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Home»Fan Fiction»The fate of our story… Avniel OS
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The fate of our story… Avniel OS

Ishita zoyBy Ishita zoyNovember 10, 20227 Comments33 Mins Read
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Niel: Don’t waste time by questions.. just come immediately that’s it.

Avni:acha i will come..

Avni goes to xyz park and gets suprised seeing the park decorated and goes near Niel who was standing there..

Avni:Niel..why did you cal me here?

? suddenly Niel kneels down and forwards his hands and proposes her..

Niel:i want to rectify my mistake which i did earlier. I love you Avni..i love you so much. Will you marry me and live with me for whole life?


Avni smiles and holds his hand..

Avni:yes mr. Inspector..i love you. I will marry you and live with you my entire life..

Niel smiles and he gets up and pulls her for dance and they Dance passionately..

Male : Uyirin uyirae … uyirin uyirae
Nadhiyin madiyil kaathu kidakindren
Eera alaigal neerai vaari mugathil iraithum
Muzhudhum verkindren

Female : ……………………….

Male : Nagarum nerupai kozhundhu vetterinden
Anaindha pinbum analin melirunden
Kaalai paniyaga yennai vaarikondaai
Neram kooda yedhiri aagivida yugangal aaga vedam maarivida
Anaithu kondaayae pinbu yeno sendraai

Male : Uyirin uyirae … uyirin uyirae
Nadhiyin madiyil kaathu kidakindren
Eera alaigal neerai vaari mugathil iraithum
{ Muzhudhum verkindren } (3)

Male : Swasamindri thavikirenae
Unadhu moochil pizhaikirenae
Idhazhgalai idhazhgalaal nirapida vaa pennae

Male : Ninaivu yengo neendhi chella
Kanavu vandhu kannai killa
Nizhalyedhu nijamyedhu kuzhambinen vaa pennae
Kaatril yendhan kaigal rendum
Unnai andri yaarai thedum
Vilagi pogaadhae tholaindhu povenae naan…naan…naaan

Male : Uyirin uyirae … uyirin uyirae
Nadhiyin madiyil kaathu kidakindren
Eera alaigal neerai vaari mugathil iraithum
Muzhudhum verkindren

Female : ………………………..

Male : Iravin porvai yennai suzhndhu
Mella mella moodum thazhndhu
Vidiyalai thedinen unnidam vaa pennae

Male : Paadhamengum saavin ranangal
Naragamaagum kaadhal kanangal
Orumurai madiyilae uranguven vaa pennae
Thaamadhikum ovoru kanamum
Thavanai muraiyil maranam nigazhum
Arugil vaarayo viralgal thaarayo nee…nee…neee

Male : Uyirin uyirae … uyirin uyirae
Nadhiyin madiyil kaathu kidakindren
Eera alaigal neerai vaari mugathil iraithum
Muzhudhum verkindren

Male : Nagarum nerupai kozhundhu vetterinden
Anaindha pinbum analin melirunden
Kaalai paniyaga yennai vaarikondaai
Neram kooda yedhiri aagivida yugangal aaga vedam maarivida
Anaithu kondaayae pinbu yeno sendraai yeno sendraay..yeyyy…

Male : Oho..hoo..hoo..ohooo..ohoo……………………….

After their dance Niel makes Avni sit on a rock..

Avni: what are you doing Niel?

Niel:i brought your favourite chole bhature..so i will feed you and you enjoy your favourite with my hands..

Avni smiles and Niel feeds her..


Then Avni too feeds him back..


They both enjoy their love feeding each other..

After some months Niel’s family gets them married after Niel tells them about their love..


And in the night of suhagrat Avni is standing wearing a beautiful pink saree in the room and Niel comes and hugs her from behind..

Avni:niell..


Niel: don’t give reaction..iam your husband so i have rights to hug you. And get used to it..i will hug you anytime and anywhere hereafter.

Avni blushes so pushes him away..

Avni:acha..if i want to reciprocate your love then catch me..

Avni runs and Niel chases her and then Niel holds her saree pallu finally..


Niel:now you can’t escape from me..

Niel pulls her saree pallu and back hugs her and whispers in her ears..

Niel:i love you Avni..i love you so much..


Avni smiles and turns and kisses his forehead and..

 

Avni:even i love you too..

Niel kisses her forehead..


They both look passionately and Niel locks his lips with her ..thus showing their love to the beautiful room..


After some years..

Niel and Avni are seen having a girl child..

Avni: Mishti..Mishti..

Mishti comes there..

Mishti:yes muma..

Avni:did you finish your home work?

Mishti:yes muma..i completed..


Avni kisses her and..

Avni:good girl…

Suddenly Niel comes there and..

Niel:you both always forget me in love..

Avni and Mishti laughs at his jealousy..

Avni:so you are jealous?

Niel: ofcourse..

Avni and Mishti hugs him and Niel smiles..

Avni: now ok?

Niel:yeah..

They three smile And they live happily..

THE STORY ENDS..

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    7 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on November 11, 2022 4:48 am

      Thanks a lot for this os.hope Neil will catch vidyuth. Never expected avneil meeting to start with fight.eye lock was nice.without arguing with avni,Neil thanking her for her advise and running away to catch the thief was interesting. Surprised to see Ali as a thief.loved Neil telling him that we can be happy only with our earned money and if we steal the family won’t be proud but ashamed of us .glad that the thief decided to work and earn to make his family proud.again avni Riya misunderstood. But glad that finally all misunderstandings about ali got cleared.

    2. Jasminerahul on November 11, 2022 5:04 am

      Shocking that Neil killed the drug dealer who killed many people and he is vidyuth’s brother.shocking that even after Neil saved avni she was angry with him after knowing that Neil is a police avni apologizing was nice.surprising that Neil asked her not to change her identity if she is like this.neil telling the guy that he is not catching him for fine,bcz that can’t save his life,so he should buy a helmet now and ride the bike was nice. Neil is a very different police officer.vidyuth is so cruel to try to kill Neil’s small nephew.avni saving him was nice.avni shiv scene was lovely.riya trying to make avni understand that she loves Neil was nice.

      • Ishita zoy on November 11, 2022 8:37 am

        Thank you so much for brief comment..

    3. Jasminerahul on November 12, 2022 4:22 am

      Avneil becoming friends was nice.nice to see Neil shiv visiting avni daily.neela maa was a surprise. Why avni skips lunch?Neil forcefully making avni eat and throwing water scenes were funny.neil’s falling in dizziness dialogues were funny.avneil dream scene was romantic. Avneil dream dance was romantic. Avni proposing Neil was lovely.sad that Neil rejected it for her safety.vidyuth shooting Neil…avni getting shot while saving Neil was sad.avni telling Neil that whether she lives or not doesn’t make any difference as she has no one was painful.neil saying that she has him and will be always there for her and confessing love was emotional. Neil vidyuth encounter was interesting. Vidyuth getting shot by the senior officer was unexpected. Glad that now avni is out of danger.avni telling Neil that she will take any risk to save him as she loves him was emotional. Forehead scene was emotional and sweet.

      • Ishita zoy on November 12, 2022 12:58 pm

        Thank you so much for brief description of this OS..💖☺️

    4. Jasminerahul on November 13, 2022 4:22 am

      Neil proposing avni and avneil dance were romantic. Feeding scene was cute.glad that avneil got married.consummation was very romantic. Nice to see avneil moments with their daughter mishti.superb pics.wish you had added ennai Konjam song also.

      • Ishita zoy on November 13, 2022 9:01 am

        Thank you so much. I tried to add scenes but couldn’t as i dint have time..sorry..

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