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Home»Fan Fiction»Few Things Left Unsaid….A Shivika 4S
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Few Things Left Unsaid….A Shivika 4S

MohaBy MohaMay 30, 201763 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys…I am Mohasweta…I know my name is too big. So you all can call me Moha..
I am uploading a story here, I have posted it on wattpad, so thought of posting it here. I hope you all will like it…
I am new here so desperately need your support…thanks…
Let’s start..

“It was 2 am. She took out a
               pen and a diary and let
               it all come out….
          With every word she wrote,
                   the diary became heavier
            Her heart, lighter…”

Annika gulped down her saliva as
Pinky asked her about her surname.
She remembered her days in the Orphanage and a tear trickled down her face. Shivaay was silent because it was important for him to know about her. She looked at him with her last hope. But he bowed his head down in shame that his wife doesn’t have a surname. She was feeling shameful, that she spoilt his life, she was feeling ashamed of herself. She looked here and there and saw OmRu putting their heads down in shame that in spite of their presence, their bhabhi was going through this phase. She smiled and tears started flowing from her eyes simultaneously. Pinky kept on insulting her “What Did you think of yourself ? Naam, khoon-khandan ka pata nahi aur chali hain OBEROI family ki bahu banne, Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki biwi banne…

do takke ki ladki…!!” She bear all the pain and insult with a smile because she knew this would happen. Shivaay’s thinking will not let her stay with him. She then went to Shivaay “Aapko Kuch kehna hain?” She asked him for a last time with a hope that he would tell her his feelings but she was wrong, totally wrong. His thinking stopped him from doing so. “Main tumhare baare mein Kuch nahi jaanta…!!” He said in a firm voice. Annika nodded and gave him a small smile. “Aapko Pata hain ki main bewakoof hun, gussewali hun, Tadibaaz hun, nakhrebaaz hun, sab pata hain aapko…phir bhi kehte hain Kuch nahi pata…oh! Main toh bhul gayi thi ki aap ke liye khoon-khandan ke baare mein Janna hi insaan ke baare mein Janna hota hain..!!” She said when the realization struck her. She went to OmRu and held their hands “Please forgive me you two. Main tumhare Bhaiyya ki Soch nahi badal payi…I’m so sorry…!!”

OmRu hugged her tightly. “Please go from here! Yahan rehke logo ki insult sunne ki Zaroorat nahi hain” Om said while Rudra nodded. They were teary-eyed but still told her to go. Annika understood their care for her. She gave them a slight nod. And then she stood in front of Dadi “Dadi, I’m going!” She hugged her tight….”Tu itna pyaar karti hain billu se!” Dadi whispered while she smiled and nodded. Dadi caressed her cheeks as a tear escaped her eyes. Annika took blessings from Tejvi and Shakti. She then went to Pinky, she looked aside in disgust. Annika touched her feet and bidding everyone goodbye she got out of OBEROI MANSION. No one was with her today, not even Sahil, as he was in boarding school. She was walking through the lonely road depicting her lonely life. She was all by herself now! She went to her home, and slept while crying. The next morning came, the rays of the sun touched her soft skin, and soar eyes. She consoled herself and went in search for a job. She had to survive for Sahil and for herself. She survived till now because of Shivaay but now she has to learn to live for herself. She gave interview for a primary teacher. And got the job successfully. All the day, she was surrounded with children. She loved being around them.
She bought a new home with her hard-earned money. Sahil was studying in boarding, but every weekend he came to stay with her.

A guy teacher in her school liked her a lot! But she!! Her heart was still Shivaay’s. “You have given and taken a lot from me! You have given me a reason to smile but taken away my ability to love anybody else!” She said and locked herself in her room. Her heart was getting heavy day by day. There was so much pain, and sufferings that she didn’t share with anyone. She thought to write it down…

It was 2 am. She took out a pen and a dairy, with every word she wrote, the diary became heavier, her heart, lighter. She was writing down all her pain. She was pouring out her love for him, which she couldn’t confess. There were few things which were left Unsaid. And she drifted to sleep while writing her emotions down. The whole neighborhood was in deep slumber. And No one saw a black Lexus or a blue-eyed man coming out of it.

It is not their story. It’s her story. It is about a few things which were left Unsaid. Her love was so powerful, that it forced him to come to her

That’s it for today….
Did you like it??
Pls tell me by comments if I should continue or not…

Bye
With love
Moha…

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    A Misti Bengali girl...Crazy fan of Ishqbaaz... obsessed with Shivika... Loves writing... Thank you for visiting my profile guys... Love you all...

    63 Comments

    1. Debdutta on May 30, 2017 6:11 pm

      Interesting. Plzzzz post the next part

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thank u dear…will update soon…

    2. Kajol on May 30, 2017 6:22 pm

      Awesome update asap

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:33 pm

        Thanks a lot….???

    3. Honey on May 30, 2017 6:25 pm

      Awesome…pls continue

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:37 pm

        Hehe.. thank you so much….❤❤

    4. anshikamittal on May 30, 2017 6:28 pm

      Awesome moha………loved ????

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:38 pm

        Anshi???? You are on TU…
        Well I am glad you liked it…muahhhh❤❤

      • anshikamittal on May 30, 2017 10:51 pm

        ??

    5. CrazygirlS.P on May 30, 2017 6:45 pm

      Awesome Moha❤

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:56 pm

        Thanks dear…???

    6. Aashi on May 30, 2017 6:47 pm

      khub bhalo hoeche aajger update taa
      its beautiful & heartfelt
      luved it
      update soon

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:57 pm

        Thank u re. Amar khub bhalo laglo after hearing that you liked it….?

    7. Nita D on May 30, 2017 6:48 pm

      It’s awesome Moha…plz post next part soon….

