The Final episode of my fan-fiction is here. The episode starts with,
Shreya is high on anger and she hold William’s neck tightly. Ashutosh tried to push her but Shreya overpowers him. Bela and Brinda helps Shreya and fights with the goons. Shivanya sees Vishaka. Vishaka signs Shivanya something. She couldn’t understand what Vishaka is signing. Shivanya goes near her without anyone’s notice. Vishaka says, “Take bael leaves on put on this ghost controller”. Shivanya asks, “Where is bael leaves?” Vishaka says the location of bael leaves.
Shivanya: Bela, I’m leaving from here for taking Bael patr.
Bela: Yeah, ok. Come soon. We can’t fight with goons for long.
Shivanya leaves to take the leaves. Shivanya see a Ganesh temple there. She enters inside. The temple becomes invisible. Shivanya narrates the mantra. The temple becomes visible. Ganesh idol is covered by bael leaves. Shivanya takes some leaves and leave the temple. The temple becomes invisible.
Shivanya reaches the scene. Shreya and Bela are tied by the goons. Brinda is missing. Vishakha signs Shivanya to take the ghost controller and she to the temple. Shivanya dances infront of the goons.
Ashutosh: We are not conducting any dance competition. Guys, catch that girl.
Shivanya: Mr., I’m Vikrant’s spirit. I’m in Shivanya’s body. I’ll kill you for killing me and my wife Vishaka.
The ghost controller signs William that he deals with him. The ghost controller along with arrested Vish runs behind Shivanya. Shivanya reaches the magical temple. The ghost controller enters the temple. He uses his magic on Shivanya but that doesn’t work. Shivanya smirks.
Shivanya: Brinda, are you ready?
Brinda, Shreya and Bela comes there.
The ghost charmer: How were you released from my mantra?
Brinda: Its the magic of blue pearl, Mr.GEORGE.
[Flashback:Vishaka signs Bela and Brinda after Shivanya went for leaves. Vishaka signs at a rock. Bela says, “Brinda, I’ll help Shreya. You’ll go to the rock.” Brinda nods. Brinda go to the rock. She tries to move that. She narrates a mantra. The rock becomes a small box. She uses her hairpin and opens it. She finds the blue pearl for which Bela was tortured. Brinda takes the blue pearl. Vishakha signs her to go to Ganesh temple. Meanwhile, Bela and Shreya are arrested by GEORGE’s mantra. With the help of Brinda’s magical baton, Shreya and Bela release themselves and make the goons unconscious by spray.]
George: Yeah, I’m the same George who killed Ashokavalli, Vishaka and Vikrant. I’m still alive even in this age 98. I learnt magic to control the ghosts but now only it’s useful. Due to magic, I’m appearing little young, so I have enough energy to kill you girls.
Shivanya throws Bael leaves on him. George gets rashes in his skin. He is allergic to bael leaves. In this due course of time, Vishaka frees herself.
George opens his mouth to recite mantra. Vishaka makes him dumb by her powers. George gets angry. Shreya slaps him hard.
Bela: You are an womaniser. You don’t deserve to live. You killed Ashokavalli mercilessly just for money. You killed the king and queen which is the biggest sin you have done. You’ll pay for it.
George looks at her angrily.
Brinda: Vishaka, its time for your revenge.
Vishakha: I didn’t expect that you’re still alive. You’re the only reason for your spoilt grandson William. No problem, god has given a chance to revenge you.
George begs infront of them. Vishakha held him in air by holding his neck and she throws him to wall. George collides and injures his head. George holds Shreya captive and blackmails Vish that he kill her. Shivanya puts some more leaves on him. He leaves Shreya. He falls down. All the girls put bael leaves on him and his skin turns blue. Vishaka takes a trishul and stabs him. George is dead. Vishaka burns his body and made it into ashes and blow them away.
Vishakha kneels down and cries.
Bela: Vishaka, Don’t cry. You have done the right thing. You have done justice for our grandma. We will be thankful for you.
The girls hug Vishaka. The moves from the temple and reaches treasure box.
Vishakha: Brinda, place the blue pearl in the hole. The box will open
Bela: Is that the same pearl which is stuck into our car?
Vishakha: Yes, I had this pearl with me. By time, I lost this in my forest. Once your car passes, it got stuck into the tyre.
Brinda: This pearl had made Bela crazy and even us.
Brinda places the pearl in the hole and the treasure box opens.
Vishakha: The treasure is now for government. Please give it to them. Its time for me to leave the world.
Bela: Vishaka, please don’t leave us. You have a heart of gold. (Cries)
Vishakha: Bela, my soul gets justice. I have to leave the world.
Brinda: Vish, please.
The girls hugs Vishaka and cries.
Vishakha: Girls, be courageous. Don’t give up at anytime. Always stay positive. Bye girls. I’m leaving forever. God bless you
Vishaka disappears. Shivanya hugs Bela and cries. Brinda and Shreya joins them and cries.
After 2 hours,
The policeman arrest William and all his goons for torturing the village people. The girls provide the treasure to government. Media interviews the girls how they find the treasure. Manyata hugs the girls and says, “Don’t go anywhere from now. I’m proud of you, my girls. Your parents are proud of you.”
Inspite of media attention, the girls are so happy that Ashokavalli aka Manyata got justice.
Thanks Jasminerahul and other silent readers for supporting me to write the fanfiction. I’ll remain grateful for you.
4 Comments
how the girls were fighting with the goons was interesting. the temple appearing n disappearing was an amusement.shivanya saying that sbe is vikrant’s spirit was cool.wow blue pearl.vishaka finishing George was interesting.good that Williams n goons got arrested.vishaka’s departure scene was emotional. treasure box to the government. good.manyata praising the girls was so nice.now the girls have become popular.so nice.you didn’t show the heroes in the last part.are you planning for an epilogue including the heroes too?
Thanks a lot for supporting the fic. Actually, this story focuses only on four girls. So, I don’t have any idea on writing epilogue
its an awesome story . due to assignment i was not able to read . You rocked it sesha such a super plot.
Oh, thanks a lot for liking this, Treesa Anu