Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction Original»The Falling Heart
Fan Fiction Original

The Falling Heart

administratorBy administratorOctober 28, 201515 Comments2 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

Hey guys.I am viti. This is my first ff. Hope you like it. Forgive me for any mistake. Your suggestions are most welcome.

The falling heart.

“Everyday is a new day, a fresh try ,one more start, with perhaps a bit of magic waiting somewhere behind the morning”

Riya starts her day with such positive thoughts. Daughter of a rich business women. Down to the earth like her mother.. Money means nothing to her. Her father died in a car incident. Riya a girl of 24,full of positively, a girl who would turn the world upside down just to prove her point. Like any other girl,Riya take ages to get ready but something was very unique about her. It seems like the sun rises to wake her up, the wind blows to walk with her, it rains to see the her smile. For raghav she was the most beautiful lady he had ever seen. Riya starts her day with her diary. nobody knows what she writes. She would than check her phone and give the sweetest smile in the world. Every morning a good morning message from Raghav waits for her. ” good morning princess” she smiled and replied “good morning pumpkin.”

She saw the clock ,it was 8. She murmered,”aiiyah,I need to get ready” she wore a pale blue kurti with a jeans. She eye lined her almond like eyes, wore the watch which Raghav gave her and wore a light pink lipstick on lips. With such minimum makeup she would look like an apsara. Her phone ringed. It was raghav’s call.

******to be continued*****

Credit to: viti

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleSadda Haq 28th October 2015 Written Episode Update
Next Article Sasural Simar Ka 28th October 2015 Written Episode Update

15 Comments

  1. Ruby Pearl on October 28, 2015 7:57 pm

    it is different from other ff’s…nice starting..keep going viti..i will read all ur updates

  2. viti on October 28, 2015 8:07 pm

    since I am in class 10 it will be difficult for me to update regularly but I’ll try to do justice to the story. thank you so much. your comment means a lot.

    • Ruby Pearl on October 28, 2015 9:50 pm

      whr r u frm viti??

      i also say that concentrate more in study

    • Mansi on October 28, 2015 9:58 pm

      Gud story viti !!pls cntinu but pls also concentrate on ur studies dear !!!

  3. Brity on October 28, 2015 8:10 pm

    Heyyy…. Viti…. Nice one….Don’t mind but I want to say that isn’t Riya Little bit older…..

  4. Hayathi on October 28, 2015 8:16 pm

    Hi viti who is raghav bf or just friend

  5. Liya on October 28, 2015 9:13 pm

    Nic start dr. . . And 1 advic, if u r clas 10 stdnt pls concentrt on ur studies more, n updt nly during ur leisur tym. . . Hop u wont mind takng my advic. And u got a gud rytng skil, diff frm othr ff. Tc:-)

  6. Divastooti Mukherjee on October 28, 2015 9:39 pm

    Keep going princess …lovely beginning .U description is even better?

  7. Avck on October 28, 2015 9:51 pm

    I like it. Wish you best of luck for your future updates .

  8. Vivek on October 28, 2015 10:16 pm

    nice

  9. viti on October 28, 2015 10:24 pm

    guys thank you soooooooooo much for your advice. ruby I am from Assam, guwahati.

  10. viti on October 28, 2015 11:47 pm

    please ignore my mistakes. since I am typing through my cell it gets autocorrected xD.
    1.full of positivity not positively.
    2.accident not incident.
    3.see her smile not see the smile.

  11. NIKHAR on October 29, 2015 5:22 pm

    Who is raghav….plz tell me somebody..
    Nicely written ….keep it up… 🙂 ♡♡ 🙂

  12. RIMLI DAS on October 31, 2015 9:51 pm

    GO ON VITI …UR STORY IS VERY INTERESTING
    U HAVE GREAT TALENT
    LOVE TO READ UR STORY…
    GO ON LIKE THIS FOREVER………….

    • viti on November 1, 2015 9:23 am

      Thank you honey! :*

Sponsor
Latest Posts

Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

November 29, 2025

Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

November 29, 2025

Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

November 29, 2025
Sponsor
Latest Comments
  • NRI on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
  • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
© 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.