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Home»Fan Fiction»THE LAST SPIRIT ‘Prologue’ and ‘Explainantion’
Fan Fiction Ishq Mein Marjawan 2

THE LAST SPIRIT ‘Prologue’ and ‘Explainantion’

Tanvi_5117By Tanvi_5117September 18, 202117 Comments5 Mins Read
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She threw her hands splashing the water being angry and the water started making patterns in its own, the water shaped itself as…..

A woman standing on a big stone and 6 people which were sparkling, sitting with their head down. The all threw sparles in the air together creating a circle, and then, the earth. The woman standing in the stone faints and fells on the ground.

“Vansh, do start finding her positive side, she is your to be wife and the to be queen of our kingdom.” Ajay said.

“I tried many times but I miserably fail. She didn’t even liked the citizens touching her feet. Do you think she will be a queen to the bliss?” Vansh asked.

“No questions, Prince. She IS the next queen and accept it as fast as you can.

“You said you will come back and tell me how to control this sparkling henna, but why didn’t you return? And I am stuck inside the castle since last 12 years I have not even seen my kingdom perfectly. How can I become a good ruler? A punctual queen?” Riddhima said gazing the clouds, which looked like a picture to her.

“Not again” Vansh muttered under breath moving towards the other side of the palace. As soon as he reached a forbidden room, full of potions covered with clothes, her returned back from where he came.

“Nice trick. Why do you always distract me when I try to do something?” Vansh said with fisted hand, and his biceps properly in view.

She went towards the other side of the castle, little girls were playing with their dolls. A smile crept her face and she sat next to girl..

“Stay away she is cursed! She has magic she is a witch!” One of them said pulling the little girl.

“Maybe she has magic and she an angel?” The little girl said.

Vansh opened his eyes with a jerk, he looked at his hands which were sparkling black. Vansh’s face became pale as he fisted his hands tightly trying to stop it but it didn’t work. He closed his eyes which were burning, sparkles flowing through them like tears. With a loud scream, he got up from the bed and started throwing things here and fell on the bed again. He covered his face with his palms and his hands were throwing sparkles in the shape of daggers breaking one side of his window.

As soon as everything stopped, Vansh was lying on the bed with a thud taking short breaths.

Riddhima stopped as her hands started glowing making beautiful Henna like patterns, she fisted her hands but the sparkles came out between the fingers.

“Control it Princess!” Rajguru said, Riddhima didn’t understand he was scolding her, or motivating her. The back of her palms even had same silver designs. Riddhima groaned trying to stop them, but seemed like it didn’t work. She lifted her hands in the air being pissed and the sparkles were coming as daggers, hitting the walls of the castle.

Sparkles formed again, creating a tornado around Vansh. He felt it, but didn’t opened his eyes and took a long run inside the mist, Vanishing from his kingdom…

Exhaling a deep breath, she clutched her bag tightly. The white sparkles surrounded her, she closed her eyes tightly, taking a big run towards the mist, and went inside it. Our of the eyes of the world.

The answers they want, the life they have. Will they find themselves or will get lost in the world?

___________________________________________

EXPLAINING THINGS

Firstly, The elemental spirits:-

1. Fire
2. Water
3. Air
4. Trees
5. Unity

And the 6th elemental spirit, which is unknown to the world.

Every elemental spirit is conqueredย  by one in person, i.e. semi-human called the Optimistics And the 6th elemental spirit and it’s conqueror is unknown to the world.

After a small argument in the Optimistics, they all parted their ways, resulting in wars between kingdoms as UNITY parted itself from other elemental spirits.

Riddhima, is the princess of the Kingdom of Vimoksha Empire. Her parents died when she was 10, and now she is learning to be a queen. But what Riddhima wants to become is, a True Queen, who can take correct decisions on her own. A voice keeps calling her often which is only audible to her.

Vansh, is the to be king of Raiyajya Kingdom. He has always lived his life royally, but no one knows he is down to earth and travels hiding his identity. To him too, a voice keeps calling which is only audible to him.

Akashgarh, is a forest which has a thick boundary of mist since thousands of years. No one knows what’s inside the mist. People named it Akashgarh as the mist looked liked sky with sparkles, in hindi, called ‘Akash’.

Vimoksha and Raiyajya kingdoms were in a great war when the elemental spirit of Unity separated itself from the other spirits and Optimistics.

People say, there is a power beyond these spirits. Whom has died resulting in fight between the Optimistics of spirits and their separation.

Since I am myself new creating such things, please feel free to tell my mistakes and take out quarries.

A/N

I am really excited for the reaction. This is the first time I ‘tried’ to do something supernatural or magical by myself. Pardon my mistakes as I really have *lack of common sense*.

Do tell your reviews!!

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    17 Comments

    1. Amyra on September 18, 2021 8:06 pm

      2 updates….
      Seems damn interesting!
      I am damn excited!
      Post whenever u have time.. My little brave girl….. Am waiting!! โคโคโคโค

    2. Akshara on September 18, 2021 8:07 pm

      Nice

    3. Prabhleen ๐Ÿ˜Š on September 18, 2021 8:14 pm

      Wow amazing. Interesting very interesting. I’m damn excited for this.

    4. Riansh๐Ÿฅฐ on September 18, 2021 9:11 pm

      Now this is something which is ming blowing
      Eagerly waiting for the episodes of this magical story
      Post soon
      I am very excited to read it

    5. Mary on September 18, 2021 9:35 pm

      Excited for it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜
      Plz update next soon is it romance just magical is there a villain.

    6. Alisha Roy on September 18, 2021 9:43 pm

      Nice

    7. Sumisha on September 18, 2021 9:54 pm

      Eagerly waiting for your episodes

    8. Varshini on September 18, 2021 10:40 pm

      Don’t get me wrong but I think u pulled out the story from frozen 2. But really amazing ๐Ÿ˜.

      • Tanvi_5117 on September 19, 2021 1:54 pm

        Nup You can say so…I have no problem because some things match with it, but Thanks!! โœจ

    9. AarushiSoni on September 19, 2021 7:32 am

      Now this is something which is just forcing me to be hooked to the story..
      Firstly the cover, wow!!!! The cover is sooooo beautiful โค๏ธ
      Just giving amazing vibes!! ๐Ÿ’•
      And secondly about the storyline, wow Tanvi!! ๐Ÿ˜Œ
      It’s divine ๐Ÿคฉ
      Never ever read like such and am so excited!!
      Brilliant โœจ

      • 1234Aayu on September 19, 2021 10:02 am

        Cover ๐Ÿ˜Œ

    10. Priyanka Thakur on September 19, 2021 8:41 am

      Amazing dear

    11. Aisha08 on September 19, 2021 9:34 am

      Amazing

    12. 1234Aayu on September 19, 2021 10:03 am

      Wonderful โ˜˜๏ธ๐Ÿคง
      I loved it ๐Ÿ˜Œ
      I am eagerly waiting ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ซ

    13. Parita on September 19, 2021 4:07 pm

      Wow yaar Tanu!
      Love it and i’m so excited to read it!
      I’m sure your first time will be a hit and the best!โค
      Very excited!

    14. Japjot Kaur on September 19, 2021 6:00 pm

      Mind blowing dear
      It’s beautiful
      I never read this type story
      Loved it โค๏ธโค๏ธ

    15. prapti0809 on September 19, 2021 6:21 pm

      mazza aa gaya jaldi post kar

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