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:57 pm

        Thanks dear…will update soon…!❤

    8. Trolls.Nets on May 30, 2017 7:06 pm

      How you manage to write so well? How you manage to write down the feelings so well? I feel like crying. Ok I know I have already read you story (maybe you don’t know?) but still every time I read I feel like crying. Shivaay was seriously, uh! Kuch kehna hi nahi hai uss ke bare mein.

      You know if I was there with Annika, I would make her accept the teacher’s proposal. Shivaay seriously doesn’t deserve her. And that Pinky is ridiculous! (We all know that?) marr dalo usko??? (aisa toh nahi ho raha pata hai)

      Anyways, see! I am here, as I said I will comment, I commented. Obviously, after all, ami apnar chotto sona bon????? update soon di. Love you, muah! – Neeti

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 10:59 pm

        Thanks a lot dear….hehe…Of couse I know that you have read it…
        It’s so overwhelming to hear such compliments….
        Amar choto Misti bon…
        Love u.

    9. pooja26 on May 30, 2017 7:35 pm

      o god !!!!!!!!
      just loved it !!!!!!! yr……
      post asap……
      tc……

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:01 pm

        Thank you dear….will update Asap ?

    10. Nusaiba on May 30, 2017 7:38 pm

      Moha apii,eta nah xoss chilo.Nxt epir jnno odhir agroho niye wait korchi.

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:02 pm

        Thank you…best din wait korabo na dear…will update soon….?

    11. Sagithya on May 30, 2017 7:41 pm

      Awesome yaar

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:07 pm

        Thanks yaar….?

    12. Nithu on May 30, 2017 7:48 pm

      loved it

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:08 pm

        Thank you dear….

    13. Nanda on May 30, 2017 7:48 pm

      Superbbb.Such powerful words Pierce into our hearts.I must say you are great witter.Your choice of words is excellent.Waiting for your next update

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:09 pm

        Really??? Thank you so much dear…
        Your kind words really encourage me…
        I am glad you liked it…❤

    14. nikita_jai29 on May 30, 2017 7:52 pm

      Nice one dear eargly waiting for the next update

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:10 pm

        Thank you soooo much….??

    15. Dhar on May 30, 2017 8:00 pm

      Awesome episode moha ???plzz do post the next update ASAP

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:10 pm

        Thank you dear…I will update asap…

    16. dwet on May 30, 2017 8:04 pm

      Loved it.? please post next ASAP.

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:11 pm

        Thanks a ton!!! Will update soon…

    17. Anu16 on May 30, 2017 8:19 pm

      Amazing…

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:12 pm

        Thanks….

    18. Niriha on May 30, 2017 8:51 pm

      Awesome…loved it waiting for next update soon

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:13 pm

        Thank you Rey…..will update soon….?

    19. sanjana on May 30, 2017 8:53 pm

      awesome one tell me you profile name on wattpad

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:14 pm

        Thank you dear…..my wattpad username is Mohasweta only….?

    20. Aashi26 on May 30, 2017 8:58 pm

      Hi moha di welcome to tu I have read your stories on wattpad and I love them do continue….waiting for your next post…will u like to accept me as ur little sis di….

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:16 pm

        Hello dear….Ohhh!! You have read my stories on wattpad…. that’s really cool yaar…I will update soon…
        I am sooo overwhelmed!!! Definitely I will accept you as my lil sis….
        There is no question about it…
        Love you…❤❤❤

    21. alekhika20 on May 30, 2017 9:12 pm

      Superb update

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:18 pm

        Thank you yaar…..?

    22. Jerry_36 on May 30, 2017 9:30 pm

      Hey Moha, it’s amazing. Your writing skills are fab. Do post the next one soon. You are amazing❤

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:21 pm

        Thank you yaar…it’s so sweet of you…
        I will update asap ?

    23. Shivika on May 30, 2017 9:53 pm

      Awesome….
      Emotions were expressed beautifully….
      wating fr d nxt… 🙂

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:22 pm

        Thank you dear….
        I am glad you liked it….
        ???

    24. Maria on May 30, 2017 10:05 pm

      Mistu….Loved it update soon………………………..

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:24 pm

        Mariyu??? Don’t tell me that you are also on TU like Anshi???
        Really???
        BTw, I can’t say thank you to you…so I am very happy that you liked it…
        Muahhhh….??

    25. Saalini on May 30, 2017 10:53 pm

      Moha baby its saalini here???good to see you on telky updates…you remember me i am crazyshals ur wattpad friend

      • Moha on May 30, 2017 11:45 pm

        You are also on TU?? I mean almost everyone on wattpad is on this site…
        And of course I remember you..
        How could I forget my bestie….Muahhhh…???

    26. Banita on May 31, 2017 1:19 am

      Intersting starting…..

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 7:51 am

        Thank you yaar….❤❤

    27. Hirah on May 31, 2017 4:46 am

      Hey moha you are here too ? Btw it was Fantastic….

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 7:53 am

        Hey Hirah…you are here too…!!! Hehe…thanks yaar…??

    28. shashi on May 31, 2017 6:46 am

      WOW superb. Interesting eagerly waiting for next epi

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 7:54 am

        Thanks dear….I am glad you liked it….will update Asap..
        ??

    29. Haridhra on May 31, 2017 1:24 pm

      Awsm di .. Waiting 4 next shot post it Asap plz..

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 5:53 pm

        Thank you dear…..I will post it soon…??

    30. Ankita27 on May 31, 2017 4:05 pm

      Amazing.. loved it..

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thanks yaar…it means a lot…??

    31. sabhya on May 31, 2017 4:16 pm

      Like it…? Loved it.. Plss continue..?

      • Moha on May 31, 2017 5:57 pm

        Thank you..I am glad you loved it…I feel so encouraged!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so so much….
        ???

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