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Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

THE LOVE WITNESS(OS)

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyJuly 7, 201762 Comments5 Mins Read
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And I hugged them tight to never let them go away from me and from each other. I missed her, my Annika and her falling clumsily on Shivaay’s arm, touching her milky white skin. I caressed her with love . I wanted to protect her, I…I..I love Annika and I missed her very badly in these last three months. Hi I am the white flowing curtains inside the glass room of Shivaay Singh Oberoi. I am one silent witness of their Ishqbaazi.

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Shivaay Singh Oberoi glared a me after a long time gap of three months. I was elated to get his glare but alas the next minute he murdered me brutally with the help of the arm chair. I lied there all scattered in to million pieces. I laughed out loud. Finally he killed me …yay..yay..yay.. I died the same death when they both faces each other with attitude, tadi. I never gave complain in any police station even if both Shivaay and Annika killed my all relatives from his cars glass to complete car or the smallest flower vessels even the numerous small water glass. I am the pool side glass door and I am happy today.
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Annika dip her white feet inside me..a sent a chill upwards her spine still she stood inside me. I was happy she meet me after long three months. I smiled sarcastically looking at the disturbed face of that Tadibaaz Billu, working on his laptop.I did a small dance inside my heart for getting attention from my Annika. Suddenly Annika stumbled at my edge, to hug her, but that Bhagad Billa hold her hand from the other side keeping my Annika away from me, I hate you Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi..I hate you for saving Annika from falling on my awaiting arms. I am the most important one and only swimming pool of Oberoi Mansion. and I am declaring Shivaay Singh Oberoi as my soutan enemy.

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I felt my body shivering from the fall even after ten minutes of touching the cold floor after that Billu throw me away in a restaurant in his anger. Oh..no my body is not shivering due to shock but because some one is trying to contact that Billu through me and here I am lying in wounded state. My Shivaay is angry after so many days and threw me away like he threw my 174 brother and sister away in anger. I am his super smart phone.

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Annika hold me with all the love in the universe. There is nothing new in it. She shed some drop of tears. I wanted to wipe them from her face a chance to touch her velvety cheek is not a thing to miss. She looked at me once again this time with a dhinchak smile to die for. I looked around and fine that Tadibaaz Shivaay walking down the step to the corridor. My Annika smiled looking at me but for that man. Oh no my Annika was smiling admiring that kanji eyed man who tied me numerous time around Annika’s neck. Well from that time I realised I am here with Annika because of him. I am the three diamond designed mangal sutra. Waiting to be tied around Annika’s nack permanently.

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I am red red but I am not blushing. I am like this only. Are you wondering from where did I learned the word “Blush”. Well I heard Shivaay saying the same to Annika when she was shy. I am waiting to be in the hold of Shivaay’s two fingers and then I will land on the hair partition of Annika, my perfect heaven. I am the red vermilion inside the golden box.

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Hello.. Hello .. Are you listening me. I am here standing on the small table beside the window. please pay attention here as I am colourless odorless liquid. Yeah You noticed me now standing on the table with a bottle filled with myself. Shivaay was drinking me from his birth, taking bath but I felt immense pleasure when last night Annika threw me at his face. She always does that and there is nothing new in it. I touched his face in my khidkitod way after three month’s and I am happy for tar. I am water and my container is always a glass. But Annika drank me after challenging Pinky to get Shivaay back this morning.

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SSO hit me furiously sitting on the pool side. All set to finish some work on my body. His finger punch felt like hitting me with love. I sat in front of his kanji green eyes grabbing his attention. I felt he was punching some same areas on my key board repeatedly. I sneaked and get the shock of my life. SSO was touching the same areas with out paying attention at me. My screen read “ANNIKA ANNIKA” so many times that my system failed to count. Suddenly he left me and ran towards pool in a helicopter speed to a falling Annika to save her. I realized about my position in his life and my relation with Shivaay is a business deal. But Annika…. his foremost important first preference even after three months of their divorce. I am his laptop lying on the pool side tea table.

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Hello friends we felt nice sharing our experience with you all in Shivaay and Annika’s journey of Ishqbaazi. Hope you girls will love us like you love Annika and Shivaay along with Ishqbaaz.

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62 Comments

  1. Anitaaa3 on July 7, 2017 4:23 pm

    Very nice Asthadi….When I read this 1stly I realized that It is ur piece of work

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 5:44 pm

      Anitaa… thank you. But I wrote in different style then my usual way of writing.

