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Home»Fan Fiction»The Legend Of The Hatred (Chapter 11)
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The Legend Of The Hatred (Chapter 11)

RishiiiiBy RishiiiiMarch 14, 202139 Comments6 Mins Read
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So guys here the 11th chapter โค๏ธ I hope you guys will enjoy it ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

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Riddu; you ? here ? what the hell are you doing in my bed room?

Vansh; why sweat heart .. I came here to check your fever …

Riddu; who told you that?

Vansh; Arohi mom

Riddu; mom? why are you calling” mom” to my mom

Vansh; we are soon to be husband and wife no , that’s why

Riddu; what is this nonsense I am not your Ragini, go and tell her

Vansh( touching her forehead ); it seems you high temperature going down

Riddu; no no still I am unwell. And this is a type of virous fever so its better if you go other wise you will also get fever

Vansh ( leaning towards her face); I don’t care , but I have a medicine that can make you get well soon

Riddu ( understanding what he said ); no no no I am fine..ย  I don’t want anything like that

Vansh; I knew that you are doing an act , but what you did is really wrong … you make me impatient to see you, so definitely you should get punished

Riddu; what ?

Vansh ; ya … get ready within 5 minutes , I am waiting for you….

Saying this he went… oh my god … I always try to keep myself away from him but you god make my every attempt useless…

I get ready ….. He took me to ride a roller coaster which was scare me at the first site..

Riddu; no vansh please I really afraid so please don’t do that..

Vansh; no sweat heart , I am here for you… and this is your punishment….. so be ready..

such a monster… he only know to say” bla … bla bla …. bla bla.. sweat heart …” Idiot…

I grabbed his hand and and hold it tightly as I was so scared …

Vnash ( smirking ) ; see your fear become my happiness.. go on sweat heart .. hold my hand as much as time you want… what a pleasure dear..

I was firming in anger … such a shameless human.. oh no I forget he is a devil no, but I thought devils are shameful , looking at him I think I am wrong…..

 oh no I forget he is a devil no, but I thought devils are shameful , looking at him I think I am wrong

Riddu; anyway Vansh I am coming with you tomorrow ,

Vansh; why is that?

Riddu; I have to attend to an important meeting with ” Kabbu”’

Vansh( blank); Kabbu? who is that?

Riddu;( teasing tone) my loving boss Mr. Kabir Malhotra….

Vansh ( angryย  tone and firming with jealousy); why are so talking about him so casually? and a nickname for him?

Riddu; ha Kabbu… isn’t that nickname so cute… and we become friends so his name is casual for me…. you know he is damn hot and handsome…..

Vansh ; don’t you remember your my fiancee? and am I not hot and handsome..?

Riddu; don’t forget this is a deal not real.. and I am not yet Kabbu’s fiancee.. as he doesn’t ask me yet …. and do you know you are devil so literally devils are black and horrorful….

Vansh( burning jealousy ); whatever , in front of me don’t mention his name , I hate to hear his name from you…

Riddu( mocking); Kabbu….Kabbu…Kabbu… MY Kabbu……… Kabbuuuuuu…..

How ever days passed like this… I did everything to make him angry, it was funny to see that devil’s face like a reddest tomato.. he was a nail… but I had to bare him… even he had to bare my devilish pranks… poor child… apart from his so called love letters, he gave me such nice gifts…..

Poor Mr

Poor Mr . Vansh Raisinghania … see how he try to impress me….. poor boy…. But the actual truth is I don’t feel anything about him….ย  doย  I have a heart or not?… He is a devil.. if I start to have feelings for him , then I have to be a devil lady…. no no no how this cute pie can be a devil lady…

Sejal is right .. he is damn handsome and hot … but,ย  no no Riddu don’t think about that idiot…

So today is the last day of month ……. He told me to dress in my best …. I am happy today as after today I am free bird……. I am not caged by any devil’s hands… so I dressed Like fairy….

he take me to a place but I don't know where as I was blind folded by him

he take me to a place but I don’t know where as I was blind folded by him… after few minutes he take off it ….. wooow….. what a wonderful view….

Vansh; did you like it?

Vansh; did you like it?

Riddu; ya ,….. ( lost in the beauty of scenary)

Vansh snapped and said ; hey …. sweat heart see there

he show me the dark sky… suddenly,

woooow it was fire works and sparks

woooow it was fire works and sparks …. I was all mostly lost …

Vansh; how was it

Riddu; ( absent minded ); so romantic…. I love it…

Vansh( surprisingly); are you sure?

Riddu( realizing what she said); no no I mean its good

Vansh; ooo too shy baby…

Riddu( predending to be angry); I said its good ok… nothing else… anyway why did you take me here….

Vansh bent on knees and,

sweat heart I thought You will do this … but I was afraid that if you didn’t … so here me again,

Vansh ; I know you hate me to the core … I am the worst person who hears the hatred from his lady love… I thought after this month of time you will change a bit …. so I did everything that can impress you…. I love you sweat heart … I love the unique way you giggle… I admire you… I don’t know what I do without you…ย  I love being in love with you… you complete me… you are a beautiful person inside and out…ย  I am yours… will you be mine..

will you marry me sweat heart?

