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The confession- Rikara (shot 3)

Hey everyone! Hope you’re all safe and sound! Here’s the 3rd chapter of confession! Also, this part will be having some dialogues from the original episodes, as I really liked those.

Om: No Gauri! For godsake just trust me! I’m not lying.. please believe me.
Gauri: believe you? Someone who never believed me?
Gauri asked sarcastically. Her eyes screamed hurt, pain and anger.
Om: I know Gauri I don’t deserve your trust after whatever I did…But Gauri please….

Gauri: nikal jaayiye yaha se! Abhi isi waqt.
(Get out from here! Right now!)

Om: Gauri, tum please mujhe daant lo, mujhpe gussa kar lo, aur woh tum kehti ho naa, woh “ek jaanp mein diwaar pe sat jaye be” tum mujhe who bhi karlo, jitna chahiye karlo, par please ek mauka de do. Gauri please.. main sab tik karunga.
(Gauri please scold me, get angry on me, and you say that “one slap and you’ll stick to the wall” you do that also to me, howmuch ever you want, but please give me one chance..I’ll make everything fine)

Gauri laughs at him hysterically: fine? What will you make fine? Jo shuruwaat se hi bikra hua tha uska aap kese tik karenge? (How will you fix something that was broken from the start?)
Om: Gauri…

Gauri: please leave. I don’t want to talk to you. (she folds her hands infront of him)

Omkara, not wanting to disappoint her anymore slowly leaves her room with a broken heart. But he wouldn’t stop trying. That was for sure.

***

In Gauri’s room.

Gauri to shankar ji: why sankar ji why? Why do you always keep letting us meet when we are not even meant to be together? I know we are not meant to be together then why?? Why don’t you ever let my wounds heal? Why does everything have to be so complicated? Whyy ????

**
Few days later. One morning…

Omkara had started staying in that colony after renting a room there. The whole house was actually owned by Gopal’s dad and his dad would rent rooms to people. Gauri too had a job there. She would work in the sweets shop quite next to the colony. She was really friendly with all the kids, specially Gopal, she literally thought of him as her little brother and so was he a rightful brother who was responsible and protective of his sister too. Even Gopal’s parents thought of Gauri as a part of their family. Omkara too had bonded well with Gopal. He had also finished off his business matter and extended his stay there.
Omkara hadn’t talked to Gauri since the last three days. He thought of the last time he tried to convince her, which was three days ago.

Flashback…

Gauri was coming back from temple when Omkara decided to talk to her once again after their first day.
Om: Gauri please I want to talk to you. I know I’ve hurt your heart but please give me one chance I’ve changed a lot I swear. I can’t tolerate your distance Gauri…

Gauri: why?
Omkara: because I can’t live without you. Because you’re really important to me Gauri. I came to take you back Gauri. With full respect and rights. I agree it took me long to realise everything, but please…
Om was crying when he said all this.

Gauri looks away
Om: you don’t believe me right Gauri? Let’s do one thing. We’ll do everything from the start. As complete strangers. Let’s start without any misunderstanding between us. Please Gauri give our relation a chance.
This was enough to trigger Gauri. Misunderstanding? She never misunderstood him. How dare he try to think of it as something that was mutual.

Gauri: I never misunderstood you, you did. You always misunderstood me. I have always fulfilled a wife’s duty, sometimes by becoming Chulbul and sometimes Gauri, I considered you as my God, you didn’t even regard me as your wife, you didn’t even regard me as someone equal to you. And rishta? Kaisa rishta? We never had any relation. Because relations are mutual. Humara toh sirf ek tarfa tha. Rishte mein jo bhi nibhaya, humne nibhaya. Aapne toh kabhi iss rishte ko mana tak nahi.(And relation? what relation? We never had any relation. Because relations are mutual. Ours was just one sided. I was the one who fulfilled my responsibilities towards whatever relation we had, you didnt even consider this relation.)
Tears started flowing down from Gauri’s eyes. There was so much pain in her voice.

Om: I realised my mistakes Gauri. You can punish me however you want but please don’t distance yourself, please. My whole life I saw people deal with relations as business deals. I saw my mom crying and almost kill herself for a man who had an affair with someone. All the girls I trusted always betrayed me, everyone played with my trust, Gauri. I was never like this. I’m really sorry…

He cries falling on his knees. Gauri too cries.

Gauri: I know everything and I understand, you had to go through a lot in life, even I had to, but that doesn’t mean you stop valuing relations, it doesn’t mean you always suspect the same person who has always given proof of her innocence, who has always proved your allegations wrong, who had always stood by you. No, if you really wanted to believe me then you could’ve talked to me, but no, you thought everything up and acted on your impulse, what guarantee do I have that you won’t repeat it? I’m sorry but my tolerance has ended. There was a time when I wished you would accept me, when I wished you would feel proud to call me your wife but you always thought I was wrong, every time I had to give proof for my innocence, I cant take all that anymore, I don’t have the strength to hear your allegations against me again. I just can’t. I may be a middle class girl but even I have self respect.

Om: please I promise you I won’t repeat my mistakes. I promise you I’ll always keep you before me but please just give me one chance…please. I’ll take you with me, with all the rights and respect you deserve…

Gauri: Respect? I never saw respect in your eyes for me, I always saw only hatred and misunderstanding. You know, I always admire bade bhaiya and bhojai, not because they are equal but because they always stand together when a problem comes, they dont show each other down, they become each other’s strength, we both never had such a relation, you never even tried to understand me, you were always two steps ahead of me, so our distance never ended and it never will.

