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The Twisted game of Destiny-Trapped ep.18 IMMJ2 Fanfic

ParitaBy ParitaMay 13, 202173 Comments7 Mins Read
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Heyy guys, thanks for all the support from the previous episode! I’m glad ya’ll are liking my FF. Please keep commenting and supporting in the comments section. The previous episode’s link. Sorry there won’t be pics today, i didn’t find any suitable.

The Twisted game of Destiny-The Deal ep.17 IMMJ2 Fanfic

Riva: (fought with the guy pointing the gun at VR) How dare you!! (anger) How dare you hit da… Vansh uncle!! (she punched him continuously)

Riva and Rivan fought with them and VR joined them. Vansh handled Chang, he was in complete anger for the betrayal. He saw Riva and Rivan fighting professionally and a smile appeared on his face. He was proud of them for their skills. Chang was strong in defense, he managed to get out of Vansh’s hold while one of Chang’s men tried covering him up. One of Chang’s men came and held Vansh tight almost strangulating him however Rivan arrived back hugged him trying to loosen his hold. He kicked on his back and managed to free Vansh, they both started beating him up, leaving him unconscious.

Vansh: You fight pretty well! (panting)

Rivan: Black belt! (smiling)

Just then both of them heard a scream. They looked to see a Chang’s man hitting Riva continuously. Anger bubbled up within them and they went to him. They bashed him up for hitting her. Chang all of a sudden exited the room with his remaining men leaving Angre, Riva, Rivan and Vansh with the dead and unconscious bodies. He locked the room and smiled from outside. He took out a remote and pressed a button. Vansh and Rivan ignored Chang and rushed to Riva, who was on the floor wincing in pain.

Vansh: (running to Riva who is on the floor) Riva!! Where did you get hurt??

Rivan: Ri!! Are you okay? Try and get up, we need to escape from here (concern)

Riva: (writhing in pain and crying) Help me get up! I won’t be able to (wrapping her hands around her waist)

Vansh and Rivan helped her to stand up but she wasn’t be able to stand erect. All three of them were in bruises and blood, all over their faces and part of their bodies. Their clothes all messed up, covered in dirt and blood. Vansh sensed something and looked around to find smoke appearing in the room.

Vansh: What the hell is this? What kind of smoke is this! (coughing and trying to brush it off) Angre! Try get to the doors and try to open them. I’m trying here! Angre!! Angre!!

He didn’t get any response from him. He wondered where he had gone, or was it the smoke that had affected him. He got worried for him, little did he know that Angre had tied a piece of cloth he found near his nose to prevent himself from breathing but it didn’t help! Angre had guessed it was a poisonous gas and before her could have told them to try and cover their noses he gradually started passing out.

Vansh: Shit! Angre seems to have passed out! Is this poisonous gas (he looked at Riva and Rivan shocked and emotionally) I’ve got to get you both out of here!!

Rivan: Poisonous gas!! (scared)

Riva: (struggling) We all need to get out of here! Let’s be quick

Vansh: You both will leave first… I mean it. You will have to follow me and don’t panic. Trust me I won’t let anything happen to you both!! (assuring)

Rivan: We are going out of this place together, we will stay put with you, together.

Vansh: Don’t be stubborn here!

Riva: If we are stubborn then you’re not less! Please stop it and let’s solve this, we will go out together otherwise die together!!

Vansh: Shut up!! You’re not going to die…. I can’t afford to lose another person because of me!

Rivan: We aren’t leaving you. Let’s try open the doors and windows. Riva try sit down, you’re bleeding profusely.

Riva: Yea I will first go help uncle! (struggling and coughing) The smoke is spreading to fas…. (coughs)fast.

Vansh: (coughing) We don’t (cough) have much time!!

Rivan: A few mins (coughs) and (coughs) we will pass out. These windows are locked from outside!!

Vansh: So is the (coughs and breathes heavily) door!! I’m not going to spare him

Weakness overpowers him and he loses his control and is about to fall but Rivan holds him back. Vansh starts losing his conscious while he looks over to Riva who’s already unconscious. Vansh pointed towards Riva. Rivan craned his neck towards the direction and shouted out to Riva.

Rivan: Ri!! Get (struggling) up

Vansh: Let’s (weak and abt to faint) go to her

Rivan and Vansh try to put all their energy to walk up to where Riva was lying unconscious. They helplessly fell down and tried to reach her. They reached out their hands towards her and dragged their body towards her. Rivan came closer to her and tried to wake her up with the remaining energy he had, Vansh had fallen semi-unconscious. He reached out and successfully held her hand, jerking her to wake up, but there was no response. By now the smoke had spread and they had inhaled the poisonous gas, leading to their current state.

Rivan took the other hand and one of her eye slightly opened, but had no energy to open it wide. It was as if she needed their support to make it through this time. She glanced once at her brother and father and smiled slightly. Vansh looked at her in pain. Why did the twins have to suffer he thought? Rivan hopefully looked at her, trying to encourage her to try and stay awake with his eyes but he knew they wouldn’t make it out.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
(Still, somewhere inside me,)

Baaki thodi si hai zindagi
(there is a little life remaining..)

