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The Twisted game of Destiny-The Deal ep.17 IMMJ2 Fanfic

ParitaBy ParitaMay 12, 202163 Comments6 Mins Read
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The deal

Heyy guys, thanks for all the support from the previous episode! I’m glad ya’ll are liking my FF. Please keep commenting and supporting in the comments section. The previous episode’s link

The Twisted game of Destiny-ep 16. What’s Mine is Always Mine IMMJ2 Fanfic

 

Riva: Rivan!! (Rivan ran away) Idiot! Now, just waiting for tomorrow and we follow dad!

The Next day

Vansh: Angre! Make sure this house is secured, I don’t want anything going wrong here! Chang is very dangerous! After the deal he may decide to attack me or my family and you know I can’t let that happen at any cost! Take the diamonds and follow me! (left to the car)

Angre: Yes boss!

Riva: Riv, let’s go quick!

Rivan: Ri you go, I’m following you! But how will we follow them?

Riva: We can hide in the backseat. But for that we need to distract dad and Angre uncle.

Rivan: Got an idea. Pass your phone.

Riva: Why mine, use yours!

Rivan: Uhh what do you want to hide in your phone? You’ve got a boyfriend? (suspicious)

Riva: (irritated) You know what yes, not one, 100 boyfriends! Is that enough

Rivan: I pity them, how will they handle you! (chuckled)

Riva: Are you doing your work or shall I leave you alone and do it my way!

Rivan: Fine I’m doing. (took out his phone and called Angre, changed his voice) Hello Mr Angre, this is your well-wisher speaking! Go to your room quickly, there’s someone who’s trying to kidnap your wife!

Angre: What the hell! (to Vansh) Boss someone just called me and said someone’s trying to kidnap Ishani!

Vansh: What!! Let’s go (ullu banaya bara maza aaya😜😂)

They entered the hall and were walking to the room, while Riva and Rivan took the opportunity and snuck into the backseat. They curled up to hide themselves in a way that they couldn’t be seen. While the two men walked up the stairs in a hurry when Vansh thought

Vansh: Wait Angre! No one can kidnap Ishani! She will do anything to stop that person, she can shout at the top of her lungs, she can hit different things on him, and she can even hurl abuses that will push the kidnapper away from this house! He won’t even think of coming back!(chuckled) And for now there’s nothing of that sort that happened! Meaning it was a prank call.

Angre: you’re right, her scream is louder than a witch’s! (Vansh glared at him) Sorry

Vansh: I agree with that! (laughed) Anyway we are getting late for the deal. Let’s go. (went to the car and drove off)

At Chang’s hideout. (C for Chang and VR for Vansh)

C: So Mr VR you very well know that I don’t accept betrayers. There is no place for them! So you better not…

VR: (cutting him) Stop right there Chang! (commanding angry voice) Death itself has to take permission from me before approaching me so betrayal, NAHH! I hate betrayers!

Rivan: (whispering to Riva. They were witnessing everything from the back) Woah!

Riva: Come on, if you keep on blabbering how am I supposed to listen to what he’s saying. So Shut up!! (Rivan made a face)

They had hidden themselves behind spare boxes that were arranged at the back of the hideout. They were in such an angle that they could see and hear everything that took place.

C: Give me the money and I’ll hand you the diamonds!

VR: Angre!

A: Yes Boss! (he brought in the bags) Here you go Boss!

VR: Chang! Don’t touch them yet, I haven’t given the permission to yet!

C: You’re crossing your limits VR! You can’t boss around me!

VR: Interesting, Very Interesting! VR doesn’t cross limits but instead sets limits! (opening the bags) Amd here are the papers for the property.

C: Perfect! (signaling his men)

Riva: What was that signal for? Is he planning to betray Dad?

Rivan: I doubt he can! (taking his phone out) Even if he does, we’ve got proof. (smirking)

Riva: Really, you recorded? Oh thank God he finally sent some brains in your empty head!

Rivan: Oh really! Empty brain huh? Then if you have brains then why didn’t you think about it earlier?

Riva: So that I give you the opportunity to think (smiling) OMG!

She looked ahead of them to find VR and his men at gunpoint. Chang had double crossed Vansh, he wanted to escape with money and also didn’t want to hand in the diamonds.

VR: Chang!! You wouldn’t reform will you! I knew you were going to do something so silly!