Om: Gauri if you give me one chance I’ll prove this wrong, I really will.
He was literally begging her now.

Gauri: aap humein ek bath bataiye, if I did all that with you, if I doubted you, insulted you, pointed a finger at your character, threw you out of my house, would you forgive me?
Gauri didn’t expect Omkara to reply and neither did he reply, he was speechless. She just walked away from there, not with anger but with hurt.

Flashback ends.

Shivaay and the rest of the oberois were more than happy to know that their Gauri was safe and sound and was finally found. It took Omkara a lot to convince the youngsters from coming here.
Shivaay just wanted to meet his little sister and ask her about how she was all these days. Anika just wanted her devrani back…after all they had a lot to talk about. And Rudra who had been away from home for around two months for some fashion programme was now back and just wanted to meet his chulbul bhabhi and know her reactions about whatever he did there. And to Bhavya, Gauri was like her best friend. Everyone could agree that Gauri had become the life of oberoi mansion.

Omkara was watching Gauri from far away, as she did the tulsi pooja. This had become a habit for him now. But then something different happened that day. He saw Gopal’s mother come to Gauri with a worried face and said something to Gauri which made her widen her eyes in shock. Gauri immediately went to Gopal’s house with his mom behind her. Om was really worried now. He decided to check on them so he went in the same direction too.

He found Gopal’s mom at the door crying and Gauri trying to console her. She held a letter in her hand which was now tear soaked.
Om: What happened? Why are you crying aunty? Is everything okay?

Gauri looked at him with a worried face and shook her head.

Om: will someone tell me what happened?

Gopal’s mom: Go…Gopal…Gopal has been….kidnapped.
She burst into tears as she said the word ‘kidnapped’
Om was more than shocked to hear that. How could that happen? And who would do such a thing?
Gopal’s mom forwarded the letter towards Om and Om took it and read it.

Mr Thukral
Your dear son has been kidnapped by us. Now if you want him safe and sound then give us all your money. And dare you inform the police, you know how dangerous I am. Meet me in the old factory nearby at 11pm, your son won’t be alive if you try any of your cheap tricks on me.

Your well wisher

Om: what the hell is this!? And do you know, Mrs Thukral who could have done this?
Gopal’s mom nods before answering: yes..actually Gopal’s dad has earned quite a lot from this renting buisiness. But he had debts to clear off and now after all that, he has to marry off our daughter. She is living with her chachi now, in the city. We actually sent her there because of these goons trouble. Gopal’s dad has gone to bring her, since her marriage functions are starting in 2 days. He doesn’t know about Gopal being kidnapped…please save my child….pleaseee…I’ll give you all my gold..
Saying this, she started removing the bangles and earings.
Om: You don’t have to give me anything, and I’m indebted to your family anyway. I won’t let anything happen to Gopal. Ill bring him back safe and sound. Just tell me about these goons.
Gauri just looks at Omkara and although Mrs Thukral didn’t know the relation between Om Gauri or why he said he was indebted to them she decided to not think about that.

Mrs Thukral: no wait…it’s too dangerous.. they’re dangerous people…I can’t let you go there. I’ll inform Gopal’s dad. I-

Gauri: Kaki, Gopal will be back. You don’t have to tell Kaka anything now. He’ll be worried. I’ll be going with Omka- I mean Mr. Oberoi. We won’t let anything happen to Gopal.

Omkara felt like someone stabbed him in the heart when she called him Mr Oberoi again.
After a lot of convincing, Mrs Thukral finally agreed to letting them go.

Outside. At night

Om gets out of the house slowly.

Gauri: where are you going alone? We’re going together, remember?

Omkara turns back in shock and disbelief.
Om: You almost scared me and what are you talking about? It’s too dangerous Gauri. I can’t let you go there. You heard what she said about them right? Then why do you want to risk your life?

Gauri: So what if it’s dangerous? I’m a dabang chiraiya. I used to slap all the goons in my colony. I may look weak but I’m very strong.
Gauri frowns.
Om giggles and replies: ok baba, I know you’re strong and dabang but these are actual goons, more dangerous than those street goons. I can’t let you risk your life.

Gauri: but Gopal is like my brother. I have to save him. I can’t stay here. I’ll come too.

Om: Gauri, try to understand. And besides, I won’t let anyone harm Gopal, he’s the one who led me to you. There’s no way I’ll let anyone do anything to him. I’ll save him. I promise.

Gauri just stares at him before speaking: but…..But….But what if…something happens to you.

She clearly didn’t want to sound concerned but deep down she knew how Omkara was when he got angry and she didn’t want Omkara or Gopal to get hurt.
Omkara felt relieved to know that she still cared for him. He smiled slightly, thinking that she was angry with him, but he still mattered to her. He just had to win her back.

Om: nothing will happen to me. Afterall, this diwale hasn’t won his dulhaniya’s heart yet.

Gauri looks at Om. They share an eyelock
Saathiya plays…

Gauri breaks away from the eyelock
Gauri: you’re not Salman Khan from dabang that you’ll beat off all those goons. I’ll come with you. If you don’t let me come. Then I’ll somehow come there behind your back.
Omkara knew better than to argue any further with Gauri.
Om: fine. But one condition. You’ll not jump into danger and risk your life.

Gauri nods.
Gauri (in mind): yeh jaathadhari hippie apne aap ko samajtha kya hain?
(What does this jaathadhari hippie think of himself)

SO that’s it for today’s update. Please let me know what you think!!!

Ishana_stories

Just someone with tons of scenarios on different characters in shows that I watch, & since I cant always give them a story, they're just stuck in there. Wattpad: Ishana_stories

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