  2. Preetha on July 7, 2017 4:27 pm

    Mind blowing awesome amazing OMG marvellous samma Chancey ila… What a creativity dude….

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 6:03 pm

      Preetha..Dude!!!! I am a girl yaar. Thank you.

  3. navz on July 7, 2017 4:35 pm

    Girl u r d craziest person i have ever met..and this os is like__________.fill in all d sweet appreciating words in this blank aastha.
    The every object that described their spl journey with shivikas ishqbaazi….true witnesses of their pure love.
    And d most loved part is…shivay typing Anika..only annikas name on his laptop and acting like ignoring her…wow??.
    Now and then comeup with tjese cute stories aastha.
    Bye.

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 6:27 pm

      Navya…Of course I am crazy so only I am in pkj. I will keep coming with one shots like this . He he..I will imagine in the blanks.

  4. UF on July 7, 2017 4:48 pm

    AMAZING BEAUTIFUL CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS MIND BLOWING OUT STANDING SWEET SUPERB WONDERFUL???????????????

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 6:34 pm

      UF…bas kar pagli rulayegi kya. Thank you..thank you.

  5. Sweety on July 7, 2017 5:01 pm

    Super and awesome imagination keep going

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 6:42 pm

      Sweety…thank you. Yeah I will keep going dear.

  6. Shraddha-DBO on July 7, 2017 5:09 pm

    Beautiful beautiful beautiful di…..
    I was thinking, who was the author thru the entire os, but u r just awesome… really loved it….it was more romantic than shivika’s pov….. love u lotzzzz???

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 6:49 pm

      Shraddha… Thank you. More romantic then Shivika point of view lol. Love you too.

  7. nikita_jai29 on July 7, 2017 5:44 pm

    It is awesome ashu dii…. Love you..

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 8:57 pm

      Nikku…thank you dear. Love you too.

  8. AB on July 7, 2017 5:56 pm

    Amzing,mindbolwing,wonderful Asthadi
    when i read this ff understand uAstha di.this craziness can only u

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:00 pm

      AB… My craziness lol. Well its over flowing on each passing day with Ishqbaaz.
      Thank you AB.

  9. Pui on July 7, 2017 6:01 pm

    Amazing…
    Beautifully written ??

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:21 pm

      Pui…thank you.

  10. Arrii on July 7, 2017 6:19 pm

    U r a true writer…Only a honest writer can draw up perceptions out of materialistic things…

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:26 pm

      Arrii… Every writer is truthfully honest in their way of expressing emotions or ideas. I am glad to be one among the group. Thank you.

  11. Zaveesha on July 7, 2017 6:46 pm

    Today also I was 99.9% sure that this is ur ff… don’t know from were I got the instinct that it is urs….
    Nd it was just amzing… fabulous.. mind-blowing…
    Nd yeah dear Curtain,water,glass,mobile, laptop nd all the witnesses of Shivika journey thank u soo much for sharing ur view nd for playing very important part in SHIVIKA journey…
    Astha di it was wonderful.,…
    Keep writing nd entertaining us…???????????

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:28 pm

      Zaveesha…Thank you. You got clue from title right!!!

  12. CrazygirlS.P on July 7, 2017 7:11 pm

    Outstanding❤️❤️❤️

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:32 pm

      Thank you Crazygirl for reading one crazy one shot!!!

  13. Sana on July 7, 2017 7:33 pm

    Hi di
    U know I guessed it is ur work bcoz of the comic element in it
    N yeah I always love u n ur work n ur dp

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:33 pm

      Sana… Thank you.

  14. anagha on July 7, 2017 7:34 pm

    Wow !!!!!!!!!!!!…. What a concept ! Out of the box !!!!!!…. I loved it.!!!.. OMG .. I lived it mannnnnn… Do come up with more . Love ya ❤

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:56 pm

      Anagha..thank you. Mannnn!!!…NO..I am a girl like you # with Love.

    • anagha on July 7, 2017 10:39 pm

      Hahaha… I know that you’re gal !!!.. a girl with out of the box thoughts !

  15. Shivika on July 7, 2017 8:02 pm

    Awesome….Loved it….
    The very important elements in Shivika’s Ishqbaazi & the witnesses – curtain,water,glass,laptop & mobile…..
    Keep Writing…. 🙂

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:58 pm

      Shivika… thank you dear.

  16. alekhika20 on July 7, 2017 8:42 pm

    Amazing update

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 9:59 pm

      Thanks Alekhika dear.

