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The confession- Rikara (shot 4)

Hey everyone!! SO here’s shot 4..

They had finally reached the old factory. It was 10:55 p.m.
Omkara had already informed the higher officials of the police department who possibly couldn’t have been bribed by the goons. He got to know that the goon who kidnapped Gopal, Ajay was actually a goon that the police had been searching for quite some time.
The plan was that Omkara would enter that factory with a suitcase and would hand it in exchange of Gopal and the police would fire their arms or run inside and catch them as soon as Om and Gopal came out.
And the plan had almost worked but the goon understood something was wrong. So they captivated Omkara.
Gauri who had been outside waiting for them got too impatient and decided to look in. She peeped in through one of the holes on the wall and saw that Omkara was tied to a chair. All of a sudden, Gauri felt someone grab her hair and pulled her inside the factory through some door. Omkara was shocked to see Gauri inside. Gauri was struggling against the goon’s hold, Om seeing her in pain tried to free himself. He just wanted to cut off the goon’s hand for hurting his Gauri.
(imagine the goon holding gauri like this)
Om: leave her! Dammit just leave her!
The goon pushed her to the ground.
Omkara tried to move but then the goon behind him places a knife on his neck and tried to threaten him but doesn’t listen so the goon presses the knife to his neck and then a small cut forms and he starts to bleed.
Gauri: Omkara ji! Please don’t move! (She then looks at the goon who was behind om) how dare you hurt Omkaraji!?
Om was taken back to hear her say omkara ji. The goon then tied her up in another chair.
Om: Gauri I told you to not do something dangerous. Why do always have to risk your life?

Gauri: I got worried since you both took too much time. So I decided to peep in. But then this man brought me in.
Om: couldn’t you have just believed in me? Why do you always do this Gauri?
Gauri: what am I doing? I was just worried. Any normal human would be, you are not some superhero that I can stay there without worries.
Om: then you must be superwoman. Cause you always jump in danger.
Gauri: I don’t jump in danger. Danger jumps on me.

Om: Haan Haan. You and danger are connected for all 7 births afterall.
Before Gauri could say anything more, the goon stops them.
Goon: stop it two of you! This is not your house to fight like this. Dont you both know you are dealing with dangerous goons?
Gauri eyes Om with anger.
Om: exactly and I’m also telling her that only. She doesn’t understand. She thinks playing with danger is a game.
Gauri: bhaisaheb, you know what? More than me, this jaathadhari here falls into danger.

Om: me? I fall into danger? How is that?
And then he realised what Gauri just called him.. he feels an unknown happiness deep down.
Gauri: I’ll tell you bhaiya. First he messed with kaali thakur, then he had some psycho sultana plotting against him and then one buamaaji who wanted to kill him. You know bhaiya, he has fallen from train, fallen into coma after falling from stairs and got himself nearly killed so many times. And you know who saved him? Me. (She says proudly with a proud smile)

Omkara just looks at her smiling and then says
Omkara: bhaiya this madam, she gives invitation cards to danger. Danger ji please come to me. I’ll give you lots of food. No noo Shankar Ji will bless you.

Gauri: see who’s talking, and why are you putting my Sankar ji in between? Bhaiya tell me one thing.
The goon was now looking from Om to Gauri then back to Om and again Gauri.
Gauri: see right now he came to save nanhe chirota. And now he has to be saved. And you even tied me up. Now who will save him?

Om: but that-
Goon: stop it both of you! How much you both talk. I told boss that kidnapping this husband and wife wasn’t a good thing. You know why people get married?

Om and Gauri looks on confused.

Goon: so that they can fight their whole life. Marriage is a contract that two people sign in the name of love. But that contract states you two will fight till you both die.

Gauri: Woh baath tho sahi hain aapki. Aapko pata hain? Humare bade bhaiya aur bhojai bhi bohut ladte hain. Tadi marte hain ek dusre par. Ek minute ek minute, aapko kaise pata ki hum pati patni hain ki nahi?
(What you said is right. You know, even my brother and sister in law fights a lot. They throw attitude to each other. One minute, how do you know we are married or not?)

Goon: only married people fight like this I know very well.
Before Gauri or Om could say anything they heard a bullet fired.
Gauri and Om looked at eachother in shock and worry. Did they harm Gopal??

Gauri: oye gunda bhaiya! Agar humare nanhe chirote ko kuch hua na, tho chodenge nahi hum kisiko! Ek jaap mein diwaar pe sat jaye be!
(Oh goon, if something happens to my Gopal, then I won’t spare any of you! I’ll slap you all and you will stick to the wall.)

Goon: so you are his chiraiya didi and this guy must be his jaathadhari bhaiya.

Om: what happened right now? Who fired the bullet?
Suddenly someone opens the door. Om and Gauri look on.
Goon: police…
The police comes in with Gopal and catches the rest of the goons. Then they free Omkara and Gauri. Gauri hugs Gopal, tears of happiness filled in her eyes. She caresses her hair and kisses his cheeks

Gauri: those goons, did they harm you? Did you get hurt? Are you ok?

Gopal: yes chiraiya didi I’m ok. And why are you crying? Did I make you cry. I’m so sorry (he holds ears in apology) jaathadhari bhaiya why did you let her cry?

