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Home»Fan Fiction»Thereafter i felt 4 u.. ( A Twinj os)
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Thereafter i felt 4 u.. ( A Twinj os)

taraBy taraAugust 25, 2016Updated:August 25, 201653 Comments5 Mins Read
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It has been long since we r chatting..bt none of us had the courage t au “I love u”. I didn’t have, bt i knew he was no different. It was evident from his message that he al loved me ….there was no mystery in that..bt there was a greater mystery which remained unsolved since the day we started chatting.
The great mystery would have remained a mystery if i hadn’t taken the initiative …yes being a girl i took the first step. Oops !! i forgot 2 mntn my name is twinkle and this is my story , my parents kept my name twinkle may be in the hope that i will twinkle like a star …lol bad joke…but life had played many bad games wid me…but i didn’t give up. I chose t fight back…nd i did that by forgetting my real life ..yes i entered a virtual life,… a life where everything may be fake bt somehow the emotion connected by the emoticon turned out t be true…
“Only a few month passed since m chatting wid him yet i feel z cloze to him…the happiest day of my life is about t come..uff m so excited… yeah… we r gnna meet tmrw..can u blve it?? Omg Omg…!! i have planned all.. bt hw will i face him.. i mean.. what huld we ay 2 each other ?? while chatting we have a lt 2 ay bt idk what will hppn tmrw….!!” …. this iz a part f my diary… i feel illy t read it…. y?? Well fr that u guyz need t read mre…
That day …i had dressed up properly and was waiting fr him…at the cafe… i was very anxious…. bt all my anxiousness turned into disappointment when he didn’t cme…
I reached hme , freshened up nd then logged in… he was online !! i became furious
Me – what are u doing?? Chatting wid utherz … what du u think uf urzelf?? I wa zp dumb t have trusted u…
I zend him all at unce.. i waz literally crying… i had begaun t luv him..nd he??
After a few minute a reply came..
“ keytwin… (that was my name in the account) u there??”
He- luk m zurry abt what hpnd…. bt i didn’t have the gutz t meet u…
I waz zhcked!!
Me- y? We had planned 2 meet..
He- i have been hididng a truth frm u.. z i thught b4 meeting i hud tell u that..then if u want we can meet…
Me- what??
He- keytwin… u knw .. m married…
Fr a mment i waz blank…
He- keytwin??
Me- yeah…
He- r u angry?? Yeah u hud be…
Me- na m nt.. du 1 thing letz meet tmrw..will u be free??
He- what?? U wanna meet me?/
Me- yup…
He- k then.. zame cafe…
Me- dne..
Idk what his reaction was bt i was happy…
The next mrng i went 2 the cafe again… this time i waz sure he will cme… half n hour passed.. i tried 2 be patient… 45 min passed.. i was irked… he betrayed me again…
I waz abuut 2 leave when my phne ringed.. he pinged me… “hey keytwin.. i knw u r waiting 4 me… u knw when i told u my secret last night i thought u will nt talk 2 me anymore..bt u agreed 2 meet… well that means u also have some feelings… bt 2day i realized m cheating n my wife… even if we r nt a happy couple.. i should nt have done this… so i won’t be chatting wid u anymore.. bt yes i promised 2 meet i will do that for sure… m waiting outside the cafe… in a blue shirt..”
Reading this i suddenly started respecting that person… i went out.. i saw a tall man standing in a blue shirt and white trouser…. i went near him and called “umm ujarna?? (that waz hiz name..i knw itz funny…bt cant help it) iz it u?”
He turned back at unce…
I waz zhcked… z waz he….
“twinkle??” he zaid..
Me- kunj….
————————————————————————————————————————————–i guess by nw u have understand the whole incident…. yeah he was mr. kunj sarna… n i m none other than mrs. Twinkle kunj sarna…. we were married a year back bt we were nt happy wid our marriage…z we started chatting n networking sites… nd rest u knw….
After that incident both of us were ashamed… bt he was a hero in my eyes after what he had said… nd we bth knw that we luv each other… this indeed is a beautiful feeling.. t fall 4 ur hubby after marriage… i luv him.. nd m proud t say that!!
The end…
Idk hw it was.. bt i need ur cmmnt good r bad..so plzzzzz cmnt.. nd let me knw ur views …

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    53 Comments

    1. SidVee on August 25, 2016 4:29 pm

      Awesome and superb os.. really loved it.. 🙂 and I wanted to ask you one thing.. when will you post ur ff? M eagerly waiting for it

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:13 pm

        thnk u dear… umm idk abt my ff.. hpe 2 update it soon…

    2. sanjanaagrawal on August 25, 2016 4:31 pm

      Nice …. but many of ur spellings were wrong sry if u felt bad …

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:15 pm

        no no itz okay.. actually my keyboard iz disturbing … s it happnd.. anyway thnx

    3. Monica on August 25, 2016 4:37 pm

      Loved it. Write more x

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:16 pm

        thnx

    4. Romaisha on August 25, 2016 4:42 pm

      Tara yaar im missing you and your ffs … And abt this os it was really cute and awesome 🙂 was shocked at the end but yet soooo happy !! 🙂 …

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:17 pm

        thnk u dear.. i knw u all r missing my ff bt m very busy..yet i will try t write..thnx again

    5. Sayeeda on August 25, 2016 4:48 pm

      Amazing OS… Awesome..
      Tara…. Our shining star please yrr post ur ff…. Itne din hogaye itnezar krte krte ab toh itnezar ka meetha phal dedo…
      Plz post ur ff….
      Love u ???