………………………………..

what do you think guys .. what will she say.. YES or NO?

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    39 Comments

    1. Miss bhanita devi on March 14, 2021 9:34 pm

      I think yes bolegi๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:47 pm

        Let’s see ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

    2. Aarushi on March 14, 2021 9:35 pm

      I don’t think she will say yes.. pls post soon

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:47 pm

        Let’s see ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ I will update next soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

    3. Attractiveuser on March 14, 2021 9:40 pm

      Yes bolde kaash ๐Ÿคง

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:48 pm

        ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„

    4. R.N ๐Ÿ˜‡ on March 14, 2021 9:45 pm

      Awesome episode…โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ..I think she will say yess or no…don’t know..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..
      Anyways wating for next episode

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:48 pm

        Thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ let’s see what will happen โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

    5. Annoyinguser on March 14, 2021 9:45 pm

      She will say yes maybe absent mindedly then no i guess. Anyways nice episode post soon.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:49 pm

        Thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ maybe you are right ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    6. Mithali on March 14, 2021 9:55 pm

      Plz make her say yes plz pls ๐Ÿ™

      • Sanjuthaa on March 15, 2021 7:53 am

        She will say no. Because riddhima thought vansh is a devil so that she will say. Today episode super. Waiting for next episode dear. Thank you.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:50 pm

        Mithali and Sanjutha thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ let’s see what will the reply of Riddu โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

    7. Mennahussein55 on March 14, 2021 9:57 pm

      Outstanding episode.
      Super excited for the upcoming events.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 1:01 pm

        Thanks a lot Merra ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

    8. Ishu on March 14, 2021 9:57 pm

      I don’t think she said yes

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:51 pm

        Ok let’s see Ishu ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

    9. Shivangi on March 14, 2021 10:05 pm

      Amazing episode๐Ÿฅฐโค.. I don’t her answer but I think yes or she will ask for some time ๐Ÿ˜…

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:51 pm

        Thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ Maybe you are right ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ

    10. Aisha on March 14, 2021 10:19 pm

      Fab plz.post asap

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:52 pm

        Thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ

    11. Vyshnavi on March 14, 2021 10:49 pm

      Nice episode

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:52 pm

        Thanks dear ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

    12. Nivisha on March 14, 2021 10:55 pm

      She would say no.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:53 pm

        Mmmm maybe … Let’s see what will happen โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

    13. Jayashree on March 14, 2021 11:35 pm

      Wow amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜. Definitely she say no. Thanks for updates ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ. keep rocking dear you and your updates ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ. Iam waiting for your next updates ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:54 pm

        Thanks a lot dear โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ let’s see how will she react ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    14. Priyadharshini on March 14, 2021 11:36 pm

      So nice updates ๐Ÿ˜Š
      Super episode ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜
      Thanks for updates ๐Ÿ˜Š.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:55 pm

        Thanks dear โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ it’s my pleasure ๐Ÿฅฐ

    15. JJ on March 14, 2021 11:36 pm

      It’s really super and awesome ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜Š
      Wonderful episode ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜
      Waiting for next one ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’•.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:56 pm

        Thanks JJ ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

    16. Vkjhp on March 14, 2021 11:37 pm

      Wow fabulous ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜
      It’s really fantastic ๐Ÿ˜Š
      Thanks for updates ๐Ÿ‘
      Keep rocking๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ.

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:56 pm

        Thank you so much dear ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

    17. Priyanka on March 14, 2021 11:48 pm

      I hope it’s a yes plsss plsssss be it a yes

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 12:57 pm

        Oo let’s see dear how will she react ๐Ÿ˜Š to say yes or no she will have think a lot โ˜บ๏ธ

    18. TSA on March 15, 2021 8:47 am

      Amazing episode Rishiiii!!! I am thinking if it will be a yes or no๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” Though I have read it once,still I am recollecting those feelings again by thinking๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Lots of love and chocolates to you๐ŸŽ‚๐ŸŽ‚๐ŸŽ‚๐ŸŽ‚๐ŸŽ‚๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ Today extra chocolates for you as TU hit 4k comments ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿจ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฅง๐Ÿซ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿง๐ŸŽ‚

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 1:00 pm

        Thanks Aho ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•
        You are so good at revising ๐Ÿ™‚ not only incidents but also the feelings ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
        Here the special black coffee โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•
        I am so happy to hear you all make 1k to 4k… I am regretting for not participating in commenting ๐Ÿ˜ฐ but so happy to hear it ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ

    19. Thakur Priyanka on March 15, 2021 12:13 pm

      Amazing episode eagerly waiting for next update obviously she will say no only

      • Rishiiii on March 15, 2021 1:00 pm

        Thanks a lot dear โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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