Jagi dhadkan nayi
(A new heartbeat came up,)

Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
(I got to know that I am still alive..)

Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
(Some such tenacity, is there in this moment,)

Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
(where was this moment of mine..)

Ab hai saamne
(now it’s in front of me,)

Issey chhoo loon zaraa
(Shall i touch it)

Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
(should I die or should I live a little..)

Khushiyaan choom loon
(should I kiss joy)

Yaa ro loon zaraa
(or should I cry a little,)

Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
(should I die or live for a while..)

She closed her eyes. Was she never to wake up again? Followed by Vansh and then Rivan. All three lied there lifeless, unconscious, wounded and blo*dy, their hands in each other’s hands, holding tight. Were they going to make it out?

Precap: No precap today 😂 Suspense time

I hope you enjoyed reading this. The more the response the earlier I will post 😜 Please let me know how you found it in the comments section. Please keep supporting like you all always do.

Question: So do you think they will make it out or is it the end?

Let me know in the comments section about this question.

❤Parita❤

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    Love art, love dance, love music and love my friends and fam❤❤ Huge fan of Dhvani Bhanushali (singer) and IMMJ2

    73 Comments

    1. prapti0809 on May 13, 2021 11:08 am

      1st

      • prapti0809 on May 13, 2021 11:08 am

        will come after reading

      • Yashi on May 13, 2021 11:38 am

        When u write your os or ff.
        Pls come back

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:27 pm

        🥳🥳
        Sure

    2. prapti0809 on May 13, 2021 11:11 am

      post soon awesome parita

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:28 pm

        Thank you❤❤! I will soon dear

    3. Ishu on May 13, 2021 11:24 am

      Amazing episode

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:28 pm

        Thank you❤❤!

    4. frozen hidden on May 13, 2021 11:29 am

      3rd

      • frozen hidden on May 13, 2021 11:36 am

        Di aap to hume suspense se he mar dalogi
        BTW Amazing episode di
        And marked my present
        Pragya

      • frozen hidden on May 13, 2021 11:38 am

        And ha di agar vo angre mil gaya na mujhe then without thinking for a second I will kill him .

      • frozen hidden on May 13, 2021 4:32 pm

        chang*

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:30 pm

        🥳🥳
        Marked you present Pragya.
        Thank you❤❤! Haha suspense mein marjawan. Sure you’re welcome to kill him😂😂😂

    5. Niyati12 on May 13, 2021 11:34 am

      Outstanding pari…. It was mindblowing…. This is one of my favorite song.. I heard it first time in parichay serial and I loved it… Please post soon

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:31 pm

        Thank you❤❤! Yes it’s one mine too, specially the singer; Sonu Nigam.
        I will soon post dear

    6. Diya on May 13, 2021 11:34 am

      Awesome

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:32 pm

        Thank you❤❤!

    7. Yashi on May 13, 2021 11:37 am

      Please continue your your latest os plan.
      I want please write

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:32 pm

        Yes dear i will do that soon as well. I will try my best to do it early❤❤

    8. Ayesha on May 13, 2021 11:38 am

      ❤

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:33 pm

        ❤❤

    9. Akirti on May 13, 2021 11:38 am

      Nice

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:33 pm

        Thank you❤❤

    10. Attractiveuser on May 13, 2021 11:48 am

      Parita you just made me cry🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺! That song🥺😭😭! Wonderful episode ❤️🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️! obviously they all will be alive🥺

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:35 pm

        Sorry yaar if it was too emotional😂😂I’m in love with the song too. Thank you❤❤!
        Let’s see

    11. Mennahussein55 on May 13, 2021 11:48 am

      Lovely and amazing episode

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:35 pm

        Thank you❤❤di

    12. Bhuvaneshwari on May 13, 2021 11:52 am

      This was amazing 😍❤️❤️❤️… Especially Vansh, Rivan, Riva moments… Maybe Angre isn’t bad… Idk…. Pls post the next episode soon 🤩❤️ pls…

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:36 pm

        Thank you❤❤ I’m glad you liked it. Maybe he is or not let’s see. I will soon post dear

    13. Maanvika on May 13, 2021 11:55 am

      Awesome episode…loved it 🥰

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:44 pm

        Thank you❤❤!