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:22 pm

        hey sayeeda…
        thnx yaar.. thnx a lt…
        i will try t update my ff dnt wrry

    6. loveleen on August 25, 2016 5:06 pm

      hey tara …wer were u ?? well os ws so cute n sweet as u…btw wen r u planning to post ur ff “her journals”

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:24 pm

        me?? at hme.. haha..
        i had busy schedule … anyway thnx dearie..
        well abt that ff idk.. the track messed up… may be sme time in future..

    7. Ayu(shreya) on August 25, 2016 5:10 pm

      Fab os!!!! Amazing❤️

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:25 pm

        thnkew

    8. aamu on August 25, 2016 5:15 pm

      oh my god!!!
      m i dreaming or wat……

      TARA!!!
      missed u sho much…remeber me??
      i had msged u…..

      first of alll…
      dis was….
      .
      .

      ummm…i dont liked it sholly
      l
      .
      .
      .
      .
      .
      coz i loved it….hehee..thank u for giving such a beautiful n cute os…..
      n r u going to update ur ff or not yaa?
      waiting for u like……
      .
      pls come soon n continue…
      ab wait kiya hai….fruit b milna hi chahiye na!
      but u can giv epi of ur f we will manage…hehe
      bahbye
      muah love u

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:26 pm

        hey aamu..hw can i frgt u yaar…
        thnx 4 ur cmmnt and ur msgs… i will try t cntinue …

    9. Sidhanshi on August 25, 2016 5:54 pm

      Amazing os..

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:26 pm

        thanks

    10. Angita on August 25, 2016 6:11 pm

      Really cute yaar

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:27 pm

        thnx angita

    11. Fan on August 25, 2016 6:51 pm

      Awesome os tara!! Missed u n ir writing a lot..plz post ff soon..waiting for it..

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:27 pm

        hey fan… thnx …i will pst it..

    12. Sameera on August 25, 2016 6:52 pm

      Amazing very very cute
      Loved it yaar Tara

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:28 pm

        thnkew dear

    13. Shatakshi on August 25, 2016 6:52 pm

      Hey Tara
      Long time no seen
      N the os was Amazing
      I was having a surprised expression all tge time
      Plzzz do continue ur ff I m missing
      Love u❤❤

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:29 pm

        hey i missed u man…. bt i read few f ur ssn 2 epis… thugh cudnt keep track after sme time.. bt thnx fr cmntng.. luv u..

    14. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 25, 2016 7:16 pm

      awesome amazing

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:30 pm

        thnkzzzz

    15. panchi on August 25, 2016 7:30 pm

      Hey tara, missed u and ur ff a lot dear …. and d os was lovely and sweet …… tara when will u post ur ff dear … eagerly waiting fr that……

      • tara on August 25, 2016 8:31 pm

        thnxxx m glad….. really..
        i will try t update it fast..

    16. SidMin on August 25, 2016 8:06 pm

      Tara it was a cute and sweet OS Loved it 🙂

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:14 am

        thnx dear

    17. Fatarajo on August 25, 2016 8:15 pm

      tara too good finally u r back with os I missed ur stories very badly dear

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:15 am

        aww.. dnt wrry jo… i will be here nly… btw thnkew

    18. dreamer...arundhati on August 25, 2016 8:49 pm

      Tara this was one of the most wonderful piece i ever read.. Lovely

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:16 am

        hey tysm…tht really means a lot

    19. Suni on August 25, 2016 8:58 pm

      Hey Tara!!! Where were you these days huh.. :/??
      Ur Os was awesome and sweet… ❤
      Loved it.. ?
      When will you continue ur ff?? Im missing ur ff yr…

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:17 am

        thnx a lot.. yeah i will

    20. Shakti on August 25, 2016 9:19 pm

      The story is Simply Awesome….
      I m sure that This story made each & every reader smile….

      The way u wrote about emotions being true even though in virtual world one doesn’t know the other in person…is really touching & somewhat true….

      Loved your writing…

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:19 am

        u knw what.. nthng makes me mre happy than sme1 appreciating my writing style… tysm dear.. m very happy..

    21. sujina on August 25, 2016 10:44 pm

      wow it was awsome…i was shocked whn they turn out 2 b husband n wife…so cute yaar…come wid more…loved it…

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:19 am

        thnkew…

    22. Shonaa... on August 25, 2016 10:48 pm

      Hey tara glad to see u back…. d os was amazing loved it nd waiting for ur ff also update soon…. nd yaa missed u soo much ab phr se khi mt jana…. love u….

    23. Shonaa... on August 25, 2016 10:50 pm

      Tara glad to see u back…. d os was amazing dear…. missed u alot plz ab khi mt bhag jana nd update ur ff also…. missing it…. love u….

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:21 am

        hey shona di.. i missed u 2…nehi m nhi bhagungi.. haha…
        btw thnkew.. luv u

    24. Maggi on August 26, 2016 7:07 am

      Awsm os….
      Luvd it ?

      • tara on August 26, 2016 8:42 am

        thnkew

    25. Sana(sanu) on August 26, 2016 9:04 pm

      Wow tara after a long gap …. Amazing

      • tara on August 27, 2016 6:00 pm

        thanks sana

    26. baby on August 27, 2016 2:08 pm

      tara amazing yeah vry cute bt yah shock toh tha bht bada heheh
      luvd it cntinue ryting

      • tara on August 27, 2016 6:01 pm

        thnkew baby

    27. SIDMIN-daamini on August 27, 2016 2:14 pm

      Hey tara
      Lovely dear
      It was so cute ???????????
      Keep writing sweetie

      • tara on August 27, 2016 6:01 pm

        aww tysm dear

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