Gauri wipes away her tears
Gauri: arrey budhu. These are tears of happiness. Were you scared?
She hugged him tightly and Gopal forwarded his hand for Om to hug him too. Soon all three of then were hugging each other.
Gopal: why would I get scared when I know I have a dabang chiraiya didi and a jaathadhari bhaiya? Both of your anger is so much that even god will run away then what are these goons?
Om and Gauri giggled listening to him.

They went back home and Gopal’s mom kept thanking them again and again.

Outside Gopal’s house.
Om: Gauri, are you ok? Did those goons harm you? Did you get hurt? Why are you quiet? Please Gauri tell me something-
Gauri: I’m perfectly fine. And how can I answer you if you keep asking question after question?
Om: I..um..sorry
Gauri: thank you.
Om was confused: why?
Gauri: for saving him.
Om: but Gauri I-
Gauri: Please come with me.
Gauri said looking down. Om was too shocked to react..did she just ask him to go with her?

Om stared at her blankly.
Gauri: Arrey. Your wounds…we should apply medicine right?

Om: it’s ok Gauri. It’s not a big deal.
Gauri: how is that not a big deal? Are you coming with me or should I force you?
Gauri said in her dabang mode.

Om was happy to see that his Gauri still cared about him but deep down he had started to question whether he deserved her. Her last question from their conversation near the temple played in his mind “would you forgive me?” He quitely obliged to her demands and went with her, let her do the first aid. And then she made him drink haldi milk.
Om: milk…I don’t want to drink Gauri..
Gauri: why? It’s fresh milk that gaiya mata (cow) has given us. Then what’s the problem?
Om: Gauri haldi milk..
Gauri: toh? Ab yeh mooh banana bandh kijiye aur harhaike doodh khatam kijiye. Aap koi chote bache nahi hain aise nakre dikhane ke liye.
(So? Now stop making these faces and drink this milk fastly. You’re not a kid to makes these faces.)
Om: Gauri…
Gauri widens her eyes threatening Om. And he drinks the milk like an obedient kid.

Gauri: yeh hui na baath.
(That’s my boy!)

Om: Gauri, I don’t deserve all this.
Gauri who was confused waited for him to explain further.
Om: I don’t deserve you or your purity. But still….but still I can’t bear to be away from you..why Gauri why? Why am I so bad? Why?
Gauri was too shocked to respond. What could she even tell him?

Om: Gauri will you give me a chance to prove myself?

Gauri was confused again. This jaathadhari was the most confusing person she had ever met.
Om: will you be my friend?

Omkara looked hopefully at Gauri.
Gauri who was shocked at first, processed his words.
Gauri: Aap….humse dosti karna chahthe hain?
(You want to befriend me?)

Om: Ya, I want a chance to prove myself as your friend. Like how you did, as Chulbul.
Gauri stared at him in disbelief.
Gauri (in mind): what do I do now?
Om: I’m just asking for your friendship Gauri, it’s not harmful. And even if you don’t think of me as your friend…it’s fine, but I’ll think of you as my friend. I have to make it up to you.
Gauri thought for a while, she didn’t know what to do. She wanted to believe that he had changed, she wanted to give their relation a chance. She had always wished for this to happen. But he had accused her, accused her of something she could never even dream of. Something so low. If he had thrown her out of his house and gotten angry at her, she wouldn’t have been this hurt. But those words of his, had pierced into her soul. He raised a finger at her character, when she was so loyal to him. Did he really deserve another chance after whatever he did? Yes, she believed in forgiveness. And any person who was guilty of his mistakes should be forgiven. And Om, she had forgiven him deep down but this was just his guilt talking. Did he really wish to give their relation a chance? Wasn’t it just his guilt speaking? Guilt of accusing her, guilt of insulting her, guilt of each and everything he did to her. No, he didn’t want this relation from his heart. How could he ever want that? Why would he ever want that?

Gauri: you are doing all this out of guilt right?
Omkara was shocked to the core hearing her question. No it wasn’t guilt, it was his realisation. He always liked her, cared for her, but the clouds of misunderstanding never moved away from his eyes. Now it did, and now he wanted to fix it.
Om: no Gauri. I’m guilty of misunderstanding you. But I’m not asking for another chance because I’m guilty. If it was guilt, I wouldn’t have asked you for another chance Gauri, I would’ve just seeked your forgiveness.
Gauri looked at him, not able to believe.

Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum
Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum
Kehne lagi
Dono so woh
Khamoshiyan
O saathiya
Saathiya, saathiya, saathiya, saathiya, saathiya…..

Om: so tell me Gauri, do you believe me?
Gauri: I need some time

Omkara jumped up from his seat in happiness and hugged her.

Gauri was too shocked by the sudden touch. Om quickly removed himself from the hug realising what he had just done.
Gauri: I didn’t say yes, I said I need time…
Om: I’m so sorry…I didn’t mean to… I should get going…take care..good night.
Om was happy cause, he had a chance now. She asked for time, which meant he had a chance, that there was a possibility that she would accept this friendship proposal.

Gauri nodded. And thought “why is he so weird?”

**
Gauri’s room
Gauri is lying in bed thinking
Gauri: I didn’t do any mistake by asking for time right?

SO what do you guys think about this episode? Let me know in the comments…

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