C: Just admit your defeat

VR: Never!

Riva: I told you! He double crossed Dad as well Aryan and Kabir mamu yesterday!

Rivan: We need to do something! Wait did you notice something? Why isn’t anyone holding on to Angre uncle? Is he…

Riva: I think you’re right! But why would he do that if he’s Dad’s best man! (realizing look) Interesting! Very interesting! What if he’s involved in the….

Rivan: (telepathy) No way Ri! Ridiculous, I don’t believe this, you better have a reasoning for what you’re thinking!

Riva: Okay, I will but in detail later!

Rivan: I don’t know! We need to look up before we assume. But for now we need to save Dad!

Riva: Right!

They uncovered themselves from their hiding spots and approached the men, for a face off.

Rivan: Mr Chang!! (he shouted approaching them)

VR: What are you doing here! Both of you! (anger and shocked)

Riva: I don’t think this is the right time to answer that but for now it’s important to rescue you from here!

VR: Get out of here before these guys do something!

Rivan: Don’t worry they won’t be able to! (hit one of the men pointing a gun at one of the men)

Riva: (fought with the guy pointing the gun at VR) How dare you!! (anger)

Precap: Trapped!

I hope you enjoyed reading this. The more the response the earlier I will post 😜 Please let me know how you found it in the comments section. Please keep supporting like you all always do.

Question: So what do you think the twins were thinking about Angre?

Let me know in the comments section about this question.

❤Parita❤

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    63 Comments

    1. prapti0809 on May 12, 2021 11:24 am

      1st

      • prapti0809 on May 12, 2021 11:25 am

        will comeback after reading parita mam

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:28 pm

        🥳🥳Of course, good to follow your teacher’s steps

    2. prapti0809 on May 12, 2021 11:31 am

      changu baba nahi sudharne wala . amazing parita loved it. post soon plzzz . show riva and rivan anger on changu for double crossing her dad

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:29 pm

        Yeh toh definitely nahi sudharne wala. thank you!❤dear I will post soon.
        Sure i will do that but that will be later, if you don’t mind

    3. Attractiveuser on May 12, 2021 11:32 am

      2nd..will be back after reading 😂😂

      • Attractiveuser on May 12, 2021 11:37 am

        Amazing episode ❤️❤️! What really…angre😱??? Is he cheating on vansh😱😱?? Chang is..🙂🙂! Loved rivan and riva that they came to rescue their dad even when they know that it’s dangerous ❤️❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:29 pm

        ofc🥳🥳😂😂 good to follow teacher’s steps

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:31 pm

        Thank you!❤dear. Yess him. Maybe let’s see if he is or not.
        They’re really brave and can do anything for their family, inherited from dad and mom only😂😂

    4. Priyanshi_13 on May 12, 2021 11:42 am

      Amazing episode parita ❣️ loved it ❤️ post more soon ❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:31 pm

        Thank you!❤di. I will soon do

    5. frozen hidden on May 12, 2021 11:55 am

      4th

      • frozen hidden on May 12, 2021 11:56 am

        Will come after reading
        Marked my present
        Pragya

      • frozen hidden on May 12, 2021 12:57 pm

        amazing episode di
        but plz angre ko dushman mat banana vansh ka 🥺🥺

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:32 pm

        🥳🥳Marked you present😂😂😂
        Thank you!❤dear I’m sorry, banana padega😢😢

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:50 pm

        depends, agar mere ming change hua toh phir dekhenge kisko kya banana hai😂😂

      • frozen hidden on May 13, 2021 8:20 am

        as you wish 😁

    6. Jashanpreet Kaur on May 12, 2021 11:57 am

      Nice ep but am disappointed becoz it’s short😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 but good

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:33 pm

        Thank you!❤dear. I will try my best to post longer ones as i have to go to school (physically) so it becomes a bit difficult. But i will do my best.

    7. Ishu on May 12, 2021 11:59 am

      Amazing episode

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:33 pm

        Thank you!❤dear

    8. Manya on May 12, 2021 12:02 pm

      They thought why none holding angre at gun point .they are thinking he might have involved in these am I right or Am I right!