  17. Madhuani on July 7, 2017 9:03 pm

    Just can’t express in words.
    Your imagination level toh tablatodh one ekdum zabri.

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 10:33 pm

      Thanks Madhu.

  18. Aayushi on July 7, 2017 9:03 pm

    While reading this i was thinking that ‘ye h kon’…..i mean wowwwwww …..u didnt write this neither frm shivay POV nor frm Anika POV ……bt the things which r the witness of their khidkitod luv…..
    Its jst amazing…..i jst fallen in luv wid ur writting whether its a comment or an os….
    Thanku fr this wonderful piece of work

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 10:41 pm

      Aayushi… seriously ” yeh hai kaun??”. Your crazy Astha Di only yaar. And I am raising on with the love you girls are showering on me after reading my stories or comments. Love you too.

  19. Nithu on July 7, 2017 9:26 pm

    Loved it…….amazinggggggggg…….

    • Astha_Reddy on July 7, 2017 10:43 pm

      Thanks Nithu dear.

  20. VHM on July 7, 2017 10:19 pm

    Awesome one Astha…..so nice …i just loved it so so so so so much

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 8:36 am

      Haarika… Thank you yaar.

  21. Arpita on July 7, 2017 10:27 pm

    First line ko dekhte hi main samajh gayithi..ye paaka universetod idea meri pyarri asthababy ke hi ho sakte he..

    Btw it is wonderful..excellent. …..

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 8:40 am

      Arpita…thanks darling.

  22. tania-the fairy on July 7, 2017 10:42 pm

    Wowww…What is this?A defferent article.when I was going through my eyes got stucked in it.its really awesome.anika s memories are realated with every thing in OM along with shivay.just loved it.ur analysis are great even in ur comment in Ipkknd.A

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 8:42 am

      Tania…thanks dear.

  23. Tanz on July 8, 2017 12:31 am

    Aisa idea hamari khidkitod Astha Di ke alava aa hi kisko Sakta hai….It was just mind blowing Di….. incredible….. I really never thought about this possibility….You described about everything and that was amazing….the best one was the pool ?? soutan enemy—sounds interesting ?
    I had heard that deewaro ke bhi kaam hote hain but hamare Shivika ke case me to har cheeez ke aankh, naak,Kaan,dimag, emotions sab hota hai…. brilliant….maza hi aa Gaya?
    Di, I’m waiting for Alien feelings ?….. please post the next part soon…..
    Till then, take care ?

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 8:45 am

      Tanz…Thank you dear.

  24. Banita on July 8, 2017 3:01 am

    Wow!!! It’s totally different concept di….. MINDBLOWING….. Nice 2 see ur writing after a lng time….

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 8:46 am

      Bunny… thank you. Yeah after a log gap of one day!!!

  25. gayathri.visu on July 8, 2017 9:41 am

    I knew it, that this is ur OS bcz of title… Aree didi, from where did u get this type of ideas??

    Fantastic di…different one with ur humour touch!!

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 11:20 am

      Gayathri… Thank you yaar.

  26. Jerry_36 on July 8, 2017 11:11 am

    Awesomeness overloaded !
    Brilliant Concept !
    Love you !
    ❤❤

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 11:23 am

      Jerry… Thanks yaar. Love you too.

  27. fenil on July 8, 2017 12:01 pm

    Wow !!
    Marvellously picked up each witness of love one by one.
    I fell in love with your writing dii.
    Fabulous idea dii.
    Loved it.
    Love u sissy !!

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 12:12 pm

      Fenu bhaiyya… Thank you. Love you too bro.

  28. Kiki on July 8, 2017 5:12 pm

    Hey Astha. …. No one can imagine in this craziest way than you. Loved it ???

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 5:46 pm

      Kiki… Thank you for tolerating this craziness ha ha…

  29. ruksy on July 8, 2017 7:54 pm

    Sorry for thr late comment. Loved the OS totally amazing.

    • Astha_Reddy on July 8, 2017 9:27 pm

      Hey Rusky…thank you. its ok dear.

  30. Nita D on July 11, 2017 9:18 pm

    Oh God…..I should have guessed it can be u only Astha baby….this is amazing….I mean who would have thought to write it inanimate object’s point of views which have been so instrumental in Shivika love story….this is really awesome….

    • Astha_Reddy on July 12, 2017 2:01 pm

      Nita… you could have guessed it yaar ( wink wink) lol. Thanks.

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