    14. RiansHLoveR on May 13, 2021 12:37 pm

      Aawww u made me cry🥺🥺🥺🥺 angre died or alive? If alive then i think he will save them. God and you knows what will happen😩😩😩😩plz post soon parita🥺🥺🥺 aayu’s puppy eyes😢😢😢

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:45 pm

        😁🥺🥺 He’s alive for sure but i myself don’t know if he’s going to be inside or outside!.😂😂Ofc only I and God knows…. I will soon post dear. 😂😂

    15. Priyanka Thakur on May 13, 2021 1:14 pm

      Awesome episode Pari you really made me emotional with your episode and song also I wanted to know Vansh that Riva and Rivan are his kids only so suspense yaar I couldn’t handle it anymore eagerly waiting for next update

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:49 pm

        Thank you❤❤di. I’m glad you liked it.
        It will come out soon di, just a bit more of waiting. I will soon post

    16. Ravneet on May 13, 2021 1:21 pm

      Amazing episode waiting for next part

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:49 pm

        Thank you❤❤dear… will post soon

    17. Pomu on May 13, 2021 1:21 pm

      Amazing episode dear. I am sure that they will be safe. How can Angre betray Vansh😪

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:51 pm

        Thank you❤❤ Let’s see, if they will be.
        For some reason he has.. let’s see

    18. Mary on May 13, 2021 1:28 pm

      Awsome awsome awsome
      Update next soon
      Puppy eyes.saying plz

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 10:59 pm

        Thank you❤❤
        I will soon do dear

    19. AarushiSoni on May 13, 2021 1:30 pm

      Obviously they have to yaar… They will for sure.. but what happened to Riva? She wasn’t able to get up put her hands around waist???? She fine na??? Amazing episode.. so emotional song depicts well.. pls post soon.. suspense is killing me

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:09 pm

        Yes they hv to😂😂Some thing to think about dear… i think you’re the only one who noticed it!😁It will be revealed soon. Thank you❤❤ I will post soon….. i don’t intend to kill you with my suspense😂😂❤

    20. ITzMrsProvoke on May 13, 2021 1:37 pm

      WOW! Amazing fan fic…keep on posting! No jks, this is some good content! :heart

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:22 pm

        Thank you❤❤Aisha!! Lots of love to you😘😘 Keep loving and supporting Aish

    21. Tanvi_5117 on May 13, 2021 1:43 pm

      Yaar!! This was so much full of feelings…. Every time I read coughs I felt that sound in my mind..! Please post Asap

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:44 pm

        Thank you❤❤ I’m glad you enjoyed it.
        I will soon post dear

    22. Scarlet Flower on May 13, 2021 3:26 pm

      Amazing update…No precap😨

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:45 pm

        Thank you❤❤! Yes dear wanted to keep you all in suspense

    23. Jayashree on May 13, 2021 3:28 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️. It’s really super 👌😍😍❤️😍❤️😍. Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️😍.

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:45 pm

        Thank you❤❤! No problem dear, glad you liked it

    24. Priyadharshini on May 13, 2021 3:28 pm

      So nice updates 😊😍❤️
      Super episode 👌😍😍❤️

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:46 pm

        Thank you❤❤!😘😍😍

    25. JJ on May 13, 2021 3:28 pm

      It’s really super and awesome 💖😊😊

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:46 pm

        Thank you❤❤!😁😘

    26. Vkjhp on May 13, 2021 3:29 pm

      Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:46 pm

        Thank you❤❤😘😍🥰

    27. Sree on May 13, 2021 3:29 pm

      Fantastic episode 👌😍😍❤️😍

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:47 pm

        Thank you❤❤!😍😍😍

    28. Priyanshi_13 on May 13, 2021 3:56 pm

      Lovely episode dear …loved it ❤️

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:47 pm

        Thank you❤❤! I’m glad you did

    29. Siddhi_ on May 13, 2021 3:58 pm

      Dude!!! I cried 😂

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:53 pm

        Sorry yaar😂😂❤

    30. Annoyinguser on May 13, 2021 6:06 pm

      Amazing episode post soon

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:54 pm

        Thank you❤❤! I will soon dear

    31. Fatima on May 13, 2021 6:29 pm

      Amazing episode…. I think Angre will save them

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:55 pm

        Thank you❤❤! Let’s maybe

    32. Gabriela on May 13, 2021 7:47 pm

      God, what an episode !!!!!!!!! SUPERB!!!!! What a wonderful team Vansh and the twins! I simply liked from beginning to end, the lines, the gestures, the spirit of sacrifice and saving the lives of others. This is definitely not the end. Don’t you dare kill them! Because I come after you and find you and make you resurrect them. I am waiting for the continuation, this chapter kept me breathless. ❤❤❤

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:56 pm

        Thank you❤❤ di!! I’m glad you enjoyed how i brght the scene out. Hahah yes i won’t dare to 😂😂😂 It means a lot to me di, thank you for the support. ❤❤❤🥰

    33. Riansh #siri# on May 13, 2021 7:53 pm

      It’s siper duper parita 😍…you are amazing…they all will be fine😁..pls post soon

      • Parita on May 13, 2021 11:57 pm

        Thank you❤❤! Let’s see… sure i will post soon

    34. Sweetie on May 14, 2021 12:18 pm

      Amazing as always

      • Parita on May 14, 2021 1:51 pm

        Thank you❤❤!

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