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:33 pm

        Yes Manya, you’re right, maybe he is involved or maybe he isn’t. Let’s see, stay tuned

    9. Yashi on May 12, 2021 12:15 pm

      Awesome

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:34 pm

        Thank you!❤dear

    10. Ayesha on May 12, 2021 12:15 pm

      Nice

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:34 pm

        Thank you!❤dear

    11. Akirti on May 12, 2021 12:16 pm

      ❤

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:34 pm

        ❤❤❤

    12. Riansh1212 on May 12, 2021 12:57 pm

      This Ff has another level! The story is superb and the thrill and suspense always up to the mark. Loving it❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:35 pm

        Thank you!❤di. Glad to know you’re liking it. Pls keep supporting😘

    13. Mennahussein55 on May 12, 2021 1:04 pm

      Amazing episode.
      Loved it so much.

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:35 pm

        Thank you!❤di

    14. 1234Aayu on May 12, 2021 1:04 pm

      Amazing….as usual…loved it..

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:35 pm

        Thank you!❤ I’m glad you loved it

    15. Ravneet on May 12, 2021 1:47 pm

      Nice update plz post update soon

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:36 pm

        Thank you!❤dear I will soon do

    16. Niyati12 on May 12, 2021 1:54 pm

      I guess Vansh’s children is more talented than him 🤫…. full on spy more with vr attitude…Awesome…will be waiting for you

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:37 pm

        Haha yes, after all inherited from mom and dad!!😂😂 A mix of both but at a higher level😉😜
        Thank you!❤Will soon post

    17. ITzMrsProvoke on May 12, 2021 2:27 pm

      Great one dude! Keep on going! 🙂

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:38 pm

        Thank you!❤ Aish/Aisha!!😘😘 Keep supporting, love!!❤❤

    18. Scarlet Flower on May 12, 2021 2:55 pm

      Nice update…Chang double crossed Vansh😨

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:39 pm

        Thank you!❤dear. Yes as usual, like he always did

    19. Rukaiya on May 12, 2021 3:09 pm

      Wow❤❤it’s amazing👍👍 I hope angre is not a backstabber

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:39 pm

        Thank you!❤di. Let’s see but let me leak something- he mostly is😜

    20. Priyanka Thakur on May 12, 2021 4:46 pm

      Amazing episode Pari but also I wanted Vansh to know Riva and Rivan as his kids eagerly waiting for next update

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:40 pm

        Thank you!❤di. It is on its way but it might take a bit longer, as there’s all the past that’s remaining.

    21. Chhavi on May 12, 2021 5:02 pm

      Yaaaaay i am too much excited for next one

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:40 pm

        Thank you!❤I will soon post it

    22. AarushiSoni on May 12, 2021 5:32 pm

      Listen, u r good girl na.. u won’t do anything wrong… Pls don’t spoil VaAngre!! Pls.. I know u won’t haina??? Amazing episode.. now they will face Vansh’s wrath… Interesting very interesting 😂😂😂😂
      .pls post soon

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:42 pm

        😂😂😂I’m a good girl but good girl ko ab bad girl ban na padega!! Vangre needs some spoiling dear😜😉I think i know what you were thinking and whatever you were thinking was right about Angre😂😂. I maybe have to. Thank you!❤dear. Yes of course. I will soon

    23. Jayashree on May 12, 2021 6:20 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:42 pm

        Thank you!❤dear

    24. Priyadharshini on May 12, 2021 6:20 pm

      So nice updates 😊😍❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:42 pm

        Thank you!❤dear😘😍😍

    25. JJ on May 12, 2021 6:21 pm

      It’s really super and awesome 💖😊

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:43 pm

        Thank you!❤dear😍😍

    26. Sree on May 12, 2021 6:21 pm

      Fantastic episode 👌😍😍❤️

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:43 pm

        Thank you!❤👍👍❤

    27. Gabriela on May 12, 2021 7:52 pm

      From episode to episode I like twins more and more. The episode was full of suspense. I was afraid of what would happen. I want to see what explanations they give Vansh now. I can’t wait for the next chapter ❤❤❤❤

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:44 pm

        Thank you!❤di. Let’s see what happens after this😜😘 I will soon upload

    28. Pomu on May 12, 2021 10:28 pm

      Amazing episode pari…Riva and Rivan are lioness and lion. Is Angre really backstabbing Vansh😮😮😮

      • Parita on May 12, 2021 11:45 pm

        Thank you!❤dear, Yea like their parents!! Let’s see maybe he is

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