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Home»Fan Fiction»The Legend Of The Hatred (Chapter 16)
Fan Fiction Ishq Mein Marjawan 2

The Legend Of The Hatred (Chapter 16)

RishiiiiBy RishiiiiMarch 20, 202137 Comments7 Mins Read
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Thank you all …. Your comments means a lot me … I am bit busy nowadays that’s why I was not able to reply all of you one by one😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

So here the 16th chapter…….

………………………….

Riddu’s POV,

Even I don’t know how I fallen in love with Vansh … I mean I can’t believe how I love him when I hate him so much …Β ” love and hate has a thin line ”Β I think in my story it is crystal clear… Vansh’s limitless love for me made me love him… I agree he is the king of mafia who is ruthless but I think I can see the warm heart of Vansh’s through that ruthless soul…Β  Now I trust him I believe he will never betray me ….

Oh ho after so many days I got a time to read the rest of the diary….. I don’t know who why I feel jealousy when I read her diary …. In her diary all I can see Vansh’s name …. I feel restless thinking about her … If she alive and come to Vansh’s life again … then what will I do.. will I lost him… noooo….

( diary page )

see he brought happiness to my life… he filled my life with different colours …. I am fortunate have such a nice person in my life…. I hope to finish my studies soon , then I lead a happy life with him…. not only he but also his family like me a lot …. I don’t have words to thank my god for giving me such a nice guy and a family though I didn’t get parents love….Β Β 

( diary page end )

see again my luck disturbed me …. Sejal came to my room suddenly … I hide the book under my pillow and tried to be normal…..

Sejal; are you ok Riddu? why you seemed to be restless

Riddu; ha sejal I am okay but my head aches so much…

Sejal; ok then have nap… you will feel better

Sejal went from there advising me …. I want her to left me alone but my headache is true…. all the time I touched the book or read it my head began aching… sometimes it really pains…. I don’t know why is that….

In VR mansion,

Dadi; Uma why you seemed tensed…..

Uma; I am worrying about Vansh ma

Dadi; about what?

Uma; about his marriage..

Dadi; why …. We fixed his marriage with Ragini ….

Uma; don’t talk about that witch….

Dadi; areee what happened

Uma; ma , Ajay has found that she is cheating us… it’s good we come to know it before the marriage… my poor vansh

Siya; no mom bhai loves someone

All; what?

Siya ; ha

Ishani; who is that

Siya; Riddima

Dadi; oh ho my Vansh is the best… he has found the best partner

Uma; its true mom even I love Riddima a lot… she is a well mannered good girl

Dadi; ok then we must talk with Agrawals’

Uma; ha mom

In Vansh’s study,

Vansh; Angre, any update…..

Angre; boss ( he hesitates to talk)

Vansh; tell me Angre

Angre; boss… boss… you are correct….

Vansh; what?

Angre; ha boss, that day a man and a woman had come to hospital and claimed that she is their daughter… and they had taken her with them….. according to the records they are Mr. and Mrs. Agrawal…..

Vansh; is she cheating me?

Angre; no boss… because of the accident and sudden shock she lost her memory…. in that case Agrawals’ had changed her face and had erased all the data those prove that she is her…. actual truth is to the world Pari is dead …..

Angre left from there …. looking at the door Vansh laugh like a maniac …..

Vansh; you fool Angre…. I knew it that she was her from the very first… you are a real dumb like your boss….( again he laughed like a maniac….)

In somewhere,

man; see mom all your sons are perfect and clever… unfortunately he is a dumb…..

woman; no , I have only two sons … for me the other one is dead

man; not yet mom … but very soon ….

woman; what about her condition…

man; don’t worry mom very soon she is going to get her past life….

woman; that’s good … what are the future plans?

man; after she got her past she will try to find about me… she will go crazy to give a justice to her past…. then we will enter to the game and win it giving a justice to us…

Both of them laughed imaging their future but their eyes tell another story which is full of hatred and revenge……

In Riddima’s room,

Riddu’s pov,

I pretends to be sleeping… but what I am really doing is reading the diary avoiding the headache…..

after 2 or 3 hours I complete its reading…. There were all the memories of her with Vansh… because of reading the diary continuously for hours my eyes shut unknown to me… but every incidents which I read in the diary make me restless… I feel I know those… My head is aching now badly… when I shut my eyes I saw some black and white images which were unclear… every words I read began to echo in my mind …. no no I can’t control it… no its paining…. no… those black and white pictures running through my mind…. aaaaa….. aaaa…. mom…..dad… aaaa….

( she faints and land on the floor)

After 15 minutes….. ( in Riddu’s room)

Deep; doctor… is she fine? what happened to her?

Doctor; relax Mr. Deep….. she just fainted…Β  now she is fine.. after an hour she will wake up.. but before she fainted she had gone through a difficult time… I mean we can call it as a war in mind between past and present…

Deep and all the family members shocked hearing it…

Deep; what do you mean doctor?

Doctor; may be she remember something which she forget … did she has a memory lose before…?

Deep; ( anxiously); no … no .. doctor… ( thinking) oh god please don’t do it…

In the same time in VR mansion,

Angre; boss are you going somewhere?

Vansh; ha Angre you don’t need to come… its private…

Angre; ok boss

Vansh left from there driving the car alone… after 30 minutes journey he reached to a place which is far away from main road… somewhere like a old house… he opened the door and entered to a room which is full of dark…

There was man who tightly tied to chair… and he was unconscious … his body tells that he has been torturing for years… he body has too many wounds….in his face there were dry blood drops… his hair and beard have growth too much…. indeed he is a dirty man ….

