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Home»Fan Fiction»The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 2)
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The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 2)

sreenandana.sureshBy sreenandana.sureshAugust 7, 20184 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii frndzz…i am sreenandana back with my ff…sorry 4 being too late …i was having exams…thats y i was not able 2 post on last week….sorry 4 typos and other mistakes….lets start the ff….

NOTE:-BOTH RIYA AND DAYAWANTI R POSITIVE IN MY FF….

Part 2:

Flashback continues:

In Mehta House:

Avni comes inside her room….

Avni – my teddy…..maa i need that teddy…..

Neela – bacha….i will give u another one….

Avni – no maa….i need that teddy….its so cute….

Neela – but what 2 do bacha….it is out of stock….

Suddenly neela notices something….

Neela – avni….where is ur bracelet?

Avni – bracelet??what a question maa…it will b on my hand….

She looks at her hand only 2 find the bracelet missing….

Avni – o god….after meeting that guy i lost both my teddy and bracelet…

Neela calms her down….

In Khanna House:

Neil comes there with his luggage….he enters without anyone’s notice and goes near shwetha…..he shouts in her ears….

Neil (shouts) – mommm…..

Shwetha gets shocked and shouts….

Shwetha – tillu…u scared me…u didnt even step properly in the house and u started troubling me…..

Neil kisses shwetha….

Neil – bcoz u r my sweet mom….

Shwetha – its of no use that u became 21….u r still immature….

Neil – bcoz i am Neil Khanna and my mom’s litttle tillu….

Shwetha – u told me that u will come day after….and now suddenly…

Neil – mom…i was planning 2 enjoy in Banglore a few more dayzz…but then i changed my planss…

Shwetha – whatever….

Neil – mom….ur tillu is very hungry….

Shwetha – first go and take a bath….

Neil – okay mom…..

Neil comes to his room…he unpacks his thingzz….he took the tessy bear in his hand only 2 find avni’s bracelet in it…..

Neil – bracelet???but….

He remembers avni….

Neil – ohh…it must b of that girl i think….she is very stubborn….

His meeting with avni flashes on his mind….

Neil – she is cute….

Neil realisea what he said…..

Neil – cute??that girl???no way….

He takes the bracelet from the teddy and keep in a drawer…..he smiles….

Next Day:

In Mehta House:

The next day riya arrived…neela welcomed riya with aarti …

Avni hugs riya….

Riya – avnii…how r u???

Avni – fine dear…and how r u?

Riya – absolutely fine….btw where isy come back gift??

Avni – come back gift???grow up yaar….

Riya – chachii….

Riya pouts….avni pulls her cheek and laughs….

Avni – here z ur gift….

She goes and bring a box wrapped with gift paper….riya opens it and finds a cute teddy bear softtoy and a bracelet…

Riya – wow yaar….its really amazing…..

Riya hugs avni…..

Riya – avni….i have 2 meet my friend…he z somewhere in mumbai itself…

Avni – whats the need of informing me???

Riya – i am not informing but ordering that u should come with me….

Avni – okay….

Riya – i am very much tired….i need 2 rest….and avni….we will visit him 2morrow….

Avni nods…

Precap: flashback continues….

Sorey 4 small part…will update next part soon…

By sreenandana….

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    i am a happy-go-lucky type.....loves watching serialz....preeran, avneil, rikara, ruvya and nairan r my favourite couples...

    4 Comments

    1. Lucie on August 9, 2018 2:23 pm

      Would be waiting for next update.

      • sreenandana.suresh on August 11, 2018 1:05 pm

        Tnq…

    2. Avneil1811 on August 10, 2018 8:53 pm

      Keep writing…

      • sreenandana.suresh on August 11, 2018 1:05 pm

        Tnq….

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