Fan Fiction

The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 6)

Hii frndz….i am sreenandana back with my ff….tnq 4 the response in last part….i hope i would b able 2 meet ur expectations…

I am adding 2 new characters….

Nikhil Sharma and Piyali Sharma :- Parents of Mitali….

so lets start with recap….

Recap: Avneil lands in lucrknow…..

So the present part:

In Mitali’s house:

Piyali – mitali…where does ali and family stay???

Mitali – in xyz hotel mom….i had already told u ry8….

Piyali – nikhil….do u think its ry8???

Nikhil – what???

Piyali – we r having such a big house and they r staying in a hotel….

Nikhi – so u think we should invite them to stay here right???

Piyali nods….

Nikhil – so…i will go there 2day itself…..okay?

Piyali nods…..mitali jumps in happiness…..

Mitali – dad..even i will accompany u….

Piyali – no…u just stay here…even neil needs a company….

Mitali – but mom….

Piyali – no more discussions….

In xyz hotel:

Fathima – avni…my bacha….

Avni – nanno….

Fathima – its been years since i saw ur smile….plz smile bacha….

Avni – nanno….i know my fake smile will never bring u happiness….

Fathima hugs her…..avni goes inside…..

Fathima – my bachi….how much lively she was!!!!

Ali – god is seeing her plight nanno….he will some way…….

Nikhil arrives there….

Ali – nikhil uncle…

Nikhil – i came here 2 take u all 2 our house….

Ali – but uncle….

Nikhil – no excuses ali…..

Ali agrees and they leaves 2 sharma house….

In Sharma House:

Neil was standing outside the house….he walks around and sees a butterfly….

THE PAST MEMORIES STARTS 2 HAUNT HIM….

Flashback Starts:

Avni was standing near her garden…she sees a butterfly flying and tries 2 catch it..the butterfly flies away and lands in a flower…..somebody suddenly catches the butterfly….

Avni who was trying 2 catch the butterfly sees it…she looks straightly only 2 find neil standing there with the beautiful butterfly in his hand…

Avni was about 2 say something but neil keeps the butterfly on her nose…..he comes closer 2 her…..

Neil – butterflys usually lands on beautiful flowers…..and i just kept it on a beaufifulllll flower…..

Avni – what???

As she moves her face, the butterfly flies away….

Avni – oh…it flew away….

Neil – first u should learn 2 say things normally rather than shouting….

Avni – i will….but first say what u mean???

Neil – what??

Avni – by that statement….

Neil – which???

Avni – that ‘i kept it on a beautiful flower’???

Neil – i meant…

Avni – haan u meant….

Neil(softly) – i meant that i kept the butterfly on…

Avni – on…

Neil – a girl with an ugly flower-like face….

Avni – u idiot…stupid…i will kill u…

Neela, asish and riya comes down….riya gets happy 2 see neil…neela gets surprised 2 see neil…

Neela – you r that doll wala boy ry8….

Neil smiles….riya goes and hugs neil….neela notices a change in avni’s expression and signs asiah….avni senses ashLa’s stare and signs what….and.as a reply they shows a ‘nothing-wala’ look….

Riya – neil….this is neela chachi and asish chachu….they r avni’s parents….and mine too haan….

Neil shakes hands with ashLa and takes their blessings….both ashLa seem 2 b impressed with neil….

Neil – arey yaar…will noone take me inside???

Neela – uff…sorry….come neil…

Avni(to herself) – does we need 2 carry u inside….

Neil hears her….

Neil – no thanks madam….i will walk by myself….btw if u wish i can take u haan….no formalities….

Avni – u….

Neil – come inside yaar….

Avni stams her foot in her so-called anger….

Neil – uncle…aunty…riya…its mom and dad’s 25th wedding anniversary on this monday…so..there is a small celebration…and i came here 2 invite u 4 that….

Asish – we will surely come…

Neela – beta…i will bring u something 2 drink….

Neil sees avni going outside….he senses something….

Neil – uncle….i will come just now….i want 2 take a walk through ur garden….

Asish – sure….

Avni goes 2wards neil’s car and punctures its tyre…..neil sees it…he goes back and sits with nothing happened look…avni comes back….she controls her laughter….

Riya – neil…chachu…i have an imp work…i an taking the car….

Later neil turns 2 leave….he acted as of he was shocked 2 see his car tyre punctured…..

Neil – omg….the tyre is punctured….

Asish – beta…riya took the car….and other one is in workshop….

Neil – uff…

Asish – do one thing….take avni’s scooter….

Avni – what???

Neela – avni….

Neil – but uncle…how can i take urs…then lets do one thing…can u come with me???

Asish – beta..i cant…u can take avni with u…

Avni – but papa….

Neela – avni…

Avni – okay….

Avni takes her scooter…..

Later they both goes 2 invite the rest of the guests….

In the way:

Neil – plz stop….

Avni stops the scooter….

Avni – what….

Neil – avni….function is on this monday…i have 2 invite them 2day and not on next week…..move…

Avni – what??

Neil – i said move….

Avni moves and neil occupies the front seat….he starts 2 drive the car in heavu speed….avni keeps hiting him since she was not holding him…..finally she keeps her hands on his shoulder…..

In Neil’s Frnd’s House:

He invites him….

Neil’s Frnd – neil…i guess she is ur gf…

Neil tries 2 say something….his frnd cuts him….

Frnd – u both r a gr8 jodi….made 4 each other….

Neil – yaar…she is not my gf…

Frnd – then make her yaar….avni…neil…u both make a perfect jodi….

Neil – shut up….

Later they both goes 2 khanna house…shwetha takes avni inside and treats her like own daughter….later avni leaves 2 her house…..

Precap: Will Avneil meet???

Tnq 4 reading….

By sreenandana….

sreenandana.suresh

i am a happy-go-lucky type.....loves watching serialz....preeran, avneil, rikara, ruvya and nairan r my favourite couples...

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