Vansh came there and took a basket of water and poured it to that man… that man wake in a jerk because of sudden water attack…

Vansh laughed in a evil manner and hit that man from a wooden stick…. he came near that man and ,

Vansh; ( smiling badly) oh ho how are you my twin bro…….

The man; ( in angrily) Vihaaaaaannnnnn…….

………………………….

What do you think? Vansh ?Vihaan?πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

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    37 Comments

    1. Riansh1212 on March 20, 2021 1:26 am

      Vihaaan????wait what??? Riddhima is getting flashbacks of her past !! Interesting very interesting!!! Eagerly waiting for next one❀️❀️❀️❀️

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:23 pm

        Ya Vihaan 😁 All you saw as devil Vansh is actually not Vansh it’s Vihaan😊 didn’t I told you that Vansh can’t be a devil 😁😁
        Ya Riddu us remembering her past that she forgot πŸ˜‰Thank you so much dear πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    2. Samistha Choudhary on March 20, 2021 5:58 am

      Please post it soon πŸ˜‰ please please please please please

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:23 pm

        Ya I will update next soon soon soon soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    3. Aarushi on March 20, 2021 6:43 am

      Oh god what’s happening!! Pls post soon.. it’s just total confusion

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:24 pm

        You will know everything crystal clearly very soon dear β€οΈπŸ’—πŸ™‚πŸ’—

    4. Subu23 on March 20, 2021 8:13 am

      Awesome yaar but confusing too uff my head will someday burst with the suspense all writers giveπŸ˜‚

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:26 pm

        Sorry for the so much confusions πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I will not let your mind stay peacefully so soon dear πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ thanks dear ❣️❣️❣️

    5. Vyshnavi on March 20, 2021 8:51 am

      Amazing episode

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:27 pm

        Thanks dear 😊❀️❀️

    6. Aisha on March 20, 2021 9:30 am

      Omg i m dead plz post soon

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:27 pm

        Don’t worry you will reborn soon 😊😊😊😊

    7. R.N πŸ˜‡ on March 20, 2021 9:37 am

      Amazing episode dear….☺☺☺☺☺…vivaan…??????????…….
      waiting for next episode…..

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:28 pm

        Thanks a lot dear ❀️❀️
        Ya Vihaan vs Vansh πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    8. Amnna on March 20, 2021 11:00 am

      Vihann then where is Vansh. Nice update

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:32 pm

        I think Vihaan has captive Vansh πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ all you see as devil is not real Vansh it’s Vihaan πŸ˜πŸ˜‚ didn’t I told you Vansh can’t be a devil😁😁😁 thank you so much dear πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    9. Thakur Priyanka on March 20, 2021 11:54 am

      Awesome episode dear already we are confused with current track of the show now with your story we are again in confusion state actually it’s assm twist I’m enjoying it very much eagerly waiting for next update

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:33 pm

        Thank you so much dear πŸ’•πŸ₯°πŸ’•πŸ₯° I so happy to know you like my FF …. Soon you will get all the answers you want dear ❀️😘❀️😘

    10. Mennahussein55 on March 20, 2021 12:25 pm

      Oh my God!
      What an episode Chocori?!
      I have liked it so much.
      I’m eagerly waiting for the next episode.

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:35 pm

        Thank you so much Merra πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
        It means a lot dear ❀️
        I will update next soon 😊😊😊

    11. Ishu on March 20, 2021 1:02 pm

      Wow, so lovely episode

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:32 pm

        Thanks dear ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

    12. deepti on March 20, 2021 1:36 pm

      Maybe vihaan kidnapped vansh and is pretending to be vansh maybe πŸ€”πŸ€”

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 2:36 pm

        Woooow dear ❀️😌
        You got it πŸ™‚
        Your absolutely right ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

    13. XYZ on March 20, 2021 5:18 pm

      Amazing espiode
      Please upload next espiode
      I am waiting

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 7:01 pm

        Thanks a lot dear ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    14. Jayashree on March 20, 2021 6:10 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍❀️😍❀️. It’s really super and interesting very interesting and. Thanks for updates 😊😍❀️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❀️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❀️.

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 7:01 pm

        Thank you thank you so much dear πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β£οΈπŸ₯°β£οΈ

    15. Priyadharshini on March 20, 2021 6:10 pm

      So nice updates 😊
      Super episode πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜
      Thanks for updates 😊.

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 7:02 pm

        Thanks dear ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

    16. JJ on March 20, 2021 6:11 pm

      It’s really super and awesome πŸ’–πŸ˜Š
      Wonderful episode πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜
      Waiting for next one πŸ’–πŸ’•.

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 7:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    17. Vkjhp on March 20, 2021 6:12 pm

      Wow fabulous 😍❀️😍❀️😍
      It’s really fantastic 😊
      Thanks for updates πŸ‘
      Keep rockingπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯.

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 7:02 pm

        Thanks dear ❣️❣️❣️❣️

    18. Priyanshi_13 on March 20, 2021 8:38 pm

      Nice update dear …keep posting

      • Rishiiii on March 20, 2021 10:13 pm

        Thanks a lot πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•sure darling I will update next soon😘😘😘

    19. Jayashree on March 21, 2021 12:43 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍❀️😍. It’s really super πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜. Thanks for updates 😊😍❀️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❀️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❀️.

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