take cr of that…
love u a lot….
pakka milegi sweets bs ek baar admssn ho jaye
sure babes your always welcome…
What an imagination! the way u describe the mother n daughter innocent love is very beautiful….keep up the good works… 🙂
thnk u sooo mch anku di…..
ur wlcm lovelylady…. 🙂 🙂 hey whts ur real name?